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I'm expecting him to get in the mother of all duels between him, Nemesis, maybe Mara, and Vader. :twisted:
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Great chapter, man, I didn't really think Kelly was going to die, btw, what is a gantry?

Now people, when thining about Kahn and Thrawn, remember this quote...

"This is getting out of hand, now we have two of them"

btw, how many worlds will burn by the time this is over anyway?
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FaxModem1 wrote:Great chapter, man, I didn't really think Kelly was going to die, btw, what is a gantry?

Now people, when thining about Kahn and Thrawn, remember this quote...

"This is getting out of hand, now we have two of them"

btw, how many worlds will burn by the time this is over anyway?
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FaxModem1 wrote:Great chapter, man, I didn't really think Kelly was going to die, btw, what is a gantry?
A gantry is a moveable platform, in this case something like a catwalk that is not fixed to that one maintenace station I think.
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I can see Wesley killing himself out of remorse, maybe in such a way as to take one of the major players on the Imperial side out.
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Damn you killed Kelly :evil: But anyway if just Wesley gets his head cut off or something else very very mean, im cool with it :P
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FaxModem1 wrote:Great chapter, man, I didn't really think Kelly was going to die, btw, what is a gantry?
A gantry is a sort of platform/frame used in construction jobs. Ref:

1. A mount for a traveling crane consisting of a large archlike or bridgelike frame designed to move along a set of tracks.
2. A similar spanning frame supporting a group of railway signals over several tracks.
3. Aerospace. A massive vertical frame structure used in assembling or servicing a rocket, especially at a launch site.
4. A support for a barrel lying on its side.
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Hi,

I just want to express my appreciation for 'Star Crossed'. It is easily one of the best ST vs. SW fanfics I've ever read. The 'darkside' version of Luke is chilling, but the presence of Han in the background is intreguing. I think that all the action is well-presented and impartially decided. I also think that the characterisations are spot-on.

What will happen to Wesley, I wonder? More importantly, what will happen when Thrawn arrives. I suspect his loyalty to the Empire might falter if he decides that the weapons he needs to beat the Vong are waiting for him in the Star Trek galaxy.

By the way, let Leia prove her Jedi credentials by killing Wesley. I was going to give the character a chance, but now he has turned darksider, he has outlived his usefulness to Q's side.
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:shock: Y... y.... yo.... you.... you KILLED ME!!!!!!!!!!! YOU ACTUALLY KILLED ME!!! *faints*


((really great, Stravo, as usual))
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True...he killed you but you got tell Wesley off...still overall great chapter.
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Not to repeat an earlier post, but...

You killed Kelly! YOU BASTARD!

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Even still, another compelling chapter in this superb drama.
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For some reason I don't think she's dead.
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I didn't want to say anything, but the old maxim goes something like:

No body, no death.

Like with other figures in the mythos of Star Wars, just because the body is dead, doesn't mean that the person is gone forever.
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CorSec wrote:I didn't want to say anything, but the old maxim goes something like:

No body, no death.

Like with other figures in the mythos of Star Wars, just because the body is dead, doesn't mean that the person is gone forever.
Or, something I've seen in several books..."Did you see the body?" If you don't see the body, you can't be sure.
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Grand Admiral Thrawn wrote:I want lightsabers.
I want you.






In the STORY! Not like that, you pervs.
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I have to join the chorus saying great fanfic Stravo!
The plot is great, and you have written the characters well. But all that has already, been said. Keep up the great work!
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Mr Flibble wrote:I have to join the chorus saying great fanfic Stravo!
The plot is great, and you have written the characters well. But all that has already, been said. Keep up the great work!
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Let me add to Dark by saying: Welcome to SD.net, n00b! *poke*
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y'know... I'm not brave enough to poke Mr. Flibble. You should see what he does when he's angry. *shudders and huddles with Cat*
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Yes we can't have that now can we Mr Flibble

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Wesley versus Luke. FIGHT.

Luke Wins. FATALITY.
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All i want is some Ewoks with friggin laser beams on their heads!!

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Rightous Fist Of Heaven wrote:All i want is some Ewoks with friggin laser beams on their heads!!

j/k :P
WE have some ill tempered Mynocks with laser beams on their tails....
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Stravo wrote:
Rightous Fist Of Heaven wrote:All i want is some Ewoks with friggin laser beams on their heads!!

j/k :P
WE have some ill tempered Mynocks with laser beams on their tails....
Don't you mean distempered mutant mynocks? :)
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Hey just finished reading it. Damn good story Stravo. Evil Wesely is cool. :D To bad Kelly died. :(
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