Deus Ex Lumina
Posted: 2006-05-13 06:55am
This is my first attempt at a sci-fi fanfic - my only other story was loosely an Exalted fan fiction, and therefore fantasy.
This does cross a few universes, though set in the Star Trek universe, post Star Trek: Nemesis, and the end of Voyager. It will include an element or two from Star Wars, and a bit more from StarCraft - however, it's only because a) I thought it would be interesting to see them together, and b) they fit the parts of the story I needed them to play.
I welcome any and all feedback, though constructive is the most useful.
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"There's no end to the accursed things! Are you certain this is the evacuation route?" The slim, darkly-clothed Dark Templar Nassine was covering the larger cave opening, her standard warp blade in her left hand joined by a psionic blade on her right tearing through the Zerg who managed to get close enough, even as she managed to retreat with the others.
The de facto leader of the scattered group, Kessen, glanced back at the encroaching Zerg with a glare borne of pure anger, threw his arm at them, and caused whitish-blue lightning to course like living things amongst the Zerg. Many fell, but many more were on their way. Even as he ran ahead once more, he expressed "Yes, and we're very close now. We just need a bit more time."
Growling through the telepathic link, Nassine looked at the landscape behind the remaining Zerg with a mixture of deep sadness, and regret. She was on her people's homeworld, the beautifully green jewel of Aiur, after not having set foot on it for more than two hundred years, banished as she was for daring to think that the Protoss great telepathic link should be supplemented with individual creativity. She was on her homeworld at last, after so many years of calling the deep black space itself as her home, and it was falling before her eyes.
The Zerg had managed to multiply exponentially, their air- and space-borne minions able to assault forces on any battleground chosen. Their deep, primal hunger to consume, devour, taint, and evolve into something even worse managing to take down even the Protoss homeworld of Aiur. How the mighty had fallen, she thought to herself, even as she efficiently cut the remainder of the Zerg pursuit down with precise and swift slices of her blades. Even as she cut down the remaining ones, she knew that this would be her last chance to see Aiur.
This threat of the Zerg had evolved from an infestation to monitor to a threat so terrible, it bound together fractured members of Aiur's people to defend her in her darkest hour, and she was falling. "We failed you, my beautiful home of Aiur," she whispered along the great link, hoping the great planet itself would hear her. "We failed you, but I vow that your children will come again to free you." At this moment, she somewhat envied humans, for their ability to express sadness with tears. It felt appropriate, at this point.
Even as she ran towards the carrier that would take she and her no longer unlikely companions off the falling planet of Aiur, to regroup at Nassine's people's new homeworld of Shakuras. A few technicians, only a scant few Zealots left alive, a few more Templar, and her, as a guide.
They dashed aboard the cavernous Carrier, the technicians performing a few last-second repairs before dashing aboard themselves. Nassine, Kessen, and the others managed to get aboard right after the last technicians, who quickly sealed the door behind them. Kessen called the order for liftoff, dashing toward the command bridge. Nassine followed him, looking curiously around as she ran, as she had never been aboard a ship as large as a Carrier before.
The huge ship's sides glowed an unearthly blue light, making the surrounding countryside shudder slightly as the great ship rose majestically upwards. As the ship rose higher and faster, they began to see other ships, large and small, fleeing the surface of the stricken planet, already beginning to show huge patches of the sickly purple Zerg creep infestation. Worse, they saw Zerg firing upon the fleeing ships, the concentrated fire bringing down many Protoss ships helplessly back down to the planet below, or simply exploding from the onslaught.
The great ship's shields had already been targetted, and Kessen urged the ship to go faster, and faster still. The shields began to be battered more, and more still, even as Kessen cursed (which surprised Nassine), even as he began evasive tactics, the huge ship moving with surprising agility, managing to clear the falling planet's atmosphere, and gravitational pull at last.
Then, she felt it. She had spent many years in the cold depths of space, her psionic abilities grown accustomed to the strange things to be found, such as an unstable region of space almost directly in front of them. She quickly called a warning, confirmed by the navigational computer. Kessen forced the ship to perform a swift 90-degree turn, hitting the engines at full power once the ship had turned to give an extra boost.
In horror, Kessen watched wide-eyed, unable to react fast enough as the unstable anomaly exploded into a wormhole, the ship's burst of energy only forcing the ship directly through it. Kessen tried desperately to force the ship to go in reverse, but it was already too late. Everyone aboard swiftly felt the universe folding in on them.
The first thing Kessen thought of was that his leg pained him, and greatly. This made him open his eyes, for it also made him realize that he was alive. He looked around, a large headache making itself known quite bluntly to him at the same time as he saw Nassine.
She was slowly pulling herself up off the ground, stretching each arm and leg carefully before standing fully, and looking around. Seeing Kessen's leg, she narrowed her glowing blue eyes. "Are you alright?"
He returned her gaze with a nod, privately impressed that the Dark Templar would show compassion. He had always heard that they were cold, silent, invisible killers with invisible blades that struck without warning. After he had met Nassine, he was somewhat surprised to learn that what he had heard was absolutely true. Once he found out that despite being banished, she was willing to come to the aid of the very countrymen that had banished her for being what amounted to a heretic, he also had a respect for her. She followed a different code than his own, and she had talents that differed from his, but she was still a Protoss.
Kessen slowly got to his feet, nodding at last to Nassine, and then checking the navigational computer for their position and status. He blinked, and then shook his head.
Aside from this Carrier ship, the Trenthor, two shuttles, three scouts, and two Corsairs hung in space next to them. Kessen could already feel that the entire great psychic link of their race extended just to their ships, now. Setting that aside for now, he informed Nassine of their position. "According to our navigational computers, we are no longer in our galaxy. We are, in fact, in the recently detected G-174 galaxy. While we were unconscious, the navigational computer was thankfully mapping from scratch once it detected we were in unknown space."
Nassine raised her eyebrows. This only confirmed her awful feeling of...being a long, long way from familiar territory. However, another fact disturbed her. "Is it just me, or is that anomaly completely gone?"
Kessen looked with glared eyebrows as he worked swiftly with the navigational computer. He shook his head eventually. "There is no remaining trace of the wormhole that brought us here," he expressed sourly. "According to the sensor logs, the burst of energy of our ship trying to make the leap to warp speed caused the wormhole's exit to change, and for the wormhole to shut completely half a second after the last ship exited."
Nassine shook her head. "I'm not sure what to say. I don't think my services as 'guide' are needed anymore. What are you going to do with myself and the other Dark Templar?" Her suspicion seemed to hang like spiderwebs around her message through the psychic link.
Kessen looked at her for a moment, and then replied. "Why the suspicion, so soon? To the best of my knowledge, you, I, the others on this ship, and the crew onboard the seven other ships are the only remaining Protoss, to the best of our knowledge. I was thinking if needed, I would ask for your help, and for the others' help as well." He looked at her again for a moment before continuing. "Please, speak your grievances now. The sooner you do and we get past it, the better chance we all will have of seeing another century pass."
With half-lidded eyes, Nassine looked at Kessen thoughtfully before ultimately shaking her head once. "Forgive my paranoia, but my experience with your particular title haven't given me the fondest of memories. We were crossed before by some wearing your title."
Feeling suddenly as old as his centuries, Kessen replied tiredly. "Very well, all I ask then is that you help me for now. If I do something to cross you, then I assure you it will not be intentional, for I feel we must look a bit beyond our own, personal concerns. We are now the only ones of our race that we know about, with no concievable way home. I think now would be the best time to pool our knowledge and talents, don't you?"
After looking at him appraisingly, Nassine nodded once. "Very well. All I will say is that I will be watching you closely, for now."
Kessen stared neutrally at her for a moment. Well, he supposed it could have been worse. "In that case, I will need your help to find a habitable planet. The very first thing we need is a place to call home."
After consulting with the other ships' captains, and the sensor data, they established that in their immediate region of space, there were two stars with solar systems nearby, and probes indicated that none of the planets in either system were inhabited, or showed signs of habitation or indeed civilization of any kind. However, a few of the planets looked looked promising for colonization.
After a few hours of exploration, inspecting the planets of each solar system more closely, they finally agreed on the second planet out from the reddish-orange star, as it had large traces of valuable minerals and metals, as well as a breathable atmosphere. They named the system Khala, and after some discussion, named the planet Tassadar.
Going by the drill, they took far longer to establish a first base than usual, but that was because they couldn't simply warp in any buildings - they had to be built. However, within a week, a habitable base was implemented, and the robotic Probes were already beginning to build support structures.
Feeling almost peaceful, Kessen commented to all other Protoss with him at this base. "As most of you have felt, things will not be peaceful for long, so we must be vigilant and swift. We will likely have unknown visitors from this galaxy, or worse, the scourge-like Zerg will find a way to follow us to this remote place. Stand fast though, some of us may have come here from different walks of life, but right now, one another here is all we have."
Nassine glanced at the shipyard already under construction, and felt resolute, even as she knew this small bastion of Protoss might truly be all the Protoss left, and they were in an unknown galaxy. She only hoped the local spacegoing wildlife was friendly.
This does cross a few universes, though set in the Star Trek universe, post Star Trek: Nemesis, and the end of Voyager. It will include an element or two from Star Wars, and a bit more from StarCraft - however, it's only because a) I thought it would be interesting to see them together, and b) they fit the parts of the story I needed them to play.
I welcome any and all feedback, though constructive is the most useful.
* * * * *
"There's no end to the accursed things! Are you certain this is the evacuation route?" The slim, darkly-clothed Dark Templar Nassine was covering the larger cave opening, her standard warp blade in her left hand joined by a psionic blade on her right tearing through the Zerg who managed to get close enough, even as she managed to retreat with the others.
The de facto leader of the scattered group, Kessen, glanced back at the encroaching Zerg with a glare borne of pure anger, threw his arm at them, and caused whitish-blue lightning to course like living things amongst the Zerg. Many fell, but many more were on their way. Even as he ran ahead once more, he expressed "Yes, and we're very close now. We just need a bit more time."
Growling through the telepathic link, Nassine looked at the landscape behind the remaining Zerg with a mixture of deep sadness, and regret. She was on her people's homeworld, the beautifully green jewel of Aiur, after not having set foot on it for more than two hundred years, banished as she was for daring to think that the Protoss great telepathic link should be supplemented with individual creativity. She was on her homeworld at last, after so many years of calling the deep black space itself as her home, and it was falling before her eyes.
The Zerg had managed to multiply exponentially, their air- and space-borne minions able to assault forces on any battleground chosen. Their deep, primal hunger to consume, devour, taint, and evolve into something even worse managing to take down even the Protoss homeworld of Aiur. How the mighty had fallen, she thought to herself, even as she efficiently cut the remainder of the Zerg pursuit down with precise and swift slices of her blades. Even as she cut down the remaining ones, she knew that this would be her last chance to see Aiur.
This threat of the Zerg had evolved from an infestation to monitor to a threat so terrible, it bound together fractured members of Aiur's people to defend her in her darkest hour, and she was falling. "We failed you, my beautiful home of Aiur," she whispered along the great link, hoping the great planet itself would hear her. "We failed you, but I vow that your children will come again to free you." At this moment, she somewhat envied humans, for their ability to express sadness with tears. It felt appropriate, at this point.
Even as she ran towards the carrier that would take she and her no longer unlikely companions off the falling planet of Aiur, to regroup at Nassine's people's new homeworld of Shakuras. A few technicians, only a scant few Zealots left alive, a few more Templar, and her, as a guide.
They dashed aboard the cavernous Carrier, the technicians performing a few last-second repairs before dashing aboard themselves. Nassine, Kessen, and the others managed to get aboard right after the last technicians, who quickly sealed the door behind them. Kessen called the order for liftoff, dashing toward the command bridge. Nassine followed him, looking curiously around as she ran, as she had never been aboard a ship as large as a Carrier before.
The huge ship's sides glowed an unearthly blue light, making the surrounding countryside shudder slightly as the great ship rose majestically upwards. As the ship rose higher and faster, they began to see other ships, large and small, fleeing the surface of the stricken planet, already beginning to show huge patches of the sickly purple Zerg creep infestation. Worse, they saw Zerg firing upon the fleeing ships, the concentrated fire bringing down many Protoss ships helplessly back down to the planet below, or simply exploding from the onslaught.
The great ship's shields had already been targetted, and Kessen urged the ship to go faster, and faster still. The shields began to be battered more, and more still, even as Kessen cursed (which surprised Nassine), even as he began evasive tactics, the huge ship moving with surprising agility, managing to clear the falling planet's atmosphere, and gravitational pull at last.
Then, she felt it. She had spent many years in the cold depths of space, her psionic abilities grown accustomed to the strange things to be found, such as an unstable region of space almost directly in front of them. She quickly called a warning, confirmed by the navigational computer. Kessen forced the ship to perform a swift 90-degree turn, hitting the engines at full power once the ship had turned to give an extra boost.
In horror, Kessen watched wide-eyed, unable to react fast enough as the unstable anomaly exploded into a wormhole, the ship's burst of energy only forcing the ship directly through it. Kessen tried desperately to force the ship to go in reverse, but it was already too late. Everyone aboard swiftly felt the universe folding in on them.
The first thing Kessen thought of was that his leg pained him, and greatly. This made him open his eyes, for it also made him realize that he was alive. He looked around, a large headache making itself known quite bluntly to him at the same time as he saw Nassine.
She was slowly pulling herself up off the ground, stretching each arm and leg carefully before standing fully, and looking around. Seeing Kessen's leg, she narrowed her glowing blue eyes. "Are you alright?"
He returned her gaze with a nod, privately impressed that the Dark Templar would show compassion. He had always heard that they were cold, silent, invisible killers with invisible blades that struck without warning. After he had met Nassine, he was somewhat surprised to learn that what he had heard was absolutely true. Once he found out that despite being banished, she was willing to come to the aid of the very countrymen that had banished her for being what amounted to a heretic, he also had a respect for her. She followed a different code than his own, and she had talents that differed from his, but she was still a Protoss.
Kessen slowly got to his feet, nodding at last to Nassine, and then checking the navigational computer for their position and status. He blinked, and then shook his head.
Aside from this Carrier ship, the Trenthor, two shuttles, three scouts, and two Corsairs hung in space next to them. Kessen could already feel that the entire great psychic link of their race extended just to their ships, now. Setting that aside for now, he informed Nassine of their position. "According to our navigational computers, we are no longer in our galaxy. We are, in fact, in the recently detected G-174 galaxy. While we were unconscious, the navigational computer was thankfully mapping from scratch once it detected we were in unknown space."
Nassine raised her eyebrows. This only confirmed her awful feeling of...being a long, long way from familiar territory. However, another fact disturbed her. "Is it just me, or is that anomaly completely gone?"
Kessen looked with glared eyebrows as he worked swiftly with the navigational computer. He shook his head eventually. "There is no remaining trace of the wormhole that brought us here," he expressed sourly. "According to the sensor logs, the burst of energy of our ship trying to make the leap to warp speed caused the wormhole's exit to change, and for the wormhole to shut completely half a second after the last ship exited."
Nassine shook her head. "I'm not sure what to say. I don't think my services as 'guide' are needed anymore. What are you going to do with myself and the other Dark Templar?" Her suspicion seemed to hang like spiderwebs around her message through the psychic link.
Kessen looked at her for a moment, and then replied. "Why the suspicion, so soon? To the best of my knowledge, you, I, the others on this ship, and the crew onboard the seven other ships are the only remaining Protoss, to the best of our knowledge. I was thinking if needed, I would ask for your help, and for the others' help as well." He looked at her again for a moment before continuing. "Please, speak your grievances now. The sooner you do and we get past it, the better chance we all will have of seeing another century pass."
With half-lidded eyes, Nassine looked at Kessen thoughtfully before ultimately shaking her head once. "Forgive my paranoia, but my experience with your particular title haven't given me the fondest of memories. We were crossed before by some wearing your title."
Feeling suddenly as old as his centuries, Kessen replied tiredly. "Very well, all I ask then is that you help me for now. If I do something to cross you, then I assure you it will not be intentional, for I feel we must look a bit beyond our own, personal concerns. We are now the only ones of our race that we know about, with no concievable way home. I think now would be the best time to pool our knowledge and talents, don't you?"
After looking at him appraisingly, Nassine nodded once. "Very well. All I will say is that I will be watching you closely, for now."
Kessen stared neutrally at her for a moment. Well, he supposed it could have been worse. "In that case, I will need your help to find a habitable planet. The very first thing we need is a place to call home."
After consulting with the other ships' captains, and the sensor data, they established that in their immediate region of space, there were two stars with solar systems nearby, and probes indicated that none of the planets in either system were inhabited, or showed signs of habitation or indeed civilization of any kind. However, a few of the planets looked looked promising for colonization.
After a few hours of exploration, inspecting the planets of each solar system more closely, they finally agreed on the second planet out from the reddish-orange star, as it had large traces of valuable minerals and metals, as well as a breathable atmosphere. They named the system Khala, and after some discussion, named the planet Tassadar.
Going by the drill, they took far longer to establish a first base than usual, but that was because they couldn't simply warp in any buildings - they had to be built. However, within a week, a habitable base was implemented, and the robotic Probes were already beginning to build support structures.
Feeling almost peaceful, Kessen commented to all other Protoss with him at this base. "As most of you have felt, things will not be peaceful for long, so we must be vigilant and swift. We will likely have unknown visitors from this galaxy, or worse, the scourge-like Zerg will find a way to follow us to this remote place. Stand fast though, some of us may have come here from different walks of life, but right now, one another here is all we have."
Nassine glanced at the shipyard already under construction, and felt resolute, even as she knew this small bastion of Protoss might truly be all the Protoss left, and they were in an unknown galaxy. She only hoped the local spacegoing wildlife was friendly.