Of Elven Things

AnimeJet · Post by **AnimeJet** » 2004-07-01 03:17am

I keep thinking i should stick my art all in one topic instead of posting multiple topics.. perhaps next time i'll just make a general AnimeJet art topic o_O

Linky-dink

The elven archer is obscenely skinny, i don't like that.. it was an accident, i swear! Oh well, C&C >_<

Shinova · Post by **Shinova** » 2004-07-01 03:30am

AnimeJet wrote: The elven archer is obscenely skinny, i don't like that.. it was an accident, i swear! Oh well, C&C >_<

It is still better than anything I can hand-draw at the moment.

Both chicks look hot......you're headed in the right direction.

Post by **Zaia** » 2004-07-01 01:21pm

WOW.

That's really very good, hon. Nice work.

DPDarkPrimus · Post by **DPDarkPrimus** » 2004-07-01 01:59pm

Crazy good.

Post by **RogueIce** » 2004-07-01 04:29pm

The one on the rock...her boobies looks weird.

darthdavid · Post by **darthdavid** » 2004-07-01 05:33pm

Good. Better than I can draw. Trust me.

AnimeJet · Post by **AnimeJet** » 2004-07-01 08:14pm

RogueIce wrote:The one on the rock...her boobies looks weird.

It's probably the bikini.. thing.

In retrospect, i should have cropped the image more on the left and then moved the moon to the right a little more, would have been better composition.. oh well.

Thanks for the comments so far.

Shinova · Post by **Shinova** » 2004-07-01 08:19pm

RogueIce wrote:The one on the rock...her boobies looks weird.

It's an anime rack. Perfectly normal.

Comosicus · Post by **Comosicus** » 2004-07-02 06:49am

Good job.

Asst. Asst. Lt. Cmdr. Smi · Post by **Asst. Asst. Lt. Cmdr. Smi** » 2004-07-03 09:40am

That's excellent work you've got right there.

Bob McDob · Post by **Bob McDob** » 2004-07-03 12:03pm

I actually really like the archer. The mermaid's face looks a bit odd in profile like that - or maybe the outlining was too dark, I think it looks a bit odd.

Regardless, fine work.

Post by **Dalton** » 2004-07-03 12:19pm

The elven archer's face seems a bit flat, but otherwise I like it.

Post by **Rob Wilson** » 2004-07-03 12:52pm

AnimeJet wrote:I keep thinking i should stick my art all in one topic instead of posting multiple topics.. perhaps next time i'll just make a general AnimeJet art topic o_O

Linky-dink

The elven archer is obscenely skinny, i don't like that.. it was an accident, i swear! Oh well, C&C >_<

Very nice. The archer looks very young (probably because she's so skinny), and the pose for the mermaid is pure T&A

You have some very good drawing skills AJ, very good.

Darth Yoshi · Post by **Darth Yoshi** » 2004-07-03 09:21pm

YAY! Elven mermaid!

Melikes.

AnimeJet · Post by **AnimeJet** » 2004-07-04 05:27pm

Yea, i'm trying to work on the different angles of the face, so i draw them more often, wooh. Thanks for all the comments and critiques

And a belated happy 18th birthday, Yoshi.

Darth Yoshi · Post by **Darth Yoshi** » 2004-07-05 01:16am

Thanks.

Post by **haas mark** » 2004-07-05 04:14am

Shinova wrote:
RogueIce wrote:The one on the rock...her boobies looks weird.
It's an anime rack. Perfectly normal.

But they look detached, like they're floating in front of her..

Bob McDob · Post by **Bob McDob** » 2004-07-05 08:36am

I think the problem has more to do with the bikini (choker? not down with fashion) top, rather than any intrinisc fault of the boobs themselves.

Post by **Rob Wilson** » 2004-07-05 10:21am

Bob McDob wrote:I think the problem has more to do with the bikini (choker? not down with fashion) top, rather than any intrinisc fault of the boobs themselves.

It's the placement of the arms, they isolate and push together the breasts, plus the pose itself doesn't help.

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