The Last Bastion part 4: Teaser Trailer

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Absolutely hilarious as always, but I think it could use a bit more editing - it felt like there were a lot of awkward pauses in many scenes.

Also, I didn't quite like the alarm klaxon you used after the Guardian got hit, but that's just a minor nitpick.
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What is the word that Jorg says right before "Bite me"?

I'm telling you Wayne, you need subtitles.
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All the holodeck files erased? How can that be!?

Because that entire section of the ship is gone.
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Whatever you do, please don't kill Captain Jorg or Kraft, they are really growing on me.
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Great stuff. Keep it coming. :)
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You DO know the best ultimate outcome for this?

To have Jorg and Kraft pursue Peacful contact with the ISD, meet them, become impressed, and finally, as a final insult to the Trekkies, decid to JOIN The Imperials leaving the Federation behind.
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Crossroads Inc. wrote:You DO know the best ultimate outcome for this?

To have Jorg and Kraft pursue Peacful contact with the ISD, meet them, become impressed, and finally, as a final insult to the Trekkies, decid to JOIN The Imperials leaving the Federation behind.
With Captain Anderson coming along as their manservant. :twisted:
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wilfulton wrote:
Crossroads Inc. wrote:You DO know the best ultimate outcome for this?

To have Jorg and Kraft pursue Peacful contact with the ISD, meet them, become impressed, and finally, as a final insult to the Trekkies, decid to JOIN The Imperials leaving the Federation behind.
With Captain Anderson coming along as their manservant. :twisted:
I'm thinking Wayne might make a video version of his TGOD about Anderson.
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wilfulton wrote:With Captain Anderson coming along as their manservant. :twisted:
Complete with posing pouch!
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I love the PoTC references :lol:. The dialogue does seem a little jerky though. No offence, just trying to be constructive.
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