We noticed.Majin Gojira wrote:Just to finish up the previously posted scene. The next mission is taking longer than I thought.
“I am Yuuno Skry,” Said a kid not much older than Nanoha, “I work with the Time Space Administration Bureau.”
“I figured,” Jack scowled slightly.
Think you're mad now, Jack? Wait until you hear about the ferret thing!
Ohboy... (and while we're at it, let's keep him out of this!)The third newcomer in the room had not looked up during the entirety of the conversation. She was a young woman Short, pale and with rather thick glasses. She read the musty tome before her with an intensity Jack rarely saw. And she was blushing intensely.
“And you are?” Jack said, leaning towards the woman.
“Oh,” Abraham said, “Don’t bother. Once she starts reading there’s little short of a gunshot that will get her attention. She’s Yomiko Readman of MI-13.”
I see what you did there...“I swear to Rao,” the blonde exclaimed, “If this keeps up, I’m just going to overhaul the entire system and install the Angelic Layer Neural Interface. If they want mental control of Mechagodzilla that badly, they need to PAY for it.”
So much for that idea... Jack thought.“This would be a good point to break,” The tall woman said, “at least before someone suggests we put a Wii into Mechagodzilla.”
And with that, the author messes with two continuities in a single sentence!“Jack,” Carter nodded towards the tall woman, “This is Biko Daitokuji.”
Let's hope they didn't get merged with Stark Enterprises...“Of Daitokuji Heavy Industries. Pleasure,” Biko said as she extended a hand to Jack. He accepted it easily.
Do these past sentences mean we're gonna get a visit from her niece?“And,” Carter continued, “This is Doctor Kara Zor-El.”
Goats, actually.“The God Machine dreams of electric sheep?” Kara blinked.