Reign of Terror

Post by **Rob Wilson** » 2003-02-12 06:16pm

weemadando wrote:I like this.

Lots of denizens. Lots of weirdness.

And you're apparently the hero of the day... wonder when you get to charge the Cardies and blow up?

Robert Treder · Post by **Robert Treder** » 2003-02-12 06:34pm

I like, I like!

So, we've got the uneasy allies of Ando, Nitram, and Lucet, all trying to get away from the ISD, while the Maquis, Cardassians, and Feds all try to get to the ISD...I can't wait for the battle royale.
Plus, I'm willing to bet the Empire ends up playing a role as well.

FACT: Mike Wong is a supreme badass.

Keep up the good work!

Singular Quartet · Post by **Singular Quartet** » 2003-02-12 06:40pm

Wong, very good so far.

Mark S · Post by **Mark S** » 2003-02-12 07:16pm

Darth Wong wrote:... Natalie brushed her long brown hair aside and stirred a pot of soup...

Mike, did you subconsciously put my wife in your fic and marry her to Ando?

Post by **Rob Wilson** » 2003-02-12 07:24pm

Mark S wrote:
Darth Wong wrote:... Natalie brushed her long brown hair aside and stirred a pot of soup...
Mike, did you subconsciously put my wife in your fic and marry her to Ando?

Of course, how could we be so blind? Ando has the hero role, he gets the majority of the dialogue and he's got Rebecca as his wife... WeeMadAndo is in fact the result of Mikes mad science experiments to create a living, breathing Mary-Sue.

Is the world ready to face "Wongstein's Monster"?

Post by **weemadando** » 2003-02-12 08:34pm

Rob Wilson wrote:
Is the world ready to face "Wongstein's Monster"?
:twisted:

Graaaaarrrgh... Brrraaaaiiiiins.

Post by **Kuja** » 2003-02-12 09:16pm

Dalton turned around to face Wilson, his second in command. Wilson was a tall, lanky former Starfleet officer who was old enough to have seen combat in the first Cardassian war. The two of them were sometimes referred to as "Rob and Rob" because they shared the same first name. "All right, we've got room for twelve. Get Wilkens, Vympel, Typho, Eleas, Coyote, Stravo, Lars, Mackey, Frank, and Sheppard."

Why do I get the feeling that at least one of these guys will be screaming "Jihaaaaaad!" before this is over?

God Emperor · Post by **God Emperor** » 2003-02-12 09:42pm

This is excelent writing and I can't wait for more.

Darth Servo · Post by **Darth Servo** » 2003-02-12 10:53pm

As usual DW, it kicks ass.

Post by **Dalton** » 2003-02-12 11:51pm

Hey, I'm in it! Cool. And I'm a leader dude.

But one question...if Damien is on DS9, how can they suffer a nav problem and go into the DMZ?

Post by **Darth Wong** » 2003-02-13 12:03am

Dalton wrote:Hey, I'm in it! Cool. And I'm a leader dude.

But one question...if Damien is on DS9, how can they suffer a nav problem and go into the DMZ?

He's on a ship docked at DS9. At this point in the timeline, Sisko is the captain of DS9 itself. Should I have made that more clear?

Grand Admiral Ancaris · Post by **Grand Admiral Ancaris** » 2003-02-13 12:34am

Darth Wong wrote:Apologies for the long delay between updates. I've never been too good with schedules.
Chapter Three

Goooood stuff. Always the Teasing in the end that leaves you hungry for more!

Post by **Dalton** » 2003-02-13 02:02am

Darth Wong wrote:
Dalton wrote:Hey, I'm in it! Cool. And I'm a leader dude.

But one question...if Damien is on DS9, how can they suffer a nav problem and go into the DMZ?
He's on a ship docked at DS9. At this point in the timeline, Sisko is the captain of DS9 itself. Should I have made that more clear?

A wee bit. The way it reads makes it sound like he's on DS9, though I did later parse it to mean he was AT DS9 and not on it, even though it does sound like he's already underway.

Pcm979 · Post by **Pcm979** » 2003-02-13 04:47am

Exellent....

Darth Fanboy · Post by **Darth Fanboy** » 2003-02-13 05:11am

To be honest I didn't like ch.3 as much as I did one and two. Once the War Droid started up it was pretty obvious there was going to be a lot of grisly death and now it looks as if theres going to be a miraculous escape of some sort. Someone has to take the ship (ISD Mk 2?) and eventually control it. Chaters four and five though should be excellent, every part of "Conquest" I didn't enjoy so much was followed up by great material. What I did like was the latter portion of the Chapter dealing with the more human side of the Maquis rebellion. Good stuff there.

Eleas · Post by **Eleas** » 2003-02-13 05:31am

I am in the Story, and the Story is Good.

Post by **Vympel** » 2003-02-13 05:35am

This rules. What Eleas said. I'm in the story. The story rules. Everything therfore, rules. I don't care if it's fallacious.

Singular Quartet · Post by **Singular Quartet** » 2003-02-13 02:59pm

Thppbt.

Why is it that people want to be in fanfics? Does it have to do with recognition, or is it due to the fact that all of you need that small ego boost of being in a fanfic?

Post by **Rob Wilson** » 2003-02-13 03:08pm

Singular Quartet wrote:Thppbt.

Why is it that people want to be in fanfics? Does it have to do with recognition, or is it due to the fact that all of you need that small ego boost of being in a fanfic?

Now, now. Just because your username is almost impossible to work in as a character name don't blame everyone else for getting some Fic time.

Actually I don't like appearing in fics unless the authors really good, and even then i prefer to be an ancillary character with very little 'air time', does the job the plot calls for and then gone.

Just out of interest what is wrong if people do like to see their names in fics?

Cpt_Frank · Post by **Cpt_Frank** » 2003-02-13 03:43pm

Ooohhh cool chapter and I'm in it!!!!

Soontir C'boath · Post by **Soontir C'boath** » 2003-02-13 04:23pm

Nice chapter....
The next one has to be spicy

Cyaround,
Jason

Wicked Pilot · Post by **Wicked Pilot** » 2003-02-13 05:06pm

I swear, the Shep references made me crack.

Durandal · Post by **Durandal** » 2003-02-13 07:11pm

Excellent. Not only am I in it, I got the last line of the chapter! I'm all dramatic 'n stuff.

This is turning out very good so far. I can't wait for more.

Pablo Sanchez · Post by **Pablo Sanchez** » 2003-02-13 08:12pm

Dalton wrote:Hey, I'm in it! Cool. And I'm a leader dude.

Nothing but a rebel. I am an Admiral--a Federation Admiral, but I'm still a legitimate authority. Now, Captain Soresso, fetch me a soda and roast beef sandwich.

*Pablo is struck in the forehead by a flying Coke can*

OW!

Durandal · Post by **Durandal** » 2003-02-14 11:55am

Pablo Sanchez wrote:
Dalton wrote:Hey, I'm in it! Cool. And I'm a leader dude.
Nothing but a rebel. I am an Admiral--a Federation Admiral, but I'm still a legitimate authority. Now, Captain Soresso, fetch me a soda and roast beef sandwich.

*Pablo is struck in the forehead by a flying Coke can*

OW!

That was for spelling my name incorrectly.

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