Your stats should look like this, unless i am mistaken:
WS 30 + 10 + 3
BS 30 + 10 + 3
S 25 + 10 + 5 + 2
T 30 +10
Ag 30 + 10
Int 35
Per 35
WB 35
Fel 35 - 10
Actually, you need 40 in Willpower for some of your talents. I would suggest switching 5 points out of intelligence into it.
Furthermore, you might consider switching 5 points of of Fellowship into BS - you are going to use the latter much more.
So essentially, your character sheet ends up looking like this if we make the necessary adjustments above:
WS 43 BS 43 S 42 T 40 Ag 40 Int 30 Per 35 WP 40 Fel 25
Wounds: 22 Fate Points: 3
Insanity: 21 (should be less due to your better WP-bonus) Corruption: 11 (same thing)
Movement: 4/8/12/24
Skills: Awareness +20, Carouse, Chem-Use +10, Concealement, Demolition, Drive (Ground Vehicle) +20, Medicae +10, Navigation (Surface) +20, Pilot (Military Craft) +20, Search, Shadowing, Silent Move, Survival +20, Tracking
Social Skills: Command +10, Deceive, Scrutiny
Knowledge Skills: Cipers (War Cant) +10, Literacy +10, Speak Language (Low&High Gothic) (you gain the latter automatically
Paragon Skills: Athletics Mastery
Talents: Basic Weapons Training (Las, Primitive), Blade Master, Combat Master, Deadeye Shot, Die Hard, Fearless, Furious Assault, Hard Target, Hardy, Heighten Senses (Hearing, Sight), Iron Jaw, Lightning Attack, Melee Weapon Training (Power, Primitive), Mighty Shot, Resistant (Psychic Powers), Sharpshooter, Sound Constitution (9), Strong Minded (100), Talented (Chem-use, Deceive, Disguise, Shadowing, Tracking), Thrown Weapons Training (Primitive), Total Recall, True Grit
Traits:
Special Operations Training: Hellguns/pistols gain Tearing, Carapace armor gains 1 level of quality and doesn't count for weight
Specialist Recon: +10 Concealement/Silent Move, +2 Initiative
Weapons: (all good quality)
Hellgun (50m; S/3/-; 1D10+6 E; Pen 7; Clip 30, Reload 2 Full; Tearing, Reliable)
Hellpistol (20m; S/2/-; 1D10+6 E; Pen 7; Clip 40; Reload 2 Full, Tearing, Reliable)
Power Sword (1D10+9, Pen 6, Balanced, Power Field, +5 WS)
Frag Grenade (12m; 2D10 X; Pen 0; Blast 5)
Krak Grenade (12m; 3D10+4 X; Pen 6)
Armour:
Cadian Stormtrooper Carapace (AP 7, Auspex, Re-breather, encrypted Micro-bead)
For further equipment, i would suggest:
Backpack Power Pack: 150 shots without reloading, standard issue for Storm Troopers and common availability
Grav-Chute: Fitting gear, scarce availability
Red-Dot Laser Sight: Scarce but dirt-cheap and standard issue for Storm Troopers. Especially useful since you take no penalty for aimed shots which require single shots anyway.
Cameoline Cloak: Actually, it would be more fitting if your armor had that capability. Rare availability
Charm: Everyone should have one.
Demolition Charges: Always good, and you can use them. Scarce
Stummers: +30 Move Silent! Average availability.
Of course, you have to ask our GM if those things are appropriate. Generally they are not too rare and look like standard equipment for Storm Troopers anyway. With that equipment, you will be quite good at infiltrating, which is the job you apparently want to do.
I'll be glad to go down in the purifying flames of the Ordo Hereticus as soon as it becomes benificial to the story as a whole. There's 65 000+ people on this ship for me to make a new character from, and a space hulk full of unlikely survivors. I'll enjoy the character building, especially if you let me know who was initially sent to inspect the hulk.
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