Battle of the Hymn. (a second look.)

Temjin · Post by **Temjin** » 2004-09-19 11:48pm

Good Chapter. I can't wait to see what happens next.

Edit: Forgot to mention this when I posted this, but as I was reading the chapter, the song "The March of Cambreadth" came on. Just so very appropriate.

Rogue 9 · Post by **Rogue 9** » 2004-09-20 12:08am

Good chapter, though it suffers from a distinct lack of me and my elite stabbity sword skills.

darthdavid · Post by **darthdavid** » 2004-09-20 12:10am

What are you on? You were right there stabbing the fucking mega morlock unless i'm mistaken or stupid or on crack or something.

Rogue 9 · Post by **Rogue 9** » 2004-09-20 12:20am

darthdavid wrote:What are you on? You were right there stabbing the fucking mega morlock unless i'm mistaken or stupid or on crack or something.

That was RogueIce.

Grand Moff Yenchin · Post by **Grand Moff Yenchin** » 2004-09-20 12:22am

Kick ass battle, kick ass story

phongn · Post by **phongn** » 2004-09-20 12:34am

Great chapter, Knife.

Stravo · Post by **Stravo** » 2004-09-20 01:18am

Excellent battle scene and very well written. Glad to see my advice on writers block has really got your craetive juices flowing.

I like the style of narration and this is coming from a guy who never did like first person very much.

Keep it up.

Agent Fisher · Post by **Agent Fisher** » 2004-09-20 01:40am

Rogue 9 wrote:Good chapter, though it suffers from a distinct lack of me and my elite stabbity sword skills.

same here

consequences · Post by **consequences** » 2004-09-20 06:46pm

Waah! I don't exist! Waah!

Either that, or I am Ninja, unseen by all, including author.

If Rogue 9's elite stabbity skills make it in before me, I'm tenedering complaint to the management.

Knife · Post by **Knife** » 2004-09-20 07:02pm

consequences wrote:Waah! I don't exist! Waah!

Either that, or I am Ninja, unseen by all, including author.

If Rogue 9's elite stabbity skills make it in before me, I'm tenedering complaint to the management.

Actually, I have you on my list for my company. Haven't assigned you to any specific lance yet though. Don't worry, there is plenty of time to die later.

darthdavid · Post by **darthdavid** » 2004-09-20 07:16pm

What is my fate, considering that, in 7 years i'll be almost 22...

Lonestar · Post by **Lonestar** » 2004-09-20 09:03pm

Actually, Knife, I was stunned that Tysroc was the medic. Especially as Evil Sadistic Bastard ( our resident Singaporean Combat Medic) would be the closest thing to a doctor we'd have.

Knife · Post by **Knife** » 2004-09-20 10:12pm

darthdavid wrote:What is my fate, considering that, in 7 years i'll be almost 22...

Your were just part of the Home Guard in that battle, more to come. Like I mentioned earlier, the Home Guard has a bigger part coming.

Knife · Post by **Knife** » 2004-09-20 10:13pm

Lonestar wrote:Actually, Knife, I was stunned that Tysroc was the medic. Especially as Evil Sadistic Bastard ( our resident Singaporean Combat Medic) would be the closest thing to a doctor we'd have.

True, and I do want to work him as such, just that Big T works in a hospital in RL and that stuck in my head while I was writting. Tis nothing personal against ESB nor diminishing or promoting Tsyroc's personal abilities.

darthdavid · Post by **darthdavid** » 2004-09-20 11:37pm

Knife wrote:
darthdavid wrote:What is my fate, considering that, in 7 years i'll be almost 22...
Your were just part of the Home Guard in that battle, more to come. Like I mentioned earlier, the Home Guard has a bigger part coming.

Whoopee.

Temjin · Post by **Temjin** » 2004-09-20 11:46pm

darthdavid wrote:Whoopee.

Oh, come on. He said you were in the Home Guard and that the guard was going to have a bigger part coming. You could at least be a little bit thankful.

darthdavid · Post by **darthdavid** » 2004-09-20 11:53pm

Temjin wrote:
darthdavid wrote:Whoopee.
Oh, come on. He said you were in the Home Guard and that the guard was going to have a bigger part coming. You could at least be a little bit thankful.

Damn the internet and it's lack of embeded emotion. That was a good whoopee. You know, like a happy cowboy whoopee. Not a sarcastic "im a smartass" whoopee. So just to be clear, I'm quite happy with my role in said fanfic. Infact, I'm glad that I'm officially alive in this universe and that I wasn't grouped with those who ate the bad food and died...

Temjin · Post by **Temjin** » 2004-09-20 11:55pm

Okay, sorry about the mix up.

darthdavid · Post by **darthdavid** » 2004-09-21 12:02am

Temjin wrote:Okay, sorry about the mix up.

S'ok. My fault for not making use of smilies or some other way of identifing emotion. After all it's kinda hard to figure out exactly what someone means from straight text without any markup especially when you use an expression that's generally sarcastic and...Oh fuck i'm rambling now. Well you get the point so i'm getting some sleep.

Lonestar · Post by **Lonestar** » 2004-09-21 11:25pm

You know, the argument could be made that God does exist in this universe, since someone decided to play a cruel joke on us.

Dargos · Post by **Dargos** » 2004-09-22 10:47am

OMG...OMFG....I finally get a bit part in a Fanfic...and I die. Well..at least I took down something before I bit the dust. Thanks Knife..you really made my day

Companion Cube · Post by **Companion Cube** » 2004-09-22 02:06pm

This fic's just as kickass as it was a few months back, perhaps even more so;
Good work, man.

speaker-to-trolls · Post by **speaker-to-trolls** » 2004-09-22 02:09pm

Consistently brilliant, looking forward to the next chapter (presumably the next few will be the Nightwatch holding the fort until the westerners get there).

Post by **RogueIce** » 2004-09-22 06:20pm

Dargos wrote:OMG...OMFG....I finally get a bit part in a Fanfic...and I die. Well..at least I took down something before I bit the dust. Thanks Knife..you really made my day

This is what happens when you're the "stealth" Warwolf.

consequences · Post by **consequences** » 2004-09-22 06:56pm

RogueIce wrote:
Dargos wrote:OMG...OMFG....I finally get a bit part in a Fanfic...and I die. Well..at least I took down something before I bit the dust. Thanks Knife..you really made my day
This is what happens when you're the "stealth" Warwolf.

*appears out of the foreground behind RogueIce*

Ahem.

*disappears back into foregound before he can turn, leaving a sign on Ice's back, saying 'Kick me, I'm socially inept'*