Dead Men's Shadows(Comments Welcome)
Posted: 2002-11-24 12:42am
Note: While doing research for my other fic, this is just something I banged out in my spare time. I haven't done much plotting or outlining, just had a thought for a fairly cool scene and went from there. It's in an original universe and is something of a typical futuristic war story. I didn't edit this copy so there's probably a few typos and grammaterical errors that I'll iron out tomorrow morn-er, later today. Not sure if I'm going to follow up on the prolouge or not.
Enjoy.
EDIT: Will a mod fix the freckin' poll?
Prolouge
The troop pod screamed into the atmosphere trailing volcanic fury in it's wake. A thousand like it rained down from the stars, rocketing past orbital platforms and embattled starships. Searing flames engulfed them, raged around them as inside the hot pitch-black air men crouched and prayed and simply waited, alive to the world but dead to themselves. In the darkness men's souls were swallowed by the shrill howel of the hellish inferno which tore all about the fleet of black pods.
In the darkness silent shadows lurked, feasting on the courage of men.
Without warning the pods slammed into the thick, snow-covered ground. The men inside tumbled about, blacked in and out, felt their bodies subjected to a gut-twisting array of unpleasant inertial laws. The compenstators helped filter out most of the shock but one never did get used to the feeling of falling hundreds of miles and impacting on the icy surface of a planet.
Vast cloud of steam bellowed into the air as the pod vents blasted air to sweep them away. Enemy guns had shot down dozens of pods, the phased beams cutting into the air and neatly slicing the troop pods apart, dooming their crews to short, bloody deaths.
The hatches began to open. The black pods vomited forth a vast multitude of soldiery. Some were caught in steam clouds and fell screaming, their skin boiling off. Others tripped and fell against the red-hot hulls of the pods, inflicting massive burns upon their flesh.
Andrew Jackel leapt to his feet, grabbed his gun in one hand and a pod ladder in the other, and hurled himself out of the black pit facefirst as his comrades swamped the field. Spitting mud and snow and debris he took to his feet and began darting ahead.
A wave of infantry surrounded him, racing ahead, all clothed in the bright blue and red uniforms of the Interstellar Federation. The uniforms were woven of flexible, alloyed metal, nigh-invunerable to sidearm fire and nothing else.
Armor pods, resting in the snow-filled field like massive black spiders, began to regurgitate armored personal carriers, treaded personnel trucks and jeep-mounted machine guns. They joined the human wave, driving on relentlessly toward the enemy stronghold that dominated a hilltop posistion, it's sweeping guns commanding the ground of the city that lay within a valley below it.
The Federation forces were disorganized and disoriented, but they had the element of surprise and they were driving on the fortress with the ferocity of a pack of wild boar. Aircraft streaked overhead, strafing the fortress' outlying troops and launching missle after missile at the Union stronghold. Interceptors took to the air, blue streaks against a blue sky, impacting against and detonating Federation missles in midair whilst phased beam cannons, laser batteries and flak guns filled the blue yonder with smoke, flames, and death.
The fortress was near. Modified antimatter shells began to land amidst the horde, shattering what little formation it had. From the surrounding hilltop Federation artillery responded, trying to silence the Union guns.
Jackel surged ahead blindly, the nearest enemy posistion in sight, within gunshot, perhaps- loose fortifications guarded by machine gunners, barbed wire, and landmines. To combat a gauntlet of steel and fire, the Federation forces had a mass of infantry, minimal air support and a few mechanized units.
The promised armor support was nowhere to be seen. Jackel did not hear the roar of hovertanks or the deep, thundering booms that accompanied the ion blasts of an Ulysses.
The enemy machine gunners cut loose, tearing wide swathes of bloodied corpses through the Federation mass. Men screamed and died and were cut down in clumps as they threw themselves on the ground, crawling foward under a line of barbed wire, cutting their way through steellink fences.
Jackel recongized a half-dozen men from his company slither up next to him as soon as he was under the fences. To his left a machine gun nest blazed merrily away, a light jingle compared to the thunderous crash and clatter of the fortress' heavy antimatter guns slaughtering men and machines. Soon they would fall silent, as the Federation troops were nearly all engaged with the Union defenders, but before they did they would take an expensive toll upon their foes.
The mechanized units were near useless. Those unable to roll through the fences and wire quickly enough were vaporized by rockets launched from trenches and shell fixtures. The scream of dogfighting drowned out all other sounds as planes blossomed into fire overhead.
Jackel's radio headset was alive with the buzz of communication. His HUD display was blurry- not from tears or smoke, but from the crackle of heavy jamming. His radar was near dead and his IR display was not working properly, but, then, it never had.
One of his comrades rose to one knee and hauled back his arm to toss a grenade just as the machine gunner's buddy cut loose with a burst of atomatic fire. The Federation trooper dropped the grenade and crumpled to the ground. Jackel and four other men all let loose the fires of their own wrath, cutting down the enemy soldier. Someone threw another grenade and the nest erupted in smoke and screams.
The snow covered ground began to slope upwards as the men made their run towards the fortress. Without armor support, they had no hope of breaching it, but the armor wasn't here, it was late, it was supposed to have been here by now, where is it, where is A company, where is B company, what is happening to the left flank? A thousand voices roared in Jackel's head. He hit the snow again as a flight of Union F43-L fighters soared overhead, strafing the lines of infantry.
Most of the mechanized units were gone, now, but all hope was not lost. Many of the heavier Union guns had been silenced by the belligerant Federation artillery, and if the infantry could break though the forward Union line they could bask in the relative safety of the fortress' shadow, where heavy guns and mortars could not reach them as they did now, the shelling taking a terrible toll on morale and men.
The plan was good. The plan was simple. The plan was agreed on by all the major officers and noncoms in an exclusive voicechat session. Jackel, still moving forward through the mire, occassionally firing his gun at whatever crossed his path, heard the voice of his captain crackle over his radio unit, directing him and his buddies and the other ninety-something people closet to him.
The armor was late, he said. They would have to make due, he said. The air support was still battling for dominance and the protracted space battle was unlikely to be resolved anytime soon. The infantry would have to do it alone.
All this without a single damning word cast upon the planners and armchair generals who had somehow managed to turn what should have been a great victory into a world-class fuckup. The heavy Union weaponry was mincing men by the hundreds. There was only one shot at safety- up and against the fortress walls, while mighty guns hammered at the soldiers and enemy planes strafed their lines.
Up and against- and through a battalion of armored vehicles, anchored in position, their swiveling turrets a thousand fingers of doom.
Up and against. Jackel kept crawling forward.
Enjoy.
EDIT: Will a mod fix the freckin' poll?
Prolouge
The troop pod screamed into the atmosphere trailing volcanic fury in it's wake. A thousand like it rained down from the stars, rocketing past orbital platforms and embattled starships. Searing flames engulfed them, raged around them as inside the hot pitch-black air men crouched and prayed and simply waited, alive to the world but dead to themselves. In the darkness men's souls were swallowed by the shrill howel of the hellish inferno which tore all about the fleet of black pods.
In the darkness silent shadows lurked, feasting on the courage of men.
Without warning the pods slammed into the thick, snow-covered ground. The men inside tumbled about, blacked in and out, felt their bodies subjected to a gut-twisting array of unpleasant inertial laws. The compenstators helped filter out most of the shock but one never did get used to the feeling of falling hundreds of miles and impacting on the icy surface of a planet.
Vast cloud of steam bellowed into the air as the pod vents blasted air to sweep them away. Enemy guns had shot down dozens of pods, the phased beams cutting into the air and neatly slicing the troop pods apart, dooming their crews to short, bloody deaths.
The hatches began to open. The black pods vomited forth a vast multitude of soldiery. Some were caught in steam clouds and fell screaming, their skin boiling off. Others tripped and fell against the red-hot hulls of the pods, inflicting massive burns upon their flesh.
Andrew Jackel leapt to his feet, grabbed his gun in one hand and a pod ladder in the other, and hurled himself out of the black pit facefirst as his comrades swamped the field. Spitting mud and snow and debris he took to his feet and began darting ahead.
A wave of infantry surrounded him, racing ahead, all clothed in the bright blue and red uniforms of the Interstellar Federation. The uniforms were woven of flexible, alloyed metal, nigh-invunerable to sidearm fire and nothing else.
Armor pods, resting in the snow-filled field like massive black spiders, began to regurgitate armored personal carriers, treaded personnel trucks and jeep-mounted machine guns. They joined the human wave, driving on relentlessly toward the enemy stronghold that dominated a hilltop posistion, it's sweeping guns commanding the ground of the city that lay within a valley below it.
The Federation forces were disorganized and disoriented, but they had the element of surprise and they were driving on the fortress with the ferocity of a pack of wild boar. Aircraft streaked overhead, strafing the fortress' outlying troops and launching missle after missile at the Union stronghold. Interceptors took to the air, blue streaks against a blue sky, impacting against and detonating Federation missles in midair whilst phased beam cannons, laser batteries and flak guns filled the blue yonder with smoke, flames, and death.
The fortress was near. Modified antimatter shells began to land amidst the horde, shattering what little formation it had. From the surrounding hilltop Federation artillery responded, trying to silence the Union guns.
Jackel surged ahead blindly, the nearest enemy posistion in sight, within gunshot, perhaps- loose fortifications guarded by machine gunners, barbed wire, and landmines. To combat a gauntlet of steel and fire, the Federation forces had a mass of infantry, minimal air support and a few mechanized units.
The promised armor support was nowhere to be seen. Jackel did not hear the roar of hovertanks or the deep, thundering booms that accompanied the ion blasts of an Ulysses.
The enemy machine gunners cut loose, tearing wide swathes of bloodied corpses through the Federation mass. Men screamed and died and were cut down in clumps as they threw themselves on the ground, crawling foward under a line of barbed wire, cutting their way through steellink fences.
Jackel recongized a half-dozen men from his company slither up next to him as soon as he was under the fences. To his left a machine gun nest blazed merrily away, a light jingle compared to the thunderous crash and clatter of the fortress' heavy antimatter guns slaughtering men and machines. Soon they would fall silent, as the Federation troops were nearly all engaged with the Union defenders, but before they did they would take an expensive toll upon their foes.
The mechanized units were near useless. Those unable to roll through the fences and wire quickly enough were vaporized by rockets launched from trenches and shell fixtures. The scream of dogfighting drowned out all other sounds as planes blossomed into fire overhead.
Jackel's radio headset was alive with the buzz of communication. His HUD display was blurry- not from tears or smoke, but from the crackle of heavy jamming. His radar was near dead and his IR display was not working properly, but, then, it never had.
One of his comrades rose to one knee and hauled back his arm to toss a grenade just as the machine gunner's buddy cut loose with a burst of atomatic fire. The Federation trooper dropped the grenade and crumpled to the ground. Jackel and four other men all let loose the fires of their own wrath, cutting down the enemy soldier. Someone threw another grenade and the nest erupted in smoke and screams.
The snow covered ground began to slope upwards as the men made their run towards the fortress. Without armor support, they had no hope of breaching it, but the armor wasn't here, it was late, it was supposed to have been here by now, where is it, where is A company, where is B company, what is happening to the left flank? A thousand voices roared in Jackel's head. He hit the snow again as a flight of Union F43-L fighters soared overhead, strafing the lines of infantry.
Most of the mechanized units were gone, now, but all hope was not lost. Many of the heavier Union guns had been silenced by the belligerant Federation artillery, and if the infantry could break though the forward Union line they could bask in the relative safety of the fortress' shadow, where heavy guns and mortars could not reach them as they did now, the shelling taking a terrible toll on morale and men.
The plan was good. The plan was simple. The plan was agreed on by all the major officers and noncoms in an exclusive voicechat session. Jackel, still moving forward through the mire, occassionally firing his gun at whatever crossed his path, heard the voice of his captain crackle over his radio unit, directing him and his buddies and the other ninety-something people closet to him.
The armor was late, he said. They would have to make due, he said. The air support was still battling for dominance and the protracted space battle was unlikely to be resolved anytime soon. The infantry would have to do it alone.
All this without a single damning word cast upon the planners and armchair generals who had somehow managed to turn what should have been a great victory into a world-class fuckup. The heavy Union weaponry was mincing men by the hundreds. There was only one shot at safety- up and against the fortress walls, while mighty guns hammered at the soldiers and enemy planes strafed their lines.
Up and against- and through a battalion of armored vehicles, anchored in position, their swiveling turrets a thousand fingers of doom.
Up and against. Jackel kept crawling forward.