Another one of my designs

Lord Revan · Post by **Lord Revan** » 2005-05-02 09:29am

This time it's Star Trek (well it's offically Star Trek anyway even most of the board won't except it)

the Era and manufacturer shoulf easy to recognice.

What do you think?
Any suggestions?

Firefox · Post by **Firefox** » 2005-05-02 10:55am

Cool. I've seen some designs similar to that. Is it a TOS design or pre?

Lord Revan · Post by **Lord Revan** » 2005-05-02 10:59am

Firefox wrote:Cool. I've seen some designs similar to that. Is it a TOS design or pre?

Look closer. While it's true that I'm not a master of making shitty designs like B&B's team, that about as clear of ENT era Design as it can get.

Post by **Dalton** » 2005-05-02 11:31am

Looks like a shovel.

Lord Revan · Post by **Lord Revan** » 2005-05-02 11:41am

Dalton wrote:Looks like a shovel.

yeah, but then it only a scout (you can use the (half of the) Brigde for scale reference and BTW do you like it?

Post by **Dalton** » 2005-05-02 11:57am

Lord Revan wrote:
Dalton wrote:Looks like a shovel.
yeah, but then it only a scout (you can use the (half of the) Brigde for scale reference and BTW do you like it?

Well, it looks okay for a rough outline. Do we get more detail soon?

Lord Revan · Post by **Lord Revan** » 2005-05-02 12:10pm

Dalton wrote:
Lord Revan wrote:
Dalton wrote:Looks like a shovel.
yeah, but then it only a scout (you can use the (half of the) Brigde for scale reference and BTW do you like it?
Well, it looks okay for a rough outline. Do we get more detail soon?

perhaps, it depend on my timetable as this like SW design is just something I do to past the time (and to visualize some of my ideas).

Lord Revan · Post by **Lord Revan** » 2005-05-02 05:38pm

Now with added detail (only 1,99€

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Lord Revan · Post by **Lord Revan** » 2005-05-02 06:09pm

OK no coments, so either it sucks even worse then the rest of ENT or I suck (at drawing).

Elheru Aran · Post by **Elheru Aran** » 2005-05-02 06:16pm

Is there a side view available? It looks good, but I'm not sure if the nacelles are in line with the saucer or not...

Lord Revan · Post by **Lord Revan** » 2005-05-02 06:20pm

Elheru Aran wrote:Is there a side view available? It looks good, but I'm not sure if the nacelles are in line with the saucer or not...

I tried to make a side view but it wasn't what I wanted and the nacelle pylon are at 45 degree angle to hull so they're "above" the saucer

Spanky The Dolphin · Post by **Spanky The Dolphin** » 2005-05-02 10:46pm

Seems to resemble the design of the ENT Era Intrepid.

Utsanomiko · Post by **Utsanomiko** » 2005-05-03 12:37am

Spanky The Dolphin wrote:Seems to resemble the design of the ENT Era Intrepid.

Then he should have just drawn the Intrepid with a new bridge and nacelles.

Lord Revan · Post by **Lord Revan** » 2005-05-03 08:14am

Yeah it looks a bit like Intrepid (ENT era), but it is also smaller (the correct Intrepid saucer would too small for this design).

Dangermouse · Post by **Dangermouse** » 2005-05-03 02:35pm

Dumb question: What do the two smaller pics in the upper left corner represent?

Elheru Aran · Post by **Elheru Aran** » 2005-05-03 03:01pm

Dangermouse wrote:Dumb question: What do the two smaller pics in the upper left corner represent?

The bridge, I presume?

Lord Revan · Post by **Lord Revan** » 2005-05-03 03:11pm

Elheru Aran wrote:
Dangermouse wrote:Dumb question: What do the two smaller pics in the upper left corner represent?
The bridge, I presume?

Yeah they're the bridge

there's now front view, but it may need some work.

Post by **Dalton** » 2005-05-03 03:16pm

Hrm. I think generally the support struts attach to the bottom of the warp nacelles.

Elheru Aran · Post by **Elheru Aran** » 2005-05-03 03:18pm

Your pylons are waaaaaaayyy too narrow, I'm afraid. They're also too long; measure them up against the ones in your top view and you'll see what I mean.

I'd thicken them up a fair bit, to about three-fourths of the nacelles' width, and then bring them down to just above the saucer.

Other than that, coming along nicely. The front of the saucer, especially, looks nice.

Lord Revan · Post by **Lord Revan** » 2005-05-03 03:25pm

Elheru Aran wrote:Your pylons are waaaaaaayyy too narrow, I'm afraid. They're also too long; measure them up against the ones in your top view and you'll see what I mean.

I'd thicken them up a fair bit, to about three-fourths of the nacelles' width, and then bring them down to just above the saucer.

Other than that, coming along nicely. The front of the saucer, especially, looks nice.

well the pylon are as long as th one in top view (I DID measure them). the I can probaly do.

Elheru Aran · Post by **Elheru Aran** » 2005-05-03 04:29pm

The thing is, the pylons are slanted. That means that a top view will *not* have the same length as a front view-- the front view will be longer, true, but what I'm getting at is that you can't use the same length as a top view on a front view... er... if that makes sense...

Lord Revan · Post by **Lord Revan** » 2005-05-03 04:48pm

Elheru Aran wrote:The thing is, the pylons are slanted. That means that a top view will *not* have the same length as a front view-- the front view will be longer, true, but what I'm getting at is that you can't use the same length as a top view on a front view... er... if that makes sense...

the nacelles can't be in different location relative to hull either.

EDIT: fixed the nacelles (including the pylons) (also completed half of bridge (inside)).

Lord Revan · Post by **Lord Revan** » 2005-05-03 05:58pm

Well what do think (note the color of nacelle blow and the sensor domes is a place holder)?

Elheru Aran · Post by **Elheru Aran** » 2005-05-03 06:02pm

Looks *much* better now. A hair deeper blue, perhaps, on the nacelles. Other than that, absolutely no complaints. Goin' well...

Lord Revan · Post by **Lord Revan** » 2005-05-03 06:05pm

Elheru Aran wrote:Looks *much* better now. A hair deeper blue, perhaps, on the nacelles. Other than that, absolutely no complaints. Goin' well...

*Ahem*

(note the color of nacelle blow and the sensor domes is a place holder)?

apart of the missing "the" that should tell something