Dark Rain
Posted: 2003-01-08 09:31pm
This idea hit me during my attack of gibbering madness, and I decided to write it down. It is a combination anime/scifi story, with a somewhat dark setting. What do you think?
Dark Rain
Chapter One: Cold Steel
It was raining. The water fell the ground in moderation, coming down from the dark night sky to wet the black surface of the road. The city, with its tall skyscrapers and streetlights, seemed to be an island in the middle of a dark ocean. So thought Class 2 Enforcer Michael Atner as he walked along one of the sidewalks in downtown Teal City. All around him, people covered by dark cloaks rushed to get out of the rain, but he did not join them. He continued his easy stride, letting the rain wash through his short blond hair and down his neck to the dark blue of his torso armor. The young Enforcer, barely 23, loved the rain; the clean feeling it gave him, the sound of it splashing against the concrete of the sidewalk made him feel at peace. He wore the typical uniform of an Enforcer: dull blue torso armor with his number stenciled on the chest, it's extensions covering his shoulders, but leaving his muscular arms bare, light blue jeans, black boots.
Mike had made quite an impression on the older Enforcers as a friendly, dependable, athletic recruit, his brown eyes often carrying a smile. He had also scored points with the brass with his steady aim and skills with the katana strapped to his back.
As Mike continued to walk the beat, he heard the crash of steel on steel. As he directed his attention to the source of the noise, a nearby alley, he heard more clanking. "Swordfight," he said to himself. Just as he reached the alley, the sounds stopped. He looked in to see a single man lying on the ground. Jogging over, Mike pressed his hand to the dead man's neck. No pulse. Mike grabbed his shoulder comm. "Enforcer Atner here. I've got a dead male here, possible duel victim."
"Roger that Atner," a female voice said. "Enforcer Burton en route to your location."
"Roger that." Mike snapped off his transmitter. As he began looking around, something crashed into him, knocking him forward. Mike managed to turn it into a shoulder roll, and sprang up to turn and face the mouth of the alley, just in time to see a cloaked man rush out. "Hey, you! Freeze!" Mike yelled as he ran after the figure, but the man didn't stop. Mike again grabbed his transmitter. "Enforcer Atner, now in pursuit of possible murder suspect, heading south on foot on Shen Street." Mike snapped off the comm. and raced after the figure, slashing through the puddles formed by the rain. By now, the streets were nearly deserted, and Mike and the cloaked figure were alone in rushing down the street. "I said freeze!" Mike shouted, but the other man didn't even hesitate. The rain was coming down hard now, and Mike drew his sidearm. The gun was compact, yet delivered a good punch, and held eight bullets. Mike fired into the air, the bang of the gun filling the dark night. Again the figure didn't hesitate. Suddenly, he cut left, heading towards Center Square, the middle of the city. Mike followed, close behind him. They ran between to buildings and came out across the middle of the massive courtyard. The suspect headed towards the corner of one building, reached it, then began to run up the side of the building! Mike set his gun back in his holster.If you think that's gonna stop me, you better think again. Then, he began to run up the building, just as the figure had. As he reached the roof, he caught the figure coming at him, and blocked a punch to the head. He twisted the man's arm and threw him over his shoulder, towards the middle of the skyscraper's roof. I wasn't made an Enforcer for nothing, moron, he thought.
The two now stood several feet apart. Mike drew his gun. "Hands up," he said. "You're under arrest for a Code 15, which is assault of an Enforcer, and a Code 7, which is murder."
The figure laughed softly, his face hidden under his hood, and almost lazily raised his arms. "You're not bad," he said.
"Hands on your head," Atner said forcefully, ignoring the comment. "Get down on your knees."
"I don't think so."
"Do it pal, or I'll shove resisting arrest onto your list of charges." The figure threw back his head, and his hood fell away, revealing long brown hair and a...blindfold? A black strip of cloth covered the man's eyes completely. How the hell did he do all that blindfolded? The rain continued to pound down, soaking both men. "All right buddy. You've got five seconds to put your hands on your head, or I'm gonna cap your ass."
The man laughed again. "I'd like to see you try." Suddenly, his hands went to his sides. Mike pounded out a shot, but, moving with incredible speed, the man drew a sword and blocked it! Mike knew the gun was of no more use here and dropped it, drawing his katana instead. Then, he got a good look at his opponent's weapon. It wasn't really a sword. Rather, it was a long bar of steel, round, ending in a point. A second point broke off shortly before the end of the shaft and curved backward, reminding Mike of a fireplace poker. The handle was of burnished red iron, and had two extensions at the hilt that broke off and circled around, protecting the hand. The figure rushed Mike, moving quickly, but the young man blocked. The two began a back and forth, their weapons ringing with the crash of steel on cold steel. The figure suffered no lack of awareness from his blindfold, prompting Mike to again wonder what was going on. Then, the whine of a hovercopter pierced the air. It was nearby, probably homing in on his transmitter. Mike rushed the figure again, their weapons clanging.
"Looks like my cavalry's here," he said. "Give yourself up."
"I think not," the cloaked man said. Then, with superhuman strength, the figure shoved him backwards. Mike nearly lost his balance, and the suspect took advantage. He thrust his weapon straight towards Mike's heart, the point driving home right through the Enforcer's armor. Mike stood, stunned, the katana dropping from his hand to the surface of the roof.
"Bye-bye, Enforcer," the figure said with a smirk. Then, the metal of this enemy's weapon began to glow a dull silver. Suddenly, a blast of energy blew Mike backward, the reverse point of the weapon breaking off a chunk of his armor. Mike flew back, landing several feet away, his eyes going glassy. The hovercopter broke through the clouds, its spotlight searching for the murder suspect. All it found was the young Enforcer, lying on the roof of the building, unconscious due to the loss of blood, his eyes closed.
Dark Rain
Chapter One: Cold Steel
It was raining. The water fell the ground in moderation, coming down from the dark night sky to wet the black surface of the road. The city, with its tall skyscrapers and streetlights, seemed to be an island in the middle of a dark ocean. So thought Class 2 Enforcer Michael Atner as he walked along one of the sidewalks in downtown Teal City. All around him, people covered by dark cloaks rushed to get out of the rain, but he did not join them. He continued his easy stride, letting the rain wash through his short blond hair and down his neck to the dark blue of his torso armor. The young Enforcer, barely 23, loved the rain; the clean feeling it gave him, the sound of it splashing against the concrete of the sidewalk made him feel at peace. He wore the typical uniform of an Enforcer: dull blue torso armor with his number stenciled on the chest, it's extensions covering his shoulders, but leaving his muscular arms bare, light blue jeans, black boots.
Mike had made quite an impression on the older Enforcers as a friendly, dependable, athletic recruit, his brown eyes often carrying a smile. He had also scored points with the brass with his steady aim and skills with the katana strapped to his back.
As Mike continued to walk the beat, he heard the crash of steel on steel. As he directed his attention to the source of the noise, a nearby alley, he heard more clanking. "Swordfight," he said to himself. Just as he reached the alley, the sounds stopped. He looked in to see a single man lying on the ground. Jogging over, Mike pressed his hand to the dead man's neck. No pulse. Mike grabbed his shoulder comm. "Enforcer Atner here. I've got a dead male here, possible duel victim."
"Roger that Atner," a female voice said. "Enforcer Burton en route to your location."
"Roger that." Mike snapped off his transmitter. As he began looking around, something crashed into him, knocking him forward. Mike managed to turn it into a shoulder roll, and sprang up to turn and face the mouth of the alley, just in time to see a cloaked man rush out. "Hey, you! Freeze!" Mike yelled as he ran after the figure, but the man didn't stop. Mike again grabbed his transmitter. "Enforcer Atner, now in pursuit of possible murder suspect, heading south on foot on Shen Street." Mike snapped off the comm. and raced after the figure, slashing through the puddles formed by the rain. By now, the streets were nearly deserted, and Mike and the cloaked figure were alone in rushing down the street. "I said freeze!" Mike shouted, but the other man didn't even hesitate. The rain was coming down hard now, and Mike drew his sidearm. The gun was compact, yet delivered a good punch, and held eight bullets. Mike fired into the air, the bang of the gun filling the dark night. Again the figure didn't hesitate. Suddenly, he cut left, heading towards Center Square, the middle of the city. Mike followed, close behind him. They ran between to buildings and came out across the middle of the massive courtyard. The suspect headed towards the corner of one building, reached it, then began to run up the side of the building! Mike set his gun back in his holster.If you think that's gonna stop me, you better think again. Then, he began to run up the building, just as the figure had. As he reached the roof, he caught the figure coming at him, and blocked a punch to the head. He twisted the man's arm and threw him over his shoulder, towards the middle of the skyscraper's roof. I wasn't made an Enforcer for nothing, moron, he thought.
The two now stood several feet apart. Mike drew his gun. "Hands up," he said. "You're under arrest for a Code 15, which is assault of an Enforcer, and a Code 7, which is murder."
The figure laughed softly, his face hidden under his hood, and almost lazily raised his arms. "You're not bad," he said.
"Hands on your head," Atner said forcefully, ignoring the comment. "Get down on your knees."
"I don't think so."
"Do it pal, or I'll shove resisting arrest onto your list of charges." The figure threw back his head, and his hood fell away, revealing long brown hair and a...blindfold? A black strip of cloth covered the man's eyes completely. How the hell did he do all that blindfolded? The rain continued to pound down, soaking both men. "All right buddy. You've got five seconds to put your hands on your head, or I'm gonna cap your ass."
The man laughed again. "I'd like to see you try." Suddenly, his hands went to his sides. Mike pounded out a shot, but, moving with incredible speed, the man drew a sword and blocked it! Mike knew the gun was of no more use here and dropped it, drawing his katana instead. Then, he got a good look at his opponent's weapon. It wasn't really a sword. Rather, it was a long bar of steel, round, ending in a point. A second point broke off shortly before the end of the shaft and curved backward, reminding Mike of a fireplace poker. The handle was of burnished red iron, and had two extensions at the hilt that broke off and circled around, protecting the hand. The figure rushed Mike, moving quickly, but the young man blocked. The two began a back and forth, their weapons ringing with the crash of steel on cold steel. The figure suffered no lack of awareness from his blindfold, prompting Mike to again wonder what was going on. Then, the whine of a hovercopter pierced the air. It was nearby, probably homing in on his transmitter. Mike rushed the figure again, their weapons clanging.
"Looks like my cavalry's here," he said. "Give yourself up."
"I think not," the cloaked man said. Then, with superhuman strength, the figure shoved him backwards. Mike nearly lost his balance, and the suspect took advantage. He thrust his weapon straight towards Mike's heart, the point driving home right through the Enforcer's armor. Mike stood, stunned, the katana dropping from his hand to the surface of the roof.
"Bye-bye, Enforcer," the figure said with a smirk. Then, the metal of this enemy's weapon began to glow a dull silver. Suddenly, a blast of energy blew Mike backward, the reverse point of the weapon breaking off a chunk of his armor. Mike flew back, landing several feet away, his eyes going glassy. The hovercopter broke through the clouds, its spotlight searching for the murder suspect. All it found was the young Enforcer, lying on the roof of the building, unconscious due to the loss of blood, his eyes closed.