My thoughts on the fan-fic Perversions of the Force
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My thoughts on the fan-fic Perversions of the Force
I found this fic to be enjoyable.
The characters have good personatlies.
The story line is well thought out.
Smutty and erotic in a good way.
Well done Kelly.
LT.Hit-Man
The characters have good personatlies.
The story line is well thought out.
Smutty and erotic in a good way.
Well done Kelly.
LT.Hit-Man
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Yes so I have found out in Iggy's last message to me in my hello post and I have taken care of that oversight.God Emperor wrote:Kelly has not all praise, Iggy helped.
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Heh, heh, you have a rather small post count. I'd poke you with a stick, but you're the only guy I know of that would poke back.LT.Hit-Man wrote:Yes so I have found out in Iggy's last message to me in my hello post and I have taken care of that oversight.God Emperor wrote:Kelly has not all praise, Iggy helped.
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He'd poke you with more than just a stick.Setzer wrote:Heh, heh, you have a rather small post count. I'd poke you with a stick, but you're the only guy I know of that would poke back.LT.Hit-Man wrote:Yes so I have found out in Iggy's last message to me in my hello post and I have taken care of that oversight.God Emperor wrote:Kelly has not all praise, Iggy helped.
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Setzer wrote:
Heh, heh, you have a rather small post count. I'd poke you with a stick, but you're the only guy I know of that would poke back.
1. Post count matters not. Registry date true teller.
2. Poking him would be BAD. Very bad.
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I... I really don't know what to say. I've heard so much about how good a writer you are. However, I will admit that I have yet to read any of your works. As for Perversions, the first part up to when IG-88E takes the Force users to Wong was written by me. After that point, it has become a joint effort between Iggy and myself. I appreciate your kind words. Thank you.
He'd poke you w/ a M-2 and then hit the trigger...Grand Admiral Thrawn wrote:Setzer wrote:
Heh, heh, you have a rather small post count. I'd poke you with a stick, but you're the only guy I know of that would poke back.
1. Post count matters not. Registry date true teller.
2. Poking him would be BAD. Very bad.
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No, he'd rip your happy sac and wang off and then poke you in the eye withBeowulf wrote: He'd poke you w/ a M-2 and then hit the trigger...
your own dick.
He's THAT sick and twisted.
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And this 'Lt Hitman' is who, again?
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He's one of the fanfic legends from the internet. Don't poke back, just go to the ASVS fanfic archive.HemlockGrey wrote:And this 'Lt Hitman' is who, again?
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Soooooo.......?
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Soooooo, if you're really, really nice to him then maybe he'll be nice enough to post top-grade fanfics for you to read. If you're not so nice to him, maybe he'll be nice enough not to rip out your guts and strangle you with your own intestines. Maybe.HemlockGrey wrote:Soooooo.......?
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Oh, posh. I'm sure he's superb author but I can't help but roll my eyes when someone threatens to 'rip out my intestines' over the internet.
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You just might get a guest appearance in a fanfic review.HemlockGrey wrote:Oh, posh. I'm sure he's superb author but I can't help but roll my eyes when someone threatens to 'rip out my intestines' over the internet.
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As what?
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*Tear* It's beautiful...he's like the perfect Black Mage...cunning, vicious, wonderfully evil....Master of Ossus wrote:Soooooo, if you're really, really nice to him then maybe he'll be nice enough to post top-grade fanfics for you to read. If you're not so nice to him, maybe he'll be nice enough not to rip out your guts and strangle you with your own intestines. Maybe.HemlockGrey wrote:Soooooo.......?
But...he is a newbie...oh decisions decisions...
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My very soul quivers in terror.As his chew toy.
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THIS one's n00b status is not indicative of his familiarity with ST vs. SW, and his high standard of writing. I say: make him an honorary Black Mage!Captain_Cyran wrote: *Tear* It's beautiful...he's like the perfect Black Mage...cunning, vicious, wonderfully evil....
But...he is a newbie...oh decisions decisions...
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*gets the pointy hat and robe*IG-88E wrote:THIS one's n00b status is not indicative of his familiarity with ST vs. SW, and his high standard of writing. I say: make him an honorary Black Mage!Captain_Cyran wrote: *Tear* It's beautiful...he's like the perfect Black Mage...cunning, vicious, wonderfully evil....
But...he is a newbie...oh decisions decisions...
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To all who have replyed to this post
Well Setzer we all have to start somewhere.
Yes Ted that is true I find that driving some one's rib bone though there ear drums a fine past time.
Hello Grand Admerial Thrawn I am new here so I will take your statement about the reg date as a fact as for poking me I'm glad to see that some pepole around here understand that I'm not the plissbray dough boy.
Ic well Kelly I still enjoyed this fic very much I will be posting an older fan fic of mine that I had reworked once I'm done replying to this post for your enjoyment as well as the enjoyment for all the people here.
Hello Beowulf I hope you are doing well this day/night as the case may be.
Ahh Sheppard how are you doing, yes I would do something like that, it's thanks to you that I decied to stay with ASVS I found IP to be so enjoyable that I decied to try my hand at SW vs ST and well look what happened
Hello HemlockGrey nice to meet you I'm sure as time passes we'll get to know one another.
Master of Ossus I was unaware that my name had reached so far across the net it is good to meet you as well.
Captain_Cryan would you explane to me what a black mage is thank you.
Thank you for nommanating me as a black mage IG-88E.
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Yes Ted that is true I find that driving some one's rib bone though there ear drums a fine past time.
Hello Grand Admerial Thrawn I am new here so I will take your statement about the reg date as a fact as for poking me I'm glad to see that some pepole around here understand that I'm not the plissbray dough boy.
Ic well Kelly I still enjoyed this fic very much I will be posting an older fan fic of mine that I had reworked once I'm done replying to this post for your enjoyment as well as the enjoyment for all the people here.
Hello Beowulf I hope you are doing well this day/night as the case may be.
Ahh Sheppard how are you doing, yes I would do something like that, it's thanks to you that I decied to stay with ASVS I found IP to be so enjoyable that I decied to try my hand at SW vs ST and well look what happened
Hello HemlockGrey nice to meet you I'm sure as time passes we'll get to know one another.
Master of Ossus I was unaware that my name had reached so far across the net it is good to meet you as well.
Captain_Cryan would you explane to me what a black mage is thank you.
Thank you for nommanating me as a black mage IG-88E.
Ahh SirNitram it has been some time since I herad from, thanks for the black robes I like them.
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Re: To all who have replyed to this post
Very simple actually, you go around, be evil, and blow shit up.LT.Hit-Man wrote:Captain_Cryan would you explane to me what a black mage is thank you.
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