bab5 - minbiri dont surrender on the line

Enforcer Talen · Post by **Enforcer Talen** » 2004-12-03 09:31am

http://www.b5-dark-mirror.demon.co.uk/

awesome, awesome fanfic.

phongn · Post by **phongn** » 2004-12-03 12:16pm

Yes, it is, but you really need to learn how to describe things better

Enforcer Talen · Post by **Enforcer Talen** » 2004-12-03 12:27pm

I thot any bab5 fan knew what minbiri on the line meant =p

Prozac the Robert · Post by **Prozac the Robert** » 2004-12-03 01:04pm

Spoiler: (only from chapter 2 though, so not too bad I hope.)

By the way, my name is Susan Ivanova, and I have one question to ask you. A simple enough question, really.
"Captain, what do you want?"

Made me laugh in a shocked kind of way. Definitely plan to keep reading this.

Enforcer Talen · Post by **Enforcer Talen** » 2004-12-03 01:33pm

he's an awesome writer. I had about 10 pages of superb quotes like that -

and that intro of 'what do you want' was such an attention grabber.

evil invonava

the twists are surprising.

Prozac the Robert · Post by **Prozac the Robert** » 2004-12-03 02:05pm

Yeh, still reading it now, although I guess I'll stop for some food at some point...

starfury · Post by **starfury** » 2004-12-03 02:07pm

awesome fic, I had it twice already.

Enforcer Talen · Post by **Enforcer Talen** » 2004-12-03 03:03pm

reading it for the second time.

Id make a deal with the shadows so fast, lol.

Temjin · Post by **Temjin** » 2004-12-03 09:49pm

Holy shit....

I'm only on chapter 3 of part II in the first volume, and it's really good so far.

Enforcer Talen · Post by **Enforcer Talen** » 2004-12-03 10:57pm

it stays at that level or gets better.

volume 5 has some surprises tho

*spoilers*

at some point, I want to count up the number of planets destroyed. earth, mars, epsilon erindai, minbir, centauri, and zhadum dont even begin to start the count.