The Hunt For Osiris
Posted: 2005-10-28 01:42am
Learned a few lessons last time i posted a fanfic, so here goes *Bites lip*
The Hunt For Osiris
By Emperor Brandon
Prologue
The Tempok Empire was formed in the midst of a civil war of a Empire called the Pratempok. The Tempok, while more ruthless than than the Empire which it suceeded from, was more keen on issues such as civil rights and equal treatment. These are the only reasons they suceeded; The Ruling government wanted only Purebred Prat's to be allowed to own land, and leave the planet.
The war lasted nearly 600 years, when, finally the deciding battle took place. A peace conference was arranged, and, as the end of the peace talks approached, a bomb was set off in the negotiation room shortly after the leader representing the Tempok left the room to use the "~/35]P\"(unpronouncable, but the best translation would be bathroom).
Both fleets were gathered there, and, fortunately for the Tempok Empire, they had caught the enemy off guard. Even thoughtheir shields were up, the battle was horribly one-sided. They used a Rocket Propelled Asteroid Torpedo, which was equipped with a energy disrupting plasma generator, which went directly through the shields of the enemy's ships. The battle was over in hours.
And only one side emerged victorious:The Tempok Empire.
In the war, over 10.5 Billion had died, over half on the Pratempok's side. There were over 6,000 ships built , and at least 4000 were lost at the final battle, or the battle of Krentor 4.
At that point, the Tempok empire established what it called, "The New Era". An era of peace, trust, understanding, and civility amongst all Tempokians. That era was short lived, however.
Now, 40 years later, the Tempok Empire has degenerated into anarchy. Bloody battles take place on the ground, and, the fighting in space has become so horrible, that not even civillians with the lowest of profiles can survive the massive melee of weapons fire.
So, this is the story of deceit, treachery, violence, romance, despair. More so, is this The Hunt For Osiris.
Chapter 1: The price of war
Gretharp Kringtor looked over his bridge in disgust. The latest battle with the Telpor insurgents had cost him more than half his crew, and the ship only has 45 fighters combat ready. Another attack and The Carrier would be useless.
Gretharp is a leader in the Tempok Military, winning over 60 different confrontations, and helping to end the 600 year long war with the Pratempok by designing the Asteroid Torpedo. (The Torpedo design proved too costly to produce and too hard to control;over 1/3 the losses at the battle of Krentor were accidental malfunctions in the guidance system.)
He is about 6'4" tall, The standard among Tempokians, He has Dark Blue Skin, and His feet are webbed. His hands however are not;Having four arms makes their race more......productive than most others. He has hair, but only a little, because most of his head is ridged, front to back. Even his chin shows ridges.
"Helm, Status." Queried the Admiral.
"Engines at 56 Percent and rising. Warp Drive power will be back online soon."
"How Soon?"
"3 Hours."
"Make it 2, and that's an order."
"Aye Sir. Chief?"
"Yes Charzak?," the officer replied.
"We need warp in 2 hours. Captain's orders."
"On It. Frople, out." The Comm channel closed.
Charzak is a dedicated helmsman aboard the TIS Morning Light. She got moved to the flagship only recently;The other helmsmen was killed in a battle with the Trepol, another militia faction fighting for control.
She has Brown hair, Green eyes, webbed feet, and is about 6'1" tall. She is about 933 years of age, relativly young for a helmsmen.(About 24 in earth years.)Her father died in the battle of Krithog 7 when she was very young. She joined the military to restore honor to her father's name. He was an accused traitor.
The only female on the starship, she was deployed there only because Kringtor asked for her by name; her service record was impressive. She already held 3 of The Tempok military's highest honors;not much when compared to his, but still, considering her age, that was an outstanding achievement.
"Sir-5 Phantom Class Cruisers de-cloaking off our port bow!" Cried Kelvek, The tactical officer officer.
The tactical officer's name is Kelvek, He is 5'4", Webbed feet, no hair brown,ridged skin. About 34 Earth years.
A highly respected officer, he was once the greatest fighter pilot in the fleet until the loss of his right upper arm. The bleeding was too bad, and had it not been amputated, he would have surely bled to death. After the operation, he had this to say:"Give me yours or I'll take it myself!"
"Shields up! Activate weapons and deploy fighters!" ordered the Admiral, surprised by the sudden appearence of FIVE dreadnought class cruisers
"They're firing!" Kelvek hastily replied
The Morning Light took 5 Disruptor hits to the port. Hard.
"Report!"-shouthed Kringtor.
"Port shields down to 12%," came Kelvek's hasty reply.
"Fire all weapons!"
7 Torpedoes are launched at the flanking Phantom, and 8 bursts from the disruptors disable it.
The other Phantoms launch a fierce volley of Photon Torpedoes and Disruptors on the carrier, weakening it even more so than it was to begin with by exposing the hull of the ship to fire, by collapsing the shields aft of the ship.
"Aft shields down! Port shields about to collapse!"
"GET ME THOSE FIGHTERS ENSIGN!" Kringtor sternly ordered.
3 more hits to the port.
"Fighters deploy-"
A shower of electricity rains out of the helm console.
Charzak is knocked unconsious by the subsequent debris which falls on her.
Kringtor took a moment to examine the severity of the situation.
"My helms officer is unconcious, my aft shields are down, and we're outmanned, outgunned and outmanuvered; what do I do?
Put them in our shoes. Fighters, we need them now!"
Kringtor looked over at kelvek.
"Tactical, fighters?"
"Fighters in chevron formation," Kelvek replied.
"Fire all weapons at the Left most Phantom!"
"Disruptors and 4 torpedo tubes off-line!"
Another hit. A fire starts on the bridge.
"I DIDN'T ASK FOR A DAMAGE REPORT, JUST FIRE THE DAMNED WEAPONS!"
The tactical officer dutifuly obeys his orders. Just as he starts firing, the ship takes another hit. A piece of debris falls on the knocked-out ensign, burying her effectively.
"Sir, Fighters report they have disabled one phantom class."
"Call for reinforcements!"
A torpedo ruptures the aft hull.
"Warp-core breach in progress!"
"Engineering, Can you stabalize it?"
"Negative, We are seconds from it blowing!"
"Attention all hands abandon ship!Repeat all hands abandon ship!"
The warp-core is ejected moments before it explodes.The ship is knocked sideways due to the shockwave from the explosion, causing it to collide with 2 fighters.
"Sir, the phantoms are breaking off."
The remaining phantoms cloaked and engaged warp.
"Sir?"
The tactical officer looks over to see his CO struggling to get the debris off the unconcious ensign.
"C'mon damnit don't die! Don't die on me now! URRRRRGGGAAH!"
He finally lifts it with his tactical officer's help.
"Take her to sickbay. Get those burns treated ASAP, and order fighters to maintain a standard patrol vector around the ship until help arrives. I want all efforts put into the tactical systems. Make the-"
"Si-Si-Sir?" The ensign awoke in his hands.
"Yes ensign?"
"Permission to, to, speak freely?"
The captain gave a coy smile.
"Granted."
"May I say it-,it was an honor serving with you, sir."
"No Ensign! You Are NOT going to die! MEDICAL TEAM TO THE BRIDGE!"
The Ensign, looked longingly into the Captains eyes.
"Sir?"
"Yes ensign?"
"I always thought of you....as the father i never knew........sigh"
With that final sigh, the ensigns life came to an abrupt, and early, end.
Gretharp let the ensign's cold, lifeless body slip out of his hands and land on the deckplates with a small thump. There was no time to grieve now; there was work to be done.
Gretharp eyed Kelvek dubiously.
"Don't tell me," he replied, almost as if reading the captain's mind,"Damage report."
There is heavy damage to all decks and stations. Life support is failing on all decks aside from decks 21.....," He punched in the scanner main power coupling reroute as he read internal sensors,"13....and 14-18."
Gretharp gave orders almost instantaneously.
"Evacuate those decks, and reroute all auxillary power to the life support systems. I want all recreation areas or empty spaces on this ship turned into immediate trioge stations, anyone who can walk and move their arms and legs is now a nurse or engineer. Get impulse on-line and repair as many weapons systems as possible. You have 1 Hour."
Kelvek gasped and almost choked on the air he was breathing.
"Sir, an hour isn't enough to-"
"Are you backtalking, Ensign?"
"Sir, No, and I am a Lt.."
"You won't be for much longer if you don't execute my command, understood?"
"Understood," said the Lieutenant, embarassed as he walked off the bridge deck. If it's one lesson he learned that day, its this: Don't argue with a CO.
Especially if it's Gretharp.
The Captain of the Phantom Class P.R.W. Revolution looked at his officers
disapointingly. Not only had they lost the battle with Gretharp, and miserably I might add, but they had lost two fully operational Phantom class attack cruisers to an old fool who is far to aged for the burden of command. Why do
I even bother? Wondered Heveken silently. No one in the entire fleet had lost so badly to One carrier, let alone a beat-up one. And what would be his excuse? That the 2 Phantoms were really disabled? That his crew got drunk at a Graduation party and were clearly not fit for duty? No excuse would be great enough. There was only one option: Secrecy. He would have to keep this quiet; if he didn't it could cost him his command, maybe even his career. That was the best he could do.
And, as he was about to find out, it isn't enough.
"Captain, we are being hailed. Admiral Yurew on channel. Priority one."
Here we go, Heveken thought silently to himself.
"On screen."
The Admiral's old, sagging face appeared on the screen.
"Hello admiral, how's life on Krethor 2?"
"Dispense with the pleasentries. How was the battle?"
Heveken Began wondering how the whip would feel. Probably painful at first;then after about the 300th time it wouldn't hurt that much.
"The battle went......."
"Don't tell me," She said with conviction, "you lost."
No, The whip probably isn't as bad as it sounds; after all, more than half the captains in the fleet had gotten the whip at one point, it's about time he got his whipping. He wondered if the sentence was doubled if you lost 2 ships, and what life as a farmer on Grudthor 5 would be like.
"Unfortunately," he answered carefully.
"Too bad, I suppose. How many ships were lost?"
Farming has it's upsides; after all, it IS an honest life, with benifit of free food, minus the cost of growing it. Be awfully lonely though.
"T-T-Two," he finally stuttered.
"Unfortunate, indeed. You have been re-assigned to sector 2351 in the Rancor System. You are to wait with the rest of the fleet there for further instructions. Yurew, out."
Heveken gave a sigh of relief.
"Did she even hear you?," asked the ensign at the helm.
"You know," he replied truthfully,"Im not quite sure."
I'd like some advice, as I have gotten some very good reviews from other people on the Flashtrak forums, and I wanna see what you guys think.
Emperor Brandon
The Hunt For Osiris
By Emperor Brandon
Prologue
The Tempok Empire was formed in the midst of a civil war of a Empire called the Pratempok. The Tempok, while more ruthless than than the Empire which it suceeded from, was more keen on issues such as civil rights and equal treatment. These are the only reasons they suceeded; The Ruling government wanted only Purebred Prat's to be allowed to own land, and leave the planet.
The war lasted nearly 600 years, when, finally the deciding battle took place. A peace conference was arranged, and, as the end of the peace talks approached, a bomb was set off in the negotiation room shortly after the leader representing the Tempok left the room to use the "~/35]P\"(unpronouncable, but the best translation would be bathroom).
Both fleets were gathered there, and, fortunately for the Tempok Empire, they had caught the enemy off guard. Even thoughtheir shields were up, the battle was horribly one-sided. They used a Rocket Propelled Asteroid Torpedo, which was equipped with a energy disrupting plasma generator, which went directly through the shields of the enemy's ships. The battle was over in hours.
And only one side emerged victorious:The Tempok Empire.
In the war, over 10.5 Billion had died, over half on the Pratempok's side. There were over 6,000 ships built , and at least 4000 were lost at the final battle, or the battle of Krentor 4.
At that point, the Tempok empire established what it called, "The New Era". An era of peace, trust, understanding, and civility amongst all Tempokians. That era was short lived, however.
Now, 40 years later, the Tempok Empire has degenerated into anarchy. Bloody battles take place on the ground, and, the fighting in space has become so horrible, that not even civillians with the lowest of profiles can survive the massive melee of weapons fire.
So, this is the story of deceit, treachery, violence, romance, despair. More so, is this The Hunt For Osiris.
Chapter 1: The price of war
Gretharp Kringtor looked over his bridge in disgust. The latest battle with the Telpor insurgents had cost him more than half his crew, and the ship only has 45 fighters combat ready. Another attack and The Carrier would be useless.
Gretharp is a leader in the Tempok Military, winning over 60 different confrontations, and helping to end the 600 year long war with the Pratempok by designing the Asteroid Torpedo. (The Torpedo design proved too costly to produce and too hard to control;over 1/3 the losses at the battle of Krentor were accidental malfunctions in the guidance system.)
He is about 6'4" tall, The standard among Tempokians, He has Dark Blue Skin, and His feet are webbed. His hands however are not;Having four arms makes their race more......productive than most others. He has hair, but only a little, because most of his head is ridged, front to back. Even his chin shows ridges.
"Helm, Status." Queried the Admiral.
"Engines at 56 Percent and rising. Warp Drive power will be back online soon."
"How Soon?"
"3 Hours."
"Make it 2, and that's an order."
"Aye Sir. Chief?"
"Yes Charzak?," the officer replied.
"We need warp in 2 hours. Captain's orders."
"On It. Frople, out." The Comm channel closed.
Charzak is a dedicated helmsman aboard the TIS Morning Light. She got moved to the flagship only recently;The other helmsmen was killed in a battle with the Trepol, another militia faction fighting for control.
She has Brown hair, Green eyes, webbed feet, and is about 6'1" tall. She is about 933 years of age, relativly young for a helmsmen.(About 24 in earth years.)Her father died in the battle of Krithog 7 when she was very young. She joined the military to restore honor to her father's name. He was an accused traitor.
The only female on the starship, she was deployed there only because Kringtor asked for her by name; her service record was impressive. She already held 3 of The Tempok military's highest honors;not much when compared to his, but still, considering her age, that was an outstanding achievement.
"Sir-5 Phantom Class Cruisers de-cloaking off our port bow!" Cried Kelvek, The tactical officer officer.
The tactical officer's name is Kelvek, He is 5'4", Webbed feet, no hair brown,ridged skin. About 34 Earth years.
A highly respected officer, he was once the greatest fighter pilot in the fleet until the loss of his right upper arm. The bleeding was too bad, and had it not been amputated, he would have surely bled to death. After the operation, he had this to say:"Give me yours or I'll take it myself!"
"Shields up! Activate weapons and deploy fighters!" ordered the Admiral, surprised by the sudden appearence of FIVE dreadnought class cruisers
"They're firing!" Kelvek hastily replied
The Morning Light took 5 Disruptor hits to the port. Hard.
"Report!"-shouthed Kringtor.
"Port shields down to 12%," came Kelvek's hasty reply.
"Fire all weapons!"
7 Torpedoes are launched at the flanking Phantom, and 8 bursts from the disruptors disable it.
The other Phantoms launch a fierce volley of Photon Torpedoes and Disruptors on the carrier, weakening it even more so than it was to begin with by exposing the hull of the ship to fire, by collapsing the shields aft of the ship.
"Aft shields down! Port shields about to collapse!"
"GET ME THOSE FIGHTERS ENSIGN!" Kringtor sternly ordered.
3 more hits to the port.
"Fighters deploy-"
A shower of electricity rains out of the helm console.
Charzak is knocked unconsious by the subsequent debris which falls on her.
Kringtor took a moment to examine the severity of the situation.
"My helms officer is unconcious, my aft shields are down, and we're outmanned, outgunned and outmanuvered; what do I do?
Put them in our shoes. Fighters, we need them now!"
Kringtor looked over at kelvek.
"Tactical, fighters?"
"Fighters in chevron formation," Kelvek replied.
"Fire all weapons at the Left most Phantom!"
"Disruptors and 4 torpedo tubes off-line!"
Another hit. A fire starts on the bridge.
"I DIDN'T ASK FOR A DAMAGE REPORT, JUST FIRE THE DAMNED WEAPONS!"
The tactical officer dutifuly obeys his orders. Just as he starts firing, the ship takes another hit. A piece of debris falls on the knocked-out ensign, burying her effectively.
"Sir, Fighters report they have disabled one phantom class."
"Call for reinforcements!"
A torpedo ruptures the aft hull.
"Warp-core breach in progress!"
"Engineering, Can you stabalize it?"
"Negative, We are seconds from it blowing!"
"Attention all hands abandon ship!Repeat all hands abandon ship!"
The warp-core is ejected moments before it explodes.The ship is knocked sideways due to the shockwave from the explosion, causing it to collide with 2 fighters.
"Sir, the phantoms are breaking off."
The remaining phantoms cloaked and engaged warp.
"Sir?"
The tactical officer looks over to see his CO struggling to get the debris off the unconcious ensign.
"C'mon damnit don't die! Don't die on me now! URRRRRGGGAAH!"
He finally lifts it with his tactical officer's help.
"Take her to sickbay. Get those burns treated ASAP, and order fighters to maintain a standard patrol vector around the ship until help arrives. I want all efforts put into the tactical systems. Make the-"
"Si-Si-Sir?" The ensign awoke in his hands.
"Yes ensign?"
"Permission to, to, speak freely?"
The captain gave a coy smile.
"Granted."
"May I say it-,it was an honor serving with you, sir."
"No Ensign! You Are NOT going to die! MEDICAL TEAM TO THE BRIDGE!"
The Ensign, looked longingly into the Captains eyes.
"Sir?"
"Yes ensign?"
"I always thought of you....as the father i never knew........sigh"
With that final sigh, the ensigns life came to an abrupt, and early, end.
Gretharp let the ensign's cold, lifeless body slip out of his hands and land on the deckplates with a small thump. There was no time to grieve now; there was work to be done.
Gretharp eyed Kelvek dubiously.
"Don't tell me," he replied, almost as if reading the captain's mind,"Damage report."
There is heavy damage to all decks and stations. Life support is failing on all decks aside from decks 21.....," He punched in the scanner main power coupling reroute as he read internal sensors,"13....and 14-18."
Gretharp gave orders almost instantaneously.
"Evacuate those decks, and reroute all auxillary power to the life support systems. I want all recreation areas or empty spaces on this ship turned into immediate trioge stations, anyone who can walk and move their arms and legs is now a nurse or engineer. Get impulse on-line and repair as many weapons systems as possible. You have 1 Hour."
Kelvek gasped and almost choked on the air he was breathing.
"Sir, an hour isn't enough to-"
"Are you backtalking, Ensign?"
"Sir, No, and I am a Lt.."
"You won't be for much longer if you don't execute my command, understood?"
"Understood," said the Lieutenant, embarassed as he walked off the bridge deck. If it's one lesson he learned that day, its this: Don't argue with a CO.
Especially if it's Gretharp.
The Captain of the Phantom Class P.R.W. Revolution looked at his officers
disapointingly. Not only had they lost the battle with Gretharp, and miserably I might add, but they had lost two fully operational Phantom class attack cruisers to an old fool who is far to aged for the burden of command. Why do
I even bother? Wondered Heveken silently. No one in the entire fleet had lost so badly to One carrier, let alone a beat-up one. And what would be his excuse? That the 2 Phantoms were really disabled? That his crew got drunk at a Graduation party and were clearly not fit for duty? No excuse would be great enough. There was only one option: Secrecy. He would have to keep this quiet; if he didn't it could cost him his command, maybe even his career. That was the best he could do.
And, as he was about to find out, it isn't enough.
"Captain, we are being hailed. Admiral Yurew on channel. Priority one."
Here we go, Heveken thought silently to himself.
"On screen."
The Admiral's old, sagging face appeared on the screen.
"Hello admiral, how's life on Krethor 2?"
"Dispense with the pleasentries. How was the battle?"
Heveken Began wondering how the whip would feel. Probably painful at first;then after about the 300th time it wouldn't hurt that much.
"The battle went......."
"Don't tell me," She said with conviction, "you lost."
No, The whip probably isn't as bad as it sounds; after all, more than half the captains in the fleet had gotten the whip at one point, it's about time he got his whipping. He wondered if the sentence was doubled if you lost 2 ships, and what life as a farmer on Grudthor 5 would be like.
"Unfortunately," he answered carefully.
"Too bad, I suppose. How many ships were lost?"
Farming has it's upsides; after all, it IS an honest life, with benifit of free food, minus the cost of growing it. Be awfully lonely though.
"T-T-Two," he finally stuttered.
"Unfortunate, indeed. You have been re-assigned to sector 2351 in the Rancor System. You are to wait with the rest of the fleet there for further instructions. Yurew, out."
Heveken gave a sigh of relief.
"Did she even hear you?," asked the ensign at the helm.
"You know," he replied truthfully,"Im not quite sure."
I'd like some advice, as I have gotten some very good reviews from other people on the Flashtrak forums, and I wanna see what you guys think.
Emperor Brandon