Gandalf does poetry 2.0 EDITED

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Gandalf does poetry 2.0 EDITED

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I wrote:I see you
Your face rules in my mind
I see nothing but you
I wish it were blind

Thoughts of you fill me
Swarming to and fro
Often they bring glee
But more often bring woe

You're like a disease
You overcome me
All I seek is release
I fear I'll never be free
EDIT: Forgot the last verse.
I wrote:Yet without you I am worthless
A void with no form
Engulfed in a pain that is deathless
Wrapped in my own storm
Questions? Comments?
"Oh no, oh yeah, tell me how can it be so fair
That we dying younger hiding from the police man over there
Just for breathing in the air they wanna leave me in the chair
Electric shocking body rocking beat streeting me to death"

- A.B. Original, Report to the Mist

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- George Carlin
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