Short Story Series: Wanderers - A Hypocrites' War
I wrote this either in a fit of brilliance or sheer insanity last ... (*checks watch*) really early this morning. Not being a very good judge of my own work (that and I haven't written anything of note in a while), I wanted the opinion of others. Personally, I find it a painful read and I could probably add much more to it.
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“There are two kinds of people in the world: the kind who think it’s perfectly reasonable to strip-search a 13-year-old girl suspected of bringing ibuprofen to school, and the kind who think those people should be kept as far away from children as possible … Sometimes it’s hard to tell the difference between drug warriors and child molesters.” - Jacob Sullum[/size][/align]