The Defence of Kamino- some strong language and large images

Alexus · Post by **Alexus** » 2006-12-28 07:35am

I started this as just the first 2 pages, and then I got carried away. Sorry for the censors, but I posted them on a pussier forum and had to edit out the stronger words, and I don't want to upload the originals. Hope you enjoy the tale of the massively undersized Clone Wars!

EDIT: Censors are off for the first part.

To be continued...

Shroom Man 777 · Post by **Shroom Man 777** » 2006-12-28 12:07pm

That was profoundly stupid

On that note, more humor.

Mark S · Post by **Mark S** » 2006-12-28 02:48pm

Did you draw this or are you just writing over the real dialog of some comic? If you drew it, well done but even for humor it's totally out of character.

Shroom Man 777 · Post by **Shroom Man 777** » 2006-12-29 12:59am

That's kind of the point.

Stark · Post by **Stark** » 2006-12-29 01:03am

That is awesome.

Darth Raptor · Post by **Darth Raptor** » 2006-12-29 03:33am

I thought it was pretty damned funny, actually.

Instant Sunrise · Post by **Instant Sunrise** » 2006-12-29 03:51am

I'm a complete asshole about this kind of stuff but your lettering needs work. Always center-justify the text in the speech bubbles, and fill out the space in them. Right now it just looks ugly the way you have the columns of text left-justified in the middle of the speech bubbles.

It's a fairly minor issure, but it just irritates the FUCK out of me when I see it.

The writing is pretty good, not terribly in character, but it is still funny.

Alexus · Post by **Alexus** » 2006-12-29 04:52am

Did you draw this or are you just writing over the real dialog of some comic? If you drew it, well done but even for humor it's totally out of character.

As Shroom Man so eloquently pointed out, that IS the humour.

I'm a complete asshole about this kind of stuff but your lettering needs work. Always center-justify the text in the speech bubbles, and fill out the space in them. Right now it just looks ugly the way you have the columns of text left-justified in the middle of the speech bubbles.

It's a fairly minor issure, but it just irritates the FUCK out of me when I see it.

Yeah, that's the problem with paint

I'll use Picture It! from now on. Thanks for the feedback.

Thank you to everyone else for your comments, and here is part deux:

Yeah, that writing is awful. I'll remedy that for later 'comics'

Darth Raptor · Post by **Darth Raptor** » 2006-12-29 05:01am

Oh my fucking god! Keep this stuff coming!

Einhander Sn0m4n · Post by **Einhander Sn0m4n** » 2006-12-29 06:48am

Darth Raptor wrote:Oh my fucking god! Keep this stuff coming!

And upload the uncensored version.

Alexus · Post by **Alexus** » 2006-12-29 07:24am

Yes sir!

Post by **Surlethe** » 2006-12-29 09:13am

"Yeah, all five hundred of them. I fuckin' hate EU minimalism."

CaptainChewbacca · Post by **CaptainChewbacca** » 2006-12-29 03:40pm

"You're kind of rude for a clone"
"You're kind of effeminate for a Jedi."

GOLD!

Repost the others without edited text, plz!

Alexus · Post by **Alexus** » 2006-12-29 04:04pm

Thanks all

Part 1 is now uncensored.

Ford Prefect · Post by **Ford Prefect** » 2006-12-29 06:39pm

Comedy. Gold.

Stark · Post by **Stark** » 2006-12-29 06:47pm

The awesome continues.

HSRTG · Post by **HSRTG** » 2006-12-29 09:07pm

The sound you may or may not hear is the sound of me gasping for breath.

After nearly laughing my lungs out.

Noble Ire · Post by **Noble Ire** » 2006-12-30 01:56am

I'm always up for a good "Your Momma" joke now and then.

Very well done indeed.

AK-047 · Post by **AK-047** » 2006-12-30 03:08am

Fuckin awesome. Turns the nice Clone Wars comic into hilarity.

Alexus · Post by **Alexus** » 2006-12-30 06:37am

Darth Raptor · Post by **Darth Raptor** » 2006-12-30 07:24am

"That's stupid. Jango didn't love the Republic. I fucking hate these comics."

And I <3 that ARC Trooper.

Alexus · Post by **Alexus** » 2006-12-30 07:31am

ASS Trooper

Ford Prefect · Post by **Ford Prefect** » 2006-12-30 07:34am

The greatest Star Wars character ever. Unnamed ASS Trooper.

Ritterin Sophia · Post by **Ritterin Sophia** » 2006-12-30 12:18pm

I just thought of a great name for him... ASS Trooper Alpha-34. Can anyone get the Internet joke in his name?

The Jazz Intern · Post by **The Jazz Intern** » 2006-12-30 07:47pm

General Schatten wrote:I just thought of a great name for him... ASS Trooper Alpha-34. Can anyone get the Internet joke in his name?

...
no, I cannot.

Anywho, those are great! keep'm coming!