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The Galactic Federation (going against the norm)

Posted: 2003-01-07 03:53am
by Red5
Galactic Federation
This story is not for sale or resale copyrights belong to those who own Star trek and star wars and in the words of big Steve this is my story its not really cannon its fun if you disagree that’s your problem I would also like to thank all those webmasters for their fanfiction web sites be it STwars or STtrek especially the guy’s & Gal’s at The alt.startrek.vs.starwars Fanfiction Archive & Fanfix.com & Twguild for hours of pleasurable reading cheers guy’s & gals. This is my first time so go easy on me. J

Voyager came back from the delta quadrant bringing with it the illegal amour technology transphasic torpedoes and a whole collection of borgafied modifications as well as nanite technology to fight species 8472 but most of all the brought back slipstream tech. As this was the beginning of their problems, it was found that our galaxy continued for another 5 quadrants it was huge partly hidden buy a cluster of black holes and lightyears of green red & yellow space dust latter known as the Vistula nebula. How ever before Starfleet discovered this they had begun a ship building program, the most aggressive to date other regular ships continued on the previous lines but the also started designing in secret vast city ships with fixed mounted hybrid pulse cannons quantum transphasic torpedoes with independent shielding the amour fully integrated and supplemented buy small amounts of nutronium information salvaged from wandering disconnected drones from the second Borg war and at the hub of this super slipstream ship was multiple omega (hypermatter) fusion plants this powered the ship in all aspects. The only drawback was crewing, the ships were a mile and a half long and needed a human crew of 1500 plus 20000 soldier androids (Data’s replicates) which were battle enhanced whom served also as pilots for the super slipstream capable dragon fighters

Ships were able to travel at 45 LY an hour gave vast stretches of the galaxy over to star fleet and its Klingon ally breathing space from the massive Romulan empire’s own colonisation push after finally inventing the wormhole drive estimated speeds of 25 LY per hour but they had not seem the new protector class as it was hidden way out in the vast darkness in between galaxy’s, the huge star base was cloaked so no unfortunate detection could be made it was huge built by the cadets that trained there it was also the shipbuilding yards with temporary yards adjoining, the fleet also trained in that vast stretches of the galaxy navigation of the galaxy was secretly done by drone ships jumping from one location to the next with only enough time to scan a few hundred light years and then scram this incorporated some more secret technology from Section 31 which was totally reintegrated back into star fleet during the Borg war
By 3245 the whole galaxy was populated in one form or another the Romulans reunited with Vulcan who the persuaded them 250 years later to petitions for federation membership with a galaxy as we thought only 240 thousand light years across they thought peace was at last upon them, until the dark Jedi found the gateway he crash landed on the run from the emperor on a planet just out side the nebula his ship not sufficiently shielded enough to withstand the radiation given off
But the gateway was found and after initial probes by the empire palpatine sent a battle fleet through (this is during ROJ) it was also found that this was also a force barrier as the citizens of this part of the galaxy could not be sensed by the dark side only the light side of the force once the barrier had been breached out poured the star destroyers and the 3 super star destroyers that palpatine had secretly built they split up into 3 groups each taking 1/3 of the area between them they would in turn each take a suitable system and colonise it to be home base setting up repair and manufacture facilities now on the surface the Federation fleet was a mixture of Romulan and federation design incorporating a worm hole slipstream drive which was able to attain speeds of a 35ly per hour these were also built along the protector line after some maneuvering as so the in the end could serve as frigates fighter screens and so forth as it was the small federation ship iron claw which first made contact with the empire. They were on routine patrol when the crew noticed elevated cronnau radiation emissions. Which was due to the rapid deployment of imperial hyperspace equipped probe droids, they raced into the system in warp the crew on the emperors fist did not know what to make of the incoming ship the sensor officer was absolutely astounded when he watched the weird echo from his subspace scanners race towards the faster than the speed of light in real space he reported this at once to his superiors who brought it up on his own monitor and he in turn brought it to the commanders attention to be passed onto the captain.
In his chair the commander turned his ship onto its escape route in case the ship was hostile as he was under strict orders not to engage the enemy Sir they re broadcasting on subspace frequency in holographic” put it through here the captain said “this is the USS Iron Claw to unidentified war ship please state the reason for your trespass in our space” the captain looked at the ship specifications mmm a very small frigate with power consumption that of a shuttle he ordered the forward guns to fire a 2 second blast from the medium batteries the engage the hyperdrive to their next destination. The blast hit the iron claw throwing it off course as well as tumbling away he was amused at the sight of this and also the sharp exit he made from the encounter Thrawn would be pleased he thought
The iron claw however was another matter news of this encounter was forwarded to star fleet who in turn forward it onto the star base 0001 where the actual high guard fleet admiral made the decision to start bringing in all available ships for upgrades to the new power units and weapons as the new threat was large 1.6km to be precise and the power generation was that of a star only the omega particle could put out so much energy and then some but there was no reading of the particle or else there would be an alert but as it goes matters move fast to facilitate the smooth transfers a system was set up .. A temporary star base at the training area had been set up and at the staging area where ships were delivered by their regular crews and put on special blindfolded transports to the training area were they were sworn to ultra secrecy and trained on the new systems and strait of the press was the slipstream warp enabled wormhole drive
The drive combined gave an amazing 90 LY per hour the shielding and weapons were beyond their imagination they were quickly deployed in secret around key systems of the 3 powers Cardassia being obliterated by the founder war for their betrayal in the first dominion war some ships stayed at 0001 to form up the new 1st 3rd 5th 6th & 7th fleets ready for action shipbuilding was also stepped up now using regular federation replications new engineers workers and builders were bought in to the 500hundred shipyards that took up at least 35 light seconds of space and a ship could take 2½ weeks to build test and crew, this was approaching Borg standards. At the end of six moths the imperials were firmly entrenched into their forward command post and the federation had re-written the record books as to how fast you can build and crew ships old ships that were unable to receive full upgrades were given to individual planets as weapons platforms in defense of their worlds all governments were happy with this agreement the fleet was brought up to full alert status 22000 ships 10000 capital ships
It was then decided to find out where the imperials came from scouts were sent out searching the outreach of the then known galaxy that s were they came across the rearguard of the opposing fleet scans showed ships coming through the nebulous discontinuity a run was made by scout ships each carrying ambassadors trying to find a peaceful resolutions to the situation building.

Of those who were caught no mercy was shown in fact the were on shown to the airlock and assisted in unsuited Eva’s
And of those that got through once they tried to contact imperials as they were found out to be called the were shot down or brought aboard ships for execution. Out of the 12 ambassadors that were sent only 2 remain together on the Delta flyerIV they observed and monitored communications for 2 weeks, of the coming and goings on the other side of the nebular under cloak.
The flyer was fully manned so space was getting tight. In the 3rd week they noticed a strange looking 1-man vehicle come in from what was now known as hyperspace
It did a quick scan and attempted to flee it was pursued by a squad of Tie fighters
Ambassador Aaron gave the order to pursue and help this pilot who was obviously opposed to the empire. They waited until they were further into the nearby solar system and beyond the reach of the imperial sensors watching the fighter being pursued complete outrageous maneuvers moving from blast to blast in instatant before it would hit like he knew where it would come from Aaron although not a Starfleet officer he gave the order to decloak and engage the tie’s this was done in a short amount of time tie fighters and all were dispensed with in a few short minutes Aaron then asked for a hailing frequency to be opened “attention fighter this is the USS Lincoln please respond” the pilot responded
Asking to clarify who they were again. After a brief explanation Aaron asked if they could have a meeting with his superiors being a little wary the pilot then asked the team to travel to an uninhabited star system and await further messages. Luke Skywalker had made contact with the aliens

The empire makes its first strike against an undefended outer rim colony world
In seconds the communications relay was blasted into space dust 2 imp duces slipped into orbit and commenced BDZ operations.
1-½ hours latter the planets surface was an orange molten ball all life terminated
The 2 impdueces slipped back out of orbit and engaged their hyperdrives

After traveling for 2 days at high worm/slip speeds they covered nearly 3000 light years
And reached their destination, instantly they were hailed by a probe droid giving them further coordinates this was followed quickly when the dropped out of S. warp the followed their flight path the all of a sudden 4 Mon Calamari and a constrainer class popped out of hyperspace setting up and interdiction field to boot this as they were to find out does not affect slip stream in the same way it does to hyperdrives the captain of the delta flyer put the sip into a steep dive then activated the SS engines for 5 seconds dis-ingaged the drive a little further out . on the rebel ships a look of absolute astonishment adorned their faces
Some one turned to the admiral “that ship moved at over 4000 times the speed of light and they did it in real space” “how the hell did they do that” asked the admiral unknown was the reply he got “well hail them anyway tell them and I presume that they are alien to our culture tell them to heave to aside and prepare to dock as we will be there escorts back to the fleetcomp gathering.

6 hours latter they were at Sullust everywhere the eyes could see there were rebel ships
Aaron had a appointment to see Mon Mothma were he quickly explained the situation
She was totally appalled that this was happening and knew that if the empire gets a foothold in the next quadrants they would have hell to pay
In the next meeting they had she produced information on what they were doing here explaining about taking on the emperor and his new battle station she was quickly told that that would not be a problem after looking over the specs for the station he told the assembled members of the rebel alliance that they had means to destroy the station without being seen there were large amounts of mumbling can you demonstrate any of this technology to us yep just one moment he tapped his communicator which was about the size of a very small coin he then began speaking into thin air “Aaron to Lincoln “
“Go ahead” “play hammer I repeat play hammer” the delta flyer then cloaked and disappeared the admiral immediately asked for the shields to be raised thinking there was some ulterior motive for this demonstration as the delta flyer the reappeared 20km off the port bow “how in the blazes did that ship get out there with the shields up never mind something that small with a cloaking device.
It’s our little secret but suffice to say we can breach any shield configuration
After further meetings it was decided that the rebel’s would break through the cordon around the nebula and head strait to earth were the fleets would be gathered
The only problem was to get passed the imperial fleet, which was awesome
30 imp2’s 15 imps assorted gun ships frigates over a thousand fighters never mind what was on the other side Aaron then offered to go back to his council and get permission to fit cloaking mechanisms to the alliance ships this would be very difficult due to the power wave guides which were different in fed and alliance ships but not impossible the order was given to implement a exchange of limited technology since they obviously were fighting for the same goals … only that the federation was more fixed so to speak
Delta flyer set of on course to earth. They would complete the journey completely cloaked.
On reaching earth he was staggered and amazed at what he saw there in or around earth orbit sat 8 ships each the size of a starbase with numerous fighters zipping in and out of the huge formation. He thought that the empire had already won and had conquered earth
“USS Lincoln this is earth control please follow flight path provided do not deviate from fight path” what the hell has happened here, he asked for the commander to scan the ships in front as he did so all sensor stations locked out displaying and symbol .. The omega were locked out from all sensors sir it says u have to have a level 10 clearance and there are some admirals who don’t even have that, “very well take us to space dock and inform the council I request an emergency sitting”
1 hour latter in the grand chamber Aaron held center stage “first of all I would like to know where the huge ships sitting in earth orbit are from and what is omega”
The high admiral got up to explain
Theses are a new line of ships developed by all factions within the federation fleet
They are 1 mile long and carries a host of top secret weapons and engine designs we have deployed half of our new fleet to priority sectors all federation standard design are being recycled and are being brought to our secret deep space center where crews are retrained on the new systems and then shipped out on their new assignments we have three classes of ships the ones you saw are dreadnoughts and we have a battle class ships which only a limited few are in service and a small frigate class which still comes in at 950 meters and omega is there power source
Thought years ago by the Borg to be perfection.
When voyager came back as well as bring back slipstream and amour technology they brought with them the ability to control this molecule we then took the testing to the delta quadrant were we were able beyond the reach of our adversaries were able to perfect the use of the omega particle to power various system.
Well that’s all good and well but I have information from the other side
I have come across a rebellion of sorts against our enemy’s we have also been warned not to let them get a foothold or it will be hell I have schematics technology and background information all of which you can find on the data pads being handed out now. There will be words and phrases that you will not understand that is why I have a holo cube from the rebel leaders to answer all your questions
As time went on it was explained what Jedi‘s Dark Jedi Sith stardestroyers super stardestroyers were and all recent events including the destruction of the first Death star when the schematics for this was announced the was a gasp and total silence
But at the end there was an all encompassing togetherness in a joint effort to combat this latest threat which is not even extra galactic proposed plans made only then and there were to be then put into motion immediately

Operation Police stop…….. to all commanders in the
5th and 7th fleet, are to proceed to location known as Vistula nebula where they will deploy engaging enemy forces only if fired upon Geneva Convention is full effect your mission is to curtail imperial incursion into this sector
Further orders to follow once on station

Vistula nebula 06:00 EST (Earth standard time)

“Sir, fifty frigate class and 30 gunboat class ships have just exited from some kind of hyperspace and are moving at twice the speed of light in normal space.”
As the ships drop out of warp they see what they are against; 16 Stardestroyers, 22 Victory class destroyers and the SSD Thrawns Hand Grand Admiral Thrawn in command
Ok people were here to deliver the package and get the hell out of here shields up max power
The Federation fleet begins broadcasting their demands asking for the empire to leave this sector of space
The imperials reply with their demands ordering the federation to surrender in the name of the emperor the feds refuse as do the imperials and a short fire fight concludes business with 14 federation ships with slight shield damage and with no damage to imperial ships the ships travel 20 light years before the activate phase cloaks turn around joining the massive armada going back towards the nebula all traveling under cloak
On the SSD Thrawns Hand a signals officer sounds out his commander
“Sir we have multiple subspace echoes’ bearing ……..there gone”
Alert the grand admiral
Grand admiral studied the sensor logs “mmmmmm theses people seems to have perfected the class 4 cloak possibly class three ... Alert the fleet set grav traps to maximum bring in 2, 417 place them here and here set for maximum dampening.
Little did the grand admiral know that the federation ships were already all around him phased out of this time frame and
All gunboats or Omega Defiant class IV had placed them selves at all week points shown to them by their rebel contact a few of the leading rebellion leaders had been invited to earth to discuss an alliance and to see in person and close up the federations answer to the imperial first and second attack on their ships the 60 Omega Defiant class decloaked as one and opened fire with their transphasic trilithium torpedo on all victory and stardestroyers at once concentrating their torpedo fire on the destroyers solar ionization reactors located in the little dome at the bottom of the ships. Shielding was pierced instantly fusing exhaust ports clogging the internal reactor
Causing in some cases automatic shut down and in others a critical overload most ships erupted in a blinding flash. On the bridge of he SSD Thrawn sat its commander watching in sheer disgust the tiny ships took down ships possibly 30 time their own size he immediately called all ships to hyper out on their own coordinates and rendezvous
Princess Lea and General solo accompanied by Chewbacca stared on in awe they could not believe the Federation ships had made so many Stardestroyers run including an SSD. The fleet of defiant’s cloaked whilst moving towards the nebula their target the rest of the imperial ships on the other side of the nebula as the have the whole Rebel fleet waiting 40 light years out cloaked they are just there to clear the way
On the other side of the nebula the commodore Brandi was getting slightly worried he normally would receive hourly updates from Thrawn but he had not received any in the last hour and half then all of a sudden his ship was rocked by a giant explosion
What in the kriffin name was that?
He found out from his sensor officer that there were now a hundred ships of 2 classes attacking his armada then some thing happened that would live forever in the minds of the imperials the mysterious ships had cleared a narrow path through his lines and these ships were now protecting the narrow path between the 3 massive white holes all of a sudden there was rebel ships decloaking and moving under escort of the smaller ships
Brandi ordered an all out attack also signaling Coruscant for backup

But this was all to late as the rebel fleet was through he then began wondering what had happened to the fleet on the other side and that this information he would have to get to the emperor immediately





SSD Thrawn
Grand Admiral Thrawn sat looking over the sensor logs he could see no signs that they had detected the cloaked ships on their approach which was very worrying as this federation had an enormous advantage as well as the size of there ships which was totally different to what read admiral Thanas had reported. His report consisted on information from the data bank of a captured ship a year ago that’s why the progression in this part of the galaxy had been so slow we knew their ships were slow painfully slow only being able to cover 10 light year an hour but these ships were something else he could not tell how fast they were but a couple of his victories got a few good licks in and they did not go tumbling all over the place but continued fighting with vigor they also took down a number of Stardestroyers as well as a few victories. He had then sent a hyperwave transmission to the rest of the task force in this part of space gathering the for a retribution strike on the capital world of this so called federation
Back on earth the Venus a newly colonized world in the sol system was given to the rebels as a temporary sanctuary on earth after many negotiations a ruling council was formed for two reasons 1 the feds knew that the area of space on the other side could become a sticky patch for them so the would need a government with knowledge of both sides to be able to run the whole galaxy as a whole and 2 they new they needed Jedi ‘s badly if the wanted to go up against the emperor and Darth Vader
This is were Master Yoda had come in he was getting very old and sick but a visit to the Briar patch namely the Baku homeworld were after a little spell he was felling very young again he had to get special permission to go there as its normally off limits to all other citizens but his was a special case he was to single handed rebuild the Jedi order starting with the newly found brother and sister the Skywalkers Luke and Lea
Then he would continue with the thousands of thousands of potential Jedi he had sensed
The Jedi would rise even more powerful than ever before this is what gave him the strength to continue

But the military build up in the sol system continued ships pouring into the system from the secret ship yards way out in deep space eight thousand ships were now present in the Sol system all cloaked awaiting the Rabid response from the imperial fleet and they did not have long to wait 3 days latter outer system sensors picked up the Imp fleet exiting hyperspace all 300 of them including 3 SSD ‘s this would be a battle royale
The star destroyers surged ahead whilst the SSD ‘s hung back Thrawn knew that he would not want to leave himself unprotected but the thought of cloaked ships sneaking behind his fleet was unnerving.
On seeing what Thrawn would bring to the table they sent out 6 city ships theses super battle ships were enormous they took the breath of all who saw them theses ships began spitting fighters frigates and gunboats from its hangers then the heavy destroyers came in from superwarp 200 in all this completed the home defense force
Thrawn looked at what he was facing he knew it was a superior force but in weaponry he knew or thought he new he had the advantage
At 200,000 km the Fed ships opened fire the super battle ships opened up with their nutronium laser cutters, pulse wave cannons and pulsed plasma barrages the imperial fleet still not within firing range and could do nothing but sit and wait for themselves to be in range.

End of part 1


Did you like it or was it over cooked mail me and let me know Iam in the process of completing part 2

Posted: 2003-01-07 05:01am
by Darth Fanboy
it was found that our galaxy continued for another 5 quadrants it was huge partly hidden buy a cluster of black holes
How can a galaxy have five quadrants? Let alone five MORE quadrants?


plus 20000 soldier androids (Data’s replicates)
There is no way the Federation can replicate Data, it doesn't have the technology to do so, let alone cook up 20,000. To program them to be mere soldiers doesn't seem like something Starfleet could or would do either.

I hate to say it but on the whole the story was just badly written. Before you go and do a part 2 you should go through and clean up your sentences and dialogue

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Posted: 2003-01-07 06:41am
by Red5
as i said iam a complete dim wit concerning stories and i can take construtive comment as well as technical one but i asked 1 thing is this not fiction can i do things thats slightly out of the norm or would i have to stick to cannon


RED5 standing by

Posted: 2003-01-07 06:50am
by Darth Fanboy
You can do whatever you want, but if you want people to read/enjoy/not make fun of it you should probably stick to something a little more reasonable.

Posted: 2003-01-07 08:12am
by Col. Crackpot
now i'm not one who usually flames anyone but you need to go look up quadrant in the dictionary better yet, i'll do it for you.

quad·rant ( P ) Pronunciation Key (kwdrnt)
n.
Mathematics.
1.A circular arc of 90°; one fourth of the circumference of a circle.
The plane area bounded by such an arc and two perpendicular radii.

2.Any of the four areas into which a plane is divided by the reference axes in a Cartesian coordinate system, designated first, second, third, and fourth, counting counterclockwise from the area in which both coordinates are positive.
3.A machine part or other mechanical device that is shaped like a quarter circle.

4.An early instrument for measuring altitude of celestial bodies, consisting of a 90° graduated arc with a movable radius for measuring angles.


that being said it is impossable for any circular object to have more than 4 quadrants. good grief where do these people come from

Posted: 2003-01-07 09:00am
by Darth Fanboy
I think the big problem with the story is that you've included a shitload of events and crammed them all into a relatively small chapter. It just doesn't seem to be working out the way you're mind has it planned, try a rewwrite and move it along at a slower pace maybe.