Corporate Security Goon

TheMuffinKing · Post by **TheMuffinKing** » 2009-06-05 02:07am

I'll try my hand at stuff.

Havok · Post by **Havok** » 2009-06-05 02:32am

Not bad. Try (if you feel like erasing) broadening the shoulders and make his head and right hand little bigger.

JointStrikeFighter · Post by **JointStrikeFighter** » 2009-06-05 07:11am

Moar Pouches.

Phantasee · Post by **Phantasee** » 2009-06-05 05:45pm

Leave his head alone for that "brainless goon" look. But broaden the shoulders, yeah. And give him huge hands.

Samuel · Post by **Samuel** » 2009-06-05 08:16pm

The nose looks off a bit and the hands are too small. Also needs lips. Otherwise perfect!

TheMuffinKing · Post by **TheMuffinKing** » 2009-06-05 10:09pm

Thanks guys. I will work on the hands, I agree on their smallness and will work towards enlarging them. I still need to practice faces and thanks for pointing out some specifics.

I'm grateful for your feedback, as I can already see a slight improvement in many of my drawings!

TheMuffinKing · Post by **TheMuffinKing** » 2009-06-05 11:00pm

Here is a quick revision:

Phantasee · Post by **Phantasee** » 2009-06-06 01:20am

HUGE HANDS

I can't tell if you changed them, because of the size difference between the pictures, but it if you did, you didn't make them big enough.

Agent Fisher · Post by **Agent Fisher** » 2009-06-06 01:49am

you should change the handguards you've got on the M16. He's rocking a short barrel, with the long Vietnam triangle grips and a vert grip. Other than that, Vest looks good, EoTech looks a little wonky, but it'll do.

Dark Flame · Post by **Dark Flame** » 2009-06-06 02:48am

I like the gun. It reminds me of an airsoft gun I want: http://www.airsoftshop.com/images/CAR15.jpg

However, the vert grip really doesn't go with it, if we're being realistic. If not, it's your drawing, do what you want!

Also, is he wearing some sort of shin guards? I think they need to be better defined somehow, but I wouldn't have a clue on how exactly to go about that.

TheMuffinKing · Post by **TheMuffinKing** » 2009-06-06 05:51pm

Here is a further revision:

Samuel · Post by **Samuel** » 2009-06-06 06:27pm

The problem I see is that the right arm looks like it is shortening just past the elbow.

TheMuffinKing · Post by **TheMuffinKing** » 2009-06-06 06:54pm

Samuel wrote:The problem I see is that the right arm looks like it is shortening just past the elbow.

Yeah, I'm having a problem getting the perspective just right. I'm sure it'll get better with some practice.

Agent Fisher · Post by **Agent Fisher** » 2009-06-06 07:30pm

Much better on the rifle, at least those handguards can have a rail attached for mounting that vert grip. I would also recommend a flashlight on there.

Bob the Gunslinger · Post by **Bob the Gunslinger** » 2009-06-16 02:10am

You could give him a more square jaw for that "masculine and tough" look that's all the rage with goons today. At the very least, give him a less feminine/androgynous jawline.

Samuel · Post by **Samuel** » 2009-06-16 12:11pm

Bob the Gunslinger wrote:You could give him a more square jaw for that "masculine and tough" look that's all the rage with goons today. At the very least, give him a less feminine/androgynous jawline.

But he needs a reason to beat the heroes to a pulp- making fun of his appearance is perfect.

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