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Pelranius wrote:I wonder why it would take so long to find the Tekuma? I though American and NATO in general was very got at ASW, even against diesel submarines.
We are but diesel-electrics are swines to pick up, especially the German-built ones (one pays a cost premium for the German boats but the quality of construction is worth it). Running on batteries, the diesel-electrics make very little noise and what they do usually is in frequencies that are hard to detect over long distances. That's part of the art of building submarines (the early Russian diesel-electrics up to the 641B class were actually quite easy to pick up because they emitted a sound signature that was on frequencies that did transmit well). Detecting a diesel-electric that's crawling on its batteries is almost impossible unless one starts very close to her. The upside is that the battery charge has only a limited life and once that's gone, the sub has to either surface or snort, both of which are very noisy and indiscrete (snorting is actually noisier that charging on the surface since the noise is all transmitted into the water because the hull is totally submerged. On the surface, a large proportion of that noise goes into the air.
Tiwaz wrote:Then again, Israel is not exactly large nation. Leaving nukes laying around can for them mean they never get the chance to use them if things get bad. Considering Israel's attitude towards it's surroundings, I would not find it surprising to hear they keep all their sub launched missiles in the subs at all times.
Can't do that unfortunately, missiles have to be serviced like everything else. Normally, assuming that the Israelies do have 20 nuclear-tipped missiles, 10 will be deployed on submarines, five will be in a pierside depot waiting to be issued and five will be in deep maintenance (ie dismantled and being refurbished). That's how I got the number 20 by the way. Israel has three Dolphin class boats, each of which has four large-diameter tubes in addition to their standard 21 inch tubes. That implies four missiles ready to fire. To be reasonably confident of having four missiles ready to fire, one needs to have five on board. So, we can deduce the load-out of nuclear missiles on a Dolphin (if they carry nuclear missiles at all which has never been confirmed) would be five. There are three Dolphins, implying a patrol pattern where one is at sea, one is ready to go to sea and one is in maintenance. This means that two boats will need to have their missile load-out on board (giving ten missiles) while five more are held dockside for the submarine in maintenance (those missiles will be reloads for the two operational boats whould the third boat be in deep maintenance). That brings us up to 15. We need an allowance for missiles in deep maintenance; a reasonable number would be between five and ten (for the US it would be ten) but I took five bearing in mind the established principle that, given a choice between two alternatives, the Israeli Navy will pick the wrong one. By the way, trying to maintain a permanent deterrent patrol using three boats really doesn't work very well and wears the boats out fast; that's why the Israeli Navy has ordered two more Dolphins.

By the way, on the subject of the Dolphins, they're not 214s or 212s, they're actually derivatives of the Norwegian Ula class by way of its aborted German equivalent, the Klasse 210.
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Hmm. True, maintenance slipped by my mind.

I am guessing warheads are either as maintenance intensive as missiles or they cannot be easily detached from rest of missile?
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Stuart wrote:
Pelranius wrote:I wonder why it would take so long to find the Tekuma? I though American and NATO in general was very got at ASW, even against diesel submarines.
The upside is that the battery charge has only a limited life and once that's gone, the sub has to either surface or snort, both of which are very noisy and indiscrete (snorting is actually noisier that charging on the surface since the noise is all transmitted into the water because the hull is totally submerged.

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By the way, on the subject of the Dolphins, they're not 214s or 212s, they're actually derivatives of the Norwegian Ula class by way of its aborted German equivalent, the Klasse 210.
I thought they were based on the ubiquitous 209s. Certainly the Dolphins look more like 209s than Ula/210s to me. (Is this where you tell me that the Ula/210 is based on the 209?)

Also, weren't the Dolphins upgraded to have air-independent propulsion? Or am I remembering wrong and it's the new ones?
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Old Peculier wrote: I thought they were based on the ubiquitous 209s. Certainly the Dolphins look more like 209s than Ula/210s to me. (Is this where you tell me that the Ula/210 is based on the 209?)
It is, in a way. The Klasse 210/Ula class represented the prototypes of a new class of German submarine intended to replace the Klasse 209 on the international marketplace over the 1990s. It served as a basis for the larger Israeli Dolphin class and the new German Klasse 212 and Klasse 214. The problem with Ula was that the design was too small for the demands of the market and it had to be substantially redesigned. In the German case, this resulted in the Klasse 211 that was then modified to give the Dolphin class. Klasse 211 was then abandoned in favor of the AIP-equipped Klasse 212 - originally 212 was an AIP 211 but the process of modifying the design left very little of the original boat.
Also, weren't the Dolphins upgraded to have air-independent propulsion? Or am I remembering wrong and it's the new ones?
It's the new ones. The older boats still have no AIP. The two new Dolphins are a lot closer to Klasse 214 than the earlier three.
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We are but diesel-electrics are swines to pick up, especially the German-built ones (one pays a cost premium for the German boats but the quality of construction is worth it).
Especially when the Germans donate the first two submarines.
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What happened to the United Nations?
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Sean Mulligan wrote:What happened to the United Nations?
The point of the United Nations is to create a forum where nations can publicly air their grievances against each other in a non-military fashion. It was never conceived as a military command apparatus. I would imagine that it still exists, but it is just not relevant to the "war room" scenes.
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Hmm.

Right after World War Two, there were probably people who did imagine it as providing at least the framework for a military command in the event of a global crisis, as a sort of "successor state" to the WWII Allies. It didn't pan out for a lot of good reasons (chief among them being that the nations on the security council didn't want the UN to work that way).

By now, of course, the idea of it coordinating military operations is a joke, since they lack the experience and lack access to the kind of people who do have it.
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Darth Wong wrote:
Sean Mulligan wrote:What happened to the United Nations?
The point of the United Nations is to create a forum where nations can publicly air their grievances against each other in a non-military fashion. It was never conceived as a military command apparatus. I would imagine that it still exists, but it is just not relevant to the "war room" scenes.
Actually this is not the case, there is a subsidiary body of the United Nations Security Council dedicated for joint military operations and command called the Military Staff Committee.

Relevent stuff here:http://www.un.org/en/documents/charter/chapter7.shtml

Wikipedia here: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Military_Staff_Committee

However due to the Cold War these parts of the UN Charter are 'dormant'.
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Pelranius wrote:I wonder why it would take so long to find the Tekuma? I though American and NATO in general was very got at ASW, even against diesel submarines.
I suspect that the end-game for Tekuma is approaching fast.

As Stuart pointed out, diesel electric subs can have only so much battery power and when that gets critically low they MUST surface or snort, or die.

Tekuma was probably already on battery power for at least a little time before firing her missiles, though perhaps at an economical speed. Perhaps only steerage whilst awaiting orders. Clearing the datum after missile firing would require faster speeds and battery use goes way up as speed increases. They may have one short burst left in them but in reality they are dead - just when and where is the only matter that has not yet been divulged bu the author.

Stuart, I've read a number of depictions by you of the deaths of various types of naval vessels, the last being of an Argentinian frigate at South Georgia by small arms etc fire followed by a, ahem, ignition of aviation fuel.

Never a sub though :D
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I hope that the sub crew can show that only a few of them were responsible for the attack.
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It's kind of hard to convince a depth charge of your good intentions, I'm afraid.

Though if they pop up in Hell and get interrogated there, the story might start to show up; this is a case where demonic mind-entanglement could be really handy... or does it give them any form of mind reading in addition to their already demonstrated mind writing abilities?
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If you can reliably convince someone to tell the truth, you don't need mind-reading abilities.

That said, no, it doesn't. All indications are that the ability is one way only.
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It will probably take a few years for an investigation committee to get to the bottom of the matter. Considering how many people are on the boat, I think they'll figure it out by comparing data (assuming anything survives the Tekuma getting sunk), procedures and testimonies. At least I hope it'll play out that way. Just long as someone with a grudge doesn't decide to go and bury evidence.
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Speaking of endgames, I know I'm just going to sound like a little whiny bitch, but I'm growing tired of waiting for the HEA to finally break into Heaven with a warrant for Yahweh's sorry ass. The story's great and Michael-Lan's games have been well-played, but it's starting to wear thin waiting for the righteous hammer of human wrath to strike.

Again sorry, but the main reason I'm annoyed is that according to the plot, the humans have practically been made fools of and smacked around for over five millennia, if not more. The bladricks got stomped right and proper, so it's the main jerks (the angels) that need to be beaten into submission.
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You mean Satan's regime -- or rather, Satan himself... his regime, not so much -- got stomped right and proper. World of difference. ;-)
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Saint_007 wrote:Speaking of endgames, I know I'm just going to sound like a little whiny bitch, but I'm growing tired of waiting for the HEA to finally break into Heaven with a warrant for Yahweh's sorry ass. The story's great and Michael-Lan's games have been well-played, but it's starting to wear thin waiting for the righteous hammer of human wrath to strike.
It's called Dramatic Tension :twisted:
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Stuart wrote:
Saint_007 wrote:Speaking of endgames, I know I'm just going to sound like a little whiny bitch, but I'm growing tired of waiting for the HEA to finally break into Heaven with a warrant for Yahweh's sorry ass. The story's great and Michael-Lan's games have been well-played, but it's starting to wear thin waiting for the righteous hammer of human wrath to strike.
It's called Dramatic Tension :twisted:
Made all the more ironic by the fact that its the thing so many of his detractors say was missing from the first story!
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Speaking as a tractor of the first story, I'd like some more curb-stomping now. :P

Please? With sprinkles and cherries on?
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Stuart wrote:It's called Dramatic Tension :twisted:
Well... there's dramatic tension and then there's dramatic elastic-deformation.

Dramatic tension comes from "Will Our Hero defeat the dreaded Slavering Gaoogabeast? Find out next week!" Or other, related things: there's some question not just of when something will happen, but if it will happen.

Dramatic elastic deformation comes from trying to play out dramatic tension past the point where it begins permanently warping audience expectations, when the fight against the Slavering Gaoogabeast is stretched out into ten or fifteen weekly episodes. At some point, delaying the resolution of a conflict doesn't add more tension; it just dilutes the plot.

We haven't reached that point here, not as far as I'm concerned, but that's mostly because of the side-plots Stuart's been running.
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Well I like it. Keep doing whatever you are doing Stuart.

Getting into Heaven should be significantly more difficult. Michael is clever about covering his tracks - let alone not leaving a giant uncloseable portal.

I would also be prepared for the battle to be much more bitter and less of a curb stomp as well. Since Michael is trying to prevent humans from getting into heaven he acknowledges that we have some major destructive power. I would expect him to be doing some preparation - even if secretly - to bolster his chances of survival.
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Hi everyone. I guess I'll jump in.

Personally?

I actually like that the story is actually going slowly. Compared to the first one, which was a continual steamroll, this one actually involve humanity having to struggle for its victory.

Although I do admit one thing ; it would be good if humanity could get a victory that isn't a defensive one.

... but that is a problem because that to do this, humanity would need to strike something. They can't strike Heaven ; if they get there, the story will be over rather quickly as the angels will be unable to stop the human assault. But on another hand, humanity remaining on Earth only means that they'll only get defensive victories.

Stuart seems to know where he is going with the story so I'm confident he'll find a way to keep things interesting. Myself, I don't mind it ; I actually enjoy seeing the perspectives of both sides, how the angels are trying to defeat humanity without actually exposing themselves and how humanity is trying to counter the attacks and reduce the damage so that when the time for the big assault comes, they have enough ressources left to pull it off.

Of course, the introduction of a third-party (either one of the angelic conspiracies proving to have bases outside of Heaven... or another side coming in...) could also liven things up.


Mostly waiting for the next chapter at the moment.

(By the way... I noticed that someone had made a fanfic of Salvation War months ago. I'm wondering if Stuart would be open to someone making a second one and what would be the conditions and what not for it.)
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You mean "Don't Wake Me When I'm Quiet?" Yeah, interesting one - and thanks to cooperation between Stuart and Stas Bush, it's now also canonical. How's that for Ascended Fanfics? 8)
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Baughn wrote:Speaking as a tractor of the first story, I'd like some more curb-stomping now. :P

Please? With sprinkles and cherries on?
Exactly what I want too! Stuart's right: dramatic tension makes the final victory all the sweeter. But we need a bone in the meantime.

*crosses fingers and hopes Yahweh sends the Lamb right into a Chinese artillery firing range*
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Simon_Jester wrote:
Stuart wrote:It's called Dramatic Tension :twisted:
Well... there's dramatic tension and then there's dramatic elastic-deformation.

Dramatic tension comes from "Will Our Hero defeat the dreaded Slavering Gaoogabeast? Find out next week!" Or other, related things: there's some question not just of when something will happen, but if it will happen.

Dramatic elastic deformation comes from trying to play out dramatic tension past the point where it begins permanently warping audience expectations, when the fight against the Slavering Gaoogabeast is stretched out into ten or fifteen weekly episodes. At some point, delaying the resolution of a conflict doesn't add more tension; it just dilutes the plot.

We haven't reached that point here, not as far as I'm concerned, but that's mostly because of the side-plots Stuart's been running.
That is a good way of putting it Simon but I am not worried about the story being stretched beyond reasonable bounds. There is no reason to suspect that Stuart's philosophy of fiction writing would be morphed to the unbearable here given the nature of all the TBOverse stuff that I amongst many have enjoyed immensely. And BTW, that's another reason, with TBO still going (inter alia), Stu may not have the time should he have the inclination to stretch things out with filler!

A second BTW; Stuart has just put out a stand alone TBOverse story for the, ahem, mano-e-mano combat fans, this time a gladitorial contest.
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