Star Crossed Fanfic

Grand Admiral Thrawn · Post by **Grand Admiral Thrawn** » 2002-11-04 05:12pm

*gasp* I'll be against Lord Wong!!! And MoO! And Bean!

willburns84 · Post by **willburns84** » 2002-11-04 05:21pm

Nice touch with Wong, Ossus, and Bean, Stavro. Cute.

Good chapter as always. Good to see that the Gorn and Tholians have returned to the spotlight - after so many years of darkness on the screen.

Soontir C'boath · Post by **Soontir C'boath** » 2002-11-04 05:25pm

Ohh this is just Fantastic....Go BEAN GO!! ...though I was expecting Shepard with the blowing up part.......lol

Cyaround,
Jason

Luke Starkiller · Post by **Luke Starkiller** » 2002-11-04 05:43pm

Kazadum? Nice touch.

Very cool chapter and a good teaser for the next one, Operation Hermes.

starfury · Post by **starfury** » 2002-11-04 05:50pm

nice, very nice. the next imperial fleet is already on it's way to the milky way.

Post by **Kuja** » 2002-11-04 05:53pm

Hmmm, I see Kelly, Bean, MoO, and Wong. Think a certain assassin might be hired to assist the Empire?

But I digress. Excellent chapter, Stravo. Thrawn was reproduced PERFECTLY. Heh, only he would go up against Vader like that.

So, Picard's trying to get the Gorn and Tholians into the picture, huh? Should be interesting, as well as whatever Worf's planning. Can't wait to see the Shadow Fleet in action again.

And Kittaine! Man, he really hit Mara solid, there. That was unexpected, and really good.

Post by **Mr Bean** » 2002-11-04 05:57pm

Hmmm, I see Kelly, Bean, MoO, and Wong. Think a certain assassin might be hired to assist the Empire?

Arn't you forgetting Histroy IG-88?

POSSIBLE SPOILER WARNING

Where was IG-88 at the time of Endor? IG-88A that is...

Post by **Kuja** » 2002-11-04 05:59pm

Mr Bean wrote:
Hmmm, I see Kelly, Bean, MoO, and Wong. Think a certain assassin might be hired to assist the Empire?
Arn't you forgetting Histroy IG-88?

POSSIBLE SPOILER WARNING

Where was IG-88 at the time of Endor? IG-88A that is...

*thwap* Do I look like IG-88A to you? NO!

Besides: nothing ventured, nothing gained.

Ted · Post by **Ted** » 2002-11-04 06:05pm

IG-88E wrote:
Mr Bean wrote:
Hmmm, I see Kelly, Bean, MoO, and Wong. Think a certain assassin might be hired to assist the Empire?
Arn't you forgetting Histroy IG-88?

POSSIBLE SPOILER WARNING

Where was IG-88 at the time of Endor? IG-88A that is...
*thwap* Do I look like IG-88A to you? NO!

Besides: nothing ventured, nothing gained.

There's still 3 IG-88's to go through till we get our Iggy, so he wont be in the fic! WooHoo!

Post by **Kuja** » 2002-11-04 06:07pm

Are you a dumbass, Ted, or did you never read "Therefore, I Am: The tale of IG-88"?

Crazy_Vasey · Post by **Crazy_Vasey** » 2002-11-04 06:16pm

I was beginning to think Vader had gone soft there for a minute till he started choking Thrawn,

Captain Cyran · Post by **Captain Cyran** » 2002-11-04 07:03pm

I must apologize Stravo, I saw some posts mentioning Wong MoO and Bean and I thought "Oh no! It's gonna ruin the story plot." But so far it hasn't and I am sorry for my lack of faith Stravo.

Post by **Mr Bean** » 2002-11-04 07:06pm

I must apologize Stravo, I saw some posts mentioning Wong MoO and Bean and I thought "Oh no! It's gonna ruin the story plot." But so far it hasn't and I am sorry for my lack of faith Stravo.

*Holds up little Cookiedough Figuer of Kirk
REPENT SINNNER!

Post by **Sea Skimmer** » 2002-11-04 07:47pm

The latest chapter is most excellent. Though the idea of Wong opposing the Empire boggles ones mind..

Kelly Antilles · Post by **Kelly Antilles** » 2002-11-04 08:15pm

OMG, I made it into Star Crossed! I'm famous!!

Master of Ossus · Post by **Master of Ossus** » 2002-11-04 09:52pm

Wow, Stravo, I'm honored that you would insert me into your story, even if it turns out to be only a bit role. Thank you.

Stravo · Post by **Stravo** » 2002-11-05 12:29am

The cleaned up version of Star Crossed has had the last few paragraphs edited out so that it is now free of the offending addition of several folks. The Star Crossed with the tribute to my supporters remains on this thread as my own personal thank you. So if you don't like those last few paragraphs you can always go to the cleaned up thread.

BTW in terms of cannon - the cleaned up version is cannon just in case Star Crossed gets used in a debate.

I think this is the best solution and to avoid any further controversy, this story will now and forever remain netizen free (except for Kelly's character who actually has a purpose.)

Thanks everyone for your support and this is merely my attempt to make sure that you only get 100% quality from me and that the integrity of the story that brought you all in remians high.

Master of Ossus · Post by **Master of Ossus** » 2002-11-05 01:37am

Did you also take out Scooter and Graham Kennedy for the cleaned up version? Because I loved that scene.

Pcm979 · Post by **Pcm979** » 2002-11-05 06:52am

You mean Wong, Bean & MoO won't be making a return appearence?!?!
and is it just me or did you include Mr. Bean's run-on sentences on purpose?

P.S. MOOORE! NOW!

Post by **NecronLord** » 2002-11-05 08:12am

Gahh, I'm not in it

PeZook · Post by **PeZook** » 2002-11-05 09:32am

Kelly Antilles cocked her eyebrow and smirked.

You just had to do it, hadn't you, Stravo?

Are there any fanfics WITHOUT Kelly in this forum? Not that I'm tired of them, just curious

Stravo · Post by **Stravo** » 2002-11-05 10:48am

Master of Ossus wrote:Did you also take out Scooter and Graham Kennedy for the cleaned up version? Because I loved that scene.

No, MoO, THAT stays because it is funny as hell and I received ZERO complaints about its inclusion. Its just that last few paragraphs of this chapter that have been edited out. Who doesn't want to see Scooter die in a multi megaton explosion???

Ted · Post by **Ted** » 2002-11-05 10:57am

IG-88E wrote:Are you a dumbass, Ted, or did you never read "Therefore, I Am: The tale of IG-88"?

Never read it.

Post by **Kuja** » 2002-11-05 11:02am

I chose IG-88E because A-D were all destroyed. In fact, by the battle of Endor, all of them were gone.

Ted · Post by **Ted** » 2002-11-05 11:25am

IG-88E wrote:I chose IG-88E because A-D were all destroyed. In fact, by the battle of Endor, all of them were gone.

Ah, I thought that there would've been atleast a few left over by Endor, didn't think that in a year or two 4 would be destroyed.