Star Wars * StarGate SG-1
(The Sopranos)
End Game
Characters
Main characters
Star Wars StarGate SG-1
Emperor Anakin Solo U.S Pres. Thomas Sinclair
Supreme Imperial commander Jacen Solo Cmdr SGC: Brig. Gen. Jack O'Neal
Minister of External affairs Jaina Solo Dr. Daniel Jackson
Obi Wan (Ben) SkyWalker Major Samantha Carter
Padme Mara Skywalker Senator Kinsey
Grand moff Tarkin III Teal’c
Imperial Arquelogy Director Tenel Ka Tokra/Earther Jacob Carter
Imperial cultural directorate Zekk Supreme Cmdr Thor
Shock Trooper Cmdr Norys E.D.F (Earth Defense fleet) Cmdr Hammond
Additional Characters
Stargate:
The Goa’uld
The AsGard
The Tokra
The Ashen
Star Wars:
The Hutt criminal Empire
The Quati
The Mon Calamari
The Corellians
The Sopranos:
Tony Sopranos & company
The Crossover story its intended for the most part to visualize how our society would cope (If at all possible) with an Invasion by something of the magnitude as the SW galactic Empire. It’s a story in progress & I will readily accept input from anyone regarding technical details, societal impact etc.
Star Wars is TM of 20th Century fox, StarGate SG-1 is TM of MGM, The Sopranos is TM of HBO Productions
The story takes place in the SW Galaxy under the rule of the Solo Dynasty, in the StarGate Milky way Galaxy it takes place a few months after Anubis attack on Earth and the discovery of the city of Atlantis in a very, very faraway galaxy.
Legend: Since for some unexplained sniglet of the universe the server does not recognize either bold or italic characters thoughs are enclosed in parentesis () troughtout the story, Dialogue at least is quotatation marks as it should be at last.
Prologue
In the mysterious ruins of Yavin 4 an amazing discovery is about to be made one that will forever change the fate of 2 galaxies and will answer the question as to how humans came to be in a galaxy far, far away...
Chapter 1: Discovery
Location:
Corusca Galaxy
Yavin 4
Tenel Ka looked in amazement at the mysterious Circular object that had been recently excavated near the ruins of the ancient Jedi temple that in her childhood was the Jedi academy, that seemed like eons now, when she and the Solo twins trained to become Jedi, how things had turned out so different from what they expected at that time had become all but a blur, now she was assigned as the Arquelogy director for the conservation and study of relics throughout the Empire.
A devaronian assistant interrupts her toughs "We also found what appears to be a control panel for the device Mistress Tenel Ka"
"Have you found what the glyphs on both the device & the panel represent?"
"For what we have found it would seem to be some sort of address system, apparently the panel was used to dial in whatever combination you choose."
"Dial in to what?"
"That we have not been able to determine as of yet."
"Fine keep me informed, we need to find out how this device operates A.S.A.P got it
"Got it
The Devaronian moves on to continue his work, while Tenel Ka goes back to her quarters in the upper levels of the pyramid. Where she begins a HoloRecording of recent events
"Day 3 after finding that strange device 2 days ago, we found what seems to be its control panel. Its seems to be configured to dial in combinations of it’s symbols but as to what it does once you dial it, remains a mystery This is Imperial Arquelogy director reporting in, over and out."
She handed the recording to a StormTrooper
" This is to be delivered to Coruscant immediately.
"Understood milady"
Although it would have been faster to just transmit a Holosignal to Coruscant, His Highness Anakin Solo preferred that sensitive messages would be sent by couriers, that way there was no way the signal could be intercepted and even though the Solo Dynasty Empire had virtually no tangible enemies left in the galaxy.
Emperor Anakin was paranoid about security so only couriers would do.
The Storm Trooper walked away with his cargo to head toward Coruscant as ordered.
End Game a SW/SG-1 crossover
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Chapter 2: The calm before the storm
Chapter 2: The calm before the storm
Location:
Milky Way Galaxy
Sol System
Far side of Earth’s moon
Cmdr Hammond looked outside the view port of his bridge in the Prometheus; he could see the other 2 brand new first generation true space faring vessels. They had all been emblazoned with the logo E.D.F as for Earth Defense Fleet, Although 3 ships hardly qualified as a fleet. He though to himself. Although is better than nothing, ever since the planet nearly went on the brink. When Anubis came with his Ancients based weaponry and Cloned BioCybernetic Goa’uld army. He had been assigned as Captain of the Prometheus during the incident and had it not been for O’Neal’s fortunate finding of the Atlantean weapon’s platform in Antarctica, Earth would be now a Goa’uld Human harvest farm, he cringed at the though. After that incident the remaining mayor powers in the planet decided not to take any chances.
So they rushed in to build ships based on the Prometheus, and even though they had the E.D.F Logo they also had each one the flag and official names of their respective countries the R.F Gaggarin from the Russian Federation and the P.R.C’s Sun"Tzu from the People’s Republic of China. And he was the commander of Earth’s first defense fleet in history. They hoped that they would find weapons to fight the Goa’uld in the lost city but since they had lost contact with the Atlantis StarGate team, for now they were Earth’s first line of defense.
He turned his attention to the comm. officer " Patch me to the rest of the fleet
"Aye sir"
"Prometheus here to the rest of the fleet lets get these 2 new ships ready for their first dry run shall we?"
"Capt. Van Zhang of the Sun"Tzu here, I got to say Cmdr, I’m surprised for how long you kept this technology to yourselves. Your country should have..."
"Spare me the politics Capt. now is not the time"
"Capt Stephanovich here, should we get on with this. When we are through you’re both invited to my ship for vodka."
"Fine but this discussion isn’t over Van Zhang out"
Hammond sure remembered quieter days back at command in the SGC and although there were plenty of hairy moments, he knew he could completely rely on the members of the SGC. In this case however because it was an internationally concocted team, politics got in the way more often than not. And he had to make this fleet worked as one well oiled team if they were to even stand a slight chance of repelling another attack.
Even though according to the Tokra and Jaffa intelligence reports suggested that Anubis had decimated most of the forces of the System Lords and the remaining Goa’uld. He felt that this was just as in the matrix character Morpheus said “The calm before the storm.”
Location:
Sol System
Earth, Virginia, U.S
Former Vice-President and senator Kinsey was not a happy man this days... Not by far. All his plans for taking control of the SGC had fallen apart during Anubis invasion attempt on the planet, it was obvious that somebody had betrayed him because the President whose rise to power he carefully orquestrated now had “Enough dirt on him to put him on a cage for life” recalling those same words from the president himself during the crisis.
To make matters worse the person he had chosen to take over SGC had dismissed him also in favor of the SGC personnel advice. For a diplomat Dr Elizabeth Weir had shown to be more gutsy than he ever anticipated, not long after the incident Dr Weir Joined the StarGate Atlantis team and subsequently they lost all contact with them.
(Serves her right) Kinsey though to himself as he drank from his bottle of beer.
Still everything was not lost he still had a few aces up his sleeve, one way the other SG"1 and those that had sided with them were going to pay and were going to pay dearly, he was going to make sure of it.
Location: Earth
Washington DC, White House
U.S President Thomas Sinclair sat uncomfortably in his chair. None of his years in politics had prepared him for what he encountered upon assuming office the top secret SGC program, the covert war with the Goa’uld and to top it all off, fend off an invasion by Anubis that according to reports was a half transcended being whatever the hell that meant. And a close call it was, too damn close and this time regrettably severe casualties had occurred.
As the invasion attempt had unfolded a single Goa’uld Mother Ship had destroyed an entire naval carrier group from orbit, all hands were lost. Their desperate voices still haunted him as he heard their last transmission as it was patched to the white house (Holy hell the whole damn carrier just blew up! We are receiving incoming, Where the hell it’s coming from....) Transmission abruptly cuts
The Spin Doctors at the Defense Dept sure had made a cover story about a terrorist using a zodiac carrying a suitcase 20KT Nuke as being the culprit for the loss of the carrier group. But given the severity of the incident and the number of casualties involved even this spin off was full of holes and the press was poking at those holes like piranhas. Specially O’Reilly and Gerardo Rivera they were having a ball showing inconsistencies with the story. To them it had to be a much bigger and organized attack involving at least 5 zodiacs or small boats in order to effectively destroy the whole fleet. But then that would have too conspicuous for the Carrier group to have not noticed it. So an inside job conspiracy involving surveillance equipment sabotage was forming.
With all this going on he wondered just for how long could they keep up the charade, like it or not it was just a matter of time before the truth as he knew inevitably would have to come out. Then there was the memorial for those whose lives where lost. He was supposed to address the nation and particularly the families that had lost loved ones in the incident & he couldn’t help to feel like a hypocrite by having to lie to them about what really had taken place. But for now at least it couldn’t be helped.
He would have to keep up appearances and try to prepare his nation and the world as best as possible for what lied ahead. And that given the circumstances did not made him feel any easier at all.
Location:
Milky Way Galaxy
Sol System
Far side of Earth’s moon
Cmdr Hammond looked outside the view port of his bridge in the Prometheus; he could see the other 2 brand new first generation true space faring vessels. They had all been emblazoned with the logo E.D.F as for Earth Defense Fleet, Although 3 ships hardly qualified as a fleet. He though to himself. Although is better than nothing, ever since the planet nearly went on the brink. When Anubis came with his Ancients based weaponry and Cloned BioCybernetic Goa’uld army. He had been assigned as Captain of the Prometheus during the incident and had it not been for O’Neal’s fortunate finding of the Atlantean weapon’s platform in Antarctica, Earth would be now a Goa’uld Human harvest farm, he cringed at the though. After that incident the remaining mayor powers in the planet decided not to take any chances.
So they rushed in to build ships based on the Prometheus, and even though they had the E.D.F Logo they also had each one the flag and official names of their respective countries the R.F Gaggarin from the Russian Federation and the P.R.C’s Sun"Tzu from the People’s Republic of China. And he was the commander of Earth’s first defense fleet in history. They hoped that they would find weapons to fight the Goa’uld in the lost city but since they had lost contact with the Atlantis StarGate team, for now they were Earth’s first line of defense.
He turned his attention to the comm. officer " Patch me to the rest of the fleet
"Aye sir"
"Prometheus here to the rest of the fleet lets get these 2 new ships ready for their first dry run shall we?"
"Capt. Van Zhang of the Sun"Tzu here, I got to say Cmdr, I’m surprised for how long you kept this technology to yourselves. Your country should have..."
"Spare me the politics Capt. now is not the time"
"Capt Stephanovich here, should we get on with this. When we are through you’re both invited to my ship for vodka."
"Fine but this discussion isn’t over Van Zhang out"
Hammond sure remembered quieter days back at command in the SGC and although there were plenty of hairy moments, he knew he could completely rely on the members of the SGC. In this case however because it was an internationally concocted team, politics got in the way more often than not. And he had to make this fleet worked as one well oiled team if they were to even stand a slight chance of repelling another attack.
Even though according to the Tokra and Jaffa intelligence reports suggested that Anubis had decimated most of the forces of the System Lords and the remaining Goa’uld. He felt that this was just as in the matrix character Morpheus said “The calm before the storm.”
Location:
Sol System
Earth, Virginia, U.S
Former Vice-President and senator Kinsey was not a happy man this days... Not by far. All his plans for taking control of the SGC had fallen apart during Anubis invasion attempt on the planet, it was obvious that somebody had betrayed him because the President whose rise to power he carefully orquestrated now had “Enough dirt on him to put him on a cage for life” recalling those same words from the president himself during the crisis.
To make matters worse the person he had chosen to take over SGC had dismissed him also in favor of the SGC personnel advice. For a diplomat Dr Elizabeth Weir had shown to be more gutsy than he ever anticipated, not long after the incident Dr Weir Joined the StarGate Atlantis team and subsequently they lost all contact with them.
(Serves her right) Kinsey though to himself as he drank from his bottle of beer.
Still everything was not lost he still had a few aces up his sleeve, one way the other SG"1 and those that had sided with them were going to pay and were going to pay dearly, he was going to make sure of it.
Location: Earth
Washington DC, White House
U.S President Thomas Sinclair sat uncomfortably in his chair. None of his years in politics had prepared him for what he encountered upon assuming office the top secret SGC program, the covert war with the Goa’uld and to top it all off, fend off an invasion by Anubis that according to reports was a half transcended being whatever the hell that meant. And a close call it was, too damn close and this time regrettably severe casualties had occurred.
As the invasion attempt had unfolded a single Goa’uld Mother Ship had destroyed an entire naval carrier group from orbit, all hands were lost. Their desperate voices still haunted him as he heard their last transmission as it was patched to the white house (Holy hell the whole damn carrier just blew up! We are receiving incoming, Where the hell it’s coming from....) Transmission abruptly cuts
The Spin Doctors at the Defense Dept sure had made a cover story about a terrorist using a zodiac carrying a suitcase 20KT Nuke as being the culprit for the loss of the carrier group. But given the severity of the incident and the number of casualties involved even this spin off was full of holes and the press was poking at those holes like piranhas. Specially O’Reilly and Gerardo Rivera they were having a ball showing inconsistencies with the story. To them it had to be a much bigger and organized attack involving at least 5 zodiacs or small boats in order to effectively destroy the whole fleet. But then that would have too conspicuous for the Carrier group to have not noticed it. So an inside job conspiracy involving surveillance equipment sabotage was forming.
With all this going on he wondered just for how long could they keep up the charade, like it or not it was just a matter of time before the truth as he knew inevitably would have to come out. Then there was the memorial for those whose lives where lost. He was supposed to address the nation and particularly the families that had lost loved ones in the incident & he couldn’t help to feel like a hypocrite by having to lie to them about what really had taken place. But for now at least it couldn’t be helped.
He would have to keep up appearances and try to prepare his nation and the world as best as possible for what lied ahead. And that given the circumstances did not made him feel any easier at all.
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Chapter 3: Through the restless nights
Chapter 3: Through the restless nights
Location: Corusca Galaxy
Coruscant, Imperial Palace
Emperor Anakin Solo the first paced around the main hall. He was anxiously spec ting the courier from Yavin 4, he felt through the force that the discovery was going to change the course of the history of the Galaxy forever.
As he pondered, he began reminiscing about how it all and they had come to the present situation.
How he watched both his parents struggled valiantly and against all odds to keep the new republic together and make life better for its citizens and how eternal gridlock in the republic’s senate kept anything from moving forward and finally to see how members of the senate conspired and carried out an assassination against his beloved parents and his uncle Luke, to this day he could remember the horrible explosion that took the lives of his loved ones.
The despicable incident plunged the galaxy yet again into civil war. At the end of which his faction had come out victorious but not without losses. It was almost too much to bear, The senate’s ineptitude led to the death of Chewie during the conflict with the Vong, followed by the insane betrayal that killed his next of kin and in the civil war Lowie Chewie’s nephew was also killed. So he dissolved the senate and proceeded to decree just about everything his parents wanted but never got to see. He abolished slavery throughout the galaxy and made sure that just about every sentient being would have a chance at education and health care. All the planets would retain true autonomy with the caveat that they would not support outlawed practices and of course pay taxes for education, health services and military.
Military... Although he knew he had to keep a strong military he did not encourage the building and development of weapons of mass destruction such as Death Stars and World Devastators in fact he outlawed it, though he kept at least 2 world devastators just in case somebody didn’t get the message about his wishes on the matter. He would unleash them upon the construction site without a blink. And to make it clearer to the offenders the reprocessed materials would be for civilian use.
So his rise to power had been diametrically different to that of Palpatine. Where as Palpatine had orquestrated just about every mayor incident that lead to his rise to power, from the invasion of his home world by the Trade Federation to the Clone Wars. Circumstances had determined Anakin’s own rise to power.
And Palpatine had been a true Egomaniac building lavish palaces and while he allowed some autonomy to the galaxies worlds. He had been taxing them to death for his excessive military investment and WMD programs.
And that made him admired and loved by a large number of the galaxy’s population. But keeping a galaxy wide health/education program was not without a strain. So there nearly just as many that were not happy with his social reforms.
Anakin though that some sacrifices were needed for the greater good and if health and education were not worth it, then he did not know what could be.
His thoughts were interrupted by the arrival of the courier he thanked the StormTrooper and ordered him to take a well deserved R&R. Then he proceeded to his chamber to play the awaited HoloRecording.
Location: Corusca Galaxy
Yavin 4
Tenel Ka was awakened by a StormTrooper "What is it?"
"We have figured how to activate the device milady"
"I’m on my way."
Location: Corusca Galaxy
Coruscant, Imperial Palace
Emperor Anakin Solo the first paced around the main hall. He was anxiously spec ting the courier from Yavin 4, he felt through the force that the discovery was going to change the course of the history of the Galaxy forever.
As he pondered, he began reminiscing about how it all and they had come to the present situation.
How he watched both his parents struggled valiantly and against all odds to keep the new republic together and make life better for its citizens and how eternal gridlock in the republic’s senate kept anything from moving forward and finally to see how members of the senate conspired and carried out an assassination against his beloved parents and his uncle Luke, to this day he could remember the horrible explosion that took the lives of his loved ones.
The despicable incident plunged the galaxy yet again into civil war. At the end of which his faction had come out victorious but not without losses. It was almost too much to bear, The senate’s ineptitude led to the death of Chewie during the conflict with the Vong, followed by the insane betrayal that killed his next of kin and in the civil war Lowie Chewie’s nephew was also killed. So he dissolved the senate and proceeded to decree just about everything his parents wanted but never got to see. He abolished slavery throughout the galaxy and made sure that just about every sentient being would have a chance at education and health care. All the planets would retain true autonomy with the caveat that they would not support outlawed practices and of course pay taxes for education, health services and military.
Military... Although he knew he had to keep a strong military he did not encourage the building and development of weapons of mass destruction such as Death Stars and World Devastators in fact he outlawed it, though he kept at least 2 world devastators just in case somebody didn’t get the message about his wishes on the matter. He would unleash them upon the construction site without a blink. And to make it clearer to the offenders the reprocessed materials would be for civilian use.
So his rise to power had been diametrically different to that of Palpatine. Where as Palpatine had orquestrated just about every mayor incident that lead to his rise to power, from the invasion of his home world by the Trade Federation to the Clone Wars. Circumstances had determined Anakin’s own rise to power.
And Palpatine had been a true Egomaniac building lavish palaces and while he allowed some autonomy to the galaxies worlds. He had been taxing them to death for his excessive military investment and WMD programs.
And that made him admired and loved by a large number of the galaxy’s population. But keeping a galaxy wide health/education program was not without a strain. So there nearly just as many that were not happy with his social reforms.
Anakin though that some sacrifices were needed for the greater good and if health and education were not worth it, then he did not know what could be.
His thoughts were interrupted by the arrival of the courier he thanked the StormTrooper and ordered him to take a well deserved R&R. Then he proceeded to his chamber to play the awaited HoloRecording.
Location: Corusca Galaxy
Yavin 4
Tenel Ka was awakened by a StormTrooper "What is it?"
"We have figured how to activate the device milady"
"I’m on my way."
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Chapter 4: At the threshold
Chapter 4: At the threshold
Location: Corusca Galaxy
Yavin 4
The activity in and around the excavation site had grown to a fever pitch when Tenel Ka arrived from her quarters.
"So show me."
A Mon-Calamari researcher began to explain how they found what it was."
" In essence milady what we have here is some kind of artificial transport system, we have been able to fix its control panel and we have plugged the whole array to a a power generator, we wanted you to be here for the first test."
"will it work?"
"Only if it finds a link with another of this devices and that’s the ticker, since this is the only device in existence in this Galaxy. If there’s still another functioning device out there it would be in another galaxy altogether."
"Ok proceed then."
The Mon-calamari began pressing buttons in sequence in the device’s control panel as it did the circular device began to light up and come to life , the locking devices began to switch into the combination being punched in. And all of a sudden a huge burst of energy came out of it. Tenel ka warrior instincts drove her to reach for her lightsaber at her waistband ,but she relaxed after sensing no threat.
The Mon-calamari chuckled " Well what do you know... So that’s how it works, it’s...
Tenel Ka cut in to finish the sentence " It’s an artificial wormhole! It’s absolutely fascinating. Prepare a probe immediately.
The probe was prepped and it hovered slowly to the artificial wormhole’s event horizon. Finally it disappeared into the silvery surface of the artificial wormhole.
Tenel Ka asked the probe operators "Are we getting telemetry
"Yes milady we’ll track the trajectory on the HoloProjector
The HoloProjector came to life showing the path that the probe was taking along the cosmos.
In about a minute the path stopped.
She again asked for a report
"The probe has stopped according to astrometrics in a galaxy about 16 million light years away."
"are we getting live feedback from the probe?"
"The signal is coming in now"
The HoloProjector showed strange planetary landscape with what at first sight appeared some sort of ruins
" Can you enhance that and analyze it?"
"Already on it milady the structure appears rather to be the remains of an unknown spacecraft. most of it’s buried in the planet’s soil."
Tenel Ka stood looking transfixed at the scenery in the HoloProjector "Assemble a team, we are going in."
Location: Corusca Galaxy
Coruscant
Or’lek was more than happy to get his little R&R and the fact that it came from the Emperor himself gave him a great sense of accomplishment, plus it felt great to be appreciated given the fact that he was a direct descendant of the infamous genetically enhanced clones that later became Palpatine’s own army of stormtroopers and those inherited enhancements had made all the clone’s descendants outcast specially after the fall of Palpatine’s Empire. Even then his predecessor still remained loyal to the imperial ideology in part because they had been designed that way and also because they could not fit anywhere else. So after the remnants of the New Jedi Order took control of the government at the end of the last civil war and dissolved the New Republic, sure enough he was back on the job
Even though by right of birth and conditioning he blindly believed in the empire. He knew that the former empire treated his kind as no more than beasts of burden. The fact that in this new imperial order they were given rights and treated like ordinary sentient beings. Made him more determined than ever to defend this new empire at any cost.
As he was heading to a dinner for well deserved meal he felt a sting on his neck, instinctively he grabbed at it and pulled a dart. Immediately he felt wobbly but before he collapsed somebody grabbed him and dragged him to a nearby narrow alley.
After taking him there his captor dropped him on the ground and he heard a gruff voice "Just so you know the dart was meant to paralyze you, not kill you, after all we know about you genetically enhanced clowns and we don’t want that to get in the way of our dealings at hand now. Do we?"
A surly figure stepped out of the shadows and Or'lek recognized the Shock Trooper commander Norys "What... What do you want?"
"Funny you should ask, I want to know everything you know about the findings of the dig on Yavin 4. Oh! And I do mean everything!"
Norys slammed his fist against the palm of his other hand in delight as he proceeded to extract the information from the hapless trooper.
Location: Corusca Galaxy
Super Imperial Destroyer Harbinger in orbit around Tattoine
Grand moff Tarkin III walked into the chamber of supreme imperial commander Jacen
"We got a report that they captured the stormtrooper and they are on the process of extracting the information from him"
Jacen just kept looking through his chamber’s viewport without turning toward Tarkin "Excellent! As soon as you extract what he knows you are to report to me immediately"
"Yes milord."
Tarkin turned and left the imperial commander’s chamber.
Jacen smiled wickedly as he went on looking through the viewport.
Location: Corusca Galaxy
Yavin 4
The Mon-Calamari researcher and the Devaronian assistant were already prepped for the expedition through the artificial wormhole to that planet in that very distant galaxy "Were all ready milady."
"Well, then lets get going shall we..."
As they approached the wormhole’s event horizon and the Devaronian saw just about everybody vanish into its void, he felt very uneasy " Are you sure about how safe this is mistress?"
"Ooh, don’t be such a cry baby!"
Tenel Ka pushed her assistant into the void and jumped into it shortly after.
Location: Corusca Galaxy
Yavin 4
The activity in and around the excavation site had grown to a fever pitch when Tenel Ka arrived from her quarters.
"So show me."
A Mon-Calamari researcher began to explain how they found what it was."
" In essence milady what we have here is some kind of artificial transport system, we have been able to fix its control panel and we have plugged the whole array to a a power generator, we wanted you to be here for the first test."
"will it work?"
"Only if it finds a link with another of this devices and that’s the ticker, since this is the only device in existence in this Galaxy. If there’s still another functioning device out there it would be in another galaxy altogether."
"Ok proceed then."
The Mon-calamari began pressing buttons in sequence in the device’s control panel as it did the circular device began to light up and come to life , the locking devices began to switch into the combination being punched in. And all of a sudden a huge burst of energy came out of it. Tenel ka warrior instincts drove her to reach for her lightsaber at her waistband ,but she relaxed after sensing no threat.
The Mon-calamari chuckled " Well what do you know... So that’s how it works, it’s...
Tenel Ka cut in to finish the sentence " It’s an artificial wormhole! It’s absolutely fascinating. Prepare a probe immediately.
The probe was prepped and it hovered slowly to the artificial wormhole’s event horizon. Finally it disappeared into the silvery surface of the artificial wormhole.
Tenel Ka asked the probe operators "Are we getting telemetry
"Yes milady we’ll track the trajectory on the HoloProjector
The HoloProjector came to life showing the path that the probe was taking along the cosmos.
In about a minute the path stopped.
She again asked for a report
"The probe has stopped according to astrometrics in a galaxy about 16 million light years away."
"are we getting live feedback from the probe?"
"The signal is coming in now"
The HoloProjector showed strange planetary landscape with what at first sight appeared some sort of ruins
" Can you enhance that and analyze it?"
"Already on it milady the structure appears rather to be the remains of an unknown spacecraft. most of it’s buried in the planet’s soil."
Tenel Ka stood looking transfixed at the scenery in the HoloProjector "Assemble a team, we are going in."
Location: Corusca Galaxy
Coruscant
Or’lek was more than happy to get his little R&R and the fact that it came from the Emperor himself gave him a great sense of accomplishment, plus it felt great to be appreciated given the fact that he was a direct descendant of the infamous genetically enhanced clones that later became Palpatine’s own army of stormtroopers and those inherited enhancements had made all the clone’s descendants outcast specially after the fall of Palpatine’s Empire. Even then his predecessor still remained loyal to the imperial ideology in part because they had been designed that way and also because they could not fit anywhere else. So after the remnants of the New Jedi Order took control of the government at the end of the last civil war and dissolved the New Republic, sure enough he was back on the job
Even though by right of birth and conditioning he blindly believed in the empire. He knew that the former empire treated his kind as no more than beasts of burden. The fact that in this new imperial order they were given rights and treated like ordinary sentient beings. Made him more determined than ever to defend this new empire at any cost.
As he was heading to a dinner for well deserved meal he felt a sting on his neck, instinctively he grabbed at it and pulled a dart. Immediately he felt wobbly but before he collapsed somebody grabbed him and dragged him to a nearby narrow alley.
After taking him there his captor dropped him on the ground and he heard a gruff voice "Just so you know the dart was meant to paralyze you, not kill you, after all we know about you genetically enhanced clowns and we don’t want that to get in the way of our dealings at hand now. Do we?"
A surly figure stepped out of the shadows and Or'lek recognized the Shock Trooper commander Norys "What... What do you want?"
"Funny you should ask, I want to know everything you know about the findings of the dig on Yavin 4. Oh! And I do mean everything!"
Norys slammed his fist against the palm of his other hand in delight as he proceeded to extract the information from the hapless trooper.
Location: Corusca Galaxy
Super Imperial Destroyer Harbinger in orbit around Tattoine
Grand moff Tarkin III walked into the chamber of supreme imperial commander Jacen
"We got a report that they captured the stormtrooper and they are on the process of extracting the information from him"
Jacen just kept looking through his chamber’s viewport without turning toward Tarkin "Excellent! As soon as you extract what he knows you are to report to me immediately"
"Yes milord."
Tarkin turned and left the imperial commander’s chamber.
Jacen smiled wickedly as he went on looking through the viewport.
Location: Corusca Galaxy
Yavin 4
The Mon-Calamari researcher and the Devaronian assistant were already prepped for the expedition through the artificial wormhole to that planet in that very distant galaxy "Were all ready milady."
"Well, then lets get going shall we..."
As they approached the wormhole’s event horizon and the Devaronian saw just about everybody vanish into its void, he felt very uneasy " Are you sure about how safe this is mistress?"
"Ooh, don’t be such a cry baby!"
Tenel Ka pushed her assistant into the void and jumped into it shortly after.
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Chapter 5: Through the looking glass
Chapter 5: Through the looking glass
Location Milky Way Galaxy
Earth, Colorado U.S, Cheyenne Mountain Complex, SGC.
O’Neal sat in the conference room as he heard the reports that the rebel Jaffa leader Brai’Tac had supplied to Teal’c.
Teal’c continued disclosing Brai’Tac’s report "It seems that the Ashen federation is taking advantage of the weakened state of the Systems Lords & remaining Goa’uld. as they have taken over worlds that were previously Goa’uld colonies. They have used their bio-weapon in more than one occasion in order to rid themselves of whatever native population is present.
O’Neal grunted at that, he remembered well the weird incident of a letter getting through the StarGate from himself in the future no less. And he also recalled how true that letter turned out to be when after first contact with the Ashen & finding out their true agenda they attempted to launch just that weapon through the StarGate and given the fact they somehow gained control of the Iris, it had indeed been a hair raising moment, but thankfully SG-1 got to disable the weapon before it was launched.
"What about the Tokra & the Serrakin-Hebradan alliance are they doing anything about it?"
"So far the Tokra have done little if anything about it & the Serrakin alliance, other than taking in refugees have done nothing.
"Well that just dandy, if that’s what they are doing with all & their capabilities. What are we supposed to do about it, given our own limited capabilities to deal with this. We have to contact them both and try to get them in a more proactive role. Otherwise on our own all that we can do is tighten up our collective asses and hope that Hammond’s little fleet can withhold an attack by the Ashen."
"The Ashen prefer to strike primitive worlds with no defenses of any kind, so Earth would probably be last in their conquest bid."
"Maybe but I rather try to workout a deal with the Tokra and the Serrakin Err Hebridans whatever to work together with the rebel Jaffa and us. To counter the Ashen’s plans. Than to wait for them to strike."
Major Samantha Carter interjected "We can go on an away mission to Hebridan in order to start talks with their government about this issue, we’ll be ready in about 2 hours."
"You are cleared to go Major with my blessings. Daniel & Teal’c will accompany you as always."
Teal’c, Major Carter and Dr Jackson got up from the table to prep for the away mission as Major Carter is about to leave she says a final though to O’Neal
"We’ll get through this Cmdr. We always do."
"I know Carter. I know. Oh! And by the way that’s supposed to be my line Mayor."
"Yes sir."
As she left, Cmdr Jack O’Neal almost felt sorry that he had been such a pain in the ass to Hammond when he was commanding the SGC. It’s definitely not the same when you’re on the receiving end.
Location: Milky Way Galaxy
Planet SGD: PXZ-698
About 25000 light years from Earth
The Stargate roared to life on the desolate world and from the artificial wormhole newcomers from a galaxy far, far away began to come out.
For most of them the trip through the wormhole had been disorienting and nauseating and had to take time to recover. But Tenel Ka leaped out of the StarGate like a panther and a fiery smile showed on her face "Wheehoo let’s do that again!."
Everybody looked on; the warrior woman from Dathomir rarely had ever cracked a smile in her life.
The Devaronian began reading his handheld instruments "Mistress according to our chronometers we are not only 6 million light years from our own galaxy, but 6 million years in the future!"
"What! Check the instruments again it has to be a malfunction"
"I already have mistress its no malfunction the equipment is working fine, we are indeed 6 million years in the future!"
"Phew! Now that’s something you don’t do every day."
Tenel Ka had experienced encounters with strange beasts and had fought so many battles that she had lost count, but experiencing something like traveling millions of years into the future was decidedly not one of them. It was puzzling to think that everybody that she knew in her home galaxy was at the timeline she was now in, way long gone.
"Dial back now!"
"Yes mistress!"
The Mon"Calamari researcher interjected " Milady the Device back at our timeline had been plugged to a power generator. According to my readings the built in power unit of this device does not even come close to supply the kind of power we supplied the device back home."
"So what, we are stranded? No! I need options, now!"
"May I suggest using the probe’s power unit to boost the power level in this device."
"Do it, immediately!"
"Aye, were on it!"
Location: Milky Way Galaxy
Serrakin"Hebridan Alliance
Hebridan SGD: P4X"131
The Reunion with the council of the Serrakin-Hebridan alliance had yielded little if any results, Major Carter had sure had better days, given the council’s intransigence on the subject Teal’c had gone to Chulak to talk to Brai’Tac about deploying more warriors and ships to defend the once Goa’uld colonies from further attacks by the Ashen. But she knew that already the rebel Jaffa were at their limit. She and Dr Jackson had to convince the Serrakin council that they needed to act and that time was not on their side. As she pondered the day’s events on her chamber. The door buzzer sounded "Who is it?"
"Its Warrick, may I come in mayor?"
"Sure Enter"
"I want you to know mayor, that me and my colleagues are doing everything we can to get the council to approve your proposal and will continue to do so. We understand the seriousness of the situation but as you know there is still plenty of division and mistrust specially between the humans and our species in Hebridan."
Warrick and Carter had become very good friends after participating in the Hebridan space race and it was there that she and the rest of SG"1 learned first hand of the deep divisions between the humans and serrakin living in Hebridan, as they were the main cause for a major clandestine sabotage operation during the race.
"I understand Warrick and thanks. But they have to understand that this is a threat that cannot be ignored for long. Time is running out Warrick. For all of us!"
"I know major and we will do whatever is necessary to get the approval as soon as possible."
"And call me Sam or Samantha Warrick, we have been friends for quite a while now."
"Understood and I’d prefer to call you Samantha, Sam sounds like a man’s name."
"Then by all means call me Samantha. My dad has usually calls me Sam, but that’s probably in part because he always wanted a boy.
"Have you heard from him?"
"Not for a while, the communications with the Tokra have been sketchy at best."
"You must miss him..."
"Yeah... I do..."
Warrick tenderly reached for Carter’s hand
At that moment the door buzzer sounds once again
"Yes."
"Sam its Daniel may I come in."
"Of course enter."
As Daniel enters the room he sees both Warrick and Samantha holding hands
"Am I interrupting something?"
"No... You’re not."
Major Carter quickly released Warrick’s hand and Warrick also adds on "Not at all.."
"Ok... They just told me that the council is going to meet again in about 4 hours in an emergency meeting."
"What happened?"
"Apparently the Ashen got brazen enough to attack an alliance outpost."
Location: Milky Way Galaxy
Planet SGD: PXZ"698
Hurriedly the engineers of the team began to adapt the power module of the probe into the power source of the device
"Were done milady, we can try to dial out now."
"Do it!"
The Devaronian dialed in the control panel the address of their home galaxy as in the device back home all 9 locking mechanisms activated before the artificial wormhole roared once again to life.
Tenel Ka ordered to send a transmission immediately.
"Are we getting anything?"
All of a sudden the holocommunicator received an incoming signal.
"Yavin 4 station here we copy, are you all right milady."
"We are indeed and so very happy to hear you!"
Everybody cheered when they saw the hologram of Yavin 4’s Dig site
Tenel Ka went on "We need you to dial back in and send a good power module like the one at your end."
"Milady?"
"We have not only gone to another galaxy, we have also gone to the future, 16 million years in the future to be exact!"
"That’s... That is remarkable milady!"
"Tell me about it! And do it ASAP we don’t know how long the probe’s power module is going to hold and we don’t want to become stranded so far away and in the future no less!"
"Understood, we are on it."
Location Milky Way Galaxy
Earth, Colorado U.S, Cheyenne Mountain Complex, SGC.
O’Neal sat in the conference room as he heard the reports that the rebel Jaffa leader Brai’Tac had supplied to Teal’c.
Teal’c continued disclosing Brai’Tac’s report "It seems that the Ashen federation is taking advantage of the weakened state of the Systems Lords & remaining Goa’uld. as they have taken over worlds that were previously Goa’uld colonies. They have used their bio-weapon in more than one occasion in order to rid themselves of whatever native population is present.
O’Neal grunted at that, he remembered well the weird incident of a letter getting through the StarGate from himself in the future no less. And he also recalled how true that letter turned out to be when after first contact with the Ashen & finding out their true agenda they attempted to launch just that weapon through the StarGate and given the fact they somehow gained control of the Iris, it had indeed been a hair raising moment, but thankfully SG-1 got to disable the weapon before it was launched.
"What about the Tokra & the Serrakin-Hebradan alliance are they doing anything about it?"
"So far the Tokra have done little if anything about it & the Serrakin alliance, other than taking in refugees have done nothing.
"Well that just dandy, if that’s what they are doing with all & their capabilities. What are we supposed to do about it, given our own limited capabilities to deal with this. We have to contact them both and try to get them in a more proactive role. Otherwise on our own all that we can do is tighten up our collective asses and hope that Hammond’s little fleet can withhold an attack by the Ashen."
"The Ashen prefer to strike primitive worlds with no defenses of any kind, so Earth would probably be last in their conquest bid."
"Maybe but I rather try to workout a deal with the Tokra and the Serrakin Err Hebridans whatever to work together with the rebel Jaffa and us. To counter the Ashen’s plans. Than to wait for them to strike."
Major Samantha Carter interjected "We can go on an away mission to Hebridan in order to start talks with their government about this issue, we’ll be ready in about 2 hours."
"You are cleared to go Major with my blessings. Daniel & Teal’c will accompany you as always."
Teal’c, Major Carter and Dr Jackson got up from the table to prep for the away mission as Major Carter is about to leave she says a final though to O’Neal
"We’ll get through this Cmdr. We always do."
"I know Carter. I know. Oh! And by the way that’s supposed to be my line Mayor."
"Yes sir."
As she left, Cmdr Jack O’Neal almost felt sorry that he had been such a pain in the ass to Hammond when he was commanding the SGC. It’s definitely not the same when you’re on the receiving end.
Location: Milky Way Galaxy
Planet SGD: PXZ-698
About 25000 light years from Earth
The Stargate roared to life on the desolate world and from the artificial wormhole newcomers from a galaxy far, far away began to come out.
For most of them the trip through the wormhole had been disorienting and nauseating and had to take time to recover. But Tenel Ka leaped out of the StarGate like a panther and a fiery smile showed on her face "Wheehoo let’s do that again!."
Everybody looked on; the warrior woman from Dathomir rarely had ever cracked a smile in her life.
The Devaronian began reading his handheld instruments "Mistress according to our chronometers we are not only 6 million light years from our own galaxy, but 6 million years in the future!"
"What! Check the instruments again it has to be a malfunction"
"I already have mistress its no malfunction the equipment is working fine, we are indeed 6 million years in the future!"
"Phew! Now that’s something you don’t do every day."
Tenel Ka had experienced encounters with strange beasts and had fought so many battles that she had lost count, but experiencing something like traveling millions of years into the future was decidedly not one of them. It was puzzling to think that everybody that she knew in her home galaxy was at the timeline she was now in, way long gone.
"Dial back now!"
"Yes mistress!"
The Mon"Calamari researcher interjected " Milady the Device back at our timeline had been plugged to a power generator. According to my readings the built in power unit of this device does not even come close to supply the kind of power we supplied the device back home."
"So what, we are stranded? No! I need options, now!"
"May I suggest using the probe’s power unit to boost the power level in this device."
"Do it, immediately!"
"Aye, were on it!"
Location: Milky Way Galaxy
Serrakin"Hebridan Alliance
Hebridan SGD: P4X"131
The Reunion with the council of the Serrakin-Hebridan alliance had yielded little if any results, Major Carter had sure had better days, given the council’s intransigence on the subject Teal’c had gone to Chulak to talk to Brai’Tac about deploying more warriors and ships to defend the once Goa’uld colonies from further attacks by the Ashen. But she knew that already the rebel Jaffa were at their limit. She and Dr Jackson had to convince the Serrakin council that they needed to act and that time was not on their side. As she pondered the day’s events on her chamber. The door buzzer sounded "Who is it?"
"Its Warrick, may I come in mayor?"
"Sure Enter"
"I want you to know mayor, that me and my colleagues are doing everything we can to get the council to approve your proposal and will continue to do so. We understand the seriousness of the situation but as you know there is still plenty of division and mistrust specially between the humans and our species in Hebridan."
Warrick and Carter had become very good friends after participating in the Hebridan space race and it was there that she and the rest of SG"1 learned first hand of the deep divisions between the humans and serrakin living in Hebridan, as they were the main cause for a major clandestine sabotage operation during the race.
"I understand Warrick and thanks. But they have to understand that this is a threat that cannot be ignored for long. Time is running out Warrick. For all of us!"
"I know major and we will do whatever is necessary to get the approval as soon as possible."
"And call me Sam or Samantha Warrick, we have been friends for quite a while now."
"Understood and I’d prefer to call you Samantha, Sam sounds like a man’s name."
"Then by all means call me Samantha. My dad has usually calls me Sam, but that’s probably in part because he always wanted a boy.
"Have you heard from him?"
"Not for a while, the communications with the Tokra have been sketchy at best."
"You must miss him..."
"Yeah... I do..."
Warrick tenderly reached for Carter’s hand
At that moment the door buzzer sounds once again
"Yes."
"Sam its Daniel may I come in."
"Of course enter."
As Daniel enters the room he sees both Warrick and Samantha holding hands
"Am I interrupting something?"
"No... You’re not."
Major Carter quickly released Warrick’s hand and Warrick also adds on "Not at all.."
"Ok... They just told me that the council is going to meet again in about 4 hours in an emergency meeting."
"What happened?"
"Apparently the Ashen got brazen enough to attack an alliance outpost."
Location: Milky Way Galaxy
Planet SGD: PXZ"698
Hurriedly the engineers of the team began to adapt the power module of the probe into the power source of the device
"Were done milady, we can try to dial out now."
"Do it!"
The Devaronian dialed in the control panel the address of their home galaxy as in the device back home all 9 locking mechanisms activated before the artificial wormhole roared once again to life.
Tenel Ka ordered to send a transmission immediately.
"Are we getting anything?"
All of a sudden the holocommunicator received an incoming signal.
"Yavin 4 station here we copy, are you all right milady."
"We are indeed and so very happy to hear you!"
Everybody cheered when they saw the hologram of Yavin 4’s Dig site
Tenel Ka went on "We need you to dial back in and send a good power module like the one at your end."
"Milady?"
"We have not only gone to another galaxy, we have also gone to the future, 16 million years in the future to be exact!"
"That’s... That is remarkable milady!"
"Tell me about it! And do it ASAP we don’t know how long the probe’s power module is going to hold and we don’t want to become stranded so far away and in the future no less!"
"Understood, we are on it."
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Chapter 6: New kids on the block
Chapter 6: New kids on the block
Location: Milky Way Galaxy
Planet SGD: PXZ-698
A few hours later Tenel Ka and her off-galaxy team had successfully installed the power module that the Yavin 4 team sent through the device. Immediately they proceeded to check the remains of the buried alien ship.
Tenel Ka was cautious " Check for any anomalies that could be booby traps"
"We are not registering anything all that unusual, there seems to be some peculiar rocks around the site, they may have been fused with parts of the alien ship’s hull when it crashed."
"Understood, lets proceed then..."
After about 8 hours latter they had managed to extract the engine components and just about every technology that could be salvaged.
Then they send all the materials they gathered through the device back to Yavin 4 for analysis and reverse engineering of the alien technology.
"We just send the last of the recovered items though the device milady"
"OK then lets get back home shall we, I need to fill a report and I think we all could use a bath".
This time the whole expedition team went through the device 3 at a time and without hesitation, as they were all eager to get back home.
Once they all left and the artificial wormhole ceased operating, high above in orbit a Tel’Tak class Tokra scout vessel de-cloaked. It had been monitoring all the activity of the newcomers without their knowledge, immediately it jumped into hyperspace to report back to the secret Tokra headquarters about its findings.
And on the planet’s surface the odd rocks surrounding the crash site morphed into AsGard transmitting devices. They in unison sent a powerful encoded message back to the distant Valhalla galaxy, the home and reign of the AsGard.
Location: Corusca Galaxy
Super Imperial Destroyer Harbinger in orbit around Tattoine
Jacen was puzzled at the information extracted from the stormtrooper
"So its some kind of transport system? Do they have any idea how it works?"
"They were working on it at the time sire."
"I see! well... See that the stormtrooper is properly taken care of."
"As you whish sire."
Tarkin send instruction to his agent back on Coruscant to do as his commander had ordered.
"You know what to do, Tarkin out."
Norys replied unemotionally
"Understood..."
Location: Corusca Galaxy
Coruscant
"Way ahead of you, Tarkin, way ahead of you!"
Norys mused to himself as he stood over the lifeless, battered remains of the stormtrooper, he took a vial out and place it on top of the body, instantly the vial broke and a liquid composed of nanobots poured over the corpse and rapidly began consuming it until nothing was left, the nanobots were programmed to self destruct by melting themselves into harmless vapor after performing their duty.
Location Valhalla Galaxy
AsGard homeworld
AsGard Defense/Intelligence gathering center
Supreme Cmdr Thor stood transfixed looking at the holorecording that had been sent by the monitoring devices where one of their ships had crashed so long ago, it was a very strange looking team composed of clearly some humans and aliens they had never seen or encountered before. Clearly they were not natives to the galaxy that they had come to through the Stargate.
Thor couldn’t help but feel that this newcomers were somehow going to change everything sooner or latter and the fact that he did not know whether this was for good or ill really worried him.
Location: Milky Way Galaxy
Planet SGD: PXZ-698
A few hours later Tenel Ka and her off-galaxy team had successfully installed the power module that the Yavin 4 team sent through the device. Immediately they proceeded to check the remains of the buried alien ship.
Tenel Ka was cautious " Check for any anomalies that could be booby traps"
"We are not registering anything all that unusual, there seems to be some peculiar rocks around the site, they may have been fused with parts of the alien ship’s hull when it crashed."
"Understood, lets proceed then..."
After about 8 hours latter they had managed to extract the engine components and just about every technology that could be salvaged.
Then they send all the materials they gathered through the device back to Yavin 4 for analysis and reverse engineering of the alien technology.
"We just send the last of the recovered items though the device milady"
"OK then lets get back home shall we, I need to fill a report and I think we all could use a bath".
This time the whole expedition team went through the device 3 at a time and without hesitation, as they were all eager to get back home.
Once they all left and the artificial wormhole ceased operating, high above in orbit a Tel’Tak class Tokra scout vessel de-cloaked. It had been monitoring all the activity of the newcomers without their knowledge, immediately it jumped into hyperspace to report back to the secret Tokra headquarters about its findings.
And on the planet’s surface the odd rocks surrounding the crash site morphed into AsGard transmitting devices. They in unison sent a powerful encoded message back to the distant Valhalla galaxy, the home and reign of the AsGard.
Location: Corusca Galaxy
Super Imperial Destroyer Harbinger in orbit around Tattoine
Jacen was puzzled at the information extracted from the stormtrooper
"So its some kind of transport system? Do they have any idea how it works?"
"They were working on it at the time sire."
"I see! well... See that the stormtrooper is properly taken care of."
"As you whish sire."
Tarkin send instruction to his agent back on Coruscant to do as his commander had ordered.
"You know what to do, Tarkin out."
Norys replied unemotionally
"Understood..."
Location: Corusca Galaxy
Coruscant
"Way ahead of you, Tarkin, way ahead of you!"
Norys mused to himself as he stood over the lifeless, battered remains of the stormtrooper, he took a vial out and place it on top of the body, instantly the vial broke and a liquid composed of nanobots poured over the corpse and rapidly began consuming it until nothing was left, the nanobots were programmed to self destruct by melting themselves into harmless vapor after performing their duty.
Location Valhalla Galaxy
AsGard homeworld
AsGard Defense/Intelligence gathering center
Supreme Cmdr Thor stood transfixed looking at the holorecording that had been sent by the monitoring devices where one of their ships had crashed so long ago, it was a very strange looking team composed of clearly some humans and aliens they had never seen or encountered before. Clearly they were not natives to the galaxy that they had come to through the Stargate.
Thor couldn’t help but feel that this newcomers were somehow going to change everything sooner or latter and the fact that he did not know whether this was for good or ill really worried him.
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Chapter 7: Lifting the veil
Chapter 7: Lifting the veil
Location: Corusca Galaxy
Coruscant
Emperor Anakin was eating dinner when a high ranking imperial officer addressed him
"What is it?"
"I’m sorry to interrupt your meal your highness but we are receiving a priority one encoded message from Yavin 4."
"Put it on immediately"
The HoloProjector displayed the image of Tenel Ka followed by pictures and animations showing the details of what had been discovered so far, everybody in the room was agape from the amazing findings."
Tenel Ka proceeded to expand on the subject."
"Given the nature of the discovery I had to inform you as quickly as possible, and it obvious that we wont be able to hold it a secret for long anyway"
"You did right Tenel Ka, don’t worry about it, what else can you tell us."
"I think the head researcher here is best suited to explain."
The Mon"calamari began to speak on cue
"Yes, your highness first of all we could not only reverse engineer the device to create an artificial wormhole network within our galaxy but if we start working on 2 separate teams working on both galaxies we could built a device big enough to get ships from one galaxy to the other, we are calling it the ship’s gateway.
"How exactly would that be accomplished?"
"One team on our galaxy would built the device in orbit around Yavin 4 and the other would built its counterpart in orbit around the planet that we dialed in.
"How long would all this take?"
"If we begin making preparations now within a month we could be ready to begin, once we do if we work around the clock. We could finish the project within 2 or 3 weeks tops!"
"Excellent work you all, and you have the green light to commence the project, carry on!"
"Yes your highness"
The imperial officer finally broke his silence "Your highness are you sure this is wise? I mean the peasants are not very happy with the tax burden on them and this would only increase such burden"
"Are you kidding General? Once the word is out that a whole new galaxy full of resources and in the future is open for business and exploration. Every civilized world in Corusca will be wanting to get a piece of it. Its the boost we just needed!"
"I see your point, your Highness I hope you are right!"
"I am General, don’t you forget about it"
"Yes sir"
Location Corusca Galaxy
Super Imperial Destroyer Harbinger in orbit around Tattoine
Jacen got himself in a hurry to the bridge where he and his crew saw the whole contents of the message, for a while nobody uttered a word digesting what they had just seen
Tarkin began to speak "Amazing a whole new galaxy and in the future no less...
Jacen regarded him for a moment and added "Indeed this is absolutely perfect, break out of orbit and prepare to jump to hyperspace set a course for the Naboo system and while you’re at it send this encoded message to Kamino"
Jacen handed the encoded message to Tarkin and returned to his quarters.
Location: Milky Way galaxy
Earth, Colorado U.S, Cheyenne Mountain Complex, SGC.
The official ceremony for Carter’s rise in rank from Major to Colonel had just about ended and now Samantha Carter was officially a U.S.A.F lieutenant Colonel or just colonel for short.
Carter approached an hugged Hammond "I’m so happy to see you here
"I wouldn’t have missed this for the world."
"Thanks sir!"
"You are welcome colonel!"
O’Neil shouted to everybody " Come on people this little sandwiches and cakes here are not gonna go by themselves so dig in. that’s an order"
Hammond looked on in amusement"
"It sure is different from when I was in charge"
to which Carter added "Tell me about it sir!"
All of a sudden the alarm claxons sounded with the all familiar message
"Unauthorized off"world activation!"
The iris had been previously closed, since they were no off"world teams at the time and because of the ceremony at hand, still everybody hurried to their posts like clockwork
Brig. Gen. O’Neal got into the control room " Anything yet?
"Nothing sir, Wait! We are getting a signal, its the Tokra!
"Open the Iris, send the all clear signal"
As the Iris opened Jacob and Anisse stepped out of the gate, O’Neal along with all the of the officials and the SG"1 team went down to meet them."
Carter moved ahead of the group and gave her dad a hug "I’m so glad to see you, I’ve missed you a lot!"
"Same here, sweetie pie, same here"
"Are you here for the ceremony?"
"I wish I could say I’m honey, but the truth is we came here because we received intelligence that may concern us all!"
O’Neal asked feeling a little uncomfortable at what Jacob had said " What? more bad news?"
"We are not sure at this point, to be honest Jack!"
"Oh! Ok! Well lead on!"
They moved into the conference room where the tokra unveiled a portable holoprojector
The simbiont within Jacob began to speak " A few days ago a tokra scout monitoring ashen activity recorded this on an uninhabited world with an active Stargate.
The holorecording showed a strange group of what appeared to be humans and aliens coming out of the Stargate.
Jacob went on "This strange group came out of the stargate, we have never seen the aliens that are accompanying the humans, clearly they are not from this galaxy.
Lt. Hailey all of a sudden commented " Holy smokes that alien looks just like Ackbar!"
Everybody’s eyes set on Lt Hailey and O’Neal finally interjected "I’m sorry Lt.! What did you just said?"
"Oh I’m sorry, but it’s that alien looks just like one of the characters from the Star Wars films, Return of the Jedi to be precise, in the movie he was the commander of the rebel fleet."
"So I take it you really like that stuff"
"It’s what inspired me to become an astrophysicist in the first place sir!"
"Anything else?"
"Well that other one actually looks like Darth Maul from the Phantom Menace."
"Darth who? the Phantom what? I don’t remember that one, wasn’t the revenge of the Jedi the last one?"
"The Return of the Jedi Sir, and yes that was the last one of the first trilogy."
"There was another?"
"Yes Sir. There was, well actually they have made 2 more prequels. I take it you are not up to date in this sir?"
"Nope, fighting real space bad asses and monsters has taken most of my time. So let me get this clear. Characters from a scifi movie are coming from another galaxy through the Stargate! Have I gotten it right?"
"I’m just saying that there incredibly similar not that they are sir."
"But still they do look like from the Star Wars movie."
"Pretty much!"
Jacob’s simbiont interrupted the discussion "That’s highly improbable!"
O’Neal persisted "But not impossible?"
"As I said highly improbable, lets go on with the projection shall we"
"Oh! By all means."
The holoprojection went on until it showed the strange group rigging some kind of power unit to the Stargate and dialing out as the gate went active Carter yelled "Freeze that!"
Jacob smiled "You saw it at first glance, did you not?"
O’Neal getting increasingly curious and feeling left behind asked " Saw what?"
Carter responded "When they dialed out all 9 chevrons went active sir!"
"All of then?
"Yes sir."
Jacob picked up the rest of the conversation "Sam is absolutely correct! It’s an unprecedented event, as you know usually 7 chevrons are used for travel within the network of our own galaxy, the 8th chevron is for either Point A to Point A time jumps or intergalactic travel within the same timeline. So although we were never able to pull it off we always though the 9th chevron would be to create a stable wormhole for a time jump from point A to point B."
O’Neal interrupted "So what does that mean? That they may have come from the future?"
Carter added "Or from the past, it could be either way".
"So they could from the past and from a galaxy far away, does that sound familiar anyone?"
"It’s still improbable unless they came from an alternate quantum reality."
"What?"
"Like the realities from the quantum mirror"
"Oy! That thing again?"
Jacob responded "No, the planet and location is near a known ancient AsGard crash site, the AsGard left monitoring equipment there and we contacted them. Their readings indicate that they have the same quantum signature as ours, so they are very much from our universe, just another galaxy.
O’Neal once again cut in "Could you translate all that to English please."
Jacob explained "Every universe has like its own fingerprint, they have the fingerprint that belongs to our universe."
"Oh, see why didn’t you say that in first place. So were back to square one, how can any body explain that beings that look almost exactly from a movie are coming through the gate?"
Carter spoke "Well there is a theory regarding the possibility that though and consciousness transcend space & time and if that’s so it could happen that somebody could have picked in his or her mind memories of events that took place long ago, but he or she would also probably fill whatever blank with their own imagination as well."
"So we would not know by looking at the movies what their real capabilities are?"
"Not likely sir."
"Ok this is what I’m gonna do. I’m going to go to my office, think for at least 20 minutes about what exactly if anything I’m to tell to Washington, because sure as hell, I’m not gonna called them and tell them that the galaxy is being invaded by a Scifi convention from another galaxy!"
Location: Corusca Galaxy
Coruscant
Emperor Anakin was eating dinner when a high ranking imperial officer addressed him
"What is it?"
"I’m sorry to interrupt your meal your highness but we are receiving a priority one encoded message from Yavin 4."
"Put it on immediately"
The HoloProjector displayed the image of Tenel Ka followed by pictures and animations showing the details of what had been discovered so far, everybody in the room was agape from the amazing findings."
Tenel Ka proceeded to expand on the subject."
"Given the nature of the discovery I had to inform you as quickly as possible, and it obvious that we wont be able to hold it a secret for long anyway"
"You did right Tenel Ka, don’t worry about it, what else can you tell us."
"I think the head researcher here is best suited to explain."
The Mon"calamari began to speak on cue
"Yes, your highness first of all we could not only reverse engineer the device to create an artificial wormhole network within our galaxy but if we start working on 2 separate teams working on both galaxies we could built a device big enough to get ships from one galaxy to the other, we are calling it the ship’s gateway.
"How exactly would that be accomplished?"
"One team on our galaxy would built the device in orbit around Yavin 4 and the other would built its counterpart in orbit around the planet that we dialed in.
"How long would all this take?"
"If we begin making preparations now within a month we could be ready to begin, once we do if we work around the clock. We could finish the project within 2 or 3 weeks tops!"
"Excellent work you all, and you have the green light to commence the project, carry on!"
"Yes your highness"
The imperial officer finally broke his silence "Your highness are you sure this is wise? I mean the peasants are not very happy with the tax burden on them and this would only increase such burden"
"Are you kidding General? Once the word is out that a whole new galaxy full of resources and in the future is open for business and exploration. Every civilized world in Corusca will be wanting to get a piece of it. Its the boost we just needed!"
"I see your point, your Highness I hope you are right!"
"I am General, don’t you forget about it"
"Yes sir"
Location Corusca Galaxy
Super Imperial Destroyer Harbinger in orbit around Tattoine
Jacen got himself in a hurry to the bridge where he and his crew saw the whole contents of the message, for a while nobody uttered a word digesting what they had just seen
Tarkin began to speak "Amazing a whole new galaxy and in the future no less...
Jacen regarded him for a moment and added "Indeed this is absolutely perfect, break out of orbit and prepare to jump to hyperspace set a course for the Naboo system and while you’re at it send this encoded message to Kamino"
Jacen handed the encoded message to Tarkin and returned to his quarters.
Location: Milky Way galaxy
Earth, Colorado U.S, Cheyenne Mountain Complex, SGC.
The official ceremony for Carter’s rise in rank from Major to Colonel had just about ended and now Samantha Carter was officially a U.S.A.F lieutenant Colonel or just colonel for short.
Carter approached an hugged Hammond "I’m so happy to see you here
"I wouldn’t have missed this for the world."
"Thanks sir!"
"You are welcome colonel!"
O’Neil shouted to everybody " Come on people this little sandwiches and cakes here are not gonna go by themselves so dig in. that’s an order"
Hammond looked on in amusement"
"It sure is different from when I was in charge"
to which Carter added "Tell me about it sir!"
All of a sudden the alarm claxons sounded with the all familiar message
"Unauthorized off"world activation!"
The iris had been previously closed, since they were no off"world teams at the time and because of the ceremony at hand, still everybody hurried to their posts like clockwork
Brig. Gen. O’Neal got into the control room " Anything yet?
"Nothing sir, Wait! We are getting a signal, its the Tokra!
"Open the Iris, send the all clear signal"
As the Iris opened Jacob and Anisse stepped out of the gate, O’Neal along with all the of the officials and the SG"1 team went down to meet them."
Carter moved ahead of the group and gave her dad a hug "I’m so glad to see you, I’ve missed you a lot!"
"Same here, sweetie pie, same here"
"Are you here for the ceremony?"
"I wish I could say I’m honey, but the truth is we came here because we received intelligence that may concern us all!"
O’Neal asked feeling a little uncomfortable at what Jacob had said " What? more bad news?"
"We are not sure at this point, to be honest Jack!"
"Oh! Ok! Well lead on!"
They moved into the conference room where the tokra unveiled a portable holoprojector
The simbiont within Jacob began to speak " A few days ago a tokra scout monitoring ashen activity recorded this on an uninhabited world with an active Stargate.
The holorecording showed a strange group of what appeared to be humans and aliens coming out of the Stargate.
Jacob went on "This strange group came out of the stargate, we have never seen the aliens that are accompanying the humans, clearly they are not from this galaxy.
Lt. Hailey all of a sudden commented " Holy smokes that alien looks just like Ackbar!"
Everybody’s eyes set on Lt Hailey and O’Neal finally interjected "I’m sorry Lt.! What did you just said?"
"Oh I’m sorry, but it’s that alien looks just like one of the characters from the Star Wars films, Return of the Jedi to be precise, in the movie he was the commander of the rebel fleet."
"So I take it you really like that stuff"
"It’s what inspired me to become an astrophysicist in the first place sir!"
"Anything else?"
"Well that other one actually looks like Darth Maul from the Phantom Menace."
"Darth who? the Phantom what? I don’t remember that one, wasn’t the revenge of the Jedi the last one?"
"The Return of the Jedi Sir, and yes that was the last one of the first trilogy."
"There was another?"
"Yes Sir. There was, well actually they have made 2 more prequels. I take it you are not up to date in this sir?"
"Nope, fighting real space bad asses and monsters has taken most of my time. So let me get this clear. Characters from a scifi movie are coming from another galaxy through the Stargate! Have I gotten it right?"
"I’m just saying that there incredibly similar not that they are sir."
"But still they do look like from the Star Wars movie."
"Pretty much!"
Jacob’s simbiont interrupted the discussion "That’s highly improbable!"
O’Neal persisted "But not impossible?"
"As I said highly improbable, lets go on with the projection shall we"
"Oh! By all means."
The holoprojection went on until it showed the strange group rigging some kind of power unit to the Stargate and dialing out as the gate went active Carter yelled "Freeze that!"
Jacob smiled "You saw it at first glance, did you not?"
O’Neal getting increasingly curious and feeling left behind asked " Saw what?"
Carter responded "When they dialed out all 9 chevrons went active sir!"
"All of then?
"Yes sir."
Jacob picked up the rest of the conversation "Sam is absolutely correct! It’s an unprecedented event, as you know usually 7 chevrons are used for travel within the network of our own galaxy, the 8th chevron is for either Point A to Point A time jumps or intergalactic travel within the same timeline. So although we were never able to pull it off we always though the 9th chevron would be to create a stable wormhole for a time jump from point A to point B."
O’Neal interrupted "So what does that mean? That they may have come from the future?"
Carter added "Or from the past, it could be either way".
"So they could from the past and from a galaxy far away, does that sound familiar anyone?"
"It’s still improbable unless they came from an alternate quantum reality."
"What?"
"Like the realities from the quantum mirror"
"Oy! That thing again?"
Jacob responded "No, the planet and location is near a known ancient AsGard crash site, the AsGard left monitoring equipment there and we contacted them. Their readings indicate that they have the same quantum signature as ours, so they are very much from our universe, just another galaxy.
O’Neal once again cut in "Could you translate all that to English please."
Jacob explained "Every universe has like its own fingerprint, they have the fingerprint that belongs to our universe."
"Oh, see why didn’t you say that in first place. So were back to square one, how can any body explain that beings that look almost exactly from a movie are coming through the gate?"
Carter spoke "Well there is a theory regarding the possibility that though and consciousness transcend space & time and if that’s so it could happen that somebody could have picked in his or her mind memories of events that took place long ago, but he or she would also probably fill whatever blank with their own imagination as well."
"So we would not know by looking at the movies what their real capabilities are?"
"Not likely sir."
"Ok this is what I’m gonna do. I’m going to go to my office, think for at least 20 minutes about what exactly if anything I’m to tell to Washington, because sure as hell, I’m not gonna called them and tell them that the galaxy is being invaded by a Scifi convention from another galaxy!"
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Chapter 8: Revelations
Chapter 8: Revelations
Location: Corusca Galaxy
Super Imperial Destroyer Harbinger in orbit around around Naboo
The surveillance systems monitoring officer spoke with a slight sense of alarm in his voice.
"A Kaminoan vessel has de"cloaked at left stern, is hailing us."
Tarkin calmly ordered to respond to the hailing signal, soon after a shuttle was launched from the Kaminoan vessel and landed in the Harbinger’s space dock, as it did Tarkin spoke "Tell master Jacen that his guests have arrived."
Jacen after being informed went to meet the Kaminoan ambassador "Pleasant trip I hope
"That would depend upon what kind of business brings me to this side of the galaxy master Jacen. You requested a secret meeting in this coordinates so to what do we owe the pleasure?"
"A discovery of enormous importance has been made on Yavin 4, they found a device that creates artificial wormholes and is part of a network of such devices in a faraway galaxy. Also this other galaxy is out of sync with our timeline so traveling there you also travel to the distant future. "
"That’s remarkable and very interesting but what does it have to do with us?"
"Think about it ambassador a whole new galaxy full of new species both sentient and not for collecting their DNA, your people have always been good at tinkering with that material."
"That is indeed tempting, but may I have to remind you how the empire has regulated and damn nearly strangled our business, when Palpatine ruled..."
"Palpatine was an Idiot and my brother’s a fool as well, you help me bring him down and when I become Emperor your people will have unrestricted access to all the genetic material they could want and now that offer considering the discovery has about tripled in worth! Don’t you think ambassador?"
"Indeed it has, so we are in agreement, hopefully the next time we meet you’ll be at the throne in Coruscant"
"All in good time ambassador, all in good time"
"Does your brother suspect anything, if he did the repercussions for my world would be unmentionable!"
"My brother right now can’t see the broadside of a Bantha! If it passed right in front of him, the dark side clouds his judgment as I’ve foreseen."
"Then to the future Master Jacen!"
"To the future indeed ambassador!"
Location: Corusca Galaxy
Yavin 4
Finally the first long term expedition team to build the Ship’s gateway had been assembled and was underway
it was a joyful moment for everybody involved since the empire made public its discovery and began hiring workers from far and wide across the galaxy. they were to work in tandem with those that were going to build the gate in their side of the universe. As they moved into the event horizon of the artificial wormhole everybody cheered them on. Leading the expedition was no other than Tenel Ka herself. Jaina Solo was to oversight the construction at the Corusca side.
Jaina commanded "Ok people! they are on their way! Let’s get to work."
Everybody eagerly began to work on the biggest public project in the history of the galaxy.
An admiral questioned Jaina " How safe will it really be for us to go to that galaxy? We don’t know anything about its inhabitants or their capabilities. What if they turned all out to be as advanced as those that built that ship we found over there?"
"The ship probably given its capabilities did not originate from that galaxy but a nearby one. But given this risks we have supplied the off"galaxy team with shield generators and a portable turbolaser. As the work progresses more sophisticated and automated defense systems will be deployed. Nothing is going to stop us Admiral, Nothing at all! Besides they have Tenel Ka on their side, I pity the fool or fools that would dare cross her."
Location: Milky Way Galaxy
Planet SGD: PXZ"698
The Off"Galaxy construction team arrived to their destination, even though they had been warned of the effects of wormhole travel, some as before had to take time to recover specially those that were first time travelers.
Tenel Ka rapidly ordered people to get on the move " Set a defense perimeter immediately, get those shield generators online on the double and install that turbolaser cannon.
So those responsible for setting the encampment security began to work in earnest to ensure the camp’s safety
Everybody else began erecting the infrastructure for beginning the construction phase of the gate on this galaxy so far away from their own.
Location Milky Way Galaxy
Earth, Virginia U.S
The doorbell rang about a fourth time before a groggy Sen. Kinsey opened the door " Mayborne! What are you doing here? What do you want?"
"Its NID’s business that brings me here, may I come in?"
"Do I have a choice?"
"Not really, but I always like being courteous"
"Yes as courteous as a snake! come in."
"So what does the NID want now?"
"Well the NID has gotten some intel that could help them and help you as well!"
"Really! How?"
"Come on! Senator you have been doing business for this outfit long enough to know that all information comes at a price, or should I say ex"vice"president!"
Kinsey snarled at the remark, he did not like to be reminded that the botched SGC takeover operation had cost him so high! "Did you just came here to gloat, or you have anything useful to say to me?"
"Not at all, anyway NID has come to know that the Tokra have discovered some newcomers to this galaxy, they came through the Stargate."
"Anything else?"
"That’s all we know at this point."
"All you know? Or all that you are willing to share at this point?"
"I’m just the middleman in this deal Kinsey, everything is in a need to know basis you know that!"
Ok how does that help me?"
"Since you still have a lot of leverage in the appropriations committee, the NID wants you to start applying pressure on the SGC and homeworld security dpt.
"And what do I get in return?"
"We’ll seal the information leak problem you’ve been having!"
"You found who’s responsible for what happened?"
"Let’s just say we have a very good lead! So do we have a deal?"
"If you can plug my problem. I will have no problem in doing my service to the NID! Its a deal!"
"Great, You begin tomorrow!"
"So what’s the rest of the information regarding this newcomers?"
"Not much else really, except that they seemed to be led by humans.".
"Why do I feel like there’s something you are not telling me."
"Oh well, apparently some of the aliens look like they came right out of a movie, if I recall Star Wars to be precise."
"Star Wars? Are you sure that there is not some sort of drug problem among the Tokra and they brought a hallucinogen into the SGC?"
"The though cross our minds. But no! They just happened to indeed look very similar to the aliens from that movie!"
"Damn, so the galaxy might be invaded by what’s his name, the guy with the funny black mask?"
"I don’t remember Darth something and as I said they just happen to look like them, not that they are."
"Well either way its gold, knowing that idiot O’Neal with his shoot first, ask questions latter attitude, he is bound to mess up big time at some point. And when he does I’ll pounce on him so hard he’ll wish he never joined the armed forces."
"That’s the idea and once that happens. We will be able to put in place a more ideologically favorable crew in command of the SGC."
"And once all the dust settles..."
Mayborne interjected"You’ll be one step closer to the white house."
"Precisely what I like to hear, well lets get down to business then. When do we meet again?"
"I’ll contact you again when necessary senator, just do your part!"
With that Mayborne left a now rejuvenated Kinsey with plenty of thoughts on how to finally bring down the SGC, his enemies and be one step closer of claiming his coveted price of becoming the leader of the most powerful nation on the planet.
Location: Milky Way Galaxy
Planet SGD: PXZ"698
A Ha’Tak ship came out of hyperspace about half a million miles away and proceeded on a fast approach vector to the planet. It was under the command of a low"level Goa’uld in the service of Baal named Kalibos
The sensors that the off"galaxy team had brought sounded the alarm that a ship was approaching, Tenel Ka immediately shouted orders " Bring the shields online now, and prep the cannon."
An officer at the monitoring equipment interrupted " They are hailing us, I cannot understand a word they are saying!"
"Bring a translator droid immediately!"
The translator droid listened in and shortly made a gruff translation.
"They or rather the one in charge of the ship is asking us to surrender and bow down before his god Baal!"
Tenel Ka mused "god! That’s rather presumptuous!"
As the ship came closer to the planet all of a sudden Tenel Ka felt the dark and terrible presence within the ship, it was like nothing she had ever felt before. This being was extremely old by any standards and wicked. It was like feeling a thousand Palpatines all rolled into one! There was also like a duality to this entity that she could not explain.
In the meantime the Jaffa first prime told Kalibos of the situation on the planet’s surface "My lord the strangers have raised some sort of energy shield surrounding the area around the Chapa’ai!"
"Find the power source and send the death"gliders, destroy it!"
The Ha’Tak ship spouted a dozen death"gliders that rapidly proceeded to the planet below
The monitoring equipment appraised Tenel Ka of the situation "Attention all stormtroopers the ship has launched some sort of fighters and they will in no doubt attempt to knock down the shield generators, get into defense positions they must not knocked them down at any cost! How’s the cannon going?"
"It’s almost ready milady!"
"Now would be a good time, here they come! Get ready!"
Location: Corusca Galaxy
Super Imperial Destroyer Harbinger in orbit around around Naboo
The surveillance systems monitoring officer spoke with a slight sense of alarm in his voice.
"A Kaminoan vessel has de"cloaked at left stern, is hailing us."
Tarkin calmly ordered to respond to the hailing signal, soon after a shuttle was launched from the Kaminoan vessel and landed in the Harbinger’s space dock, as it did Tarkin spoke "Tell master Jacen that his guests have arrived."
Jacen after being informed went to meet the Kaminoan ambassador "Pleasant trip I hope
"That would depend upon what kind of business brings me to this side of the galaxy master Jacen. You requested a secret meeting in this coordinates so to what do we owe the pleasure?"
"A discovery of enormous importance has been made on Yavin 4, they found a device that creates artificial wormholes and is part of a network of such devices in a faraway galaxy. Also this other galaxy is out of sync with our timeline so traveling there you also travel to the distant future. "
"That’s remarkable and very interesting but what does it have to do with us?"
"Think about it ambassador a whole new galaxy full of new species both sentient and not for collecting their DNA, your people have always been good at tinkering with that material."
"That is indeed tempting, but may I have to remind you how the empire has regulated and damn nearly strangled our business, when Palpatine ruled..."
"Palpatine was an Idiot and my brother’s a fool as well, you help me bring him down and when I become Emperor your people will have unrestricted access to all the genetic material they could want and now that offer considering the discovery has about tripled in worth! Don’t you think ambassador?"
"Indeed it has, so we are in agreement, hopefully the next time we meet you’ll be at the throne in Coruscant"
"All in good time ambassador, all in good time"
"Does your brother suspect anything, if he did the repercussions for my world would be unmentionable!"
"My brother right now can’t see the broadside of a Bantha! If it passed right in front of him, the dark side clouds his judgment as I’ve foreseen."
"Then to the future Master Jacen!"
"To the future indeed ambassador!"
Location: Corusca Galaxy
Yavin 4
Finally the first long term expedition team to build the Ship’s gateway had been assembled and was underway
it was a joyful moment for everybody involved since the empire made public its discovery and began hiring workers from far and wide across the galaxy. they were to work in tandem with those that were going to build the gate in their side of the universe. As they moved into the event horizon of the artificial wormhole everybody cheered them on. Leading the expedition was no other than Tenel Ka herself. Jaina Solo was to oversight the construction at the Corusca side.
Jaina commanded "Ok people! they are on their way! Let’s get to work."
Everybody eagerly began to work on the biggest public project in the history of the galaxy.
An admiral questioned Jaina " How safe will it really be for us to go to that galaxy? We don’t know anything about its inhabitants or their capabilities. What if they turned all out to be as advanced as those that built that ship we found over there?"
"The ship probably given its capabilities did not originate from that galaxy but a nearby one. But given this risks we have supplied the off"galaxy team with shield generators and a portable turbolaser. As the work progresses more sophisticated and automated defense systems will be deployed. Nothing is going to stop us Admiral, Nothing at all! Besides they have Tenel Ka on their side, I pity the fool or fools that would dare cross her."
Location: Milky Way Galaxy
Planet SGD: PXZ"698
The Off"Galaxy construction team arrived to their destination, even though they had been warned of the effects of wormhole travel, some as before had to take time to recover specially those that were first time travelers.
Tenel Ka rapidly ordered people to get on the move " Set a defense perimeter immediately, get those shield generators online on the double and install that turbolaser cannon.
So those responsible for setting the encampment security began to work in earnest to ensure the camp’s safety
Everybody else began erecting the infrastructure for beginning the construction phase of the gate on this galaxy so far away from their own.
Location Milky Way Galaxy
Earth, Virginia U.S
The doorbell rang about a fourth time before a groggy Sen. Kinsey opened the door " Mayborne! What are you doing here? What do you want?"
"Its NID’s business that brings me here, may I come in?"
"Do I have a choice?"
"Not really, but I always like being courteous"
"Yes as courteous as a snake! come in."
"So what does the NID want now?"
"Well the NID has gotten some intel that could help them and help you as well!"
"Really! How?"
"Come on! Senator you have been doing business for this outfit long enough to know that all information comes at a price, or should I say ex"vice"president!"
Kinsey snarled at the remark, he did not like to be reminded that the botched SGC takeover operation had cost him so high! "Did you just came here to gloat, or you have anything useful to say to me?"
"Not at all, anyway NID has come to know that the Tokra have discovered some newcomers to this galaxy, they came through the Stargate."
"Anything else?"
"That’s all we know at this point."
"All you know? Or all that you are willing to share at this point?"
"I’m just the middleman in this deal Kinsey, everything is in a need to know basis you know that!"
Ok how does that help me?"
"Since you still have a lot of leverage in the appropriations committee, the NID wants you to start applying pressure on the SGC and homeworld security dpt.
"And what do I get in return?"
"We’ll seal the information leak problem you’ve been having!"
"You found who’s responsible for what happened?"
"Let’s just say we have a very good lead! So do we have a deal?"
"If you can plug my problem. I will have no problem in doing my service to the NID! Its a deal!"
"Great, You begin tomorrow!"
"So what’s the rest of the information regarding this newcomers?"
"Not much else really, except that they seemed to be led by humans.".
"Why do I feel like there’s something you are not telling me."
"Oh well, apparently some of the aliens look like they came right out of a movie, if I recall Star Wars to be precise."
"Star Wars? Are you sure that there is not some sort of drug problem among the Tokra and they brought a hallucinogen into the SGC?"
"The though cross our minds. But no! They just happened to indeed look very similar to the aliens from that movie!"
"Damn, so the galaxy might be invaded by what’s his name, the guy with the funny black mask?"
"I don’t remember Darth something and as I said they just happen to look like them, not that they are."
"Well either way its gold, knowing that idiot O’Neal with his shoot first, ask questions latter attitude, he is bound to mess up big time at some point. And when he does I’ll pounce on him so hard he’ll wish he never joined the armed forces."
"That’s the idea and once that happens. We will be able to put in place a more ideologically favorable crew in command of the SGC."
"And once all the dust settles..."
Mayborne interjected"You’ll be one step closer to the white house."
"Precisely what I like to hear, well lets get down to business then. When do we meet again?"
"I’ll contact you again when necessary senator, just do your part!"
With that Mayborne left a now rejuvenated Kinsey with plenty of thoughts on how to finally bring down the SGC, his enemies and be one step closer of claiming his coveted price of becoming the leader of the most powerful nation on the planet.
Location: Milky Way Galaxy
Planet SGD: PXZ"698
A Ha’Tak ship came out of hyperspace about half a million miles away and proceeded on a fast approach vector to the planet. It was under the command of a low"level Goa’uld in the service of Baal named Kalibos
The sensors that the off"galaxy team had brought sounded the alarm that a ship was approaching, Tenel Ka immediately shouted orders " Bring the shields online now, and prep the cannon."
An officer at the monitoring equipment interrupted " They are hailing us, I cannot understand a word they are saying!"
"Bring a translator droid immediately!"
The translator droid listened in and shortly made a gruff translation.
"They or rather the one in charge of the ship is asking us to surrender and bow down before his god Baal!"
Tenel Ka mused "god! That’s rather presumptuous!"
As the ship came closer to the planet all of a sudden Tenel Ka felt the dark and terrible presence within the ship, it was like nothing she had ever felt before. This being was extremely old by any standards and wicked. It was like feeling a thousand Palpatines all rolled into one! There was also like a duality to this entity that she could not explain.
In the meantime the Jaffa first prime told Kalibos of the situation on the planet’s surface "My lord the strangers have raised some sort of energy shield surrounding the area around the Chapa’ai!"
"Find the power source and send the death"gliders, destroy it!"
The Ha’Tak ship spouted a dozen death"gliders that rapidly proceeded to the planet below
The monitoring equipment appraised Tenel Ka of the situation "Attention all stormtroopers the ship has launched some sort of fighters and they will in no doubt attempt to knock down the shield generators, get into defense positions they must not knocked them down at any cost! How’s the cannon going?"
"It’s almost ready milady!"
"Now would be a good time, here they come! Get ready!"
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Chapter 9: Twilight
Chapter 9: Twilight
Location: Corusca Galaxy
Coruscant, Imperial Palace
Jacen had just arrived from his “away mission” in Tattoine as he walked down the main hall he ran into his cousins Obi Wan and Padme SkyWalker. "Well, if it isn't my favorite cousins, how you two doing?"
They responded in unison "Fine!"
"Specially you Padme, I swear you get more beautiful each time I see you after each leave"
"Thank you Jacen"
"So how’s your training going?"
"Its going quite well actually."
"I can’t wait to see those hard skills to the test, so how about a practice lightsaber match latter on?"
"With you?"
"Why not, you are not afraid are you?"
"No I’m not, none of us are"
"Ok then its set."
Padme added "You know Jacen that anger is gonna eat you whole someday."
"I know that you don’t understand this now, but anger can help you survive Padme, if you only knew..."
He reached for her face & Obi Wan cut in "We should go!"
"Of course, remember our practice."
Jacen continued to his chamber to rest and left his cousins alone. Padme went on "We are loosing him, aren’t we?"
"No, we’ve lost him already!"
"Maybe we should tell Anakin."
"Tell him what? That his big brother has a chip on his shoulder the size of a small moon? We got nothing my little sister! The dark side clouds everything, we are on our own."
"Don’t call me little Ben! I’m 19 years old already!"
"Sorry! Old habit, come on."
Location: Corusca Galaxy
Yavin 4
The device went active and the stormtroopers guarding it immediately took defensive positions just in case, a holotransmission came through "Attention Yavin 4 station, we are under attack by unknown hostiles, be advised
"Yavin 4 station here, we read you what do you need!"
"We are holding our own for now, but we might need more shield generators and defense emplacements once this is over"
Jaina went to the comm. room "I want to talk to Tenel Ka
"Yes milady"
Tenel Ka showed on the holoprojection and Jaina asked her "Do you need reinforcements?"
"Not at the moment Jaina, but you need to be in full alert on your side, we don’t know if they might be able to dial in to your device, even though the devices on their own don’t have the enough power, we must not take any chances!"
"Agreed and Tenel Ka, may the force be with you!"
"We’ll talk later Off"Galaxy team signing out."
With that the transmission ended and the device turned off again.
Jaina once again shouted her commands " You heard her people, get moving!"
Location: Corusca Galaxy
Coruscant, Imperial Palace
Jacen had just arrived from his “away mission” in Tattoine as he walked down the main hall he ran into his cousins Obi Wan and Padme SkyWalker. "Well, if it isn't my favorite cousins, how you two doing?"
They responded in unison "Fine!"
"Specially you Padme, I swear you get more beautiful each time I see you after each leave"
"Thank you Jacen"
"So how’s your training going?"
"Its going quite well actually."
"I can’t wait to see those hard skills to the test, so how about a practice lightsaber match latter on?"
"With you?"
"Why not, you are not afraid are you?"
"No I’m not, none of us are"
"Ok then its set."
Padme added "You know Jacen that anger is gonna eat you whole someday."
"I know that you don’t understand this now, but anger can help you survive Padme, if you only knew..."
He reached for her face & Obi Wan cut in "We should go!"
"Of course, remember our practice."
Jacen continued to his chamber to rest and left his cousins alone. Padme went on "We are loosing him, aren’t we?"
"No, we’ve lost him already!"
"Maybe we should tell Anakin."
"Tell him what? That his big brother has a chip on his shoulder the size of a small moon? We got nothing my little sister! The dark side clouds everything, we are on our own."
"Don’t call me little Ben! I’m 19 years old already!"
"Sorry! Old habit, come on."
Location: Corusca Galaxy
Yavin 4
The device went active and the stormtroopers guarding it immediately took defensive positions just in case, a holotransmission came through "Attention Yavin 4 station, we are under attack by unknown hostiles, be advised
"Yavin 4 station here, we read you what do you need!"
"We are holding our own for now, but we might need more shield generators and defense emplacements once this is over"
Jaina went to the comm. room "I want to talk to Tenel Ka
"Yes milady"
Tenel Ka showed on the holoprojection and Jaina asked her "Do you need reinforcements?"
"Not at the moment Jaina, but you need to be in full alert on your side, we don’t know if they might be able to dial in to your device, even though the devices on their own don’t have the enough power, we must not take any chances!"
"Agreed and Tenel Ka, may the force be with you!"
"We’ll talk later Off"Galaxy team signing out."
With that the transmission ended and the device turned off again.
Jaina once again shouted her commands " You heard her people, get moving!"
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Chapter 10: Walking the razor’s edge
Chapter 10: Walking the razor’s edge
Location: Corusca Galaxy
Coruscant, The whole planet
The news of the attack on the off-galaxy team spread like wildfire across every civilized world as well as all of Coruscant. It had caused quite uproar and the people were anxiously expecting what would their maximum leader would do about it.
Finally the HoloProjectors around the planet wide city of Coruscant came to life with the visage of Emperor Anakin. He began to speak calmly and slowly "Dear citizens as you know by now, the Off-galaxy team was viciously attacked by yet unknown hostile forces. The attack however was successfully repelled. I regret to inform that there were a few casualties and that we hope that the force will accompany those that lost loved ones so far away. The empire will also compensate those that have suffered such irreparable loss and we will not back down or retreat. We have faced worst situations before and we will face this head on. Those that committed this dastardly deed shall not go unpunished. As of now there‘s a state of war between the attackers and our galaxy and we won‘t stop until the threat is eliminated one way or the other!"
At the pep talk from their highness a lot of people exploded in applause and screams for "death to the hostiles" and "Hail emperor Anakin". If there was one thing that Anakin knew how to use was propaganda and he knew that it worked much better than brutal repression and terror that had been the trademark of the former empire. He went on "It is also my pleasure to announce that the first of our very own artificial wormhole network will be operational between Naboo and Coruscant within 2 days. Thanks to the dedication of the engineers and workers of our beloved galaxy" with that the HoloTransmission ended with another round of cheering from the public.
Location:Corusca Galaxy
Coruscant, Imperial Palace.
Emperor Anakin looked on satisfied that his message had taken the desired effect. It gave him time to fully evaluate the situation at hand without having to worry about having to repress riots on the streets. He hated to ever have to use such methods so propaganda was the next best thing. He went to further inquire into the incident with a stormtrooper that personally delivered him the latest on the subject "So have they found anything else more about the attackers?"
"Mistress Tenel-Ka is on the process of preparing a party to board the disabled alien ship, before they attacked they claimed to the off-galaxy team to bow down before their god Baal"
"god! that’s quite a title!" Anakin never heard of anybody ever even coming close to consider themselves a god. Not even Palpatine at his worst. "Ok then, let Jaina know that she is to report directly to me whatever Tenel Ka and the off-galaxy team finds in that ship, and be quick, may the force be with you"
"Yes sir" with that the stormtrooper left to carry his instructions back on Yavin 4
Location: Valhalla Galaxy
AsGard homeworld "Orila"
AsGard High Council
Thor had just finished presenting his findings about the newcomers to the council members. Prime Minister Odin began to speak "Its obvious that indeed we must know more about the newcomers intentions, therefore I suggest we dispatch Captain Balder and the Ragnarok to investigate the site."
Balder answered "My ship will be ready to go in 3 days"
"That will be all then, this meeting is adjourned"
As they all left Thor spoke to Captain Balder "You will of off-course be careful, won’t you old friend?"
"Aren’t I always? Don‘t worry my good friend I will be back in no time..."
With that they went their separate ways. Thor somehow could not help but feel that this was to be their last meeting.
Location: Corusca Galaxy
Super Imperial Destroyer Harbinger in orbit around Coruscant
Tarkin and Anakin had both watched the holoprojection of Anakin telling his subjects what had happened and what he intended to do about it. Tarkin began to comment "Your brother does have a flair for the dramatic! However this could really work to our advantage!"
Jacen just sternly added "Yeah, specially to the military!"
"What do you mean sire"
"Don’t insult my intelligence Tarkin, it’s no secret that the military has been itching for a fight in order to increase their budget. But you are quite right! This could work to our advantage provided of course that the hawks in the military don’t screw it up by starting another war on top of this one by shooting at whatever ship they come across in that galaxy"
"According to reports the ship that attacked was effectively disabled by a portable turbolaser battery, I think we can handle anything that comes our way over there."
"That overconfidence will be your undoing Tarkin just as it was with your grandfather!"
"Sire My grandfather was the one the best the Empire ever had"
"Indeed he was, but his overconfidence got the best of him, which is why our parents rebellion managed to destroy the first death star and him along with it"
"You have not forgiven him for destroying your mother’s homeworld right?"
"There things that just cannot be forgiven, but it’s in the past"
"It was a very different empire then sire, however I do miss the power our military held at the time!"
"And you will regain that power as soon as I’m emperor, In the meantime I‘m going back to the surface I have business to attend too."
"Official matters sire?"
"Family matters actually!""
Location: Milky Way Galaxy
Planet SGD: PXZ-698
Tenel Ka was preparing to go onboard the disabled hostile vessel in orbit along with the best she could pick for the job in the Off-Galaxy team, plus an additional compliment of stormtrooper reinforcements that came along with the EVA equipment and personal boosters to make the trip to the ship in orbit above. After finally making sure her EVA suit was working perfectly she strapped herself to the personal booster "Is everyone ready?"
"We are milady!"
"Then lets get going and make haste shall we?" With that she ignited the personal booster and blasted into the upper levels of the planet’s atmosphere as she did, the sky around her grew darker until she was met by the sea of stars of the milky way galaxy and just to her left and above the looming shape of the wounded Ha’Tak ship. Its sinister shape of a pyramid with the black as night weapons array around it, reminded her in a way of the Shadow academy back in her childhood and she could not help but feel a shiver down her spine recalling that incident and all the run-ins they had with the hellish structure up until the climactic battle they had back at the then Jedi Academy back in Yavin 4. Of those that dwelled the thing few survived to this day among them Zekk and Noris. The sense was increased by the malevolent presence she had felt within the ship and that feeling was only growing stronger as she drew closer to the Goa’uld vessel. Never the less she had to face whatever this entity was. She activated her commlink "Attention everyone watch out for possible enemy troops guarding the ship"
"Aye"
As she barely gave the command the sky around her filled with the signature energy blasts from the Jaffa Staff weapons. about an entire platoon of Jaffa had actually gone off the mother-ship in EVA suits expecting rightfully so to be boarded by the strangers on the surface...
Location: Corusca Galaxy
Coruscant, The whole planet
The news of the attack on the off-galaxy team spread like wildfire across every civilized world as well as all of Coruscant. It had caused quite uproar and the people were anxiously expecting what would their maximum leader would do about it.
Finally the HoloProjectors around the planet wide city of Coruscant came to life with the visage of Emperor Anakin. He began to speak calmly and slowly "Dear citizens as you know by now, the Off-galaxy team was viciously attacked by yet unknown hostile forces. The attack however was successfully repelled. I regret to inform that there were a few casualties and that we hope that the force will accompany those that lost loved ones so far away. The empire will also compensate those that have suffered such irreparable loss and we will not back down or retreat. We have faced worst situations before and we will face this head on. Those that committed this dastardly deed shall not go unpunished. As of now there‘s a state of war between the attackers and our galaxy and we won‘t stop until the threat is eliminated one way or the other!"
At the pep talk from their highness a lot of people exploded in applause and screams for "death to the hostiles" and "Hail emperor Anakin". If there was one thing that Anakin knew how to use was propaganda and he knew that it worked much better than brutal repression and terror that had been the trademark of the former empire. He went on "It is also my pleasure to announce that the first of our very own artificial wormhole network will be operational between Naboo and Coruscant within 2 days. Thanks to the dedication of the engineers and workers of our beloved galaxy" with that the HoloTransmission ended with another round of cheering from the public.
Location:Corusca Galaxy
Coruscant, Imperial Palace.
Emperor Anakin looked on satisfied that his message had taken the desired effect. It gave him time to fully evaluate the situation at hand without having to worry about having to repress riots on the streets. He hated to ever have to use such methods so propaganda was the next best thing. He went to further inquire into the incident with a stormtrooper that personally delivered him the latest on the subject "So have they found anything else more about the attackers?"
"Mistress Tenel-Ka is on the process of preparing a party to board the disabled alien ship, before they attacked they claimed to the off-galaxy team to bow down before their god Baal"
"god! that’s quite a title!" Anakin never heard of anybody ever even coming close to consider themselves a god. Not even Palpatine at his worst. "Ok then, let Jaina know that she is to report directly to me whatever Tenel Ka and the off-galaxy team finds in that ship, and be quick, may the force be with you"
"Yes sir" with that the stormtrooper left to carry his instructions back on Yavin 4
Location: Valhalla Galaxy
AsGard homeworld "Orila"
AsGard High Council
Thor had just finished presenting his findings about the newcomers to the council members. Prime Minister Odin began to speak "Its obvious that indeed we must know more about the newcomers intentions, therefore I suggest we dispatch Captain Balder and the Ragnarok to investigate the site."
Balder answered "My ship will be ready to go in 3 days"
"That will be all then, this meeting is adjourned"
As they all left Thor spoke to Captain Balder "You will of off-course be careful, won’t you old friend?"
"Aren’t I always? Don‘t worry my good friend I will be back in no time..."
With that they went their separate ways. Thor somehow could not help but feel that this was to be their last meeting.
Location: Corusca Galaxy
Super Imperial Destroyer Harbinger in orbit around Coruscant
Tarkin and Anakin had both watched the holoprojection of Anakin telling his subjects what had happened and what he intended to do about it. Tarkin began to comment "Your brother does have a flair for the dramatic! However this could really work to our advantage!"
Jacen just sternly added "Yeah, specially to the military!"
"What do you mean sire"
"Don’t insult my intelligence Tarkin, it’s no secret that the military has been itching for a fight in order to increase their budget. But you are quite right! This could work to our advantage provided of course that the hawks in the military don’t screw it up by starting another war on top of this one by shooting at whatever ship they come across in that galaxy"
"According to reports the ship that attacked was effectively disabled by a portable turbolaser battery, I think we can handle anything that comes our way over there."
"That overconfidence will be your undoing Tarkin just as it was with your grandfather!"
"Sire My grandfather was the one the best the Empire ever had"
"Indeed he was, but his overconfidence got the best of him, which is why our parents rebellion managed to destroy the first death star and him along with it"
"You have not forgiven him for destroying your mother’s homeworld right?"
"There things that just cannot be forgiven, but it’s in the past"
"It was a very different empire then sire, however I do miss the power our military held at the time!"
"And you will regain that power as soon as I’m emperor, In the meantime I‘m going back to the surface I have business to attend too."
"Official matters sire?"
"Family matters actually!""
Location: Milky Way Galaxy
Planet SGD: PXZ-698
Tenel Ka was preparing to go onboard the disabled hostile vessel in orbit along with the best she could pick for the job in the Off-Galaxy team, plus an additional compliment of stormtrooper reinforcements that came along with the EVA equipment and personal boosters to make the trip to the ship in orbit above. After finally making sure her EVA suit was working perfectly she strapped herself to the personal booster "Is everyone ready?"
"We are milady!"
"Then lets get going and make haste shall we?" With that she ignited the personal booster and blasted into the upper levels of the planet’s atmosphere as she did, the sky around her grew darker until she was met by the sea of stars of the milky way galaxy and just to her left and above the looming shape of the wounded Ha’Tak ship. Its sinister shape of a pyramid with the black as night weapons array around it, reminded her in a way of the Shadow academy back in her childhood and she could not help but feel a shiver down her spine recalling that incident and all the run-ins they had with the hellish structure up until the climactic battle they had back at the then Jedi Academy back in Yavin 4. Of those that dwelled the thing few survived to this day among them Zekk and Noris. The sense was increased by the malevolent presence she had felt within the ship and that feeling was only growing stronger as she drew closer to the Goa’uld vessel. Never the less she had to face whatever this entity was. She activated her commlink "Attention everyone watch out for possible enemy troops guarding the ship"
"Aye"
As she barely gave the command the sky around her filled with the signature energy blasts from the Jaffa Staff weapons. about an entire platoon of Jaffa had actually gone off the mother-ship in EVA suits expecting rightfully so to be boarded by the strangers on the surface...
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Chapter 11: The legacy of the gods
Chapter 11: The legacy of the gods
Location: Milky Way galaxy
Earth, Colorado U.S, Cheyenne Mountain Complex, SGC.
Activity around the SGC had become frantic specially in anticipation of the proposed mission to try to establish contact with the newcomers that apparently for all intended purposes had seemed to jump right out of most of the staff’s favorite films without a good explanation. The crack jokes about meeting Han Solo and taking a ride on the millennium falcon were the order of the day. But they under lied the apprehension they all felt about the whole thing. If the Star Wars civilization was real after all and they turned out to be the bad guys. to say they would face a formidable foe was a serious understatement and they all knew it.
As O’Neal sat to eat his lunch with Carter & Teal’c they noticed everybody’s eyes on them! O’Neal finally having enough of it speaks out "OK! I’m only going to say this once, everybody here either speak their minds now or vacate the food court. We are not part of a store display!"
One soldier from one SG teams spoke "Are we to speak freely sir?"
"That’s the idea lieutenant!"
"What happens if they indeed turn to be from a civilization like in Star Wars and they are the bad guys! And worst what if they have weapons like the Death Star and such?"
"Well I’m not much of an egg-head here but I think if you mean that big ball thingy they blew up planets with, it’s just a little tad too big to fit in the StarGate! Don’t you? Anyone?"
Carter followed up "First of all; we don’t know who this people really are except that they kind of look like those aliens seen in those movies. That does not imply that they are! And until we send the MALP tomorrow morning, all we can do is speculate and that doesn’t help anyone specially if painting scenarios like the Death Star coming around. As General O’Neal said it would never fit through the StarGate!"
O’Neal finished off "So anyone else have anymore questions? Good! Now either finish your meals or vacate the food court! Oh and anybody stares again and the next they’ll be staring at will be the toilets that they’ll be cleaning with their toothbrushes, Understand?"
With that everybody finished their meals and left as soon as they did without staring at either O’Neal and the members of SG-1 anymore.
O’Neal chuckled "It’s turning into a circus out here. I hope we get some answers from that probe tomorrow!"
Teal’c interjected "What do you think we will find about them?"
"I don‘t know... But I have a bad feeling about all this! Don‘t tell anyone that I do, OK!"
They both responded in unison "Yes Sir!"
Location: Milky Way Galaxy
In orbit around Planet SGD: PXZ-698
Tenel Ka made a hard break to left to dodge a few Staff-Weapon blasts coming her way.
Other blasts made their marks into the first hapless stormtroopers that were closing in to the ship. Others just scraped their personal boosters which caused them to loose control in some and lose power and continue adrift in others.
Shaken from their initial surprise. Finally the remaining stormtroopers began firing back at the Jaffa in the EVA suits blasting them with deadly efficiency. They had the advantage in both firepower and rate of fire. The staff weapons took a little longer than blasters between shots
Still being caught in the middle of a firefight in space with barely nothing more to protect you from hard vacuum than your EVA suit was no fun. Tenel Ka realized this as she heard the sounds of those gasping for air as their suits ruptured by being grazed by a blast. It was a grievous situation and she needed to remedy it as soon as possible. She kicked her personal booster into full throttle and hurl into the Jaffa wearing the EVA suits firing the personal booster blaster continuously slicing most of them to ribbons. It was truly a ghastly sight as some body pieces drifted away in space.
Little by little the firefight died down until it finally abated. Tenel Ka shouted orders through her comlink again "Let’s get ready to board her everyone, keep arms at the ready. its obvious this people are not playing games and neither are we, so shoot first and ask questions latter!"
"Aye"
They all proceeded to the nearest dock in the vessel in order to board it
Location: Corusca Galaxy
Coruscant, Imperial Palace
Padme Mara Skywalker stood transfixed while she watched her brother duke it out in a practice lightsaber match with their cousin Jacen. The lightsabers hummed and sizzled as they made contact with each other neither her brother or her cousin were giving an inch. All of a sudden her senses went into full alert as she ignited her lightsaber and bounced a few bolts from a trainer pod that Jacen had activated using the force...
Jacen spoke not missing a beat on his duel with his other cousin Ben "I though you were gone there for a minute my dear"
"Very funny Jacen! I‘m paying attention to your match with my brother. I was not divagating"
"Good! You both need to remember to always be alert!"
Ben interjected "You always speak too much Jacen, we are as alert and ready as we‘ll ever be!"
"Really? Are you now?"
All of a sudden both Ben and Padme found themselves under a storm of blasts coming from multiple training pods that Jacen had again activated using the force. Padme was able to dodge and deflect a few but was overwhelmed. Ben had a harder time since he was concentrating on his fight with Jacen when he felt two training pod blasts hit his back he ducked to avoid a second blast and the swing of Jacen’s lightsaber then he side stepped to the right dodging and deflecting additional blasts until he was too overwhelmed by the barrage from the training pods. Crouching on the floor Ben stretches his hand upward and calling up all the power from the force he could muster fries the engines of the training pods that then dropped to the floor clattering around them.
Jacen which had remained silently watching the spectacle he had created with amusement finally speaks "You both still need to learn to anticipate, class dismissed!"
Ben stood and walked toward his sister that was getting up as well "Are you all right?"
"I’m fine Ben its just trainer bolts" she answered back with a hint of anger and disappointment in her voice
Jacen started to walk out of the practice room then stopped and said "I can feel your anger Ben! When you are ready I will teach you both how to use it properly" again he resumes to walk until he reaches the exit and disappears from their view. Padme spoke "What was all that about?"
"He is trying to push us into the dark side sis! that’s what it’s about!" Ben replied sourly
Location: Milky Way Galaxy
Inside Ha’Tak vessel
In orbit around Planet SGD: PXZ-698
Immediately after boarding the vessel Tenel Ka and her team proceeded deeper into the ship virtually unopposed
a translator miniature droid shouted orders to the hostiles that may had remained on board to surrender or perish. After a moment of silence a few Jaffa came out surrendering, still others tried to repel them without success. Tenel Ka was growing weary of the carnage and she realized that unless she found a way for all the remaining Jaffa she would have to slaughter almost all of them. She suddenly remembered the first broadcast from the vessel that identified the maximum authority as a god! It was no wonder then they would fight so fiercely! She had to convince them that the entity that was in charge was anything but a god and given how the battle had been so overwhelmingly in her favor she decided to use it as a propaganda weapon. She addressed the miniature translator droid "Link up with the ship’s internal comm. system and translate the following, to all warriors and their brave commander. I know that you are fighting for your so called god, but if he is a god as he claims. then where is his power? Shouldn’t a god have the power to single handedly smite us like a bug? Despite our losses we’ve had the upper hand all along and you all know that! So I now challenge your god to either smite us out of existence to prove his godhood to all! If he can’t then he is no more a god than any of you or me!"
As she threw her challenge she felt the rage of the entity within the ship increase but this time with a hint of fear and self doubt. ’So you are fearful of your own mortality after all’ she thought to herself and then went on "I can sense the fear in your so called god, look at him and tell me he is not cowering right now!"
Kalibos was getting anxious and could not hide how he felt to his first prime that looked at him with a mixture of sudden surprise and disgust Kalibos shouted a desperate order "Wipe the infidel strangers from this ship and from the surface of that planet I command it!"
The first prime responded fiercely "Why don’t you do it yourself and why are you so afraid? The Stranger’s leader is right! You are no god! "
"You dare defy me? Sholva!" With that Kalibos activated his hand held concussion blast weapon and sent the first prime hurtling through the air 6 feet away, as he tried to recover Kalibos approached him and used his finger torture weapon on him "You will suffer a thousand deaths Sholva!" but as Kalibos did he was enveloped by the energy signature of a zat-gun being discharged. Kalibos dropped senseless to the floor. A junior Jaffa officer had fired the weapon when he realized too that Kalibos was no more a god than he or anyone was. He helped the first prime to stand. The first prime issued an order through the internal comm. "To all Jaffa this battle is over and we are surrendering this vessel to the strangers, Kalibos is defeated and being proven not to be a god"
The translator droid gave the corresponding translation in Basic and cheers were heard from the boarding party they had won the day even though at a price!
Tenel Ka transmitted a message to the camp in the surface "Attention off-galaxy team the boarding party has been successful we have secured the alien vessel! Relay message to Yavin station"
The camp burst into cheers as they heard the news! "Aye Milady!"
In the meantime the young officer aimed his zat gut at the unconscious form of Kalibos but the first prime stopped him "No, lets give him to the strangers so they do to him as they wish, humiliation is a far worse faith than death"
The young officer responded "Agreed"
Tenel Ka and her boarding party entered the bridge to meet the first prime that stood next to what looked like an unconscious male human but Tenel Ka sensed immediately that this human housed the terrible entity she felt all along. The first prime was accompanied by what looked like a junior officer.
Tenel Ka ordered to take bio scans
One of the members of the boarding party began to take scans "Milady this human is under the control of some parasite located in his brain stem!"
"That explains the duality I felt about him, but how could he be human?"
"Perhaps we will more answers from their databases, they seem to be intact"
"Do so"
"Aye, were on it!”
The first prime bowed his head slightly in respect toward Tenel Ka but the Junior officer kneeled before her and spoke "Are you a god? one of the ancient gods?"
Tenel Ka once again use the miniature translator droid and ordered it to translate as she tenderly approached the young man and raised him to standing position. Get up, You don’t need to bow down before me! I am no more a god than you are!"
Location: Corusca Galaxy
Yavin 4
Jaina Solo had felt that through the force that something had transpired on the boarding attempt of the Alien ship in that distant galaxy that Tenel Ka and her team were working on the Ships Gate project. However because of the huge distance and timeline differential she did not know what and that in turn made her pace about anxiously finally the device once again activated and as soon as the wormhole appeared a transmission was received. The comm. Officer interrupted the silence that until now had permeated the control room “Mistress Jaina we are receiving a Holo-Signal is definitely from the off-galaxy team!”
“Put it through!” Jaina demanded, the communications officer complied and a hologram of Tenel Ka appeared in the middle of the room.
“This is the off-galaxy team, we have secured the alien ship, repeat we have secured the alien ship, can you read me?”
“We read you Tenel Ka, loud and clear” Jaina responded followed by cheers from those that were in the control room. She quelled down the cheering by raising her hand and continued her conversation “What have you been able to learn so far?”
“Well the leader of the ship believe it or not is a parasite that has been using a human being as a host probably for an extremely long time.”
“A human being in that galaxy? How is that even possible?”
“It gets more interesting the soldiers this parasite or simbiote had at his command are humanoids with pouches in their stomachs and each carry one of this creatures also but the creatures don’t seem to be mature just yet, this humanoids in fact may have also been genetically altered humans just for that purpose obviously a very long time ago.”
“Have your team being able to extract anything out of their computer databases? It might clear some of these mysteries.”
“They are already working on it. It will take a little while for our computers to translate everything into Basic at least a few hours”
“Ok, keep me posted, be safe and may the force be with you!”
“And with you”
Location: Milky Way galaxy
Earth, Colorado U.S, Cheyenne Mountain Complex, SGC.
Activity around the SGC had become frantic specially in anticipation of the proposed mission to try to establish contact with the newcomers that apparently for all intended purposes had seemed to jump right out of most of the staff’s favorite films without a good explanation. The crack jokes about meeting Han Solo and taking a ride on the millennium falcon were the order of the day. But they under lied the apprehension they all felt about the whole thing. If the Star Wars civilization was real after all and they turned out to be the bad guys. to say they would face a formidable foe was a serious understatement and they all knew it.
As O’Neal sat to eat his lunch with Carter & Teal’c they noticed everybody’s eyes on them! O’Neal finally having enough of it speaks out "OK! I’m only going to say this once, everybody here either speak their minds now or vacate the food court. We are not part of a store display!"
One soldier from one SG teams spoke "Are we to speak freely sir?"
"That’s the idea lieutenant!"
"What happens if they indeed turn to be from a civilization like in Star Wars and they are the bad guys! And worst what if they have weapons like the Death Star and such?"
"Well I’m not much of an egg-head here but I think if you mean that big ball thingy they blew up planets with, it’s just a little tad too big to fit in the StarGate! Don’t you? Anyone?"
Carter followed up "First of all; we don’t know who this people really are except that they kind of look like those aliens seen in those movies. That does not imply that they are! And until we send the MALP tomorrow morning, all we can do is speculate and that doesn’t help anyone specially if painting scenarios like the Death Star coming around. As General O’Neal said it would never fit through the StarGate!"
O’Neal finished off "So anyone else have anymore questions? Good! Now either finish your meals or vacate the food court! Oh and anybody stares again and the next they’ll be staring at will be the toilets that they’ll be cleaning with their toothbrushes, Understand?"
With that everybody finished their meals and left as soon as they did without staring at either O’Neal and the members of SG-1 anymore.
O’Neal chuckled "It’s turning into a circus out here. I hope we get some answers from that probe tomorrow!"
Teal’c interjected "What do you think we will find about them?"
"I don‘t know... But I have a bad feeling about all this! Don‘t tell anyone that I do, OK!"
They both responded in unison "Yes Sir!"
Location: Milky Way Galaxy
In orbit around Planet SGD: PXZ-698
Tenel Ka made a hard break to left to dodge a few Staff-Weapon blasts coming her way.
Other blasts made their marks into the first hapless stormtroopers that were closing in to the ship. Others just scraped their personal boosters which caused them to loose control in some and lose power and continue adrift in others.
Shaken from their initial surprise. Finally the remaining stormtroopers began firing back at the Jaffa in the EVA suits blasting them with deadly efficiency. They had the advantage in both firepower and rate of fire. The staff weapons took a little longer than blasters between shots
Still being caught in the middle of a firefight in space with barely nothing more to protect you from hard vacuum than your EVA suit was no fun. Tenel Ka realized this as she heard the sounds of those gasping for air as their suits ruptured by being grazed by a blast. It was a grievous situation and she needed to remedy it as soon as possible. She kicked her personal booster into full throttle and hurl into the Jaffa wearing the EVA suits firing the personal booster blaster continuously slicing most of them to ribbons. It was truly a ghastly sight as some body pieces drifted away in space.
Little by little the firefight died down until it finally abated. Tenel Ka shouted orders through her comlink again "Let’s get ready to board her everyone, keep arms at the ready. its obvious this people are not playing games and neither are we, so shoot first and ask questions latter!"
"Aye"
They all proceeded to the nearest dock in the vessel in order to board it
Location: Corusca Galaxy
Coruscant, Imperial Palace
Padme Mara Skywalker stood transfixed while she watched her brother duke it out in a practice lightsaber match with their cousin Jacen. The lightsabers hummed and sizzled as they made contact with each other neither her brother or her cousin were giving an inch. All of a sudden her senses went into full alert as she ignited her lightsaber and bounced a few bolts from a trainer pod that Jacen had activated using the force...
Jacen spoke not missing a beat on his duel with his other cousin Ben "I though you were gone there for a minute my dear"
"Very funny Jacen! I‘m paying attention to your match with my brother. I was not divagating"
"Good! You both need to remember to always be alert!"
Ben interjected "You always speak too much Jacen, we are as alert and ready as we‘ll ever be!"
"Really? Are you now?"
All of a sudden both Ben and Padme found themselves under a storm of blasts coming from multiple training pods that Jacen had again activated using the force. Padme was able to dodge and deflect a few but was overwhelmed. Ben had a harder time since he was concentrating on his fight with Jacen when he felt two training pod blasts hit his back he ducked to avoid a second blast and the swing of Jacen’s lightsaber then he side stepped to the right dodging and deflecting additional blasts until he was too overwhelmed by the barrage from the training pods. Crouching on the floor Ben stretches his hand upward and calling up all the power from the force he could muster fries the engines of the training pods that then dropped to the floor clattering around them.
Jacen which had remained silently watching the spectacle he had created with amusement finally speaks "You both still need to learn to anticipate, class dismissed!"
Ben stood and walked toward his sister that was getting up as well "Are you all right?"
"I’m fine Ben its just trainer bolts" she answered back with a hint of anger and disappointment in her voice
Jacen started to walk out of the practice room then stopped and said "I can feel your anger Ben! When you are ready I will teach you both how to use it properly" again he resumes to walk until he reaches the exit and disappears from their view. Padme spoke "What was all that about?"
"He is trying to push us into the dark side sis! that’s what it’s about!" Ben replied sourly
Location: Milky Way Galaxy
Inside Ha’Tak vessel
In orbit around Planet SGD: PXZ-698
Immediately after boarding the vessel Tenel Ka and her team proceeded deeper into the ship virtually unopposed
a translator miniature droid shouted orders to the hostiles that may had remained on board to surrender or perish. After a moment of silence a few Jaffa came out surrendering, still others tried to repel them without success. Tenel Ka was growing weary of the carnage and she realized that unless she found a way for all the remaining Jaffa she would have to slaughter almost all of them. She suddenly remembered the first broadcast from the vessel that identified the maximum authority as a god! It was no wonder then they would fight so fiercely! She had to convince them that the entity that was in charge was anything but a god and given how the battle had been so overwhelmingly in her favor she decided to use it as a propaganda weapon. She addressed the miniature translator droid "Link up with the ship’s internal comm. system and translate the following, to all warriors and their brave commander. I know that you are fighting for your so called god, but if he is a god as he claims. then where is his power? Shouldn’t a god have the power to single handedly smite us like a bug? Despite our losses we’ve had the upper hand all along and you all know that! So I now challenge your god to either smite us out of existence to prove his godhood to all! If he can’t then he is no more a god than any of you or me!"
As she threw her challenge she felt the rage of the entity within the ship increase but this time with a hint of fear and self doubt. ’So you are fearful of your own mortality after all’ she thought to herself and then went on "I can sense the fear in your so called god, look at him and tell me he is not cowering right now!"
Kalibos was getting anxious and could not hide how he felt to his first prime that looked at him with a mixture of sudden surprise and disgust Kalibos shouted a desperate order "Wipe the infidel strangers from this ship and from the surface of that planet I command it!"
The first prime responded fiercely "Why don’t you do it yourself and why are you so afraid? The Stranger’s leader is right! You are no god! "
"You dare defy me? Sholva!" With that Kalibos activated his hand held concussion blast weapon and sent the first prime hurtling through the air 6 feet away, as he tried to recover Kalibos approached him and used his finger torture weapon on him "You will suffer a thousand deaths Sholva!" but as Kalibos did he was enveloped by the energy signature of a zat-gun being discharged. Kalibos dropped senseless to the floor. A junior Jaffa officer had fired the weapon when he realized too that Kalibos was no more a god than he or anyone was. He helped the first prime to stand. The first prime issued an order through the internal comm. "To all Jaffa this battle is over and we are surrendering this vessel to the strangers, Kalibos is defeated and being proven not to be a god"
The translator droid gave the corresponding translation in Basic and cheers were heard from the boarding party they had won the day even though at a price!
Tenel Ka transmitted a message to the camp in the surface "Attention off-galaxy team the boarding party has been successful we have secured the alien vessel! Relay message to Yavin station"
The camp burst into cheers as they heard the news! "Aye Milady!"
In the meantime the young officer aimed his zat gut at the unconscious form of Kalibos but the first prime stopped him "No, lets give him to the strangers so they do to him as they wish, humiliation is a far worse faith than death"
The young officer responded "Agreed"
Tenel Ka and her boarding party entered the bridge to meet the first prime that stood next to what looked like an unconscious male human but Tenel Ka sensed immediately that this human housed the terrible entity she felt all along. The first prime was accompanied by what looked like a junior officer.
Tenel Ka ordered to take bio scans
One of the members of the boarding party began to take scans "Milady this human is under the control of some parasite located in his brain stem!"
"That explains the duality I felt about him, but how could he be human?"
"Perhaps we will more answers from their databases, they seem to be intact"
"Do so"
"Aye, were on it!”
The first prime bowed his head slightly in respect toward Tenel Ka but the Junior officer kneeled before her and spoke "Are you a god? one of the ancient gods?"
Tenel Ka once again use the miniature translator droid and ordered it to translate as she tenderly approached the young man and raised him to standing position. Get up, You don’t need to bow down before me! I am no more a god than you are!"
Location: Corusca Galaxy
Yavin 4
Jaina Solo had felt that through the force that something had transpired on the boarding attempt of the Alien ship in that distant galaxy that Tenel Ka and her team were working on the Ships Gate project. However because of the huge distance and timeline differential she did not know what and that in turn made her pace about anxiously finally the device once again activated and as soon as the wormhole appeared a transmission was received. The comm. Officer interrupted the silence that until now had permeated the control room “Mistress Jaina we are receiving a Holo-Signal is definitely from the off-galaxy team!”
“Put it through!” Jaina demanded, the communications officer complied and a hologram of Tenel Ka appeared in the middle of the room.
“This is the off-galaxy team, we have secured the alien ship, repeat we have secured the alien ship, can you read me?”
“We read you Tenel Ka, loud and clear” Jaina responded followed by cheers from those that were in the control room. She quelled down the cheering by raising her hand and continued her conversation “What have you been able to learn so far?”
“Well the leader of the ship believe it or not is a parasite that has been using a human being as a host probably for an extremely long time.”
“A human being in that galaxy? How is that even possible?”
“It gets more interesting the soldiers this parasite or simbiote had at his command are humanoids with pouches in their stomachs and each carry one of this creatures also but the creatures don’t seem to be mature just yet, this humanoids in fact may have also been genetically altered humans just for that purpose obviously a very long time ago.”
“Have your team being able to extract anything out of their computer databases? It might clear some of these mysteries.”
“They are already working on it. It will take a little while for our computers to translate everything into Basic at least a few hours”
“Ok, keep me posted, be safe and may the force be with you!”
“And with you”
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A few reviews please...
Even though I have at least 3 more chapters I'd love some reviews to see how ther members of this boards feel about this kind of fanfic...
Plz let me know...
Plz let me know...
Childish grammar. Bad editing. Chapters the size of paragraphs. Six posts with the content of three, and made in the span of eight minutes.
Let's assume that there's three grades of shitty writing. The first kind (Let's call it Grade C) is really trying to be solid and makes few mistakes, but lack of experience holds it back. I started out writing Grade C shit. The second kind (how about calling it Grade B) THINKS it's trying, but the author either hasn't done enough research, doesn't put in enough effort, or uses too much fanwank. Then there's Grade A. This kind of shitty writing is the kind that actively uses a Mary Sue, pays no attention to readers, ignores editing, and has a plot with thickness reminicsent of a child's fairy tale.
Using this grading system, your work rates a low B. Not surprising considering the contents of your short posting history.
Let's assume that there's three grades of shitty writing. The first kind (Let's call it Grade C) is really trying to be solid and makes few mistakes, but lack of experience holds it back. I started out writing Grade C shit. The second kind (how about calling it Grade B) THINKS it's trying, but the author either hasn't done enough research, doesn't put in enough effort, or uses too much fanwank. Then there's Grade A. This kind of shitty writing is the kind that actively uses a Mary Sue, pays no attention to readers, ignores editing, and has a plot with thickness reminicsent of a child's fairy tale.
Using this grading system, your work rates a low B. Not surprising considering the contents of your short posting history.
JADAFETWA
Re: A few reviews please...
Jesus Christ, I type a post and you throw up five more posts? Do you actually want people to read this or just drown them in it? Haven't you done any kind of research at all?PunkMaister wrote:Even though I have at least 3 more chapters I'd love some reviews to see how ther members of this boards feel about this kind of fanfic...
Plz let me know...
JADAFETWA
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I looked at the first sentence, and my eyes bled. Read it outloud to yourself, and if your brain doesn't immediately go "That doesn't sound right..." then you should stop writing entirely.
As to your dialogue... dear lord is it clunky. Lets put it this way: It needs work. Lots and lots of work.
EDIT: I just hit chapter two. The only place you could ever get praise for this shit is on FFN.
As to your dialogue... dear lord is it clunky. Lets put it this way: It needs work. Lots and lots of work.
EDIT: I just hit chapter two. The only place you could ever get praise for this shit is on FFN.
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Drown them in it? That's an understatement.
PunkMaister, stories where the plot moves so fast that you can't even guess how much must be going on "behind the scenes" are in serious need of help. Another example of this problem are stories where the characters go from "who are you" to "my best friend" in 5 seconds flat.
Go back, and try this again. This time, try to think in terms of what you're missing. And if you can't figure it out, spend a few months reading fiction and fanfiction, then try again. At the very least, try to describe the characters' physical actions better, and to identify who's talking in a conversation. It can be very easy to lose track of who's talking in a conversation.
PunkMaister, stories where the plot moves so fast that you can't even guess how much must be going on "behind the scenes" are in serious need of help. Another example of this problem are stories where the characters go from "who are you" to "my best friend" in 5 seconds flat.
Go back, and try this again. This time, try to think in terms of what you're missing. And if you can't figure it out, spend a few months reading fiction and fanfiction, then try again. At the very least, try to describe the characters' physical actions better, and to identify who's talking in a conversation. It can be very easy to lose track of who's talking in a conversation.
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-the last time Colin MacIntyre gives an order without thinking it through.
-the last time Colin MacIntyre gives an order without thinking it through.
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And I thought I was bad, at least I try something that resembles a story (even if I fail in).
I may be an idiot, but I'm a tolerated idiot
"I think you completely missed the point of sigs. They're supposed to be completely homegrown in the fertile hydroponics lab of your mind, dried in your closet, rolled, and smoked...
Oh wait, that's marijuana..."Einhander Sn0m4n
"I think you completely missed the point of sigs. They're supposed to be completely homegrown in the fertile hydroponics lab of your mind, dried in your closet, rolled, and smoked...
Oh wait, that's marijuana..."Einhander Sn0m4n
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It's that bad, I didn't get past the first "chapter" of this before I did quitJason von Evil wrote:I think Portal just got dethroned.
I may be an idiot, but I'm a tolerated idiot
"I think you completely missed the point of sigs. They're supposed to be completely homegrown in the fertile hydroponics lab of your mind, dried in your closet, rolled, and smoked...
Oh wait, that's marijuana..."Einhander Sn0m4n
"I think you completely missed the point of sigs. They're supposed to be completely homegrown in the fertile hydroponics lab of your mind, dried in your closet, rolled, and smoked...
Oh wait, that's marijuana..."Einhander Sn0m4n
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I made it to chapter 11. Booyah, do I get a reward? 
"Yee's proposal is exactly the sort of thing I would expect some Washington legal eagle to do. In fact, it could even be argued it would be unrealistic to not have a scene in the next book of, say, a Congressman Yee submit the Yee Act for consideration. " - bcoogler on this
"My crystal ball is filled with smoke, and my hovercraft is full of eels." - Bayonet
Stark: "You can't even GET to heaven. You don't even know where it is, or even if it still exists."
SirNitram: "So storm Hell." - From the legendary thread
" - bcoogler on this"My crystal ball is filled with smoke, and my hovercraft is full of eels." - Bayonet
Stark: "You can't even GET to heaven. You don't even know where it is, or even if it still exists."
SirNitram: "So storm Hell." - From the legendary thread
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Oh Hardly, Portal was bad because of the stupendous idiocy and wankery, this is just a choice example of poor writing.Jason von Evil wrote:I think Portal just got dethroned.
Of course my 'Fanfic Red Alert' came when I saw this:
Grand moff Tarkin III
"If it's true that our species is alone in the universe, then I'd have to say that the universe aimed rather low and settled for very little."
-George Carlin (1937-2008)
"Have some of you Americans actually seen Football? Of course there are 0-0 draws but that doesn't make them any less exciting."
-Dr Roberts, with quite possibly the dumbest thing ever said in 10 years of SDNet.
-George Carlin (1937-2008)
"Have some of you Americans actually seen Football? Of course there are 0-0 draws but that doesn't make them any less exciting."
-Dr Roberts, with quite possibly the dumbest thing ever said in 10 years of SDNet.
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Hey, Singular Quartet, it's not as if I actually LIKED this...
"Yee's proposal is exactly the sort of thing I would expect some Washington legal eagle to do. In fact, it could even be argued it would be unrealistic to not have a scene in the next book of, say, a Congressman Yee submit the Yee Act for consideration. " - bcoogler on this
"My crystal ball is filled with smoke, and my hovercraft is full of eels." - Bayonet
Stark: "You can't even GET to heaven. You don't even know where it is, or even if it still exists."
SirNitram: "So storm Hell." - From the legendary thread
" - bcoogler on this"My crystal ball is filled with smoke, and my hovercraft is full of eels." - Bayonet
Stark: "You can't even GET to heaven. You don't even know where it is, or even if it still exists."
SirNitram: "So storm Hell." - From the legendary thread