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OK, I did a little editing to the end. Shoud be satisfactory and clear in meaning now.
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I'm still a bit confused as to the look on whose face and whether or not the proposal was for real.
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How about now?
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Much better!
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OK *whew* Glad I got it right.
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Temped... Nope, No winning comments from me, I'm going to quietly snigger over here in the background but I won't think of interuppting the "moment" you two are having

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*thwaps Bean*
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:wink:
Why, thank you Bean.
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*thwaps Bean*
Missed :P :wink:

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You know... I'm beginning to wonder what Iggy's going to pull out in order to get Spike. This has me very curious.
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Kelly Antilles wrote:You know... I'm beginning to wonder what Iggy's going to pull out in order to get Spike. This has me very curious.
:twisted: :twisted: :twisted:
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Iggy: Very cool. Can't wait for next chapter! :P
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Those last few lines confused me a bit...but I liked it! Oooh....suspense....Can't wait til next chapter!

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*heh* Good one. Spike's gonna be PISSED!
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Uh, Kelly? Spike's the one talking. "I win" is the message to convey TO Adam.
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IG-88E wrote:Uh, Kelly? Spike's the one talking. "I win" is the message to convey TO Adam.
Thanks for clarifying that....I wasn't sure about those lines right there...
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*reads back over it* Ok, verilon got me confused. Now I get it.
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did a little editing for clarification.
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Sounds good. I likes.
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Can't Phase Spike can we?

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It sounded clear to me, but not to other people.
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OMG....gave me the chills reading that....

I like that SO much....it was incredibly powerful....

Is there going to be another chapter...? If so, I would like to see how things play out between Spike and Adam's mother...
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*sniff* Way cool.
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