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Infinate Possibilities *short beginning for original story*

Posted: 2005-08-08 11:39pm
by Saber 7
Arriving in system the starship fell into a flurry of activity. From its bays flew many smaller vessels each setting out towards their target asteroids, each the resources for the construction of a new civilization. From specialized holding tanks in the smaller ships spewed nearly invisible clouds of nano sized machines with the task to separate the elements of the asteroids into more useable forms, to fuel the vast construction project ahead.
With the first step completed and the resources consolidated the many smaller vessels redistributed their nano-machines. From there the ships then proceeded to move the mountains of raw material into pre-selected orbits of the systems tri-stars using the incredible power provided by their fusion engines. Upon arrival the remnants of the
asteroids were then attacked by a new form of nano-machines, ones that took the raw materials and began forming a wheel several kilometers wide and many more wide made of metal and diamond.

to be continued if i get the motivation and or time *, ROTC and the US Army Reserves and a active slot on the schools service rifle teams keeps me kinda busy*






Any potential there or should I take an english class and try agian?

btw

Posted: 2005-08-08 11:43pm
by Saber 7
BTW I wrote this while listening to Black Sabbath's "Into the Void" , if it helps you in anyway to catch my mindset or where this might go. :wink: