Before the Storm- my own lil fanfic, chapter 1
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Before the Storm- my own lil fanfic, chapter 1
I was going to post it, but it's too big, so here's the link.
http://www.geocities.com/sothis5/BTS1.html
Yahoo might spring a few popups, so be prepared.
http://www.geocities.com/sothis5/BTS1.html
Yahoo might spring a few popups, so be prepared.
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Re: Before the Storm- my own lil fanfic, chapter 1
Nice. I don't like the page layout, but the story was nice and pretty atmospheric.
Björn Paulsen
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"Travelers with closed minds can tell us little except about themselves."
--Chinua Achebe
I agree about the page layout, but I only have Netscape composer to work with, and don't understand enough about HTML.
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Any help you have to offer will be very much appreciatedEleas wrote:"I agree about the page layout, but I only have Netscape composer to work with, and don't understand enough about HTML."
If you want, I could slap together something for you. Interested?
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Intresting story, I've liked most of them I've read so far here but I feel this one in Particular has gotten that Tarkin/Vadar Relationship, Work on that one, Don't forget it as its somthing never explored in the Movies or the EU.
work on it
Feed it
Strength it.
work on it
Feed it
Strength it.
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Great fic. Work on the layout of yer page though. I recommend white or yellow text on black background. Black text on gray BG also works too.
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Post #114 @ Fri Oct 18, 2002 4:44 pm
"I've had all that I wanted of a lot of things I've had
And a lot more than I needed of some things that turned out bad"
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Post #114 @ Fri Oct 18, 2002 4:44 pm
"I've had all that I wanted of a lot of things I've had
And a lot more than I needed of some things that turned out bad"
-Johnny Cash, "Wanted Man"
UPF: CARNIVAL OF RETARDS
As way of a small update, I'm about 4 pages from completing chapter 2, and will change the layout of both chapter 1 and chapter 2 when chapter 2 is posted.
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If you'd like it on the Archive, I'd be happy to oblige.
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yo, dalton-- you should put it to a vote as to whether you should add a SD.net Fanfics section to the archive.
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Post #114 @ Fri Oct 18, 2002 4:44 pm
"I've had all that I wanted of a lot of things I've had
And a lot more than I needed of some things that turned out bad"
-Johnny Cash, "Wanted Man"
UPF: CARNIVAL OF RETARDS
BOTM 15.Nov.02
Post #114 @ Fri Oct 18, 2002 4:44 pm
"I've had all that I wanted of a lot of things I've had
And a lot more than I needed of some things that turned out bad"
-Johnny Cash, "Wanted Man"
UPF: CARNIVAL OF RETARDS
That would be very much appreciated, thanksDalton wrote:If you'd like it on the Archive, I'd be happy to oblige.
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Cool. Email the original text files to me at rob at daltonator dot net.Sothis wrote:That would be very much appreciated, thanksDalton wrote:If you'd like it on the Archive, I'd be happy to oblige.
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Re: Before the Storm- my own lil fanfic, chapter 1
This is excellent, Sothis. A great escape from TPS reports. Look forward to reading part II.
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