StarDestroyer.Net BBS

This is my first Fanfic so please go easy on it.

Its a Rewrite/Novelization kinda thingy on Halo2.

Any feedback would be greatly appreciated.

http://www.fanfiction.net/secure/live_p ... id=2581008

Link no worky. Wants a login.

Ooops, Sorry.

Here's the right link:
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2581008/1/