Big Orange wrote:I must say it is Moffat's weakest screenplay yet and while RTD crassly laid on the deaths too thick in many stories, most of Moffat's stories having no proper deaths kinda kills the tension; I enjoyed the first half of the episode, but it pettered out halfway through. I give it a 3 (or a 5/10) due to the engaging performances and the setting of Starship UK (which strongly reminded me of Rapture from the BioShock franchise).
I get that lots of death has become the norm, but to be honest, I didn't even notice that noone had died in the last two episodes, and certainly didn't miss it. In the context of the previous series, the 'everybody lives' ending of the gas mask episode was awesome, but the emphasis on the lack of death lost something by repetition in the library episodes. It wasn't registered in these two episodes, and wasn't made a big thing of, so if he can tell good Doctor Who stories without necessarily needing to rack up a bodycount, then I'm all for it.
It's not Midsomer Murders, after all. Besides, it's not as if there's ever really any tension anyway in a show where the assistant is guaranteed not to die and we get advanced warning whenever the main character is going to die and be reborn, and we know by and large, we're never going to see anyone other than the extended family and friends of the companion again.
On reflection, the main problem of this episode for me was that it doesn't really stand up when you stop and think about it - yes, they're torturing an innocent lifeform for their own ends, but it's hardly the worst thing we've ever seen anyone do, and you would think that there'd be a good number of the population on Starship UK who'd just shrug their shoulders and go 'fuck the whale, I want to live'.
Maybe some extra evil would have been better, like maybe the starwhales could reproduce by budding or something like that, and it's actually been space-whalers who've hunted the thing to the brink of extinction, so now we had the last one travelling through the universe to the sacred budding grounds, or whatever, to the space nursery, only to be 'intercepted' by humans and so miss the breeding window. Then we get humans torturing an intelligent being and actually directly causing its extinction by preventing it from breeding. Then we could still have the same reveal about the fact that the whale chose to give up its own chance to breed to save the human children. We could then have lost some of the action queen stuff in favour of some exposition about space whales and maybe some more impacts on the ship itself, like nightmares or actually hearing some form of the whale's screaming, but distorted, so it could only be recognised when the Doctor did his thing.
Also, did anyone see any buildings with northern names on them? I saw Devon, Surrey, Essex, and my sister *thinks* she may have seen Yorkshire, but wasn't sure.