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Dark Hellion wrote:How the hell are they suffering overpopulation pressures with 134 million people? Seriously?
Canabi's 2nd planet is only the size of mars, and the surface is 95% water. They have maybe 5% of the land available to them that we do. 134 million is plenty to cause such issues.
5% of 144,798,500 km2 is still 7.2 million square kilometers. Japan has a population of 128 million in a land area of 377,944 km2. China has only about 2 million more square miles (9,640,821 km2) and supports 1.3 billion people. That is without utilizing bio tech and fully harvesting the ocean.

In short your idea is terrible.
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Grif wrote:Must have been a really small planet for 134 million to be considered overcrowding. Or they just have larger requirements for space?
Their planet has 1 useable continent the size of Australia. That's it. The rest is water and some scattered islands and one smaller, and rather unpleasant continent in the artic that was facing riots due to poor conditions, partially due to weather and partially due to STILL being overpopulated, despite the fact that nobody wanted to live there. Strictly speaking, the planet is about the size of Mars. This might explain why the simini are so small, weak and frail. A lack of land and low gravity.
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avianmosquito wrote:
Dark Hellion wrote:How the hell are they suffering overpopulation pressures with 134 million people? Seriously?
Canabi's 2nd planet is only the size of mars, and the surface is 95% water. They have maybe 5% of the land available to them that we do. 134 million is plenty to cause such issues.
5% of 144,798,500 km2 is still 7.2 million square kilometers. Japan has a population of 128 million in a land area of 377,944 km2. China has only about 2 million more square miles (9,640,821 km2) and supports 1.3 billion people. That is without utilizing bio tech and fully harvesting the ocean.

In short your idea is terrible.
Recalculate, dumbass. Not all of earth is useable (more specifically arable) land. In fact, most of it isn't even land.
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avianmosquito wrote:Recalculate, dumbass. Not all of earth is useable (more specifically arable) land.
Australia has 7,617,930 km2 of land, and you have added in even more room to grow. You fail to recognize that any land can be made to grow food with hydroponics, so called green buildings with entire walls of gardens contained within. You also fail to address the fact that Japan, with a great deal of mountains and steep unusable land has nearly that population in 1/25th the land. In short you're more retarded than I would have thought, and that is saying something.
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Dark Hellion wrote:How the hell are they suffering overpopulation pressures with 134 million people? Seriously?
Yeah, I'm thinking about upping that an (octal) order of magnitude. This, orbitals, and a more constant method for moving the population should suffice.

How about starting with 16 million per system, then 2 million every 8 years from there on out, as just 16 wouldn't cut it anymore. To increase the effect, the addition of orbitals should help them lessen their population.
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avianmosquito wrote:Recalculate, dumbass. Not all of earth is useable (more specifically arable) land.
Australia has 7,617,930 km2 of land, and you have added in even more room to grow. You fail to recognize that any land can be made to grow food with hydroponics, so called green buildings with entire walls of gardens contained within. You also fail to address the fact that Japan, with a great deal of mountains and steep unusable land has nearly that population in 1/25th the land. In short you're more retarded than I would have thought, and that is saying something.
I already said I was upping it, asshole. You can stop now.
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avianmosquito wrote:
Norade wrote:
avianmosquito wrote:Recalculate, dumbass. Not all of earth is useable (more specifically arable) land.
Australia has 7,617,930 km2 of land, and you have added in even more room to grow. You fail to recognize that any land can be made to grow food with hydroponics, so called green buildings with entire walls of gardens contained within. You also fail to address the fact that Japan, with a great deal of mountains and steep unusable land has nearly that population in 1/25th the land. In short you're more retarded than I would have thought, and that is saying something.
I already said I was upping it, asshole. You can stop now.
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Dark Hellion wrote:[How the hell are they suffering overpopulation pressures with 134 million people? Seriously?
Canabi's 2nd planet is only the size of mars, and the surface is 95% water. They have maybe 5% of the land available to them that we do. 134 million is plenty to cause such issues.
Funny you didn't seem to think that way just very shortly before I posted, nor after my first post on the subject and you only mentioned increasing population size after I had posted. So shut the fuck up you ass pulling tard.

Not to mention your original response.
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Noarde wrote:
Canabi's 2nd planet is only the size of mars, and the surface is 95% water. They have maybe 5% of the land available to them that we do. 134 million is plenty to cause such issues.
5% of 144,798,500 km2 is still 7.2 million square kilometers. Japan has a population of 128 million in a land area of 377,944 km2. China has only about 2 million more square miles (9,640,821 km2) and supports 1.3 billion people. That is without utilizing bio tech and fully harvesting the ocean.

In short your idea is terrible.
Recalculate, dumbass. Not all of earth is useable (more specifically arable) land. In fact, most of it isn't even land.
Even though I calculated for a 5% usable Mars land mass number and then you claimed that sudden;y some of that 5% is now suddenly water...
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Jeremy wrote:A max population of 134 is going to put a lot of radical changes on society. There will probably be a lot of things they never discovered just because of the lack of manhours available.

What about the Stargate approach? That would solve a lot of the problems.
134 doesn't produce too bad of a lack of manhours, and simini are an old species. (Over 2 million years.) But yes, this is true. This is why their biotech is so advanced, but their mechanical tech is only early-21st century, they only have so much manpower to work on such things, so more went to medical and biological research (originally due to the dire need to quickly respond to the health problems caused by an overpopulated post-industrial society) instead of meachanical research.

As far as stargates, simini simply lack the technology for FTL travel in general.
Try this:
The Simini live on an ocean world, land is scarce, and they have run out of room. They've become really good at genetic research but not so far in other things (it's plausible especially if they have a hard time getting into space). They've never quite fit in on their planet, though, almost like they were from a different world and this is finally confirmed when an archeological dig finds a Stargate. Turns out, two million years ago a Progenitor species populated a few worlds with experiments and then disappeared. On a desolate world the Simini find a population of some species in the genius Homo. The Simini appear as gods and fix some of their problems in return they serve the Simini (as is or uplifted) and are now called the Kokome.

When the Simini get greedy and send the Kokome into the slaughter on the Swamp/Cave Lizard world the two species split from their cozy relationship.

Use that if you want.
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Dark Hellion wrote:Not really dude. Japan has a population of 128 million people and it sure as hell ain't 5% of the land area. Especially with the species having good genetic engineering skills they can turn some of that ocean space into food production as well.

The number is just really small as far as any space going population is concerned, so small as to be rather absurd and horribly implausible with out a lot of ass pulling.
How's 1.07 billion for a better number? That's nearly a sixth of earth's population. Even with their small size and advanced technology, that's still 3 times Earth's population density, and Earth is horridly overpopulated. Logic says they should be seriously freaking out, and let's sat they're already using orbitals, and can't get it to drop fast enough with just this.
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Jeremy wrote:
avianmosquito wrote:
Jeremy wrote:A max population of 134 is going to put a lot of radical changes on society. There will probably be a lot of things they never discovered just because of the lack of manhours available.

What about the Stargate approach? That would solve a lot of the problems.
134 doesn't produce too bad of a lack of manhours, and simini are an old species. (Over 2 million years.) But yes, this is true. This is why their biotech is so advanced, but their mechanical tech is only early-21st century, they only have so much manpower to work on such things, so more went to medical and biological research (originally due to the dire need to quickly respond to the health problems caused by an overpopulated post-industrial society) instead of meachanical research.

As far as stargates, simini simply lack the technology for FTL travel in general.
Try this:

The Simini live on an ocean world, land is scarce, and they have run out of room. They've become really good at genetic research but not so far in other things (it's plausible especially if they have a hard time getting into space). They've never quite fit in on their planet, though, almost like they were from a different world and this is finally confirmed when an archeological dig finds a Stargate. Turns out, two million years ago a Progenitor species populated a few worlds with experiments and then disappeared. On a desolate world the Simini find a population of some species in the genius Homo. The Simini appear as gods and fix some of their problems in return they serve the Simini (as is or uplifted) and are now called the Kokome.

When the Simini get greedy and send the Kokome into the slaughter on the Swamp/Cave Lizard world the two species split from their cozy relationship.

Use that if you want.
I'm using parts of this already.

I've long since decided Canabi was an oceanic world, and faced overpopulation. (I also raised that number to over a billion.)

I've been toying with the whole precursor idea for a while, and decided that the precursors would be responsible for the simini, ferroningen, the andheili (Anod's inhabitants) and kakarian dragons,amongst others. I've no purpose for them to do this, just the "who knows, who cares. Point is, they did." set up, as this was over 2 million years ago.

Also, I don't believe a leftover stargate from 2 million years ago is plausible, and the simini's travel time is plot-critical.
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Even though I calculated for a 5% usable Mars land mass number and then you claimed that sudden;y some of that 5% is now suddenly water...
I believed you had made a mistake. I believed you had calculated from Earth's total surface area. When I went back and did the math, I realized that even though my guess had been fairly accurate, you were right. That's when I changed it to 1.07 billion. I believe I owe you an apology, probably two, but you can't expect one because you owe me five times that.
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avianmosquito wrote:
Even though I calculated for a 5% usable Mars land mass number and then you claimed that sudden;y some of that 5% is now suddenly water...
I believed you had made a mistake. I believed you had calculated from Earth's total surface area. When I went back and did the math, I realized that even though my guess had been fairly accurate, you were right. That's when I changed it to 1.07 billion. I believe I owe you an apology, probably two, but you can't expect one because you owe me five times that.
Fuck off you condescending twat. You are the one who came here, saw fit not to be familiar with any of the rules or culture of the forum, started posting asinine and unbelievable tripe based around shitty barely wikipedia levels of knowledge and now you have the fucking audacity to get on a fucking pedestal. Just take your lumps like a man, learn to scrap your shittier ideas and rework your usable ones and stop expecting people to just sit in awe of your brilliance.
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Dark Hellion wrote:
avianmosquito wrote:
Even though I calculated for a 5% usable Mars land mass number and then you claimed that sudden;y some of that 5% is now suddenly water...
I believed you had made a mistake. I believed you had calculated from Earth's total surface area. When I went back and did the math, I realized that even though my guess had been fairly accurate, you were right. That's when I changed it to 1.07 billion. I believe I owe you an apology, probably two, but you can't expect one because you owe me five times that.
Fuck off you condescending twat. You are the one who came here, saw fit not to be familiar with any of the rules or culture of the forum, started posting asinine and unbelievable tripe based around shitty barely wikipedia levels of knowledge and now you have the fucking audacity to get on a fucking pedestal. Just take your lumps like a man, learn to scrap your shittier ideas and rework your usable ones and stop expecting people to just sit in awe of your brilliance.
Thanks for saving me the effort of saying just that.
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Dark Hellion wrote:Fuck off you condescending twat.
Hell of a start. You think I'm condescending, I'll show you condescending. I'll even do a better job than norade. (Might be hard, but I can.)

1. Get a dictionary before you throw out a word.

2.
You are the one who came here, saw fit not to be familiar with any of the rules or culture of the forum...
As did you, at one time.

3.
...started posting asinine and unbelievable tripe based around shitty barely wikipedia levels of knowledge...
...and asked for HELP, asshole. When someone asks for your help, you either help them or you don't, but you don't sit there and insult them without ever providing a shred of useable criticism like norade did. He hasn't helped one fucking bit, he's just been an asshole. He deserves no more respect than he's given me, and I'm done putting up with him.

3.
...and now you have the fucking audacity to get on a fucking pedestal.
This? I'm still giving that glorified troll more respect than he gave me, how is that "getting on a fucking pedestal?"

4.
Just take your lumps like a man, learn to scrap your shittier ideas and rework your usable ones...
Stop assuming you know what's going on in my head. I've been doing this more or less right, and that doesn't mean throwing out every idea just because it's got a problem. I'm here to IMPROVE these ideas, not throw them out as soon as an issue is realised. If I did that, I'd never get anything done.

5.
...and stop expecting people to just sit in awe of your brilliance.
What the fuck is wrong with you? What makes you think you know what I'm thinking, what I want? I don't want fans, I want critics, I've said that a thousand fucking times, but apperently you weren't listening. If any of you turned into a screaming fangirl, I'd tell you to get the fuck out of forum and go shine someone else's E-penis. But, of course, assumptions like yours don't need any merit, do they? They just need to be loud, and crass, and profane, and everybody will sit around and feed your fucking ego, right?

Piss off.
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Norade wrote: Thanks for saving me the effort of saying just that.
Fuck off and die, you worthless piece of shit glorified troll. All you do is sit there and insult people. You don't provide any useful criticism, you just bits of what others have said, things you probably don't even understand, and throw them out with a bunch of profanity, failed attempts at wit and "retard" every third word, which is, judging by what you've shown here, the best you can do. If you died not a single tear would be shed for you, at least not here, and atbest you might get a mild chuckle from me. If you think you deserve people's attention that much, go troll youtube like everyone else and stop getting in the way of people who are actually trying to help. Better yet, put on a blindfold and stand on a train track, this world neither wants nor needs you.
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Dark Hellion wrote:Fuck off you condescending twat.
Hell of a start. You think I'm condescending, I'll show you condescending. I'll even do a better job than norade. (Might be hard, but I can.)

1. Get a dictionary before you throw out a word.
I'd say coming in and first post asking for a new forum to be made is pretty damn condescending.
You are the one who came here, saw fit not to be familiar with any of the rules or culture of the forum...
2. As did you, at one time.
Most people lurk here before they join and know the board a bit. Hell even looking at the banner should have told you you were in for a world of shit.
...started posting asinine and unbelievable tripe based around shitty barely wikipedia levels of knowledge...
3. ...and asked for HELP, asshole. When someone asks for your help, you either help them or you don't, but you don't sit there and insult them without ever providing a shred of useable criticism like norade did. He hasn't helped one fucking bit, he's just been an asshole. He deserves no more respect than he's given me, and I'm done putting up with him.
So me doing research you should have done is providing nothing now? Fuck off and die you pompous ass.
...and now you have the fucking audacity to get on a fucking pedestal.
3. 4. (Seeing as you can't grasp counting either) This? I'm still giving that glorified troll more respect than he gave me, how is that "getting on a fucking pedestal?"
Considering this board I'm doing nothing wrong, attacking me for going out of my way to provide you numbers and ideas makes you the dick.
Just take your lumps like a man, learn to scrap your shittier ideas and rework your usable ones...
5. Stop assuming you know what's going on in my head. I've been doing this more or less right, and that doesn't mean throwing out every idea just because it's got a problem. I'm here to IMPROVE these ideas, not throw them out as soon as an issue is realised. If I did that, I'd never get anything done.
Considering most of you ideas are utter shit and not worth saving, and reaction to your ideas has been universally negative on this board just maybe your ideas are too shit to improve.
...and stop expecting people to just sit in awe of your brilliance.
6. What the fuck is wrong with you? What makes you think you know what I'm thinking, what I want? I don't want fans, I want critics, I've said that a thousand fucking times, but apperently you weren't listening. If any of you turned into a screaming fangirl, I'd tell you to get the fuck out of forum and go shine someone else's E-penis. But, of course, assumptions like yours don't need any merit, do they? They just need to be loud, and crass, and profane, and everybody will sit around and feed your fucking ego, right?

Piss off.
Yet when you get critics you do this... I'm sorry but I'm not taking off my asshole gloves to deal with you or anybody else unless they give me a good reason to.
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Norade wrote: Thanks for saving me the effort of saying just that.
Fuck off and die, you worthless piece of shit glorified troll. All you do is sit there and insult people. You don't provide any useful criticism, you just bits of what others have said, things you probably don't even understand, and throw them out with a bunch of profanity, failed attempts at wit and "retard" every third word, which is, judging by what you've shown here, the best you can do. If you died not a single tear would be shed for you, at least not here, and atbest you might get a mild chuckle from me. If you think you deserve people's attention that much, go troll youtube like everyone else and stop getting in the way of people who are actually trying to help. Better yet, put on a blindfold and stand on a train track, this world neither wants nor needs you.
Oh, he gets mad as well as writing shitty fiction. This could be a fun one guys!

I also don't give a shit what you think of me. If I'm spamming the mods will come smack me down in due course, however as I'm not the worst that will happen is this thread gets HOS'd as it devolves into insults. IMO it should have been binned a while back when it was clear you wanted us to do all your work for you.

Also unlike you I don't expect people who know me only on a web board to give a shit one way or the other about me. Nor would I care much about others passing on unless they're somebody I respect or care about.

That train bit, it's good, maybe the almighty retard men you're writing about should do that. It seems more glorious than being written about by you.
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As much fun as it may be to tear into someone's personality defects, let's keep the discussion targeted on the arguments relevant to the thread rather than any individual, or daddy will close the playground.
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Lagmonster wrote:As much fun as it may be to tear into someone's personality defects, let's keep the discussion targeted on the arguments relevant to the thread rather than any individual, or daddy will close the playground.
Thank you, but it might be better off locked. This is going nowhere fast, and no new ideas have been given.

Essentially, It's come down to a big mess with no new criticism coming in, just the same thing over and over again.

My vote: stop it now, before it degenerates even further.
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Lagmonster wrote:As much fun as it may be to tear into someone's personality defects, let's keep the discussion targeted on the arguments relevant to the thread rather than any individual, or daddy will close the playground.
I would agree for similar reasons, this is a flame fest in potentia and it has only started erupting. His inability to take criticism from the board when having asked for it is truly shocking. I am not surprised that he wants to tuck tail and run.
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Norade wrote:
Lagmonster wrote:As much fun as it may be to tear into someone's personality defects, let's keep the discussion targeted on the arguments relevant to the thread rather than any individual, or daddy will close the playground.
I would agree for similar reasons, this is a flame fest in potentia and it has only started erupting. His inability to take criticism from the board when having asked for it is truly shocking. I am not surprised that he wants to tuck tail and run.
You really don't get it, do you? From your point of view I never listen... Just say something worth hearing.
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...Yeah, this going to go nowhere but for the TLDR crowd.

A: "I HAVE NEW IDEA!"

B-Q: "Flaws..."

A: "U dont undrstand!"

B-J: "That makes even less sense, why not..."

A: "SHUT UP!"

That about sums up the thread.

Since said poster is now down to screeching louder and louder, the problem is that at start the idea is flawed in the depth of explaination. Sometimes it is better just to simply slot it in the background, with only you having said knowledge and making a story people want to read rather then trying to satisfy the rage that will happen because you are not up to creating a new species that may as well be labeled MacGuffin. As for story problems of having a race that is a jack of all trades, that's entirely another issue that you have to tackle and involves the similar problems of logic of making said race. You can have your super animal of super adaption but always the explaination is going to be a superior race fucking around because their resources are just that vast or some asinine idea that this is better then what happens in reality in war/commerce/science. And unless you can pull off your idea with a degree of skill and logic that it is handled within people's suspension of disbelief, you will get mocked.
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Ghost Rider wrote:...Yeah, this going to go nowhere but for the TLDR crowd.

A: "I HAVE NEW IDEA!"

B-Q: "Flaws..."

A: "U dont undrstand!"

B-J: "That makes even less sense, why not..."

A: "SHUT UP!"

That about sums up the thread.

Since said poster is now down to screeching louder and louder, the problem is that at start the idea is flawed in the depth of explaination. Sometimes it is better just to simply slot it in the background, with only you having said knowledge and making a story people want to read rather then trying to satisfy the rage that will happen because you are not up to creating a new species that may as well be labeled MacGuffin. As for story problems of having a race that is a jack of all trades, that's entirely another issue that you have to tackle and involves the similar problems of logic of making said race. You can have your super animal of super adaption but always the explaination is going to be a superior race fucking around because their resources are just that vast or some asinine idea that this is better then what happens in reality in war/commerce/science. And unless you can pull off your idea with a degree of skill and logic that it is handled within people's suspension of disbelief, you will get mocked.
Yeah, pretty much. It's probably because I've never touched upon this level of detail in any book. Their characteristics are unexplained, and their history is a big blank. All that is known is that they're genetically engineered, simini were resbobsible, there was some vague war or something, and now, 500 years later, they're somehow no more advanced than humans. (Except for computers, their computers are outrageous.)

The history I more or less made up after only a few hours of thought, and I should of left it as vague as possible. Instead, I should of explained their culture because it's more important, noted when I made changes instead of just moving on, and ignored norade entirely.

Translation: I fucked up. If it's not too much to ask, forget the history debacle, and stick with their physiology and culture. If this is not possible, let's lock down the thread and forget it.
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avianmosquito wrote:Thank you, but it might be better off locked. This is going nowhere fast, and no new ideas have been given.
Now, that's just silly. To an intelligent person, criticism is a potential source of new ideas, because realizing a problem exists gives you a motive to come up with a new idea to fix it.
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Simon_Jester wrote:Which also renders them sterile.
Shush. If you hadn't have mentioned it, Skeeter might have considered it, leading to more hilarity.
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Dark Hellion wrote:Not really dude. Japan has a population of 128 million people and it sure as hell ain't 5% of the land area. Especially with the species having good genetic engineering skills they can turn some of that ocean space into food production as well.
You also run into problems with limited supply of metals, though. Japan isn't self-sufficient in anything; a modern civilization needs a steady supply of more than just food to keep its population alive.

If the Simini live on a planet with roughly the overall land mass of Australia, their population is sharply limited even if they can catch enough fish to feed billions.
avianmosquito wrote:Revised version of the plot:

At ~1200bc, The simini, who have a total population of ~134 million of a small planet and facing overpopulation issues, selected 4 different systems to invade...
Invade how? Do you mean "colonize?" Or do you mean "military conquest of the target?"

Also, for a planet to face overpopulation at ~134 million... there are about three ways to rationalize this. One is to make the habitable surface of the planet extremely small: think Polynesia World. In that case, the available land for living on is painfully limited, and the Simini will be forced to make very serious compromises between having places to put their cities and having places to put mines and stuff... especially if they don't want to destroy the land-based part of their ecosystem.

Another is to make the planet extremely inhospitable: think New Mexico World. There are places where large populations can survive, but not many, and the lack of good farmland limits the carrying capacity of the planet. It's also possible for the Simini to have done this to themselves in the distant past, with a biowar that got out of hand or something. Which might explain their aversion to the use of WMD.

The third is to make it so that each Simini requires a very large amount of habitable land to support them. This works best for very large intelligent beings (who eat a lot, and thus need many acres of farmland per member) or for intelligent carnivores (who eat meat, and thus need a lot of grazing/fodder land to support a herd of cattle for each member).

The catch is that even with these factors, overpopulation alone does not explain invading other planets, because if I have the technology to build an STL sleeper ship, I have the technology to build orbital habitats that can solve my population problem at a much lower energy cost. What's more plausible is that there was a "lebensraum" movement on the Simini homeworld that wanted to control planets with larger available landmass.
Kakara was easy, the only intelligent species on the land didn't really care. The simians response was universally "As long as you're pleasant, and we'll be glad to have you as neighbors." while the dragons, being nomads, had nothing at stake in the matter. The sea-mammals were overlooked due to their aquatic nature, and were too primitive to mean much anyway. Even later, when they started raiding simini cities, they never amounted to anything.
Conflicts between nomads and settled people are common, because nomads aren't equally happy to live everywhere. Both sides want the most fertile available land. The nomads say "we want to forage/hunt/graze our herds in this valley" and the settled people say "we want to farm this valley." That can easily lead to violence.
avianmosquito wrote:As far as stargates, simini simply lack the technology for FTL travel in general.
You can make them ancient artifacts.

The reason this is such a good idea is that it destroys all questions of the form "if the Simini have starships, they should be able to do X." That's the point: they don't. Nor can they move heavy equipment through the gates, except in pieces and slowly. So suddenly the idea of carpet-bombing their enemies with nukes becomes a bit less practical.
Only Sentrus posed them problems... They had tough, but not impenetrable, immune systems, were resistant to thermal weapons...
Again, one wonders about your definition of "thermal weapons." If you mean "like having boiling water poured on you," I can imagine a living creature that would shrug that off pretty well if they had a thick coat of scales and a layer of heat-resistant tissue underneath the scales. If you mean "like napalm," nothing made out of meat can survive that, because the stuff is burning at temperatures well over what it takes to ignite organic matter.
Their enemies were ferroningen, reptiles 100 million in number, a 200-1 numbers advantage for their infantrey, used mostly bows and other primitive weapons. They also used seige weapons, including ballistae small enough to be carried and set up by a single ferroningen, and catapults that could be assembled on-scene and carried in a backpack. (Shoot&scoot. You know how it works.) They could bombard simini bases and get the hell out of dodge in a heartbeat.
Ballistas and catapults aren't enough firepower to be all that effective as bombardment weapons against an enemy with helicopter-mounted machine guns. I don't care how fast your crew can set up and knock down a trebuchet, it just doesn't pack that kind of punch. You'd be better off just sneaking into the settlement and stabbing your enemies in the neck or something.
This didn't work worth a damn. Armoured coaches, although too much for most infantry, were no match for simini tanks, and were usually killed in a heartbeat, even if their ballistae could pierce the armour on the simini tank.
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...It would be really, really difficult, if not impossible, to build mechanical artillery that could penetrate a vehicle armored to resist even small arms fire.
They would ambush patrols of infantry, hitting them from behind and usually either killing them before the patrol could return fire. Against small patrols, a quick volley at a distance with bows was sufficient. Against larger patrols, they would sneak up to point blank and engage them with mellee weapons, which simini were defenseless against due to their small, frail bodies and lack of physical strength. (Rifles are useless at that range.)
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Automatic rifles have proved quite effective in close combat, as shown by the fact that modern armies have stopped bothering to issue bayonets to the infantry. However, with the Ferroningen being big tough saurian types and the Simini being monkeys with accordingly sized weapons (their infantry LMGs would probably have to be smaller and lighter than most human submachine guns)... I suppose I can see it.
When dealing with armour, the ferroningen were smart. They set an ambush in the swampland, where the warm mud made it so they didn't need sunlight, and used a ballistae or rocket (they did have them, after all) to shoot the tank in the back of the turret, the 1kg bolt or cannonball penetrating the thin armour on the tank's rear and causing a casualty, killing the gunner or disabling the cannon.
Just how thin was this armor, anyway? Also, rockets are not effective against tanks unless they have a shaped charge warhead or are artillery-sized; a tank will laugh at a firework rocket, even a big one.
Helicopters were a bigger threat, as they could clean up an artillery site in less than a minute and weren't vulnerable to their fire, however, they were rarely armoured significantly to defend from ferroningen shooting them with bows or even throwing fucking rocks. (Not to mention the molotov coctail and the ferroningen sticky, a hand grenade coated in adhesive, which stuck to the helicopter and exploded.)
Could they not just fly too high to be reached by muscle-powered weapons? I mean, I can hit the ground with a minigun from much higher up than some guy on the ground can hit me with a thrown spear.
2. Bombard the northern hemisphere into oblivion. They didn't have that kind of firepower, as they had long since used up all their nuclear weapons trying to get the ferroningen to yield, manufacture of nuclear weapons anywhere but Canabi (their original system) was illegal until 512 years of war had passed.
...WHY? Seriously, this is retarded. First of all, because 512 years of war is an extremely long time; any war in human history resolved itself long before that point. It would make far more sense to simply ban the nuclear weapons outright.
Even if they could, they couldn't obtain enough uranium to nuke the planet, let alone enough to nuke the planet and fly their ships. Dragging asteroids to impact the planet was unsatisfactory, as it would consume more fuel than they could produce, and doing that kind of damage would ruin the environment of the entire planet they were trying to capture.
Now... this makes somewhat more sense, but I'm not sure how much more sense. Refining weapons-grade fissile material takes a lot of resources; so does making thousands of tons of rocket fuel.

It's still pretty arbitrary, but it's not completely insane.
1. Necros, (a human nickname given to them over 2200 years later) introduced in ~200bc, were designed to be virtually indestructible. They were the first design made, and by far the cheapest. The initial design, the cadavre, could take 4.5 times the punishment that regular humans could, didn't bleed as much from damage to the liver or kidneys, had 10 times the physical endurance, slept only half as much, and felt no pain. To top this off, they had a toxic saliva that swiftly blew out the target's renal system in large amounts, worked on almost all forms of carbon-based life that had such a system, wouldn't harm the necros in the small amounts that entered their blood and could not be treated by ferroningen technology. Their design blew out their adrenal system, ruined their health, and caused them to never last more than a few years before they died. Their health deteriorating lowered their physical strength, they suffered serious brain damage due to the chemicals responsible for their mutation, were rendered sterile, and so forth. In the end, they were no more capable than regular humans, (possible less) and were therefore deemed unfit for combat and used simply as slaves, humans handling the more complex tasks they were incapable off, simini commanding them.
OK. This kind of makes some sense. They lack the supercharged metabolism and other contrived stuff; you could accomplish a lot of this by just engineering out their pain sensitivity and other tricks like that.
2. Nosferatu, (also a nickname they didn't have for millenia), introduced in ~140bc, were designed for speed. The initial design, the feral, was a little tougher than a regular human, was a little stronger, but averaged speeds normally seen in world-class human athletes and could maintain them for longer. They were also smarter than cadavres, but still brain damaged to the point of being animals, (cunning animals, but animals)...
The problem with this is that animals aren't really smart enough to take orders.
The nosferatu and teras were designed to breed with one another, when they had a male child it resulted in a teras, when a female child it meant a nosferatu. Both failed 25% of the time, but when the genes failed to carry properly it created a human, who was cheaply converted into a necros.
Where did they find humans again, anyway? It might actually make more sense to avoid using humans, because human genetics make it hard for this kind of thing to work. An alien species that uses a different type of sex chromosome system might be much easier to modify this way into two highly dimorphic sexes.
They were between the first and second grade of necros in tolerance to damage (5x that of humans) and healing rate, (25x that of humans)...
Remember the criticisms of that super-accelerated healing rate. Realistically, it's more important that wounds heal well than that they heal quickly, because only a tiny percentage of your army will be down with wounds at any one time. Giving them the ability to recover fully from things like damage to nerves and joints makes far more sense than just making them heal from anything in three days. It's more realistic, it's more useful, and it doesn't make biologists want to claw their eyes out so badly.
Also, when in combat or injured, their metabolism goes up to 16 times a normal human's, allowing the body to free up resources and energy to improve their athletic performance in combat and heal faster.
Again, this really is too fast. Maybe... four times? I don't know. Not sixteen.
Kokome also had tails added, although not for all of them. The addition of a prehensile tail meant they were to be used in the special forces, (shock troops and commandos are both counted in this) and served as more than a marker.
I submit that this was probably unnecessary and not very helpful, BUT to the simini (who are basically sentient monkeys) it may have seemed like a good idea at the time. Also, if they (I still don't know how) were familiar with Earth biology, they would have found prehensile-tail monkeys whose DNA is already fairly close to that of humans. You probably could modify humans with a prehensile tail, because we're closely related to other species that have it.
Kokome were designed entirely partially for usage on Sentrus, but also saw use on other planets cecause a couple hundred years before the ferroningen decided to reveal they had spent the last thousand years in their little tunnels using stolen simini equipment to build a naval fleet bigger than the simini one, and simini simulators to train a crew. (Although they couldn't reverse-engineer much of the more advanced stuff because of their low intelligence and lack of creativity, with enough study they figured out how to use it, and how to read simini characters.)
How did they do all this without it being visible from space? You can't build an entire self-sustaining industrial civilization underground.
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avianmosquito wrote:I'm using parts of this already.

I've long since decided Canabi was an oceanic world, and faced overpopulation. (I also raised that number to over a billion.)

I've been toying with the whole precursor idea for a while, and decided that the precursors would be responsible for the simini, ferroningen, the andheili (Anod's inhabitants) and kakarian dragons,amongst others. I've no purpose for them to do this, just the "who knows, who cares. Point is, they did." set up, as this was over 2 million years ago.

Also, I don't believe a leftover stargate from 2 million years ago is plausible, and the simini's travel time is plot-critical.
In the duration of time between the Simini finidng the Kokome and the Kokome becoming disgruntled, the Simini have filled out their tech a little and have arrived on a planet which allows them access to space (less gravity? more hard metals?). When the Kokome become disgruntled they seize control of the stargate on one planet and begin raids into other worlds from there. The Simini have to keep there sides open for plot, but the Kokome can keep theirs closed on will. So now the Simini have to build a fleet in orbit of the Kakarian Dargon's world (low grav lets the dragons fly). This would give a little drama as the Kokome have to capture this planet to be truly free of the Simini and it gives a time delay as the Simini warfleet travels between the stars.

But just to warn you, any technology base which allows travel between the stars is probably capable of destroying a planet's environment from space, so the Simini are going to need a good reason to want to retake the Ferroningen world (or wherever the Kokome have based themselves).
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Space colonization as a means to alleviate population pressure on the homeworld is a little silly. Population pressure expresses as a shortage of resources and blasting people into space is stupidly resource-intensive. Interstellar colonies as a source of resources within these constraints are similarly silly both because of the high cost of transportation and the long time lag before the homeworld can see anything come back. Maintaining an empire at all across such distances shouldn't be possible because it can't be directed, much less enforced. The only reasonable motive I see for this is conquest for conquest's sake.
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