Sabastian Tombs wrote:Incidently, that brings one the one major flaw I found in your fanfic. The Drakon armed forces wouldn't have any servus members after the formation of the Final Society. Servus are simply un-able to function as combat troops.
Actually if you read the fanfic they
don't function as frontline troops. They're either combat support or high-level officers who don't actually engage in fighting. The enlisted and low-level officers are all hellhounds, and the middle-level officers tend to be conscripts from Draka extrasolar conquests.
BTW where did you get the part about them being unable to function as combat troops? Is that from the book? My impression was that they were pretty autonomous: the place where the molehole research was being conducted was staffed entirely by
Servus, a Drak would just visit from time to time to see how things were progressing.
Ground troops, if needed, would be made up of ghouloons or other gene-engineered races, with Drakon officers.
See above, hellhounds, ghouloons were long obsolete in
Drakon. And considering the extremely low numbers of Draka and how highly they probably value their long, long lives I imagine for the most part even lower officers would be some form of Janissary conscripts.
Starship crews would most likely be made up of completly Drakon personal.
It wasn't that way in their seafaring navies, and sure as fuck won't be that way now that they've got their oh-so-long lifespans (remember, creatures with longer lifespans will likely be more afraid of dying, because they loose much more living time if they're killed young).
Plus, on any worlds that had intelligent native life, the first thing the Draka would do after taking over would be to breed the natives into new forms of servus[/i]
That takes time. At least a generation for the genetic alterations to manifest themselves in the young, I would think.