The Fall of Turin (originally TGG based)

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thejester
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Post by thejester »

Yeah, I'm enjoying it and would like to see a bit more.
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Junghalli
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I am starting university now so updates will be coming more slowly from now on, sorry.
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Enforcer Talen
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Post by Enforcer Talen »

Heh, I was getting all sorts of twinges reading this. Very good combat sequences, although Im kind of surprised the ground troops arent doing atrocities in reponse.

Those chicks are wicked crazy though. Its a good, well thought out story, and Ill be followingit.
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