Star Crossed Fanfic

Darth Yoshi · Post by **Darth Yoshi** » 2003-02-03 04:52pm

The Grand Admiral has entered the arena! The next chapter will be one to remember, even with the rest of the fic.

Stravo · Post by **Stravo** » 2003-02-03 05:05pm

Darth Yoshi wrote:The Grand Admiral has entered the arena! The next chapter will be one to remember, even with the rest of the fic.

The next chapter certainly has an IMPERIAL SMACKDOWN of EPIC porportions coming up....in case no one noticed...Nemesis hasn't shown up yet and a brief preview, the title of the next chapter:

Chapter 40: Between the Devil and the Deep Blue Sea

Ender · Post by **Ender** » 2003-02-03 05:34pm

Hot damn. Now I'm just wondering if the cloaked ships are the shadow fleet or the Scimitars.

FaxModem1 · Post by **FaxModem1** » 2003-02-03 06:15pm

YOU KILLED CHEWEY!!!

the lovable furball is now a pin cushion, what a way to go.

YOU KILLED WESLEY!!!!

I may be the only one who liked his character, but, geez, YOU KILLED HIM, interesting way to die too. I was surprised he wasn't vapourized.

Man, poor Beverly, her son is now dead and also pure evil.

I was hoping for a battle of the Titans as Charlie and Wesley meet in pure telekinetic combat. oh well.

How many ships does Kirk's fleet have? They will eventually run out and I would like to know their current #.

Stravo, you are a genius.

Stravo · Post by **Stravo** » 2003-02-03 06:58pm

YOU KILLED CHEWEY!!!

I beg to differ, I do state that he slipped into unconciousness

Captain Cyran · Post by **Captain Cyran** » 2003-02-03 08:22pm

Dang you Stravo. Making me WAIT another chapter. *grumble*

Either way, an excellent chapter, loved it when Charlie kicked some ass, loved Kelly's lines. Great fights, I've seen better, but these are really good.

My guess for stopping the chapter is your giving time for Nemisis to get there, and possibly another group?

desertjedi · Post by **desertjedi** » 2003-02-03 08:38pm

EXCELLENT! Stravo, once again you hve delighted your fans. I can't wait for the next chapter... I still think that Nemesis and Thrawn are going to end up at odds with each other... Call it a pet theory....

Darth Garden Gnome · Post by **Darth Garden Gnome** » 2003-02-03 08:43pm

LONG LIVE KELLY, KILLER OF NERDS!

Anyways, it's going to be one helluva an ingenious plan to get Kirk out of this one. Thrawn, Nemesis, Romulans, Weasley. Wow. The next chapter has got to be awesome. Excellent as per usual.

Captain Cyran · Post by **Captain Cyran** » 2003-02-03 08:50pm

*Goes prostrate, starts chanting like the Ewoks as he bows over and over again to Stravo*

Pcm979 · Post by **Pcm979** » 2003-02-03 08:53pm

YAHOOOOOOOO!!!

*hem*

Good work!

The Silence and I · Post by **The Silence and I** » 2003-02-03 08:53pm

Whoo hoo!! Finally, Thrawn!! Some spelling and grammer to clean up, but that was great... When is it not? I too expected Wes to be vaporized, but eh, whatcha gonna do? Besides, mr. sith needs a body so he can kick some butt!!

I wonder, just how many Imperials are gonna smack down Kirk? We know Thawn is coming, but could Nemesis arrive just in time... to help him or maybie to hurt him real, real bad. I can go either way

Post by **Ghost Rider** » 2003-02-03 09:01pm

And let's not forget gents waiting in the wings is also the Emperor and Gary with a DS2.

This is truly shaping up to something else...out of the frying pan...into an inferno...really the coolest part is I(like many others mostlikely) have no idea how the hell Kirk is going to get out of this.

Luke Starkiller · Post by **Luke Starkiller** » 2003-02-03 09:09pm

Another good chapter; I almost can't wait till it is over and I can sit down and read the whole thing in one go:), but then that would mean that it is over.

I'm guessing that the cloaked fleet is the Klingons, not the Scimitars.

Captain Cyran · Post by **Captain Cyran** » 2003-02-03 09:14pm

Luke Starkiller wrote:Another good chapter; I almost can't wait till it is over and I can sit down and read the whole thing in one go:), but then that would mean that it is over.

I'm guessing that the cloaked fleet is the Klingons, not the Scimitars.

Klingons? I'm thinking something a bit more powerful.

Darth Garden Gnome · Post by **Darth Garden Gnome** » 2003-02-03 09:23pm

Captain_Cyran wrote:Klingons? I'm thinking something a bit more powerful.

*coughshadowfleetcough* Did they bring the Carrack with them? Impies don't like their own ships turned against them.

FaxModem1 · Post by **FaxModem1** » 2003-02-03 10:51pm

Whatever happened to Captain Entrebbe, he just kinda disappeared.

Admiral Drason · Post by **Admiral Drason** » 2003-02-03 10:54pm

I forgot about the klingons.

What about them Stravo.

Kelly Antilles · Post by **Kelly Antilles** » 2003-02-03 11:03pm

Wow.... awesome as always, Stravo.

Stravo · Post by **Stravo** » 2003-02-03 11:43pm

FaxModem1 wrote:Whatever happened to Captain Entrebbe, he just kinda disappeared.

I meant to be a line in somewhere a few chapters ago that Entebbe is in charge of the weapons development programs back in Avalon (the secret federation base in the badlands.) Entebbe's science vessel is simply too fragile to be deeply involved in the battles so he has been put in charge of something just as vital. But he will be reappearing again. Sharp eye there fax modem.

FaxModem1 · Post by **FaxModem1** » 2003-02-03 11:51pm

maybe I am talking about the wrong character, I am speaking about the one that was blinded by Nemesis and has someone named Han to talk to, last time I checked, he was still in prison. but maybe I missed it.

Stravo · Post by **Stravo** » 2003-02-03 11:53pm

FaxModem1 wrote:maybe I am talking about the wrong character, I am speaking about the one that was blinded by Nemesis and has someone named Han to talk to, last time I checked, he was still in prison. but maybe I missed it.

Captain Ochoa becomes EXTREMELY important very soon.

FaxModem1 · Post by **FaxModem1** » 2003-02-03 11:56pm

oops, silly me, I got their two names confused, I feel so stupid now.

Post by **Mr Bean** » 2003-02-04 08:18am

Hmm, lets see we have Khan out there somewhere along with the Klingon's, The Shadow Fleet is running around, The Scimintars are also missing in action, Thrawn's arived and is currently enjoying a cup of tea, Kirks feeling confident, Gary and Q are still at it, Vadar is polishing his armor, Luke is having his cape cleaned, Kelly and Co are about to fight off a Sith Lord, And 7 of 9 and Co are currently doing whatever it is they do best

Lots to keep your eyes on

Post by **NecronLord** » 2003-02-04 01:00pm

That was possibly one of the best yet.

Soontir C'boath · Post by **Soontir C'boath** » 2003-02-04 02:43pm

Man oh man...I can't wait.....

Cyaround,
Jason