Star Crossed Fanfic

desertjedi · Post by **desertjedi** » 2004-04-05 05:41pm

WOOHOOOOO!!!! Uh wait a sec. So now how long am I going to have to wait for the next chapter?

Comosicus · Post by **Comosicus** » 2004-04-05 05:53pm

Our prayers has been answered. Another chapter has arrived.

And it seems that Luke will be the one to bring balance to the Force, not Vader.

Nice Easter present. Thank you Stravo.

Eaglewood · Post by **Eaglewood** » 2004-04-05 06:18pm

Awesome!

Injects himself with more Starcrossed goodness....

Then suffers another 2 month withdrawal until the next post in this summer...

Rogue 9 · Post by **Rogue 9** » 2004-04-05 06:21pm

Hehehehehehe. I'm still on chapter 53. I just had to peek when I saw that he'd updated (for the first time since I started reading it) and Rogue 9 caught my eye.

darthdavid · Post by **darthdavid** » 2004-04-05 06:51pm

MUST...HAVE...MORE...BLEARGH...

Trogdor · Post by **Trogdor** » 2004-04-05 07:40pm

Excellent, chapter Stravo! Now, before I go back into SC withdrawal, I've got to say you're the only fic writer I've ever seen that actually adressed the fact that, according to Timetales at least, the purpose of the Chosen One was to heal the Schism that seperated the Force into the light and dark side. Well done, and post a new chapter ASAP, please!

Darth Yoshi · Post by **Darth Yoshi** » 2004-04-05 10:05pm

SWEET! Sounds like a 3-way fleet battle coming up. I can't wait...

Post by **Ghost Rider** » 2004-04-05 11:38pm

Sweet

This should be a battle.

Rogue 9 · Post by **Rogue 9** » 2004-04-06 12:21am

Sweet. Wonder how many Warbirds "I'll" get to torpedo.

Making ace on capital ships... Its too great.

Shroom Man 777 · Post by **Shroom Man 777** » 2004-04-06 01:44pm

Why doesn't Luke do what Mace Windu did in the Clone Wars cartoons?

Comosicus · Post by **Comosicus** » 2004-04-06 02:01pm

Shroom Man 777 wrote:Why doesn't Luke do what Mace Windu did in the Clone Wars cartoons?

He couldn't watch Cartoon Network on Tatooine

Stravo · Post by **Stravo** » 2004-04-06 05:48pm

Can I say this here. What the FUCK has happened to ASVS?? I posted the latest chpater in there and it has vanished under a sea of utter crap. I don;t see any of the regulars anymore. Should I just stop posting in there until things settle down?

Also the Force schism thing was something I was exploring early on and goes in line with a theme in the stories that some of you may have picked on that heroes in my opinion tend to do.

They are offered two paths....they make their own.

But hold your judgments on whether Luke will bring balance to the Force or whether he is preparing the way for the Chosen one.

And to the Tarkin line folks....starcrossed is literrally littered with classic lines from the trilogy and TOS movies. its a neat little gift to those paying attention and an homage to those lines which have remained with me since childhood.

Glad everyone enjoyed this chapter!

Singular Quartet · Post by **Singular Quartet** » 2004-04-06 06:25pm

Hey, cool, a new chapter. Sw33t, Stravo, very nice.

Captain Cyran · Post by **Captain Cyran** » 2004-04-06 07:06pm

Holy Shit! It lives!

I just read Stravo, and it took me alittle while for everything to click, but when it did I enjoyed it. I can't wait to see another giant fleet battle, I really can't. I also noticed the "I owe you one." Line in there, nice.

Shroom Man 777 · Post by **Shroom Man 777** » 2004-04-07 12:11pm

FLEET WARZ NOW!!!

Sunstreaker · Post by **Sunstreaker** » 2004-04-07 02:09pm

Excellent chapter! I like the “other path” ideal Luke is following. On a side note, I hope to see more Leia and Mara interaction.

Captain Cyran · Post by **Captain Cyran** » 2004-04-07 03:36pm

Sunstreaker wrote:Excellent chapter! I like the “other path” ideal Luke is following. On a side note, I hope to see more Leia and Mara interaction.

We all want to see MUCH more of that.

What?

Rogue 9 · Post by **Rogue 9** » 2004-04-07 04:08pm

Captain_Cyran wrote:
Sunstreaker wrote:Excellent chapter! I like the “other path” ideal Luke is following. On a side note, I hope to see more Leia and Mara interaction.
We all want to see MUCH more of that.

What?

Hehehehehehe. Poor newbie. Sunstreaker, these people are seriously sick, just so you know. You say "interaction" between two individuals of the female persuasion and they immediately think 'LESBIAN PORN!'

Comosicus · Post by **Comosicus** » 2004-04-07 06:00pm

Rogue 9 wrote:
Captain_Cyran wrote:
Sunstreaker wrote:Excellent chapter! I like the “other path” ideal Luke is following. On a side note, I hope to see more Leia and Mara interaction.
We all want to see MUCH more of that.

What?
Hehehehehehe. Poor newbie. Sunstreaker, these people are seriously sick, just so you know. You say "interaction" between two individuals of the female persuasion and they immediately think 'LESBIAN PORN!'

And what's wrong with that?

Sunstreaker · Post by **Sunstreaker** » 2004-04-07 06:48pm

Comosicus wrote:
Rogue 9 wrote: Hehehehehehe. Poor newbie. Sunstreaker, these people are seriously sick, just so you know. You say "interaction" between two individuals of the female persuasion and they immediately think 'LESBIAN PORN!'

And what's wrong with that?

I suppose I could have mentioned how the comic references to Klingon stereotypes or the argument between Tom and the Falcon made me smile. Or I could have mentioned how enjoyable it was to see Luke and Kirk working together to fight back the evil that is DarkStar. But no, I specifically mentioned Leia and Mara together, in hopes that Sravo would use his artistic license to develop a bond between the two...that would make the Jabba's Palace Lesbian fantasies look like a G rated family film

Mlenk · Post by **Mlenk** » 2004-04-07 07:11pm

Finally, at long last, a new chapter!

Great stuff, Stravo.

darthdavid · Post by **darthdavid** » 2004-04-07 07:18pm

Is Jadiza Dax still allive in this Fic? I don't seem to remember exactly what happened with DS 9. If so a lesbian 3 way between her, leia and Mara is in order. If not I don't think anyone would mind a minor continuity breach or at the very least a dream.

El Moose Monstero · Post by **El Moose Monstero** » 2004-04-07 08:55pm

darthdavid wrote:Is Jadiza Dax still allive in this Fic? I don't seem to remember exactly what happened with DS 9. If so a lesbian 3 way between her, leia and Mara is in order. If not I don't think anyone would mind a minor continuity breach or at the very least a dream.

We've already seen Ezri at DS9 when Kirk tries to get to the wormhole, she says she'll open fire on them if she has to.

Glocksman · Post by **Glocksman** » 2004-04-08 12:37am

Excellent! I was beginning to wonder if Stravo had forgotten about us.

Nice to see you remembered.

Stravo · Post by **Stravo** » 2004-04-08 12:44am

Glocksman, didn't know you were a fan. Cool!