The Tales of Roma Mater

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The Tales of Roma Mater

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Being new to the board I thought I would start off things with a bang! :D

This thread will be the repository on this board for my story about Roma Mater. As of now there are four of them, the shortest 12 words, while the longest is right around 60K words.

Ever since I was a boy I have loved to read Sci Fi and history. Primarily the Classical and Napoleonic eras for the history part. So as I grew older I would find any sory or book I could on a Rome that never was. While some of these were quite good, all of them never went far enough for me. AKA taking them into space. :D

So when the 'opportunity' presented itself eight years ago I thought what the heck and began to dabble in the matters of the written word. Roma Mater and the Gunnyverse are the result of those initial forays into literature.

The first couple of posts will be background material on Roma Mater and then I will post The Siliconate War: Damnatio et Memoriae.

I originally posted these stories on Spacebattles, but getting any replies beyond a very few, either good or bad, was mystifying. So I chalked it up to this being original fic and not a crossover set of stories, which tends to be ignored in the creative writing forum over there. Which is fine by me, different strokes for different folks. But as an aspiring writer I need critique, both for and against.

So I am going to post them here too, in the hope that I can find constructive commentary, no matter the form. :D



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I remember that story- down hard to find in the back alleys of Original Fiction over on Spacebattles. A surviving Western Roman Empire into the interstellar- colonial age, and a couple of messy frontier incidents in the history thereof.

It'd be good to have it reposted somewhere in easier reach- although it might be as well to get some story up first and explain later, the mod is quite infodump- hostile; and there are at least a couple of members of the board who believe themselves specialists in Roman history, so prepare for a bumpy ride.

Push the explanation and the story along together, maybe?

PS- welcome to the board. It's not really as bad as they say it is, except on Tuesdays.
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Eleventh Century Remnant wrote:I remember that story- down hard to find in the back alleys of Original Fiction over on Spacebattles. A surviving Western Roman Empire into the interstellar- colonial age, and a couple of messy frontier incidents in the history thereof.

It'd be good to have it reposted somewhere in easier reach- although it might be as well to get some story up first and explain later, the mod is quite infodump- hostile; and there are at least a couple of members of the board who believe themselves specialists in Roman history, so prepare for a bumpy ride.

Push the explanation and the story along together, maybe?

PS- welcome to the board. It's not really as bad as they say it is, except on Tuesdays.
Thanks for the welcome Eleventh Century. :D And I will take your advice, and post the background stuff when asked for. As for input from the experts on Roma, I welcome any input they can provide. It can only improve the story. :D



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Prologue


Roman Star System Caria, Nova Tarentum I
3248 A.U.C. (2498 A.D.)


Technician Principale Iulius Vilanus parked his motorcycle behind a hedgerow and waited to see if his arrival had been noticed. When no shouts of recognition came forth he crouched and moved carefully towards the small farmhouse. The light from the red moon in the darkening night sky gave the whole area a sickly hue that reminded Vilanus of dried blood.

This is for the final payoff Iulius my boy. After this one you can retire to Campania, or even Roma Mater herself, and spend the rest of your life eating Helvetti cheese and drinking Gallic wine, Vilanus thought with a sense of satisfaction.

The thought of beaches, booze, and women brought a smile to his face as he approached the front door of the farmhouse. He knocked softly, waiting patiently for someone to answer the door. He glanced up at the stars and saw the yellow giant of Caria sinking below the horizon. “I’m comin’ girls, so have the hot tub warmed up,” Vilanus said softly.

The door opened up and Vilanus entered, then Demanus quickly closed it behind him. They moved to the kitchen where Iulius was startled to find the presence of someone else, who up until now had been unknown to him, was at this meeting. He turned angrily to Demanus, “what in the name of Pluto is going on Demanus, this was supposed to be a private meeting? And what’s your friend all dressed up for, the Festival of Saturnalia?”

Demanus moved between Vilanus and the large, hooded, and cloaked figure seated at the kitchen table. “This is my... employer Iulius, he wanted to talk to you to make sure everything was done correctly before he made the final payment.”

The bulky figure behind Demanus made no movement, but the rasp of his breathing filled the room. A labored breath that preceded each sentence. “You must answer... I must ensure... that it was done... before I can give... you your reward... tell me everything... that you have done.”

Vilanus rolled his eyes and pointed at the figure. “Look, Demanus hired me because I’m good at what I do. I put the virus in the orbital castra’s command sensor system like you paid me to do. The long-range sensors will be out of commission for at least three hours, starting at midnight, just like you wanted. And I don’t really care what you smugglers want to bring in and out of here. I just want my money!” Vilanus looked over at the kitchens wall chrono. “As a matter of fact, the system should have been offline for five minutes by now.”

At a strange chirp from something on the table Vilanus saw the figure reach out with a cadaverous looking arm and pick up the strange object. The figure lifted the device and looked at some sort of viewscreen. The head nodded and a tired voice rasped out. “You have done... as you have said... The plan is on... schedule.” A long shudder went through the figures body. “And now it... is time to find... a new home.”

Vilanus got a very bad feeling when he saw the fear in Demanus’ eyes.

Demanus’ voice whined out, “but not me, you promised! Not me!”

Vilanus watched the figure stand up and start towards him and felt a grip of icy fear when the withered arm pointed at him and the voice croaked out. “That one... will do...”

Vilanus turned and sprinted down the hallway towards the front door. He clawed at the doorknob, finally grabbing hold and jerked the door open. As he turned to look back down the hallway he saw over his shoulder that Demanus was aiming a strange looking weapon at him.

He turned and dove out of the doorway where he heard a soft <pfftt> and felt a sharp pain in the back of his neck. He felt his limbs grow heavy as got up and stumbled towards his motorcycle. He crashed to the ground and rolled on his back looking up at the stars.

Vilanus rolled his head to the side and saw Demanus and his friend move to stand over him. The large figure shrugged off his cloak and Vilanus looked on in abject horror at what lay beneath.

The gaunt body looked as if it had been human once, but in the moon’s red light it resembled a cadaver dipped in blood. The rock-looking thing attached to the walking dead man’s chest, which was pulsing, had wrapped itself around the man’s torso looked like anything but human. It unwrapped itself and scuttled down the legs of the once human figure.

As it finally detached its tentacles from the man’s back Vilanus saw the hollow, horror-filled, eyes meet his and he read the barely moving lips as he whispered, “oh, thank the Gods,” before the body toppled over backwards.

Vilanus could not move his arms or legs, but when he felt the rocky, scaled tentacle of the thing wrap itself around his leg and pull itself up his body he started to scream. When the rocky horror had pulled itself up on his chest the weight of the pulsating creature slowly crushed the air out of his lungs and made it more difficult to breathe.

Vilanus watched in horror as sharp, diamond-tipped, tentacles wrapped around him and started to probe his back and neck. Suddenly he felt those diamond tipped appendages insert themselves into his flesh. The pain was agonizing in its intensity, but slowly he felt as if a fog had begun to cloud his thoughts.

Iulius gazed up at the night sky and saw flashes, he suddenly realized that their/our ships were destroying the orbital forts. The other flashes were, probably, the system defense boats being engaged by our/their ships. Vilanus’ last conscious act was to turn his head towards the stars, “Gonna be a little late girls.”

The figure got to its feet briskly and turned towards Demanus. It’s strong voice boomed out. “Ensure the landing beacons are all activated so the ships of the Assembly may land safely.”

The Siliconate watched the weak human run into the building to check the transmitters. It reveled in the strong body it now had. “The Assembly will want to reap this world post haste,” The symbiot said through its new host. He looked over his new body, “Ahhh, it is good to have a strong host able to process the calcium and manganese we need. These humans make such nice hosts.”

A long roar and a bright glow to the south marked the first landing of ships from the Siliconate Assembly, they were coming to reap the humans of Nova Tarentum I.
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Chapter One


Roman Star System Nabataea Inferior
3248 A.U.C. (2498 A.D.)


Navarchus Marcus Quintus Helvius looked at his Legatus Classis with irritation. “Permission to speak freely, sir.”

Legatus Classis Gnaeus Claudius Labienus looked him in the eyes and nodded.

Helvius knew he needed to choose his next words with care. “Sir, I wish to stress my objection, on the record, to this mission. Anything strong enough to prevent all communications from Nova Tarentum I, and its moon Scylla, is not going to have any problems dispatching my two squadrons, not to mention the troop transports I am going to have to protect all the way there.”

The Admiral picked up his pen and started stabbing the air as he made his points. “First off Helvius, is the fact we do not yet know if it was a hostile force that is responsible for the loss of contact.” Labienus held up his hand to forestall the Navarchus’ next comments. “I know the outer arm has never been fully explored, and it has not been confirmed that any outside forces had anything to do with it.

“Secondly, the Fumum Vendere are under the impression that it is a local rebellion which has spread to a few of the local systems, and THAT is why you are escorting those troops. If it is an uprising, you are to land and take control as the system’s Praetor, until order has been restored.”

“You also know that with the Medians holding their fleet maneuvers on the border this was all of the ships Classis Command could spare. Be happy with what you have, I had to call in a favor to get you as many ships as I did. So, Navarchus, can I count on you for this mission? Or do I have to brevet Trierarchus Corinus up to Navarchus and have him assume command of the mission?”

Mentioning the name of the one man in the Republic that Helvius despised beyond all measure had the proper affect. Navarchus Helvius snapped to attention and saluted. “Orders received and understood Legatus. I will carry out the mission as directed.” Under his breath he whispered, “if only to keep that gloryhound from commanding anything larger than a garbage scow.”

Labienus smirked at that last snippet. “Was there something else Navarchus? I didn’t quite catch the last bit.”

Helvius just growled out, “we will be coming home with our shields or on them, sir.” He did a perfect about face and left the Legatus’ office.


C.A.R. Troop Transport Fabricus Antoninus


Marine NCO Lucius Suetonius Scaevola was in the process of assembling his gauss rifle when he heard a low snore come from his right. He picked up a cleaning rag, knotted it, and pegged Titus Cassius Varus in the forehead. Varus jumped up in surprise and the pieces of his gauss rifle scattered all over the deck. He looked around and when he saw Scaevola staring at him he dropped his eyes. Scaevola normally would have let it go, but not right before they were going to be dropped into who knows what.

Scaevola cleared his throat. “Varus, if Principale Metellus catches you racking out like that, you ain’t never gonna wake up. He is just gonna slit your throat and be done with you, with the situation being this serious.”

Varus looked up at him, hesitated and then asked the question that he had been holding back. “You think it’s E.T’s, or do you think its just some kind of rebellion like the scuttlebutt says Optio?” Scaevola did not get the chance to answer, a rough voice caught the entire Squad’s attention.

“It don’t matter to Manipularii what they are facing, animals, E.T’s, or rebels. We kill ‘em all and let Classis Command sort ‘em out before burial.” Senior NCO Metellus looked at the men of his Squad. His eyes halted on Varus and his lip rose in a snarl. “Varus, you have thirty seconds to find all of the pieces to your weapon and assemble it, or you get to be numero uno on my garum list, starting... NOW!”

Varus scrambled to get the scattered pieces of his rifle and started snapping them together. Metellus barely looked at him as he took out a pouch of tobacco. He pinched a large wad of it and packed it in this right cheek.

Without looking at his wrist chrono Metellus just shouted out, “time!” He held out his hand and Varus placed his gauss rifle in it.

The entire Squad watched as Metellus did a quick inspection of the weapon. He flicked the power switch on and quickly threw the weapon to his shoulder, aiming it directly at Varus. The Squad hit the deck when they heard the sound of a discharge. Varus looked himself over, searching for a wound. He looked at his Squad Leader in shock.

Metellus just stared back at him. “Next time don’t forget the power transfer conduit, or I’m gonna stuff you into the recycler.” Metellus said as he spit a stream of tobacco juice on the deck near Varus’ foot and threw the weapon to Scaevola. “Make sure he gets it right this time Optio, I gotta talk to the Centurio.” The Squad stared at Varus as Metellus walked out.

Decimus Cipius Macer laughed for a moment before speaking, “I thought for sure you were dead my friend. Good thing you are such a screw up.”

Scaevola threw the weapon back to Varus. Varus disassembled his rifle down to the guts and saw the vacant space where the power conduit should have been. He looked over at Scaevola and whispered, “how did the Principale know it was missing, without pulling it apart?”

Scaevola just shook his head. “Do you think he really cared?”

Macer leaned over and touched Varus on the shoulder. “The Principale is crazy, but not that crazy.” He said as he pointed at the deck. Varus looked down and saw a power conduit lying there, covered in tobacco juice.

Scaevola shook his head and just pointed at the power conduit, “get that cleaned up and get yourself squared away, ASAP.” Varus was picking the power conduit up when the general quarters alarm went off.


C.A.R. Antecursor


Navarchus Helvius quickly recorded a message for the message pod. “Legatus, we have followed the course: Nabataea Inferior, to Saraceni, to Palaestina Salutaris, to Bithynia, to Phrygia en route to Caria. My task force entered the Caria system and detected seven unidentified ships. Those ships were of an unknown configuration. Three were of Quinquireme size and four of Trireme size. Fifth Pila Squadron engaged the unknowns at maximum range and scored numerous hits.”

Helvius paused momentarily before continuing, “initial analysis of the post battle data indicates that the enemy shields were thirty-three percent more effective than ours. And their hull strength is at least twenty-five percent higher. All seven of the enemy ships were destroyed, but at the cost of three of my Mons (P) Class Sexiremes. Enemy Pilas were, unexpectedly, far more powerful than ours.”

“We have detected signs of combat on the surface of the planet Nova Tarentum I. I have ordered the deployment on planet of the Fourth Manipularii Gothica and the XI Apollonaris Legios to assist the local Cohors Urbanae.”

Helvius paused for a moment and hit the record button again. “Legatus, I am concerned that, whoever they were, we may have passed them in hyperspace. I think they dropped the troops here and left the seven ships we encounted to guard Nova Tarentum I while their main body moved on towards Phrygia.”

“You may relieve me at a later date, but I am heading back to Phrygia to check on Nova Londinium IV, and then I will return to Caria if everything there is ok. This doesn’t look good Legatus. You had better scrape all of the ships you can get together to guard Bithynia. If we lose our only Command Center in this subsector I think it will be very bad for the Republic. Navarchus Helvius out.” He turned to his Comm Officer, “get that sent out now!”

Helvius checked the board and saw the transports were landing on Nova Tarentum I. “Helm, once the transports have offloaded set course for Nova Londinium IV, maximum speed.”


C.A.R. Troop Transport Fabricus Antoninus


The cargo bay shook like a tin can in a stiff breeze as the ship entered the atmosphere. Metellus moved from man to man of his Squad, doing one final check of them and their equipment.

He stopped before Scaevola, “keep your fireteam spread out Optio, and keep a close eye on Varus. If he screws up bad just get rid of him, you get me?” Scaevola met his eyes and with grim determination nodded. Metellus gave his Optio a grin, “I told the Centurio that you should be made a Principale, and he is gonna put in the paperwork after this landing.”

Scaevola smiled briefly, “I won’t let you down Principale.”

Metellus put his hand on Suetonius’ shoulder. “I know you won’t Scaevola, you just keep your head screwed on straight and stay frosty.”

Metellus moved to Optio Tiberius Sertorius Dentatus. The Senior NCO looked him straight in the eyes. “How’s the leg Dentatus, and don’t lie to me. That was a bad break and I gotta know if you are one hundred percent and able to lead your fireteam.”

Dentatus just gave him a huge grin. “It’s fine Principale, it aches a bit but the Medicus gave me some ‘candy’ to knock the pain back if it gets too bad.”

Metellus poked him with his finger in the chest. “Don’t take too many of those painkillers, they dull your senses and I need everyone frosty on this op.”

Dentatus just shook his head. “Don’t worry about me Principale, I can take the ache. I’ll suck it up and work around it.” Metellus nodded to him and moved on.

Marine Lucius Aelius Regulus was adjusting the straps on his pack and body armor when Metellus came to a halt in front of him. Metellus watched for a moment before speaking. “New armor still giving you trouble Regulus?”

The young Marine looked up at him. “Principale, I got the straps adjusted in the same notches as my old set, but it just feels wrong and it’s rubbing my left shoulder raw.”

Metellus turned him around and started adjusting a few clips and straps; he lifted the pack and slammed his fist down on the left shoulder plate of the Marine’s armor. After dropping the pack back in place he watched Regulus check his movement.

“It’s perfect Principale, feels just like the old set now. How did you do that?”

Metellus let out a rough chuckle. “It’s a Principale thing Regulus. If I told you, everyone could do it.” Metellus was still laughing as he moved on down the line.

Metellus stopped briefly in front of Marcus Licinus Volusus. From the top of his helmet to the soles of his combat boots every piece of Volusus’ equipment was in place. Every item attached to his web gear was painted and there was not a glint of bare metal anywhere on his person. Metellus had been unsure of the young Marine when he was first assigned to his Squad. But Metellus knew that Volusus could not help it that his people had been cut off from the rest of the Republic for all those decades.

Still, Metellus thought, religious fanatics are bad enough, but military religious fanatics are just down right creepy. Although, if they can produce Manipularii like Volusus, it can't be all that bad. He nodded quickly at Volusus. “you ready for this Volusus? This is gonna be your first time under fire with us.”

Volusus just clicked his heels together. “This Manipularii is ready for duty in all respects Principale. I will do the Contubernium proud, praise Marius, and Mars willing, we will prevail.” Metellus just nodded as he moved off.

The squatting Marine next in line was checking the power cable attached to his weapon as Metellus stopped before him. Appius Fabius Ursus’ hulking build and massively corded muscles marked him as a Heavy-G worlder. “You keep playing with that weapon Ursus and your gonna go blind.”

Ursus just grinned up at his Squad Leader. “I don’t like these new gatling lasers Principale, any chance I can get ahold of an old heavy plasma rifle?”

Metellus just shook his head at his Squad’s heavy weapons man. “No chance Ursus. They’ve all been sent to the scrapheap. What’s the matter, don’t you like the ‘weapon of the future’?”

Ursus frowned. “The rate of fire is just fine, it’s just the laser bolt is too weak to do any real damage to anything, other than lightly armored troops. At least with the old Mk 5 H.P.R. I could knock out buildings and light armor.”

Metellus smiled and slapped Ursus’ helmet. “If we see any armor, you just throw a rock at them. With your arm that should penetrate a foot of tri-titanium.” Metellus said as he walked away from a now laughing Marine.

Macer had been watching Metellus move down the line and was memorizing all of the things the Squad Leader did to put each man at ease. He put them in his mental ‘when I am a Principale’ file.

Metellus placed his hand on Macer’s shoulder. “You ready for this Macer?”

Macer nodded, “I’m ready Principale, I even managed to sweet talk the Ordinance Principale out of a couple of extra pilas for my launcher.”

Metellus turned him around and checked his pack and launcher. “You gonna be able to handle this kind of load Macer? I need you to keep up with me.”

Macer vigorously nodded his head. “Can do Principale, I may not be as strong as Ursus, but I will keep up no matter what.”

Metellus smiled at him. “I know you will, you just stay near me and you’ll be ok. By the way, how did you get the extra ammo out of that asshole of an Ordinance Principale?”

Macer gave him a sly grin. “It’s a Hispanian thing Principale, if I told you, everyone could do it.”

Metellus looked at Macer for a moment before bursting out in a hearty laugh. “You’ll do Macer, you’ll do.”

Metellus’ laughing came to a halt when he came to the last member of his Squad. He did not say a word; he simply stared at Varus. Almost a full minute went by while Metellus remained silent, just staring at him. Varus began fidgeting and opened his mouth to speak but stopped as Metellus held up his finger.

Metellus’ voice was cold and clear. “Clean slate Varus, all of your fuck ups to this date don’t matter. But you fuck up one time during this op and I am gonna stuff a grenade down your throat and have Ursus throw you at the enemy. You get me Manipularii?” Varus nodded and was about to say something when Metellus held his finger up again. “Don’t speak, just listen and understand. You got a fresh start and this is the last one you’re gonna get.”

Metellus turned and looked back down along the lined up Squad. “Listen up First Contubernium, we are the best Contubernium of the best damn Century in the Legio. As usual we are gonna get picked for every garum flavored mission Classis Command can come up with.

“We will probably be in the thickest part of every firefight and told to ‘volunteer’ for every suicide mission that the Legati Legionis can think up. So you better stay awake, ‘cause we still don’t know whom the enemy is. The Century’s job is gonna be to hit a small farming village and gather Intel on what we are facing and who. Stay alert, and stay alive. You got me Manipularii?”

A chorus of voices came back, “Yes Principale!”

Metellus tapped his earbud, “Is this the Third Contubernium I'm looking at? I said, YOU GOT ME MANIPULARII?

A louder chorus shouted out, “YES PRINCIPALE!!

The shout was drowned out by the sound of the landing retros firing and a loud thump as the troop ship landed on the surface of Nova Tarentum I.
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LadyTevar wrote:I like. Please post more
Your request is my command. :wink:

As a note to the readers, Damnatio is right around 60 K words.



Chapter Two


Roman Star System Caria, Planet Nova Tarentum I
3248 A.U.C. (2498 A.D.)
Landing (L+ 10 mins)


Principale Metellus packed a wad of tobacco into his right cheek as he waited for the cargo bay to open up. The cargo doors made a shrill whine when they finally rolled into position. Cold rain almost immediately began blowing into the bay. Of course it would be raining, Metellus thought bitterly, Why is it every planet I land on it’s either snowing or raining?

He saw Centurio Gallius turn towards his ten Squads. “First Century, move out!”

Metellus spat a stream of tobacco juice on the cargo deck just before he ran down the landing ramp. He watched as the Centurio checked his compass and pointed off towards a set of low hills. Metellus checked his own compass and nodded to himself in satisfaction. The Centurio had the right bearing, so First Century would not be getting lost today.

A large splash behind him caught his attention. Metellus turned around to see Varus getting up from the large puddle he had fallen into. He just sighed as he shook his head. Metellus called out to his Squad, “spread out and follow me! We’ve got miles to cover and not much time to do it in!” The Squad followed Metellus as he started jogging towards the hills.


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The Century had been in a slow jog for over an hour to get clear of the landing zone. The Centurio had First Squad on point with Second on the left, while the Third was on the right. The Command Section and the rest of the Century was bringing up tail-end Charlie.

Metellus had only seen a few buildings in the distance. And all of them showed signs of having been burned down. He thought to himself, What ever went on here it looks like it was nasty. Anything that could burn buildings to the ground in this kind of rain must have been bad. Kinda sorry we missed the fun.

The Centurio’s voice crackled over the Century’s comm net, “according to my map there is a crossroads over the next hill, with what looks like a village that has some large buildings in it. The main body of the Century, along with the Command Vexallatio, will take up positions on the hill.

“First and Second Contuberniums will head to the base of the hill. Second will cover from the base while First checks out the village and its surroundings. First Contubernium, this is just to recon the area and grab whatever intel you can. If you encounter any real resistance you are to pull back to Second Contubernium.”

Metellus keyed his comm mike, “Understood Centurio, are we looking for prisoners?”

There was a pause before the Centurio answered, “if possible Principale, but no one gets killed trying. Watch out for civilians, but no hero crap from anyone.”

Metellus smiled to himself, the Centurio had more common sense than any other officer he had served with. He keyed his comm again. “Roger that Centurio, we will attempt capture only if circumstances allow.”

The Century paused for a moment at the crest of the hill. Everyone was peering through their image enhancers to check out the buildings and the crossroads below. The rain obscured most of the details, but a cluster of about a dozen buildings appeared intact.

Unfortunately, the buildings clustered below concealed the view of the road. When no movement could be seen anywhere in the village the Centurio gave First and Second Squads the order to proceed.

The grass on the hillside was slick with rain as the men cautiously made their way down. Metellus fully expected to hear Varus crash down the hill at any moment. When they reached the base of the hill safely, Second Squad spread out and set themselves up to provide supporting fire, if needed.

Principale Clodius, leader of Second Squad, came up to Metellus and spoke quietly, “I don’t like this one bit Met. This place is way too quiet. I saw two doghouses behind those buildings on the way in and the wind is blowing our scent straight towards them, while I haven’t heard one single bark. I have a real bad feeling about this op.”

Metellus nodded after a second and spit into the grass. “I agree with you Marcus, but it’s gotta be done. You just be ready to come support us if things get hairy.” At Clodius’ nod, Metellus motioned for his Squad to move out.

First Squad began moving up towards the closest building. Metellus saw a child’s swing set in the backyard and the wind was blowing the swings slowly back and forth. They made a metallic jingling sound as the chains slowly rocked back and forth in the breeze.

The back door appeared to be open and Metellus motioned for Optio Scaevola to have his fireteam cover them while he checked inside. Metellus signaled Volusus and Dentatus forward and when they entered he motioned for Macer to follow him inside.

He entered the back door into the kitchen and saw the remains of what looked like a half eaten breakfast on the table. He saw Dentatus come out of a doorway on the left side of a small hallway ahead. He looked at Metellus and just shook his head in a ‘no’.

Dentatus and Volusus then entered the living room in the front while Metellus and Macer entered another room to the right. Everything appeared to be in place, but there was no sign of anyone. A partially folded basket of laundry was sitting on a freshly made bed.

He heard a creaking floorboard coming from the living room when he heard his earpiece pop, “Principale, Dentatus. Living room clear. Heading upstairs.”

Metellus motioned for Macer to follow him into the living room. He looked out the front bay windows and looked at the nearby buildings. He saw no sign of any movement, anywhere, in the small village. A few g.e.v. cars sat parked in driveways.

A large three-story building across the street caught his eye. The large red letters read ‘LUCULLUS’ Grain and Feed’. Metellus did a double take, he thought he had seen some movement near the large loading bays.

He activated his comm, “Scaevola, move to the front of the house until you can see a three story building down the south road. Dentatus, see if you can observe anything from the upper windows. I thought I saw movement in the Feed and Grain loading bays.” Metellus said as he motioned for Macer to follow him out the back door and around to the front of the house.

He moved behind a small group of shrubs and keyed his comm, “You see anything from up there Dentatus?”

He heard some light breathing and then Dentatus’ voice. “No movement Principale, but the big loading bay doors are wide open.”

Metellus looked at the ground for a moment. “First Contubernium, we’re going to move towards the Feed and Grain loading bays. Dentatus, you and Volusus stay up there and keep a watch on that house across the way. If the Feed and Grain store is clear we will scout outward from there.”

Metellus motioned to Scaevola who swiftly moved across the street, with Regulus a second behind him. Metellus signaled for Ursus to cover them as he and Macer moved to the corner of the building. Metellus then motioned for Scaevola and Regulus to move up towards the open bay doors.

He watched as Scaevola covered the door from behind a parked g.e.v. car. He watched Regulus run up beside the closest door and peer in. A moment later Regulus threw himself backwards and rolled behind a streetlight post.

Before he could ask what the problem was Metellus heard the sound of static coming from his earbug. Indicating someone was using electronic interference to block his comm signal. He heard a strange high-pitched whine emanating from the feed and grain building where a large vehicle came floating through the open bay doors.

Metellus did not recognize the design, but the large turret and stubby gun barrel made its purpose quite clear. He motioned to Macer, “Grav vehicle, Papilio or Lorica, I can’t tell which.” Macer unlimbered and loaded his missile launcher.

Metellus looked back around the corner just in time to see Scaevola and the g.e.v. car he was behind engulfed in a wash of what looked like plasma.

He ducked back and motioned for Macer to fire. The rocket fired straight up and made an abrupt turn and plunged straight down on the other side of the building. A massive flash and explosion rocked the area. Metellus glanced around to see the wreckage, a huge glassy crater and no sign of Scaevola or Regulus. The comm jamming ceased with the destruction of the vehicle and he heard the voice of the Centurio.

“What’s going on Metellus? Do you need assistance or fire support? Do you...”

A sound like ripping canvas came from overhead. Metellus hit the deck and yelled, “INCOMING!!!” He noticed smoke from a massive series of simultaneous impacts that tore off the top of the hill where the rest of the Century had been. The Centurio’s voice had been cut off in mid-sentence.

Damnit, Metellus thought bitterly, it figures, I just get the Centurio trained properly and he gets smoked like that. He set the comm frequency to the Maniple setting just in time to hear mass confusion about a major attack on the landing zone. An override signal suddenly came over the Legio frequency.

“All Units... All Units... This is Command... LZ being overrun... Massive chemical attack... Take precautions against bio/chem warfare... All Units will follow plan ‘89 Polar Sunshine’... Repeat, all Units will enact ‘89 Polar Sunshine’... Good Luck and may Iuppiter be with you... Legati Litor...” The Command net went silent.

Metellus checked his wrist comp and found the plan list. He read down until he found it, ‘89 Polar Sunshine’: All units to execute guerilla operations. Units will not gather in groups larger than Century size. Make contact with local Cohors Urbanae units and assist. Units will fight at commander’s discretion until relieved by Imperial Command authority.

Clodius must have read it at the same time because he came on the comm, “Are you there Met? Did you get that last transmission?”

Metellus answered him immediately. “Yeah Marcus, we better head towards those woods to the north. Once we find someplace to hole up we can try to find some locals and find out what’s going on.”

Clodius replied quickly, “Well Met, you’re the senior Principale, so it looks like you are in charge of what’s left of the Century.”

Metellus assembled his two Squads and set off towards the north. Without orders First Squad took point.
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Chapter Three


Roman Star System Caria, Planet Nova Tarentum I
3248 A.U.C. (2498 A.D.)
Landing (L + 12 hours)


The cold rain fell steadily amongst the tall pine trees. A small group of men clustered in a makeshift shelter that consisted of a large group of boulders, which were a deposit from a long ago Ice Age. Further out from the gathered men, other individuals kept watch. The sentries seemed alert as they peered out into the dark forest. The falling rain muffled any sound beyond a few yards as the group of men spoke amongst themselves in low voices.

Clodius’ voice showed the fatigue from the six hour run in the mud to reach these woods. “The map shows a larger town to our northwest Met. If we are gonna find any locals still around that’s gotta be the place. The data crystal shows that six thousand civvies call the place home, and I don’t see how someone could move that many people without leaving some evidence. Unless you want to head towards this planet’s capitol, but that’s where the bulk of the eleventh Legio was headed, and only the Gods know what happened down that way.”

Clodius watched as Metellus packed his cheek with that disgusting weed of his, and then spit out a brown jiuce onto the wet ground. “Well Clodius, we ain’t heading towards the capitol if that’s where the Army went. Those Papilio’s draws more fire than shit draws flies. I say we wait out the night here. Then head for...” Metellus checked his wrist computer “...Ducorum and see if we can find out who in the name of Pluto we’re fighting. So get everyone not on watch to check their weapons and then try to get some shuteye.”


***


Metellus was just beginning to disassemble his gauss rifle when a voice on the comm net hissed out. “Contact! I have movement to the south!”

Metellus snapped his assault rifle back together and motioned for the men to spread out. He took up position behind a large rock and keyed his mike, “Who had contact? Give me a bearing and numbers.”

The voice was from a Marine in the Second Squad. “Indus here Principale. I can see four figures moving right towards us. They’re big Principale, I mean like Ursus if he was seven foot tall kind of big. They’re spread out and I don’t think I could pop more than one by surprise.”

Metellus linked the feed from Indus’ image intensifier and looked around in his eyepiece. Yup,[/b] Metellus thought with a mental sigh, Indus wasn’t lying, those are some really BIG nasties. He signaled Macer to ready his rocket launcher. Macer pointed at all of the trees around him. Metellus just pointed up in return. Macer nodded, loaded his launcher, and aimed it skyward.

Metellus watched the figures through Indus’ transmission and noticed immediately when they began to fan out even more. “They know we’re here folks, everyone stay put. Indus do not fire at them, just stay down and keep track of them.”

The gout of plasma that ended Indus’ transmission lit up the night. Metellus heard a crashing in the woods as something large headed his way. He saw the first figure at about 100 yards, heading straight towards the boulders. “They got us pegged gents! OPEN FIRE, I SAY AGAIN, OPEN FIRE!

The sounds of laser and gauss rifles firing shattered the night. Metellus watched a shimmer as the laser bolts were deflected by an energy shield of some sort, while the gauss rounds struck the surface of the things body armor with minimal effect. The arm on one of the bogies raised and plasma washed over a pair of men to his left.

Metellus set his gauss rifle to maximum penetration and aimed around the boulder. The figure stopped for a moment as it was struck by a series of impacts. Metellus spit and fired a single round that hammered through the armor and made a perfect hole in the things armored faceplate.

The sound of a rocket firing was followed a moment later by a huge explosion to his left. He saw Macer reloading behind him and gave him a thumbs up.

“And then there were two,” Metellus murmured to himself. A dull thump hammered overhead and a strange dark mist drifted down from above. “GAS! GAS! GAS!” He shouted as he threw on his protective mask and looked around for the other two big nasties. He saw one on top of the largest boulder firing a strange weapon down on the men. A moment later it shouted as its chest armor ruptured, Ursus, firing the gatling laser from the hip, blowing it apart.

Metellus looked around as he heard the voice of Volusus cut in. “Principale, this Manipularii begs to report that the last enemy has been destroyed.”

Metellus stood up and began to check his immediate area. He keyed his mike, “Volusus, take up the perimeter fighting position where Indus was, while we try to figure out the situation.”

Volusus’ reply sounded weak. “This Manipularii regrets that he is unable to comply with the Principale’s orders at this time.”

Metellus pointed at Macer, “Get on the perimeter while I get this cluster fuck sorted out.”

Metellus moved quickly amongst the boulders. He came upon Varus bandaging Ursus’ arm and nodded. At least he’s doing something useful,.

Metellus found Volusus a moment later. The huge armored form had its fingers buried in the Marine’s chest. Blood was leaking from beneath Volusus’ shattered body armor. The head of the bad guy was completely gone, and Metellus smiled down on the dying Marine. “Breaching charge?” He asked gently.

Volusus nodded and spoke weakly as the blood dribbled down the side of his face. “Yes Principale, this Manipularii believed that if... the charge could breach armored doors it could destroy one of these. This... Manipularii regrets that he will be unable to continue the mission Principale. The Contubernium... has my apologies.” Volusus’ said as his eyes slowly closed.

Metellus leaned down and checked for a pulse. He nodded down at the dead trooper. “No apologies needed Manipularii, may Mars welcome you with open arms to the afterlife.” Metellus stood up and saw Optio Domitius staring at him. “How many?” Metellus asked.

“Indus, Clodius, and Rufius from Second Contubernium, along with Volusus from the First. We also have two that are alive, but we can’t wake up.”

Metellus walked over to where the two motionless bodies were laying. He knelt down and checked the pulse of Matius. It was incredibly slow and his color was not good. He saw the other casualty was Optio Dentatus. “We’re moving out in five mikes, and we’re not leaving them behind.” He looked over his shoulder, “Ursus, you ok to carry Matius? He looks to be about one hundred and eighty pounds plus sixty in gear.”

Ursus walked over with Varus still tying off the bandage on his arm. “No problem Principale, I won’t even notice the weight.” Metellus grunted in satisfaction upon hearing that.

He heard a cough from Ursus’ left. “You got something to say Varus?” Metellus snapped.

“I can carry Optio Dentatus, Principale. You are gonna need all the good rifles on the firing line if we get hit again.”

Metellus just stared at him for a moment. “Fine, divide his and Matius’ gear for the others to carry and get ready. We move out in two mikes, I don’t want to bet that they didn’t call in our position.” In a brief period of time the remnants of the Century gathered together and moved to the northwest.

The rain fell steadily amongst the burned and shattered pine trees.


Landing (L + 66 Hours)


The cold rain pattered off of the shingled roof, seeking every hole into the interior of the structure. The building may have been a cozy barn at one time, but time and weather had turned it into a ruin. The farm it had once served was long overgrown and there was no sign as to why it had been abandoned.

The barn still held a faint smell of hay and cow, but now some new, and stronger, smells overlaid the rest. The smell of gun oil, ozone, and sweat now stood out. Although, Metellus knew there was one other smell that permeated the building, it was a scent none of the occupants wanted to speak of, a smell as old as man himself...

Fear.

Metellus growled out in anger. “I have no damned idea HOW they keep finding us, but if we don’t figure it out soon we are gonna be whittled down to nothing before too long.”

The Marines not on watch looked towards their Principale, expecting him to come up with a plan. They were scared and angry. They had been running for nearly three days now, and the enemy, somehow, kept finding them. First the long run from the crossroads; then the air attack that cost them Second Squad’s Heavy Weapons man.

Bessus had made the pair of strike fighters pay heavily for his death. He killed both of them before a seeker missile homed in on him. Then the pair of armored figures that killed Kim and a still unconcious Dentatus while they crossed a freezing river. They had stumbled on this barn late in the night and took cover from the endless rain.

Optio Domitus looked up from the pack he was reclining on. “You know what I think Principale, I think they are homing in on our electronics. No way infrared would work in this rain, and we aren’t making enough noise to be detected that way. That’s the only thing I can figure.”

Metellus spit on the ground and shook his head. “All our electronics are supposed to be shielded from detection.”

Domitus nodded in agreemement before replying. “Sure Principale, they are shielded well enough from OUR detectors, but these bad guys look like their tech is more advanced than ours, in a lot of ways.”

Metellus thought about it for a while and slowly nodded his head. “That makes sense. But if we shut down everything that’s gonna put all of our weapons and detectors offline.” He sighed in frustration before continuing. “But it beats getting attacked every few hours.” His voice suddenly filled the barn. “Everyone, listen up, turn off EVERYTHING electronic, detectors, sensors, weapons, everything. If you got a wrist chrono, pull the battery. We are going ‘tronic neutral.”

Macer was on watch in the loft and whispered down. “What do we fight with if we get attacked Principale?”

Metellus looked up at him and grinned. “You’re a Manipularii aren’t you? Improvise, Adapt, and Overcome.”

As Macer shut down the last of his electronic gear he checked his bayonet’s edge first. Then he dug into his pack and pulled a cloth wrapped package out, it was the parting gift from his grandfather. The cloth fell away, revealing a sheathed Gladius Hispanicus. The handguard was polished smooth from use and age. Macer remembered it hanging over his grandfather’s mantle for many years and could not believe his luck when he found it in his suitcase on his way to boot camp.

There had been a scrawled note, written by an arthritic hand. He remembered reading it and not understanding at the time. All it said was, ‘This has been in our Gens ever since the Terrors from the sky removed us from Terra Mater. I had a dream you might need it out there in the stars. Carry it proudly’. Macer drew it from its sheath, the wicked tip of the blade was as sharp as a razor. He looked down at his Principale as he fastened the short sword to his belt.

Sure Principale, Macer thought with a wicked smile. I will improvise.

Optio Domitus watched Metellus as he leaned against the wall nearby. Although he had never been in the First Squad he had heard all of the stories about Metellus. Domitus knew that the Principale had been busted down from Primus Pilus twice. He was a legend in the Marine Legios.

A man who had had the stones to tell a Legati Legionis, during a formal retirement ceremony, that he was probably saving the lives of thousands of Marines by retiring early. Domitus laughed to himself, Only the fact that you held the Golden Laurel of Roma Mater and the Manipularii Crown of Grass saved your ass that time. Domitus thought with a snort. If anyone can get us through this, you can.

He noticed a strange look on the Principale’s face, then a very scary look appeared. Metellus looked him in the eyes and Domitus felt a chill run through him. “What are you thinking Principale? Whatever it is I bet it’s evil, and downright nasty.”

Metellus moved close to Domitus and knelt down. “I have a plan to get a little payback on the bad guys. Let me tell you what I have in mind, and you let me know if you have any suggestions.”

As Metellus sketched out his plan, a wicked smile slowly appeared on Domitus’ face.
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Chapter Four


Roman Star System Caria, Planet Nova Tarentum I
3248 A.U.C. (2498 A.D.)
(L + 72 hours)


The cold rain blew in gusts across the overgrown field. A dilapidated barn stood to one side of the field, while a seldom-used road led up to the farm from the north. A low whine in the distance could be heard as three vehicles slowly glided down the road. Two were boxy with a top mounted missile launcher. One was low slung and had sloped armor with a heavy weapon in the turret on top.

They stopped for a moment where the road opened up onto the grassy fields. The turreted monstrosity grounded itself near the forests edge and the turret rotated to bear on the barn. The two other vehicles split left and right to flank and come at the barn from separate sides.

They passed old, and rusted, farming equipment, along with some old rotting piles of straw before they grounded to a halt. Clamshell doors opened in the back of each of the vehicles, like a grotesque mouth. Four armored figures exited each and moved towards the barn. Four of them remained outside and two went to each end of the barn.

Metellus snickered as he saw them moving towards the barn. Someone is gonna be surprised, he thought with a sneer on his face. He laughed to himself when he remembered the look on Ursus’ face when he told him what he wanted.

“You feelin’ all right Principale?” Ursus had asked, worry showing on his face.

When Metellus had explained the plan to what was left of the Century, they went about the work setting up the ambush with a vengence. About an hour later, a dirty disheveled Ursus had returned with what he had asked for. Metellus watched as the four nasties entered the barn.

Trapped you with your own technology, Metellus thought with a wicked smile playing across his face. And right about... NOW! he thought as the explosion of the contact mines went off in the barn.

Metellus hit the power switch on his gauss rifle and started the coils charging. He saw Ursus sit up from the pile of straw he had been laying under and make a beautiful seventy-five yard throw of a plasma grenade, right into the back door of the lefthand APC. He heard a crack and explosion and saw the tank explode as Macer’s missile launcher went into action.

Regulus and Varus ran up to the rear of the other APC and tossed plasma grenades in. The lefthand APC started lifting as Ursus’ plasma grenade detonated and it grounded, hard. Regulus was hit several times by the four enemy PA troopers in the open just as the other APC tore itself apart.

Metellus looked over at the remaining bad guys. One must have been caught by the APC debris and went down. The other three were firing bursts of plasma at random. He knew if he stuck his head up they would turn him into steaming meat and bone.

We need a distraction, he thought.

A moment later there was a high-pitched squeal from the barn. A wounded pig with a set of image intensifiers tied to it ran away from the barn. All three figures spun and began firing at it. There was a beep from his rifle showing the coils were finally charged. Metellus set up and quickly fired a round through the back of one of the bad guy’s helmet.

The other two were still firing on their squealing target and failed to notice him until Metellus dropped another one. The remaining enemy trooper fired at every bit of cover in the area. Raw plasma set fire to everything it touched. Metellus heard a single crack and the last one fell. He turned around and saw Varus in a textbook perfect offhand firing stance, pointing at the downed bad guy.

Metellus stood up, packed his cheek, and headed towards the downed figures. He moved carefully forward. “Ursus, make sure that other Papilio is out of action. If it looks like it can move, use another grenade.”

Metellus walked over to the downed enemy PA troopers while Varus covered him. He saw holes in the helmets of the two he had shot; and noticed that one had taken a massive amount of shrapnel to the chest. He rolled over the last one and saw a perfect hit in the center of its helmet. “Good shot Varus, where did you get the gauss rifle?”

Varus answered without lowering his weapon. “It was Regulus’, I didn’t think my laser rifle would penetrate the shields around the armor.”

Metellus looked at him for a moment and spat. “You made a good call. I think these things’ shielded armor has made the laser rifle obsolete. Now cover me, while Ursus and I check out the KIA’s in the barn.” Metellus and Ursus moved towards the remains of the barn and saw nothing but shattered bodies and ruptured armor.

Metellus, with Ursus in tow, exited the barn and shouted, “First Century, shut it all down. We need to get ‘tronic neutral again and get out of here.”

Metellus saw Macer come running in from the tree line, he had an ear-to-ear grin. “You were right Principale, I didn’t need all that electronic garum to get a hit. The rocket just flew nice and straight into the side. How did you know where they were gonna stop so I could get a clear shot?”

Metellus laughed out loud. “Macer, the one thing experience will teach you is that a track toad is a track toad. All those Lorica and Papilio riders think alike, I don’t care if they are Human or E.T. They’re all brain damaged. The terrain will always tell you where they’re gonna come from and what they’re gonna do.”

Macer looked over the area and nodded. “I can see that now Principale, it makes perfect sense.”

Metellus patted his shoulder and smiled at him. “Manipularii always do Macer. Now let’s check out these bad guys and then get a move on.”

Metellus knelt down next to one of the downed figures and found the catches on the helmet. When he removed it a gaunt face that was distinctly human stared back at him.

Metellus growled as he released the massive breastplate. He heard an electrical crackle and threw himself backwards. “HIT THE DECK!” he shouted as the armor detonated. He got to his feet, cursing and dusting himself off. “I guess they don’t want anyone salvaging that armor. All right Manipularii, lets move out, double time!” The Roman Marines jogged off to the northwest.

The pig had not been eating well lately and being tied up in the barn with no food had made it ravenous. The smell of all of that fresh meat brought the pig back to the farm. It was too busy rooting pieces of flesh in the field to notice the breastplate of a fallen enemy soldier unhinge and rise up.

The tentacled figure seemed wounded as it moved up behind the pig. Several tentacles lashed out and wrapped around the pigs torso and held it tight. The pig thrashed around as a pair of tentacles dug into its neck, but slowly it began to calm down. A few moments later the creature had pulled itself on top of the stubby legged animal.

The pig looked around a few moments to gather its bearings and set off in a trot to the northeast.


(L + 6 days)


The rain blew cold against the windows, but the Marines were dry for the first time in almost a week. They were only a few miles from Ducorum, but Metellus had decided to rest the men for a day. They needed the rest badly. He had found a house on a hilltop with an excellent overview of the surrounding area.

Matius was still unconscious and slipping away a little bit at a time. Metellus wanted his men well-rested before scouting out the town, so he had decided to take a calculated risk in letting them rest indoors. The men found plenty of food, but he only allowed them to eat out of cans until they found out what was going on.

The discovery of humans under that armor had shaken Metellus more than his men knew. Better, he thought dismally, that it had been ET’s. I thought we had outgrown fighting amongst ourselves long ago. Heck even Volusus’ people had welcomed us in brotherhood when we found them, even though we had nothing in common except being Human. He thought as he absently spat into a trash can next to the couch he sat on.

Ursus stuck his head in the living room. “Principale, it’s Matius, I don’t think he’s gonna be with us much longer. His breathing has gotten real bad and his color sucks rocks.”

Metellus sighed as he levered himself off of the couch. He went into the bedroom and took a look at Matius. Ursus was right; the kid was not long for this world. His skin was as pale as the sheets he lay upon, and his breath was coming in ragged gasps.

“Better get Domitus in here and take care of that other thing we talked about.” Metellus watched Matius until Domitus came running in. Both men stood by the bed, unspeaking as the breathing came slower and slower and finally stopped.

Domitus looked over at Metellus. “How are we gonna bury him Principale?”

Metellus shook his head. “No way we can do that Domitus. I don’t want any fresh turned soil giving us away. I had Ursus clean out that big freezer in the basement. We can put him there until a graves registration unit can catch up with us.” He could tell that Domitus did not like the idea. “Best we can do Dom, most of us won’t get even that nice a box by the end of this.”

They both gently lifted the young Marine’s body and moved down the stairs into the finished basement. Ursus had lined the large rectangular freezer with blankets. He took Matius’ body from them and effortlessly lowered him inside. He folded the blankets around him and closed the lid.

He moved towards the stairs when Domitus’ voice stopped him. “Ursus,” he said pointing at the freezer, “Thanks for that.”

Ursus looked back at him and just nodded before heading up the stairs. Metellus and Domitus stood looking at the freezer for a time.

“He was a good Manipularii. He never gave any backtalk and he was the best shot in the Contubernium.”

Metellus put a hand on his shoulder. “The first twenty of your men that you bury are the hardest, they get easy after that.”

Domitus read the lie in Metellus’ eyes as he headed towards the stairs. Metellus followed him a moment later. The freezer stood in the basement, the light from the windows shining on its gleaming white surface, now marred by the handpainted words on the side:

Manipularii Gaius Iulius Matius
6245-5312-1787
Per Mare, Per Terram, Per Astra
II Cont. I Cent. V Maniple III Cohors
Best Contubernium in the IV Gothica Manipularii Legio

The remaining Marines gathered in the living room around a paper map sitting on the coffee table. Metellus wanted his men to know where every hill and building was on the way towards the town’s center.

“Our main mission is to see if any military or civilians are left. If there are any Cohors Urbanae left, we organize them and fight back. If there are none left, we train some then we strike back. We keep hitting them and hitting them until we get reinforced. Anyone have any problems with that?” After getting nothing but nods of acceptance Metellus traced the route they would travel and all of the rally points if contact was lost.

“OK, Me and Varus are on watch. Everyone else try to get some shut eye. We may not get another chance for quite a while.” Metellus said as he motioned Varus to watch the front of the house while he moved to the back and kept a lookout from the kitchen.

Metellus stared out the window, as the cold rain ran down the glass.
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Chapter Five


Roman Star System Caria, Planet Nova Tarentum I
3248 A.U.C. (2498 A.D.)
(L + 8 days)


The early morning rain muffled the noise of the Squad’s movement as they headed deeper into the town. Up until they had reached the city the only buildings they had passed was house after empty house. For the first time since landing they had, finally, seen signs of battle. There had been several makeshift barricades on the edge of town, which had shown signs of a fierce firefight.

The Marines had taken cover twice when grav-tanks had cruised by. They were headed to the northern edge of Ducorum where most of the noises they had heard on the way in had come from. The map they had found in a nearby house had shown a small air/starport in that area.

The Squad carefully moved towards an eight-story hotel that overlooked the starport. They picked their way through its lobby and double-timed it up the stairs. They came across a room on the top floor facing the direction they needed. Metellus, with Domitus in tow, inched their way out onto the rooms balcony where they used their binoculars to scan the area.

Metellus whispered to Domitus, “at least we know where everyone went. Looks like seven or eight thousand civvies packed into that PW camp.”

Domitus grunted in agreement. “Would be hard pulling a rescue with the whole Cohors, let alone just the five of us.”

The airfield to the east of the starport had been turned into a huge prison camp. A double-tiered razor wire topped fence surrounded the area. Several power armored figures patrolled the perimeter and every so often a pair of grav-tanks made a slow circle of the fence. There were tents everywhere, from small nylon domes to huge canvas military types.

Several temporary buildings looked to have been set up as bathing and toilet facilities. A long line of people stood outside a huge set of tents that looked like a military style mess kitchen.

The compound looked crowded, but not to an unhealthy level. They even saw several children playing a game of soccer in an open area. Metellus saw a child kick a ball hard enough where it sailed over both sets of fences to land near a pair of the bad guys. The children froze as they watched one of the troopers stop by the ball and execute a perfect kick to send the ball back to the children. The kids went back to their game, a few of the braver ones even waved at the figures.

Domitus snorted with a chuckle, “We could use him on the Cohortal team.”

Metellus looked over at him. “It’s gonna be hard to rally support to fight them if they look like nice guys. I guess we should be grateful that they aren’t killing the civvies. We gotta try a... what’s going on over there?”

They both watched a group of white-garbed figures gathering at the large gate. An armored trooper seemed to speak to one of the figures and after a moment the gates opened up. The group boarded several buses and the vehicles headed into town. They watched until the vehicle disappeared behind some tall buildings.

Both Marines backed into the room. Metellus opened up his map and pointed to a set of buildings. “What do you want to bet they are headed to the Valetudinarium? If we are gonna be able to make contact with anyone in the camp, we should talk with someone who comes and goes. We need to find out if there are any of our Manipularii or those useless Army pukes in there.”

The men looked at the map and Varus pointed at a building near the hospital. “Umm Principale... maybe we should be careful, that shows a Cohors Urbanae Armory. They might be guarding it.”

Metellus looked at him and rapped him on the helmet. “Now you’re starting to think knucklehead. I already planned to detour around it, but just keep using your head like that and we’ll make a Manipularii out of you yet Varus.” The troops headed out of the hotel and carefully moved down the street.

It took two hours of cautius travel to get to the hospital complex. They watched a few ambulances come and go from the emergency bays. However, they did not see any of the bad guys anywhere near the hospital. They made a slow circle around the main building, looking for an entry point. Eventually they came across a heavy looking door, which was screened by a few shrubs, that looked like the best place to force an entry.

Ursus splashed across the empty parking lot and stopped for a few seconds. A metallic screeching was heard for a moment and then Ursus waved the rest across one at a time. They found themselves in a stairwell to the hospitals basement. Ursus looked at Metellus, “Up or down Principale?”

Metellus pointed up the stairs. “If we go down and get found we got nowhere to go, if we stay on the second or third floor we can still dive out the windows, if we need to.”

Domitus saw understanding dawn in the other Marine’s eyes. You do it without even thinking about it, don’t you Metellus? he thought to himself. You turn every situation into a class on how to help them survive.

The Marines carefully made their way up to the second floor access door. Metellus slowly opened it up and peered inside. He saw a few doctors and nurses moving around what appeared to be nearby offices.

Sunlight shone through a window and Metellus saw a shadow moving around inside one of the offices. He whispered to his men, “There’s an office to the left, Macer you come with me. Domitus, you be ready to back me up if I yell for you. If someone comes down the stairs, join up with me and we will get out of here.”

Metellus checked the door again and rushed through with Macer right on his heels. He rushed into the office while Macer closed the door just enough to peer out into the hall.

A white-coated man looked up from his desk with fear and confusion in his eyes. “Who are you? What are you doing in my office? What do you want?”

Metellus looked at a diploma hanging on the wall. “Medicus Romanus, I am a Principale in the 4th Gothica Manipularii Legio. We were sent here to assist the local Cohors Urbanae in fighting back against the invaders.”

The doctor gave a shrill laugh. “Local Cohors Urbanae? Well, I am afraid that you are far too late for that Principale. The Cohors Urbanae were all killed or captured in two days. They never stood a chance against the Siliconates.” At Metellus’ look of puzzlement the doctor continued. “The invaders call themselves The Siliconate Assembly. They come from another part of the galaxy.” Before Metellus could ask he said, “No I don’t know how they got to this part, I just know what I heard.”

Metellus thought for a moment before asking, “Have they said what they want?”

The doctor looked askance at him. “That’s the question that everyone has been asking ever since they got here. I mean on one hand, they came in and slaughtered everyone bearing arms against them. But on the other hand, they were careful not to kill any civilians and have been especially protective of the young people and children. They are very strict about sanitation, cleanliness, and medicine.”

“They had the valetudinarium back on line the day after they took over here. Their... medical people have been talking about all the cures that they have for diseases and illnesses that we haven’t discovered yet. They are going to be instituting some new health programs among our people.

“They have been bringing plenty of food and supplies to the camp and they genuinely seem to care about the welfare of the people. They listen to any recommendations we make for the good of everyone’s health. I believe, as occupations in history have been, this one has been remarkably civilized. They have told us that once they catch the last of the Legionarii, we will all be allowed to go back to our homes.”

“Legionarii?” Metellus asked. “There are still troops around? Were they Urbanae or were they Legionarii? Where are they at medicus?”

The doctor had a look of distaste on his face. “Yes Principale, we have heard that most of the survivors of the local Cohors Urbanae and some other Legionarii headed west to the Scythian Montes. But they won’t last long Principale; the technology of the Assembly is decades ahead of ours. It would be better for everyone if they just surrendered and spared everyone the pain and grief.”

Metellus just smiled back at him. “The problem with that medicus is that in my thirty-four years as a Manipularii, I was never taught how to surrender. I think any instructors we had that taught that class were sent to the Army years ago. Thanks for the tip medicus; I think we have got to head out until we can link up with some friends. You take care of the civvies until we can come back.” Metellus turned for the door.


***


Macer, standing by the door heard a strange <pfftt>. He turned in time to see Metellus slump to the floor. He noticed the doctor had a strange weapon in his hand, and was moving to point it at him.

Macer dove to the floor and rolled while he drew his gladius. He heard another <pfftt> and felt something glance off of his shoulder armor. He thrust out the blade as he came to his feet next to the desk and cut the weapon in half.

In a moment Macer had the blade against the doctor’s throat. “Do not yell medicus, my blade is sharper than one of your scalpels. For killing my Principale though, I am going to make you pay.”

Doctor Romanus looked at the blade pressing against his throat and croaked out, “not dead.”

Macer leaned in on the doctor, “You shot him in the back medicus.”

Macer saw fear in the doctor’s eyes as he answered. “It was just a tranquilizer dart, don’t you see, this is best for everyone to...”

His voice trailed off as he saw the look on Macer’s face. Macer spoke clearly, his Hispanian-flavored Latin accent barely showing in his anger. “Medicus, you have five minutes to revive my Principale or I am going to do things to you that this valetudinarium will never be able to fix.”

Doctor Romanus looked into his eyes, “I have to call someone, to bring the antidote. I don’t have it here.”

Macer pointed at the comm interface, “call who you have to medicus, but you will die well before I will if you call the enemy.”

The doctor’s hands were trembling as he dialed the comm code, “Sylvius, this is medicus Romanus, I need a gurney brought to my office... yes another one... no just one... oh and please bring a dose of antidote... no I had to dart him twice and he is having a bad reaction to that much of the drug... yes make it quick.”

Macer sneered at him, “Very smart medicus. I hope for your sake that you are not being too smart.”

A few minutes later Macer heard a squeaking from the hallway. He took a grenade from his pouch, pulled the pin, and moved behind the door.

The look on the face of the Marine with the sword in one hand and a live grenade in the other made the doctor’s bowels go weak.

A burly nurse opened the door and rolled a gurney inside. “Hey medicus, man you look like Charon himself, I can see why you darted him twice, looks like a Manipularii, they are bad news. You want to hit him with this?” He asked as he held up a pressure injector.

Seeing the doctor’s head shake of ‘no’ he leaned down and injected Metellus in the buttocks. He removed the pack and lifted up the limp Marine, to place him on the gurney, when Metellus’ hand shot out and clamped onto his throat. The sound of cartilage crunching soon filled the office. The nurse’s body began thrashing, but ended in a moment when Metellus’ dagger slid into his heart.

The doctor’s attempt to reach for his comm interface ended when Macer’s gladius took his hand off at the wrist. Then a quick thrust and the doctor’s throat began to spurt his life out onto the desk to join his hand. The look in the man’s eyes was of intense hatred for his own species, and it did not take long for that light fade.

Metellus shouldered his pack as Macer replaced his grenades pin.

Macer’s voice called him to the window. “Principale, you better come and take a look at this, papilio’s heading our way.”

Metellus saw the four APC’s heading down the road towards the hospital. “Lets roll Macer. We got a lotta miles to hump to get clear of here. Good job, by the way, on your handling of the medicus. You had him pissin’ in his pants.” At the look on Macer’s face Metellus smiled. “I could hear you, I just couldn’t move, and I didn’t want to say anything to distract you, you were handling it perfectly. When we get out of here I’ll put you in for Optio.”

Metellus looked out of the door into the hallway. When he saw it was clear they ran for the stairwell. He cut short the others questions and they ran down the stairs into the rain. The Squad headed for the nearest building across the parking lot. They were not spotted near the hospital, but over the next few hours they had to take cover from aircraft and grav vehicles. It took them twelve hours of ducking and covering to reach the edge of town. Metellus checked his compass and led the Squad into the forest west of the city.

The evening rain muffled the noise of the Marine’s movement while they headed west toward the mountains, and safety.


Roman Star System Bithnyia, Planet Nova Cartago III
3248 A.U.C. (2498 A.D.)
(L + 16 days)


When Navarchus Helvius’ message arrived at Nova Cartago III several days ago the effect was akin to a kicked over anthill. Legatus Classis Labienus had ordered a full analysis of the holo crystals download to evaluate the enemy’s tactics and capabilities. The message he sent back to Classis Command, on Roma Mater was brief, but he knew the right words to say to get the ships he wanted. Every ship in the Classis reserve had been released to his command, with more promised to him as soon as they were available.

Labienus stared at the star map projection while his Intelligence Officer delivered his briefing to the assembled staff.

“If the computer estimations of enemy speeds are correct, the enemy forces will be hitting Phrygia in two days, plus or minus one day. Now, if they land on Nova Londinium IV like they did on Nova Tarentum I, and depart prior to the invasions completion, Classis Command has gamed out four possible scenarios from that point on:

“One, the enemy classis heads down the dead end Apollonian Gate line to the colony at Phrygia II, and then head back to Phrygia before heading here. If they choose to head that way, it will buy us at least a couple of months to prepare before they can attack us here at Bithnyia. We estimate only a five percent chance of this scenario happening.

“Two, The enemy classis holds position in Phrygia and fortifies their position, while forcing our classis to remove them from there, taking Phrygia II at its leisure. One of our analysts believes that the enemy is only interested in taking systems that are lightly defended, and will not attack here as long as we have a strong classis presence. But we can only place the likelihood of that at seven percent.

“Three, the enemy classis splits and sends a small task force towards Phrygia II, while the majority of their classis heads here. This scenario is most likely if the enemy’s main fleet is overwhelmingly large and has sufficient ships to guard Phrygia from a counterattack, while attacking our base here. We estimate a thirty-four percent chance of this.

“Four, and the most likely scenario, says that the enemy will leave a small Squadron behind in Phrygia to guard the landings on Nova Londinium IV. They will then push on to attack us here. If this scenario plays out we should expect them to hit us here within thirty days. This scenario plays out at a fifty-three percent probability.”

Labienus nodded. “Thank you Tesserarius, I expect your section to keep the battle scenarios updated, should we aquire any new information.”

He turned to his staff. “Navarchus Helvius should be entering the Phrygia system in nine days. If the enemy’s main classis is there, he should be able to retreat to either Caria or back here. If they only left behind a small Squadron, we can hope that he has enough power to defeat it and send us back more data. Either way, we have to prepare for the defense of Bithnyia.”

Labienus looked down at the end of the table and pointed at the lone Army officer at the briefing. “Pro-Consul, how prepared is Nova Londinium IV for an attack? We have deployed only a small Squadron there to gather information on enemy numbers, while the orbital castras are relics. Is there any chance that they will be able to hold against a ground invasion?”

Pro-Consul Sorio looked uncomfortable. “We have deployed the 1st and 2nd Consular Armies there, plus the 5th Ala Consular Army to reinforce the Cohors Urbanae. Imperial Command wants to hold the rest of the reserves to defend the Inner Systems.

“The Nova Londinium IV forces have sufficient munitions to fight for months, and they should be able to hold the line for quite a while. The enemy has only fought Urbanae so far, and on Nova Londinium IV they will be facing Legionarii for the first time.”

Labienus looked at him hard. “You are quite wrong Pro-Consul, the enemy fought Legionarii for the first time on Nova Tarentum I. We have heard nothing back from those forces, which could mean they are already dead. We have to assume that the forces on Nova Londinium IV will be defeated and start planning on holding here, at Bithnyia, at all costs.”


Roman Star System Caria, Planet Nova Tarentum I
3248 A.U.C. (2498 A.D.)
(L + 18 days)


The mountains were barely visible in the falling rain as the Squad moved forward. The Marines had bypassed Siliconate artillery and supply units that they could have destroyed on their way to the mountains. They started seeing more and more combat troops as they got into the foothills.

They slowly moved past what appeared to be the ‘front lines’ of the Siliconate forces facing the mountains. “Good sign,” Metellus had said. “Shows that there are still holdouts in the mountains.”

They were moving slowly when they came to a large stretch of open ground, which they had to cross to get back to the forest at the base of a mountain. “All right Manipularii, if we get on that mountain their grav stuff won’t be able to follow us up anything that steep. I am gonna cross first, then Ursus, Varus, Macer, and Domitus will tail-end Charlie. Stay alert, and stay frosty.”

Metellus packed his cheek, tightened his pack straps and spat. He ran in a low crouch across the open ground. He was halfway across when a motion to his right caught his eye. He cursed as he saw four grav-APC’s moving right at him. So close, he thought in rising irritation, We almost made it.

The missiles firing from the APC’s lit up the night.

The explosions went off on either side of Metellus, deafening him and knocking him to the ground. He slapped the power switch on his gauss rifle. Sixty seconds to charge, gonna be like thirty seconds too late even if it could penetrate their armor.

Metellus took cover in the missile crater as a quad of rockets flew out from the APC at him. He was hammered into the ground by the overpressure. He peered out over the edge and saw the APC’s moving quickly towards him. He heard his rifle beep and shouldered it. He watched a rocket leap from the woodline and destroy a Siliconate APC.

“Thanks Macer.” he whispered. He watched as the remaining three vehicles fired a salvo of rockets that flayed the treeline where his Squad was seeking shelter.

He began firing at max penetration, to draw their fire back towards him. His gauss cracked round after round when he saw one of the Siliconate vehicles detonate. The remaining two turned and a moment later another blew up. The last one fired a rocket behind Metellus before it too exploded.

Metellus ran back to the forest to rally his men. He found Varus and Ursus tying a tourniquet around Domitus’ arm. Macer saw him and pointed across the field. Metellus turned and saw a large, and very Roman, vehicle heading for them, sending up a rooster tail of dirt behind it. “Hold fire Macer.” He said.

With a clatter of tracks a Legati class command APC rolled up to them. The heavy gauss cannon aimed their way as the troop ramp lowered in the back. A small but powerfully built figure came down the ramp and waved them aboard. “Come on Manipularii, they’ll be sending Loricas soon and I am not sticking around to get blown to Tartarus.”

Metellus motioned his men aboard the vehicle. Ursus carried Domitus in and placed him on the vehicle’s armored deck. The ramp closed and Metellus felt the vehicle start to roll across the field. He looked at his men holding on to the straps in the crew compartment. When he was sure they were all ok he moved to the Commander’s station. He moved up and sat down in the gunners seat. “Thanks for the rescue Decurio. That coulda gotten messy.”

The Decurio laughed, “That’s our job Principale.” He held out his hand. “Decurio Marcus Sempronius Longinus, 2nd Equites Cohors. Rescuers of virgins, small children, and sometimes, of Manipularii.”

There was a huge bump and he hammered his comm interface, “Principale Saturninus, if you throw a track I am going to throw you off the side of this mountain.”

Decurio Longinus looked over as Metellus started groaning, “Saved by the Army. Not just the Army, but by a track toad. I am never gonna be able to show my face in civilized company again.”

Sempronius’ basso laugh filled the crew compartment as his Legati clawed its way up the mountain.
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Re: The Tales of Roma Mater

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Chapter Six


Roman Star System Phrygia
3248 A.U.C. (2498 A.D.)
(L + 17 days)

Navarchus Catulus was livid and mumbled to himself as he walked to the bridge of his ship. “It’s a travesty, here the largest classis in the history of the Republic is gathering in the Bithynia system and I am stuck out here. I should have been given a command in that classis, but where am I? Stuck in a backwater nowhere system with orders to report and run. If that idiot Helvius had done his job properly, I wouldn’t have been stuck out here pretending to be a scout. Well I'm going to show Classis Command what Navarchus Titus Fenius Catulus is made of. When my plan works I will be guaranteed, at the very least, a Quinquireme Squadron command.”

“Navarchus on the bridge!” Catulus’ XO called out as he entered the bridge of the Quinquireme Adrianople.

He noticed his crew was busy at their work stations. “Any further message from that stubborn bastard in charge of the Orbital Castrum XO?”

Trierarchus Spurius Sepunius Paratus shook his head. “No sir, the Praefectus Castrorum says his orders stand. He will not support your plan.”

Catulus’ hand slammed down on his command chairs armrest. “That idiot! It’s situations like this that make you realize that the orbital castras should have been under classis control. Well fine, let him and his collection of antiquated junk get blown to Tartarus for nothing. Have the other ships been notified?”

Paratus nodded. “The ships of the Squadron are ready in all respects. Navarchus Allentus reports his four System Defense Quadremes will follow your orders to the best of their abilities. But, with all due respect sir, I wish to point out that our orders state we are supposed to scout, evaluate, report, and if necessary, retire.”

Catulus poked him with his finger. “You will follow my orders Trierarchus, I need every man behind this plan. If you are not one hundred percent with me, step down, now.”

They were interrupted by a shout from the sensor station. “NAVARCHUS, ENEMY VESSELS ENTERING THE SYSTEM!

“Battle Stations!” Catulus yelled out. “Have the System Defense Squadron close with us and follow us in. Give me a scan on enemy numbers and try and pick to out their transports.”

A few minutes rolled by with an excrutiating slowness. Catulus grew impatient and growled at the young sailor. “What’s the problem? Give me some data on the enemy classis!”

An unsure voice reported back. “Sir, there is some sort of jamming coming from the approaching ships. I’m having trouble holding a lock on the contacts. I’m trying to boost power enough to burn through their ecm. Although this task group has less interference, and the battle computer evaluates that, with an eighty-seven percent probability, this is a Legionarii Transport Squadron.”

Catulus nodded in satisfaction. “Fine! All ships launch pilas on that Squadron. Try to get a better picture of the other ships, NOW!”

Hell-Clay enhanced pilas launched from the Quinquireme and her two Trireme escorts. Fighters swarmed from the Fleet Carrier Aquilia towards the large group of lumbering troop transports. A few moments later the older System Defense Cruisers fired their obsolete fusion armed missiles, slaving their targeting to the Command Battlecruiser. A few moments later the ECCM burned through the jamming and the enemy classis was revealed, in all of its horror inducing size.

“May the Gods protect us,” Paratus whispered. “Navarchus, we have to retreat! Navarchus... NAVARCHUS!” Paratus turned and looked into his Commander’s glassy eyes and noticed the wet stain spreading on his trousers. He turned to the bridge crew and shouted, “Update the message drone and launch it ASAP, helm get us out of here!” The crew was reaching for their controls when the undetected salvo of missiles obliterated the tiny Squadron.


Roman Star System Phrygia, Planet Nova Londinium IV
3248 A.U.C. (2498 A.D.)


Pro-Consul Opiter Vesuvius Renatus remained an island of calm in the sea of chaos that gripped his headquarters. His staff had monitored the brief battle in space above Nova Londinium IV. That fucking idiot of a classis officer in getting his command shot to pieces has cost me dearly. He thought sourly.

When all of the ships and orbital forts had been destroyed, and it was clear that no message drone had been sent to the Imperial Command Center on Nova Cartago III Renatus had no choice but to use the drone from his secondary Headquarters to pass the data on to Classis Command.

And in doing that he had revealed the location of that base and doubled the workload on his staff when it was overrun by the enemy. Not that it will matter in the long run, Renatus thought as he looked at the situation board. They have landed two Consular Armies worth of troops, I had half again as many troops and I haven’t been able to slow them down, at all.

Renatus watched the situation board as it showed the second largest city on the planet, Nova Eburacum, become tinted in red. He turned to one of his Operations Officers and pointed at the mapboard. “Can we rally any of the units that were holding Nova Eburacum and try a flanking attack?”

The Tribuni Angusticlavii looked at him in shock. “Sir, there is no one left to rally.”

Pro-Consul Renatus looked at the map again. “We had two Mechanized Legios, an Ala Legio, a heavy Tormentarius Auxilia, and an Urbanae Auxilia dug in and around that city, and you are telling me that there aren’t enough men left to regroup?”

The Tribuni looked at a printout. “Sir, they attacked with two Ala Legios and just rolled right over them. We only have a few Centuries left that are responding, but they are scattered and running.”

Pro-Consul Renatus watched as more and more of the planet showed the red of enemy occupation. “We have to update Imperial Command about what went on here, or else they are going to be dumping troops into a meatgrinder when they decide to counterattack.”

His Tribuni looked at him. “But sir, if we launch our message drone they will know right where we are and attack the Headquarters.”

Renatus pointed at the few broken units still on the mapboard. “Do you think we are commanding anything anymore Tribuni? Update it and launch it ASAP, then assemble the men and begin digging in around the HQ.”

A little while later, as the Pro-Consul and his staff were digging their fighting positions around the mountain they saw the communications drone launch skyward. Not long afterward the officers still inside the HQ watched the lines of red start moving towards the mountain.


Roman Star System Caria, Planet Nova Tarentum I
3248 A.U.C. (2498 A.D.)


Principale Metellus stood at attention before the senior officer of the remaining troops on Nova Tarentum I. The Tribuni Angusticlavii had questioned the Principale for nearly three hours about everything that had happened to his unit. He had listened intently and asked questions to bring out information that Metellus did not even know that he had.

Metellus, in turn, had discovered that the Tribuni was a Cohors commander who had gathered troops from the landing zone and had fought his way to the mountains, realizing that grav vehicles would have problems in terrain that his tracks could negotiate.

Metellus liked the look in the eye of the short swarthy Mongolian officer. The Tribuni smiled and put his hand on the Principale’s shoulder. “You did well to get your men this far Principale. I need trained Legionarii to bolster the line. I am going to assign you to Decurio Longinus’ Legati, his troops never made it out of the LZ.” He smiled at him. “Welcome to the XI Mechanized Legio Principale.”

Metellus’ face took on a deadpan expression and met the officer’s eye. “ With all due respect sir, Manipularii are the senior service. I need to welcome your troops to the IV Gothica Manipularii Legio.” A moment of strained silence followed Metellus’ comment.

The Tribuni burst out laughing, along with Metellus. “You’ll do Principale, you’ll do!” The sound of Principale Metellus’ and Tribuni Khitai’s laughter filled the tent.

Metellus pushed through the tent flap into the cold night air and breathed deeply. He was surprised to see Decurio Longinus waiting for him outside of the Tribuni’s tent. He raised an eyebrow at him. “Been waiting long Decurio?”

Sempronius just shook his head. “I figured that the Tribuni would keep you yapping for a few hours,” He said with a grin as he looked up at Metellus. “And I don’t trust a Manipularii not to get lost on the way to the Legati.”

Metellus smiled at the diminuitive officer. “No problem there Decurio, we Manipularii can smell a track toad from two miles away, upwind. I guess with the limited memory space that Army issue brains have they had to delete ‘personal hygiene’ to upload ‘tool use’.” They both laughed as they made their way across the hillside.

Metellus hesitated for a moment before speaking, “what do you think about fighting Humans Decurio? I mean E.T’s are one thing, but fighting our own kind just doesn’t sit right with me.” He had covered a few yards before he realized that Sempronius was not alongside him any longer. He looked back to see the Decurio staring at him with a look of horror on his face.

“You mean you don't KNOW? Oh shit! I figured with all of the combat you had been in, you would have found out by now. Principale, we have got to get your men together and go to the prison area NOW!

Doctor Sextus Quintius Tarquinius, the Cohort’s Surgeon, moved a pointer and highlighted a portion of the holographic projection. “So, as you can see, the primary probe tentacles burrow their way into the spinal cord of the subject where they secrete a chemical to shut down all of the host’s higher brain functions, all except for the autonomic nervous system.

“It then hijacks the rest of the central nervous system and gains control over locomotion. While all of the host’s higher brain functions are transmitted by the parasite’s brain. In this state the Siliconate parasite then has time to slowly insinuate tentacles into other systems and uses the host’s body for all of the bodily functions the parasite needs, such as sustenance and waste elimination.”

“These things slowly use up the body of their host. The human body was not designed to support two separate entities. Once these things get their tentacles in your men, there is no way we can remove them. If we were in the Imperial Memorial Hospital on Roma Mater, we might have a chance to save you. But here in the field, if you see your buddy wearing one of these, do both of you a favor and kill him before he kills you. So, Manipularii, any questions or can I get back to sleep?”

There was a shocked silence that was only broken by Varus retching.

Metellus stared at the holo one more time. “I guess if you just shoot the damned thing Medicus, it won’t help?”

Tarquinius shook his head. “Principale, the parasite secretes chemicals into the bloodstream that increases the host’s strength, speed, stamina, and help the host heal itself more quickly than normal. Without this set of chemicals running through the body, the host dies in a very short period of time, without ever regaining consciousness. Anything else?” Seeing no further questions from the men, the doctor headed over to a sleeping bag and was softly snoring in moments.

Metellus looked into the back of the cave where two figures huddled behind a makeshift crys-steel barricade. One of the prisoners was gaunt and pale, the dark circled eyes and hollow cheeks did not detract from the look of sheer hatred in its eyes.

The other figure was still dressed in a set of MARPAT camouflage utilities, and Metellus recognized the face as a young Centurio from Third Century that he had spoken to just prior to landing. The one commonality between the two men was the rocky, pulsing creature attached to both of the figure’s chests.

The Centurio stepped forward, placed his hand on the crys-steel and stared at Metellus. A rough voice filled the cave. “You should not fight us Human. Your worlds will be ours no matter what you do. Nothing but death awaits those that attempt to stop the Assembly. We bring you great gifts and we do not ask for much. Submit to the Assembly and your worlds will be spared destruction and your people will be protected eternally by the forces of the Assembly.”

Metellus looked at the figure standing before him for a moment. He then spat a large gob of tobacco juice on the crys-steel between them. “The Manipularii have been protecting the Senate and People of Roma for thousands of years fuckhead, we don’t figure on giving up that job to anyone without a fight.”

Metellus turned around and moved towards the cave mouth. As his men followed him to the entrance, he heard the voice follow him. “We will kill all of your soldiers on any world we find them on, and your people will still be ours in the end!”

The men of the 1st Squad were the only ones who heard Metellus growl as he pushed through the blackout blanket. “Not as long as there is one Manipularii left alive fuckhead.”

Metellus looked around outside the cave and saw Decurio Longinus moving towards them. Sempronius saw the look on each face and smiled grimly. “So I see the horror show hasn’t gotten any better than when I saw it a week ago. Well, Principale, what do you think?”

Metellus looked into the night sky a moment before he looked down at him. “What do I think Decurio? Not much to think about. It looks like we kill every last one of those things we can find, until we eliminate them from the Galaxy. ‘Cause as I see it, if we don’t, they are gonna do it to us.”

Metellus looked at the squad. “Before we sack out tonight, I want a full weapons and equipment check. Ursus, you’re off the watch schedule tonight, I want you to make the rounds of the nearby units and see what you can scrounge up to help us out.”

Metellus heard a snort of laughter from beside him and Sempronius rolled his eyes at the men of the 1st Squad. “Lock up your daughters and other valuables people, the Manipularii are out looking for goodies tonight. Principale, you do know that what you Manipularii call ‘scrounging’ will get you thirty lashes and ten to fifteen years hard labor in a mine for theft in the civilian world?”

Metellus adopted his most innocent ‘who, me?’ look. “Just think of it this way Decurio, anything we do to improve the Contubernium’s fighting capacity will increase YOUR survivability in the long run.”

Sempronius gave a wry grin and nodded as they approached the Legati. “Good point Principale. Oh, Manipularii Ursus is it? In your ‘travels’ tonight, see if you can ‘locate’ some more night vision gear and a few sections of track somewhere. We may need more replacements with all of this going up and down hills.” He lowered his head and sighed, “My father warned me when I joined the army that I might fall in with wicked men. It looks like he was right!”

The laughter of the Decurio and the Squad echoed inside the Legati as they moved up the ramp.


(L + 22 days)


Cohors Urbanae member Mamercus Bruttius Magnus dug another shovel-full of wet soil and turned towards his friend. “What I want to know is what in the name of Pluto are we going to do if they send loricas after us? Why aren’t those Gods be damned legionarii sitting out here as bait? How come we get the shitty end of the sponge every time?”

Urbanae member Proculus Epidius Balearicus just shook his head. “Let me tell you one thing Bruttius, I would rather be sitting in this hole than be the guys that have to get into close combat with the Rockheads. At least we can fall back from this position into the mountains if it gets too hot. All we have to do is draw a little fire and then run.

“Besides, we are better armed these days than before. Can you believe that big heavy-G worlder of a Manipularii was stupid enough to trade us a brand new Gatling Laser for my piece of shit Mk.5 H.P.R.? Well, if he wants to lug around that heavy mother all over the planet, he is welcome to it.” They looked around at the other six men of the Squad digging in on the ridge above the road and laughed. “I guess the Manipularii are as dumb as they say.”


***


“The Urbanae are complete idiots,” Ursus said with a deep, basso laugh. “I can’t believe they were willing to trade away their H.P.R. Here we have these armored monsters crawling all over the planet, and they give up a weapon that has more penetration than anything this side of a vehicle mount.”

Metellus just chuckled. “I will bet one hundred sesterces they think they got the better end of the deal Ursus.”

“Well they’ll figure it out when that gat starts bouncing rounds off of the Rockhead’s body armor.”

“With a little luck they might even survive long enough to curse your name.” Metellus said with a snicker as he looked around at the terrain and spat on the grass. “I just hope that the Decurio shows up on time when we need him. I don’t want to be left hanging out here when they decide to call in reinforcements.”

Ursus looked down and grinned at his Principale. “Somehow I don’t think he is the type to leave us out here to get smacked around by the Rockheads.”

Metellus nodded. “He’s not too bad for an army puke, even if his old man is the Imperator, although you don’t have to tell him I said that. Now get down in your hole and keep under cover.”

Metellus looked around to check his men’s concealment as he walked towards his designated spot. He dropped into his fighting position and pulled the camo cover over himself and activated his jamming field. He had better show up on time. Metellus thought. I would hate to have to kick his ass for being late.

The high-pitched hum of a grav vehicle filled the air. Metellus observed the road through his fiber optic scope. A pair of Siliconate APC’s were in the lead. A pair of tanks trailed just behind them. Four human built cargo trucks followed close to the lead units. And, finally, another pair of APC’s brought up the rear.

Metellus keyed his secure comm link. “FDC 8, Jarhead 28, contact, execute fire plan Echo.”

There was a brief pause before a reply came back. “Fire Direction Center 8, fire outgoing, out.”

Metellus switched to the Urbanae’s frequency. “Yokel 2, Jarhead 28, fire incoming. Execute ambush upon shot splash.”

The sound of ripping linen filled the air, the sound of Anti-Artillery missiles being fired skyward from the Siliconate APC’s. The vehicles then began evasive maneuvers as the blossom of intercepted artillery shells filled the sky.

A pair of light anti-armor missiles arced from the ridge as the artillery fire began impacting on the road. The barrage shattered one APC and a truck. Both light missiles impacted the front glacis plate of a tank with no visible effect. More shells from the next salvo made it through the interceptors.

Another two trucks were destroyed and an APC was damaged.

The Urbanae began firing their small arms down from the ridge as the remaining Siliconate vehicles moved towards the ridge and began spraying the troops with return fire. Power Armored troops poured out from the damaged APC and followed behind a tank, using it for cover.

Metellus’ comm crackled to life. “Jarhead 28, FDC 8, final salvo outgoing, no further fire available at this time.” A final salvo arced out of the mountains and impacted among the Siliconate vehicles. Thick white smoke began covering the area.

Metellus keyed his mike. “Yokel 2, Jarhead 28, displace to the fallback positions immediately.” He felt the rumble as the enemy vehicles moved past his position and once again keyed his mike. “First Contubernium, execute ambush.”

Metellus threw off his IR suppression cover and climbed out of his fighting position. He ran towards the grav tank still moving towards the ridge. He leapt up and pulled himself onto its rear hull, and in the process pulled out a magnetic breaching charge. He attached it to the top hatch and ducked behind the rear of the turret. He pulled out and armed a plasma grenade and began counting. The shaped charge blew a hole in the hatch and Metellus dropped his grenade in and dove off of the tank. A moment later a huge explosion blew the turret skyward as green plasma leapt from the open hatch.


***


Macer popped out of his fighting position and aimed his launcher outward. He could not see either of the tanks in the smoke, but he saw the outline of an APC close by. He locked his launcher on that target and fired. The rocket slammed into the side of the vehicle and a huge detonation blew the smoke away. Macer saw a few Siliconates pulling themselves out of the wreckage. He rolled out of the fighting position and drew his Gladius and Hastula. The smoke closed in around him as he advanced on the wounded soldiers.


***


Ursus leapt out of his fighting position and aimed the bulky Mk.5 at an APC then pulled the trigger. The Plasma Rifle burned a hole through the side of the vehicle and it grounded in a crash. Ursus saw figures through the gradually widening hole and watched them explode from the flash boiling of their bodily fluids while he played the nuclear fire along its flank.

There was a sizzle and pop from the Mk.5 and an acrid smell of melting plastic drifted up to him as the weapon stopped firing. Ursus saw all four malfunction lights glowing red on the weapons readout. He threw the weapon on the ground. “May the Gods DAMN those fucking Urbanae bastards. I’m gonna kill them.”

Ursus noticed figures moving around inside the APC and ran up to the vehicle. An armored figure began crawling out of the hole when two massive hands grasped his helmet and twisted violently. Ursus felt the neck crack through the armor. He pulled a pair of plasma grenades off of his harness and dropped them past the body clogging the hole. He dove back and hugged the ground as the APC blew itself into pieces.


***


A tank had passed right over Varus’ fighting position and partially caved in the side. He stuck a pair of breeching charges to the belly as it rolled over him. One of the six Siliconate troopers following the tank had the bad luck of falling into the hole just as Varus threw off the camo cloth.

The heavily armored form landed hard and Varus heard a bone break. He pulled his gauss pistol out and shot the huge form through the chest armor. He then grabbed his gauss rifle, climbed out of his fighting position, and began following the other Siliconates.

Varus carefully took aim and shot the Siliconate soldiers one at a time. He worked his way from the back to the front and killed four of them before the tank pivoted in place and aimed its weapons at him. A moment later it went up in a massive explosion that engulfed the last Siliconate infantryman.

Varus felt a sharp pain stab him in his left arm and saw blood beginning to stain his left sleeve. He checked his helmet’s heads up display and turned towards the damaged tank just in time to see it detonate from a rocket slamming into it. A figure loomed out of the smoke and Varus recognized his Principale’s silhouette.


***


Metellus looked at the dead Siliconate in the fighting position and the other dead Siliconate infantry that were lit on fire by the now burning tank, with its main gun aimed right at Varus.

Varus noticed Metellus staring at him with an odd expression on his face. The Principale looked like he was ready to speak twice before he pointed at his arm. “Get Ursus to look at that. No telling what the Decurio will do if you bleed all over the deck of his Legati.”

There was an explosion from the road as a gauss cannon took out the last fleeing truck. A Legati command APC rolled up to them and stopped near Metellus. The ramp lowered and Varus saw Macer come running up along with Ursus’ bulky form appearing from out of the smoke. First Squad boarded and Varus sat down as Ursus started bandaging his arm.

Ursus shook his head, “You gotta be more careful Varus, the Principale might leave you behind.” Ursus’ voice trailed off as Metellus touched him on the arm and shook his head.

When Ursus had finished the squad sat in silence as the Legati clawed its way up the hills and slopes. Varus noticed Metellus staring at him the whole time. They reached the bivouac area and the Decurio lowered the ramp. Macer and Ursus exited first, but before Varus could stand up the Principale loomed over him and leaned down.

He spoke in a low voice that did not carry beyond the two of them. “What you did out there couldn’t have been done any better, by anyone, including me. They gave me my Golden Laurel for doing something like that, but I didn’t come out of it as healthy as you did.” He pointed to a large winding scar on his forearm.

He grabbed Varus by the back of the neck and tapped helmets with him. “You done good Manipularii. Now go see the medicus and get your arm fixed up. The Contubernium needs you healthy.” Stunned, Varus watched Metellus walk down the ramp and head for the Squad’s tent.

Varus shook his head, grabbed his gear, and moved towards the medical tents. The army personnel that watched him pass saw the smiling face of the bleeding Marine humming the Marine’s hymn. Each just rolled their eyes as he passed and muttered, “Manipularii.”
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Re: The Tales of Roma Mater

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Chapter Seven


Roman Star System Caria, Planet Nova Tarentum I
3248 A.U.C. (2498 A.D.)
(L + 25 days)


The rain fell gently as Decurio Longinus looked across the clearing at Principale Metellus. “What do you think of the Tribuni’s plan Principale?”

A grunted laugh came from the poncho covered figure as Metellus spat onto the wet ground. “Well Decurio, I think your Tribuni has gone completely insane. Now I don’t mind taking a few risks from time to time, but this Op is going to redefine the term ‘hairy’. I don’t mind hurting the Rockheads, but I don’t understand why we are doing this. I mean we're holding out real well in these mountains. Why are we looking to attack now? I just want to know why I'm risking my Manipularii’s lives on this?”

A distant battery of artillery fired off several salvos in the distance. Sempronius pointed in the direction of the noise. “That’s what it’s all about Principale, supply and logistics. A few of us officers know, but we aren’t letting the troops in on just how low on everything we really are.

“We have lost far more papilio’s to maintenance issues than to enemy fire. And the tormenta are critically low on shells. Along with the fact that this unending rain is degrading our weapons recharge packs faster than we expected. If the computer projections are correct, all organized resistance will collapse within the next fourteen days if we can’t get re-supplied.

“Our scout teams have informed us that the original LZ still has tons of our supplies sitting around on it. The Rocks hit the whole area with a nerve agent, but all this rain seems to have diluted it to a negligible strength. If we can get even a portion of those supplies, we should be able to hold for at least a few months more.”

Metellus spat another brown stream onto the ground. “And you think that they are just gonna let us walk into the LZ and go shopping? If I was them, I would have booby-trapped all that ordinance and had the whole area zeroed in with tormenta Centuries.

Sempronius nodded in agreement with Metellus' assessment. “Tribuni Khitai figures it that way too Principale. That’s why we're going to hit any tormenta units we can find and guard the LZ while the support troops pick through the area and salvage all that they can. We have concentrated everything we can scrape together for this push Principale. If it doesn’t work, we fall back to the mountains and go to ground until the Classis gets back.”

CLASSIS!” Metellus snorted in anger. “What I want to know is where those lazy bastards are. All those shiny billion sesterce tubs floating around in space. They must be afraid to get the hull paint scratched by fighting or something.”


C.A.R. (Classis Astra Romanus) Octavianus
Hyperspace Enroute to Phrygia


“Five minutes until we jump into the Phrygia System Sir.”

Navarchus Helvius looked at his young sensor officer. “We are going to need as much data as you can wring out of your sensors Centurio Hausser. We have to know as soon as possible if we have to jump out of here, or if we are going to stay and fight.

The Navarchus looked at his Command Board, at what remained of his fleet. His Triarii Squadron was down to one Battleship and three Heavy Cruisers after losing three of its Battelships over Nova Tarentum I. His Missile Squadron was still up to strength, fortunately. The four Missile Battleships showed ready in all respects, and their two escorting Destroyers maintained a tight formation with their charges.

The men of the Fleet Carrier Octavianus began moving efficiently as they prepared for the Apollonian Gate entry. Helvius keyed his comm system to the all ships frequency. “Navarchus Helvius to all units, the Senate and People of Roma Mater expects each man to do his duty this day. No ship is to retreat without my direct order. If the Octavianus is disabled or destroyed, command will fall to Trierarchus Cursus on the Olympus Mons.

Helvius heard the sensor officer counting down. “Three... two... one... Apollonian Gate opening!” When they emerged from hyperspace the holo projection showed the beautiful green world of Nova Londinium IV in the center of the stars life zone. “Sensors show wreckage from numerous ships scattered across the system Sir. Jamming is strong, trying to burn through and get a lock on the enemy.”

The communications officer spoke up. “No communications on any of the civilian or military channels. Picking up something on some odd frequencies, but they are encrypted Sir, trying to establish contact with anyone left down there.”

The comm officer was interrupted by Centurio Hausser, “BURN THROUGH SIR! Sir, we’re picking up only one enemy Squadron. It appears to be composed of nine ships. Computer classifies it as a Principe Squadron. Enemy Classis is composed of four Quinquiremes, two Quadremes, and three Triremes.”

Helvius smiled for the first time in weeks. “All ships open fire on that Squadron. Triari Squadron, stay at maximum range and stay between them and us. All Veles class ships, open fire, Octavianus, launch all strike groups immediately. The Navarchus felt the vibration as his Carrier launched her brood of fighters. He saw the vector tracks appear as the missiles from his Missile Squadron sped outward. The enemy fleet began closing range quickly.

What kind of system drive engines they must have to close this fast! The Navarchus thought to himself. Just prior to the missiles impact, beams lanced out and destroyed quite a few of the incoming targets. Helvius grinned as explosions blossomed amongst the enemy ships. “Didn’t destroy enough of them you bastards.

“And now my strike fighters are going to tear you a new one before you can recharge your point defense weapons.” Helvius whispered to himself, as he watched his strike fighters began to swarm the three remaining ships. Spinal lasers from the Battleship Vesuvius Mons started impacting the enemy and the Navarchus watched in pain as the enemy point defenses began killing his fighters.

NAVARCHUS, we have incoming enemy strike fighters!” Helvius’ eyes snapped towards a highlighted point in the holotank.

He turned towards his First Officer, “they can’t be from a fighter wing on planet this soon, they just invaded. Fi-Com, launch the ready 5 interceptors and get the rest into space, ASAP!”

His sensor officer pointed to a ghostly image that appeared and disappeared just behind the bulk of the planet. “I think there is another enemy Squadron hiding behind the planet. I’m sorry sir, the planets size is blocking my sensors."

Helvius looked at the mass of enemy strike fighters heading towards his ships. “It’s all right Centurio, just get me enough of a signal to lock our point defenses onto those incoming bogies.” Helvius watched as the last of the enemy’s battline burst open under the fire of his strike fighters. “Vector our fighters escorting the strike fighters to intercept the enemy and cover the Triari Squadron. Have the strike fighters return to base and rearm.

“Sensors, I don’t care how you get it done, but get me a clear picture on what’s hiding behind that planet. If we can’t get a lock on them, launch a salvo of anti-fighter pilas to take those bogies out before they swarm us.”

Helvius watched as a salvo of missiles headed out towards the enemy strike fighters and read the flight vectors. “Damn it, their strike fighters are faster than we thought. They’re going to get to the Vesuvius Mons and her Trireme’s before the pilas can intercept them.” The Navarchus watched as a massive group of enemy strike fighters swarmed over his Triari squadron. The Triremes detonated one after another. The Vesuvius Mons’ armor buckled and the enemy strike fighters gutted the ship in a few moments.

The enemy fighters then turned towards the Missile squadron, but were obliterated by a massive salvo of anti-starfighter missiles. “Vector the fighters behind that planet, and let’s try and get a picture of what we are dealing with!”

Time ticked by as the Navarchus maneuvered his remaining Squadrons. His fighters were swinging around Nova Londinium IV’s moon, while his strike fighters were in the process of rearming for another attack. Suddenly an enemy Squadron appeared from behind the planet and was revealed for the first time.

“Sir, detecting a Carrier Squadron! I show eight Quinquiremes, four Quadremes and six Triremes.”

Helvius pounded his command chair’s armrest. “All ships open fire! We are going to tear them up before they can get another wave of strike fighters spaceborne.” He turned to his Air Boss, “Your boys are going to get there before the pilas Gregorius. I’m sorry, but I need them to keep the enemy point defenses busy until the pilas get there.” His Fi-Com nodded to him and started issuing orders to his interceptor and fighter Squadrons.

The four starfighter Squadrons from the Octavianus closed from astern of the enemy Squadron and began strafing the ships. Beam after beam fired from the enemy and the Navarchus saw a yellow explosion as each young life was suddenly snuffed out. Allowing the huge wave of missiles to home straight in on the enemy Squadron. The enemy point defense weapons were so occupied with destroying his fighters that they did not intercept any of the incoming missiles.

What kind of man am I, that I use the lives of all those brave young men to protect my pilas? May the Gods forgive me and let it be worthy of their sacrifice. Helvius thought in self-incrimination.

The wave of Hell-Clay enhanced missiles impacted the ships and the holoscreen washed out for a moment with the energy of the multiple detonations. When the screen cleared the Navarchus saw the starfighters carving up the two remaining Heavy Cruisers. It was over in a few minutes as the last enemy ship was turned into floating debris.

“No other enemy ships detected Sir. No jamming on any band. I think that was all of them Navarchus.”

Helvius watched the holoscreen as a small group of starfighters made their way back towards the Octavianus. He walked over to his Fi-Com and leaned on his Command Board. “Gregorius, tell your boys thank you from me. Some of the enemy might have gotten away if it had not been for their sacrifice.” His Fi-Com nodded and began speaking into his mike.

Helvius turned towards his communications officer. “Lets get a message drone ready, I want a complete upload of all of the data that we can stuff into it. The Legatus is going to need all of the information he can get if the main enemy Classis is heading towards him. After that, lets see if there is anyone still fighting down there that we can provide some ground support for.”

His First Officer turned to him, “We aren’t heading back to Nova Cartago III Sir?”

The Navarchus shook his head. “We are sitting right across the enemy’s main line of supply for his Squadrons. If they send any reinforcements they will have to pass through us first. We paid heavily for this system and we are going to hold it, unless the Legatus orders otherwise. The troops on Nova Cartago III are well-equipped and supplied. They should have no problem holding out until we can mount a counteroffensive.”


Roman Star System Caria, Planet Nova Tarentum I
3248 A.U.C. (2498 A.D.)


Tribuni Khitai looked again at his battleplan. If this doesn’t work, it’s the end for us, He thought to himself in the darkness of his tent. Without those supplies we will just degrade into a group of bandits roaming the hills. If I had been grading the planning of this attack back at the Academy, I would have failed the student and had him shot for proposing an abortion like this.

Morale and time are the big factors now. Two days to get all of the troops in place, too long, just too long. He thought dismally. He looked outside of his tent and watched a young Marine walk past, carrying some ammo boxes. The bandage on his left arm did not detract from the pride in his step. His face had a smile of joy as he hummed his service’s Hymn. The Tribunii looked again at the battleplan on his computer and shook his head. “You poor Rockhead bastards.” He keyed into his computer ‘Plan Approved’.


(L + 27 days)


The chirping of the early morning insects filled the woods as the figure slowly walked the perimeter around the artillery unit he was assigned to guard. Patrols-Without-Tiring checked the status of its Squad as they guarded the resting gun bunnies. The rain continued to patter down softly on the nearby tents and vehicles. As it stared towards the distant mountains that still held the remaining soldiers of the Humans it shook its head and wondered why these Humans fought the inevitable.

Its musings were interrupted by a strange signal in its helmet. Four of it’s eight soldiers on the perimeter were showing as incapacitated or killed. It tried to signal an alert, but a jamming field blocked the transmission. It moved towards the artillery troops to rouse them when it saw a pair of wraith-like forms moving from tent to tent.

It raised its rifle when it felt a sharp pain in it’s back and a moment later across it’s neck, then a silenced bullet impacted It’s body proper. It tumbled to the ground and found itself looking up at a Human figure looming above it. The Human signaled more of it’s kind forward into the sleeping units perimeter.

Patrols-Without-Tiring felt its life slowly fading, but made an attempt to grasp its rifle. The Human above it leaned down and kicked the rifle into the brush and spit a brown liquid onto the helmet’s visor. The explosion of the artillery vehicles a few moments later lit up the night. It turned its head slightly to watch the Humans moving off into the trees as quietly as they had come. Through the brown stain on its visor it saw flashes light up the distant mountains as the Human artillery began raining down.


***


Metellus’ helmet banged against the hull of the Legati for the third time in as many minutes. He keyed his mike again, “You trying to kill us Decurio? This ride is getting kind of rough.”

The exasperated voice of Decurio Longinus came back a moment later. “It looks like the Rockheads have been busy in the past month. If you want to get out and walk through all of these minefields that Saturninus is trying to bypass Principale, be my guest.”

The chuckle of the Squad filled the crew compartment. “No, that’s all right Decurio. With Ursus’ big feet we would be setting off every mine between here and the mountains. So how long till we get to our next position? We’re going to need some time to dig in before the Rocks start heading for us.”

The Decurio looked at his command board. “Well, if we can avoid a few more of these minefields, we should be to our new position in ten minutes. The Tribuni needs us blocking that road junction ASAP.”

Several bumpy minutes later the Legati came to a halt. The Decurio’s voice came over the comm channel, “we’re here Manipularii, although it looks like this place has already been hit a few times. Deploy and we will be hull down on the hill for fire support, if you need us.”

The ramp lowered and a soft rain blew into the troop compartment. Metellus saw his Marines run down the ramp and come to a halt. He exited the Legati and looked around. The nearby buildings showed damage and several craters marred the road. The large three-story building they were in front of was scorched. Large holes marred the front surface.

Still legible were the words ‘LU UL US’ Gr in nd F ed’. Metellus and his Marines looked at the large crater and the wreckage of the tank, then towards the cratered hilltop overlooking the road.

Sempronius, seeing the troops still standing on the ramp, walked to the rear of the Legati. “Everything all right Principale?” He asked softly.

Metellus looked back at him. “The Gods must have a shitty sense of humor Decurio. This is where we lost most of the Century on the first day.” Metellus just shook his head, “Don’t worry about us Decurio, our Contubernium has already payed in blood for this ground. They won’t push us off of it until we’re ready to go, or all dead.” Seeing the look in his eyes Sempronius just nodded.

“We’ll be covering the road from the hill, I see plenty of places we can hide up there. Just call if you need us.” In a moment the ramp raised back up and the Legati headed down the road and then up the hill.

Metellus looked around at his Marines and spat off to the side. “All right Manipularii, we know the ground, and we know the enemy, so let’s get it done. Varus, I want you on the top of this building, keeping watch for anything coming down the roads. We are gonna let them come right in here before we hit them. Macer, you get in that red house, and be ready to slam any heavy armor you see. Ursus, you SURE that Mk.V H.P.R. is working now? We can’t afford to have it crap out in the middle of another firefight.”

Ursus just grinned at Metellus. “No problem Principale, I practically rebuilt it from scratch once I got the spares out of that Urbanae supply Principale.”

Metellus looked at him and smiled. “I’m not gonna ask how, just make sure whatever you did it doesn’t get to back to the Tribuni. Something makes me think he doesn’t have much of a sense of humor. Now get into that storefront and be ready to burn whatever rolls in here.” He hesitated a moment and put his hand on Ursus’ shoulder. “You watch yourself Ursus, this one is gonna be hairy.”

The heavy-G worlder just smiled at his Squad leader. “We’re ready for them this time Principale. They’re gonna pay for what they did to the Century.”

Metellus watched as each of his men ran to their assigned positions. He walked over to the large crater in front of the feed and grain store. The mangled wreckage from the tank was showing signs of rust on the exposed metal. He turned to move off when his foot struck something. He leaned down and picked up a charred object and rubbed the mud off of it. One of Optio Scaevola’s partially melted dogtags was revealed.

Metellus looked around his feet and saw a few shattered shards of bone. His knuckles turned white as his fist clenched around the mangled tag. “Sorry it took so long to get back to you Scaev,” He whispered. “We’re back though, so don’t worry. We’re gonna make the bastards pay in full for you and the rest. I promise.”

He put the dogtag into his pocket, looked around the crossroads once more and moved towards a nearby building. Now all we have to do is hold off a bunch of loricas with four Manipularii and a legati command vehicle. How do we get stuck with all the garum smelling jobs? Metellus thought as he laughed to himself with a small smile on his face.


***


“How do we get stuck with all the garum smelling jobs?” Urbanae Magnus snarled as he loaded another box of ammunition onto the truck. “I mean, why is it always the Urbanae that gets treated like a bunch of pack mules and stevedores.”

Urbanae Balearicus grunted as he hefted another crate. “Well, would you rather be out there on the firing line, holding off the Rockheads or here loading crates?”

Magnus moved some debris and found another intact box. He checked the serial number against his wrist comp. “SUNSCREEN, what were these idiots thinking. They brought crates of sunscreen here.”

Balearicus laughed, “Well leave it then, we have a lot of stuff to find and not much time in which to do it.” Balearicus said as he looked across the vast area of the landing zone and saw scores of trucks and numerous troops moving across the area. He saw combat engineers clearing booby traps in another area. As far as the eye could see was cargo containers, destroyed vehicles, and thousands of bodies that were nearly picked clean.

He saw a stack of crates and checked the numbers. He waved a truck over and shouted to Magnus. “C’mon Magnus, these are the drive train and fire control spares that they are looking for in the maintenance pool. We gotta get this garum loaded. The cleaner we pick this place, the more stuff we will have later and the less chance we will have to do this again.”

The truck backed up and the two soldiers began loading the boxes onboard. A steady trickle of loaded vehicles headed back towards the mountains. All across the ruined LZ parties of soldiers picked through the wreckage and marked boxes for loading. Far off in the distance, they heard the sound of weapons firing.


***


The sound of Varus’ voice came over the comm net. “I have movement coming down the east road. Numerous vehicles, looks like they are coming in hard and fast.”

Metellus keyed his mike immediately. “I want them all in the firesack before we open up. Macer, you get the first guy in line, then the back guy. I want to nail the coffin shut in here so we can get them all. Decurio, we need you ready for supporting fire as soon as it starts.”

“Roger that Principale,” Sempronius replied immediately.

A whining hum grew louder and louder. Metellus stole the feed from Varus’ helmet and saw a dozen vehicles moving down the road at high speed. “They’ll have to slow down with all of the rubble in the road here. Wait for my order.” The Principale saw the lead Siliconate machine slow when they approached the crossroads. As they made the turn Metellus counted eight tanks and four apc’s. When the last tank slowed he keyed his mike, “FIRE FIRE FIRE!

Macer fired and the impact on the lead tank sounded like a bell. Ursus poked his Mk.V out of the feed store’s doorway and plasma washed over a pair of apc’s. He ducked back inside as they detonated. Varus leaned over the roof edge and aimed a light missile at a tank. The missile pierced the thin top armor and the detonation rocked the buildings. Another missile from Macer arced overhead and slammed into the rearmost tank.

Fire from the remaining tanks struck the building that Varus was on. Concrete and brick glazed over and exploded. Metellus saw Varus’ marker moving to the rear of the building as it began collapsing in on itself.

Metellus noticed troops exiting the two remaining apc’s and began firing at them. He dropped two of them quickly and saw one of the apc’s turning towards his position. He keyed his mike, “Decurio, we could use a little help here!” A moment later a gauss shell slammed through the apc’s thin skin and it went up in flames. Metellus heard another missile fire into the area.

Then Metellus saw four armored figures rush towards the building where Ursus was hiding in. He dropped one before they made it through the doorway. “Ursus, you got three in your building! In the name of Mars get out of there!” He saw the building light up from within as plasma gouted out of a shattered window.

Metellus saw Varus run across the street, slap a magnetic mine on a tank and dive into the building where Ursus was. He heard the crack of the legati’s gauss cannon and saw the last Rockhead apc blow up. A moment later Varus’ mine went off and another tank blew itself to slag.

Metellus sat quietly in his fighting position and popped the covers off of his secret weapons. He looked out and saw another tank fall to Macer’s launcher. He saw the last pair of tanks blow down a building to make a way out for themselves and start heading back down the road.

Metellus finally heard the noise he had been waiting for. “Everyone go ‘tronic neutral, NOW!” He shouldered the anti-air missile launcher just as the first gunship popped up over the horizon. The hypervelocity missile impacted the craft and it detonated. He grabbed another missile and locked onto the second gunship. The gunship could not evade the HVM and its wreckage joined its partner a moment later.

He keyed the comm net, “Everyone all right? Looks like that’s all of them, for now.”

A moment later he heard Varus’s strained voice. “Principale, you better come here quick.”

Metellus shouldered his last two HV missiles and ran down the stairs. He fired a round into a still moving Siliconate soldier and ran into the remains of the feed and grain store. Parts of the inside of the building were still burning and smoke filled the room. He saw Varus kneeling above a familiar form working frantically.

Metellus squatted down and saw Varus stuffing bandages into the gaping hole in Ursus’ chest. Metellus felt for a pulse on the big man’s wrist. He gently took hold of Varus’ hands that were still trying to pack the wound. “He’s gone Varus, let him be. There’s nothing you can do for him anymore.”

He saw Varus lean over and pick up the Mk.V off of the ground. A row of red malfunction lights were lit up on the readout. He turned to Metellus with tears in his eyes, “I’m gonna kill those Urbanae bastards! He would’ve had them if it hadn’t broken.” Varus stated as his tears ran down his cheek.

Metellus just shook his head. “It’s not worth it Varus, if your time is up, your time is up. Nothing is gonna stop it. Now lets get into position, we may get some more company soon.”

He watched Varus leave the building before kneeling down again by Ursus’ side. He detached one of his dogtags and added it to the collection in his pocket. He closed the now sightless eyes. “Sleep well Ursus, may you hunt the enemies of Roma Mater with Mars at your side.” He left the building without looking back.

Metellus looked at the burning vehicles clogging the street. This had better be worth it Tribuni, if not, I am personally going to put a hole in your head. He thought as he moved to a nearby building.
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Re: The Tales of Roma Mater

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Chapter Eight


Roman Star System Caria, Planet Nova Tarentum I
3248 A.U.C. (2498 A.D.)
(L + 28 days)

Tribuni Angusticlavii Khitai watched the chain of trucks being offloaded and then moving out for another load. The men were grabbing and stacking boxes as fast as the cargo vehicles rolled in. The Tribuni had been worried about having enough personnel to handle all of the cargo unloading until a large group of wounded men had exited the hospital to lent a hand. He watched as a one-armed Soldier lugged a crate to the supply area. He shook his head in pride as a Marine on crutches dragged a cargo container that was tied to his waist.

Khitai walked back to his Headquarters. He entered the concealed cave and checked the situation board. He saw that many of his units guarding the old LZ were in combat at the moment. “You know how bad it’s going to be for you if I get all of those supplies, don’t you, you bastards?” He muttered in frustration.

Khitai looked over the situation board once more and pulled up his casualty figures. The longer they hold, the more supplies I can grab. But if I leave them out there too long I’m not going to have enough combat troops left to hold the mountains. He thought to himself. The Tribuni ran a few computer projections of enemy movements and casualty estimates. Six more hours, he thought. I can’t afford any more time than that.

With a sigh Khitai turned to his staff. “The last cargo hauler is to leave the LZ in four hours. I want the southern-most units to start leapfrogging back in five hours. All of the other units are to begin their pullback when the rearguard units reach them. I want the last of the combat units back inside the mountains defensive perimeter within seven hours. All tormenta units will use maximum supporting fire to cover the withdrawal. Lets get moving people!”


***


Militiaman Magnus looked at his wrist chrono before lifting another container into the truck. “I SWEAR TO THE GODS, once we’re done with this detail I am NEVER lifting another crate again. How much longer did the Centurio say before we pull out of here?”

Militiaman Balearicus looked over at him and smiled. “Sure Petronius, whatever you say. And it’s ten minutes less than the last time you asked.” The pair of militiamen grabbed a large box of anti-aircraft missiles and staggered over to a nearby flatbed. They helped the trucks crew tie the crate down and headed over for another container.

“Never lifting another crate again,” Magnus muttered. The sound of Balericus’ laughter carried across the field.


***


Principale Metellus peered through his image intensifiers and scanned the distant woods. He saw a dozen Siliconate apc’s concealed inside of the treeline. He checked his wrist chrono and muttered to himself. “Just hold off attacking for a couple of hours more. Then you can attack all the empty buildings you want.”

Metellus looked out over the empty ground and keyed in the artillery reference coordinates on his wrist comp. “Everyone stay frosty, we’ll be starting the pullback to the legati in about two hours. While we’re at it, lets hope the Rocks stand around for just a little while longer. If they don’t pull their heads out of their asses, they are gonna end up attacking nothing but thin air.”

Macer cut in on the comm freq. “Principale, you figure as much as these Rocks stand around before attacking, they must have Regular Army officers in charge eh?”

The sound of the Squad’s laughter was overridden by the Decurio’s comm signal. “Ok, that’s it, you are ALL walking home!” A moment later and his laughter joined the rest of them in a tension breaking guffaw.


***


The Tribuni watched the situation board as his troops started pulling back. Some of the units still in contact with the enemy were forced to conduct a fighting withdrawal. The markers started their slow crawl across the holo projection of the planet. Time rolled by and more of his perimeter units began to report enemy contact.

Khitai smiled grimly to himself. So you finally figured it out did you? He thought with a feeling of satisfaction. Well, my rocky friends, you’re a little too late. Khitai walked over to his fire support officer. “Decurio, I want any of those units that request supporting fire to get it, ASAP.”

Khitai did not like the look on the Decurio’s face. “Sir... we currently have nine enemy attacks in progress and I only have twenty ballista pieces that have been re-supplied, while sixteen ballista and twelve martiobarbulus heavy pieces do not have any shells at all. I just don’t have enough tubes re-supplied to provide fire support everywhere.”

Khitai glared at him for a moment and then relented a bit. “I understand Decurio, but if you can’t provide enough fire support to those units, the whole perimeter is going to collapse. Try and get some supplies to the rest of your tormenta. We may need them to cover the rest of the withdrawal. Take whatever transport you need to get the shells to your unsupplied tubes.”


***


Militiamen Magnus and Balearicus jumped off of the back of the stakebed truck they had ridden back to the Regimental Headquarters. The long ride into the mountains, while sitting on top of cargo containers, had been a slice of pure agony. The two planetary militia members moved away from the vehicle as a group of men swarmed over the cargo.

Magnus smiled. “Well, if they want to unload it, more power to them. Lets go see if we can grab some chow.” The militiamen began to walk towards the mess tent. Magnus began chuckling. "Well, that’s it, no more loading for us. From now on, it’s gonna be smooth saili...”

Magnus’ voice trailed off as a grizzled Senior Staff NCO put a hand on both of their shoulders. “Just what I’m looking for, a couple of strapping young lads to help me with a little job I need done.” The Primus Pilus guided them over to an ammunition dump just as a pair of trucks pulled up. “Now Urbanae, we have to get all of these tormentum shells loaded ASAP.” He looked at the pair strangely when one put his head in his hands and groaned while the other began giggling like a school girl.


***


Metellus watched the Siliconate apc’s come out from under the trees and stop. He watched the nearly fifty power armored figures spread out in front of them. “Everyone pull back to the base of the hill, NOW! I got a bad feeling about this.” As the Squad pulled back he heard a tearing sound fill the air. He dove into a nearby crater as rocket and artillery fire fell all around the area. He keyed the Fire Support frequency. “FDC 1... Jarhead 13... Request fire support... Fire plan Omega 134.”

There was a pause. “Jarhead 13... FDC 1... Complete fire plan unavailable... shot out.” The explosions continued to hammer the area.

Metellus saw Varus running towards him and dive into his crater. “Getting a little hot out there Principale. We got tormenta fire coming?”

Metellus spat to the side. “Doesn’t look like much help is on the way. I think the redlegs are having lunch or something. You see Macer?”

A moment later Macer jumped into the crater. “Here Principale, we getting out of here or what? We have fifty or so infantry heading this way with their papilio’s right behind them. I wasted the two loricas they had supporting them, but I’m out of pilas now.”

Metellus heard artillery shells passing overhead and explosions began hammering the Siliconates in the distance. “Looks like some of the tormenta boys are finally awake. FDC 1... Jarhead 13... On target... Fire for effect.” He switched frequencies. “Decurio, we gotta get out of here soon. The tormenta aren’t on the job and I don’t think we have the firepower to hold ‘em for much longer.”

The legati crested the hill and zig-zagged down the slope. Several rockets exploded around it on the way down. In a few moments the ramp was down and the Squad piled in. They clawed their way around the hill and headed to the north.

Decurio Longinus keyed in on the command frequency. “Command... Cataphract 11... position Gold East 4 overrun... Cataphract 11 and Jarhead 13 pulling back to Phase Line Silver.”

A moment later a reply came back. “Roger that Cataphract 11, hold at Phase line Silver until all units have passed through then pull back to Phase Line Bronze.”


***


Tribuni Khitai watched as the last of his units moved into the mountains. The Siliconates that had been pressing too close to the last units had been pounded by every artillery tube he had. That had allowed the final unit to make it back to the defensive perimeter intact. He looked at his wrist chrono. The pullout had taken seven hours and fifteen minutes.

He pulled up the casualty figures and frowned. By the Gods, I hope it was worth it. Now that we have the supplies, we should be able to hold until the Classis gets off their asses and comes to reinforce us. Khitai looked at the depleted condition of some of his line units. I’m going to have to flesh out some of those units or they’ll be combat ineffective soon. The Tribuni typed up a reorganization plan and pulsed it to his unit commanders. “Some of them aren’t going too be happy, but I need solid units if we are going to hold.”


***


The legati parked next to the Squad’s tent and the ramp lowered. Metellus, Macer, and Varus walked down and moved inside. Metellus was surprised at who he saw. “Domitus! You cleared for duty, or did you break out of the valetudinarium?”

Optio Domitus smiled and rolled up his sleeve to show a large angry scar. “It’s a little stiff since they had to re-grow so much muscle. But the good news is that the medicus thinks it will come back to one hundred percent, as long as I keep up on exercising it.” He looked towards the tent’s opening and looked back at Metellus. “Ursus?”

Metellus just shook his head and then looked at the two figures in the shadows behind Domitus. “Who’s that?”

The Optio looked over his shoulder and grimaced. “Well, Principale, it’s like this, they have to be classified in the category of ‘bad news’. The Tribuni figured to replace some of the line units combat losses,” Domitus flipped a thumb over his shoulder, “and so we got these.”

The two Soldiers stepped forward and the smaller of the two spoke. “Cohors Urbanae members Magnus and Balearicus reporting for duty Principale.”

All heads turned as Decurio Longinus entered the tent and laughed, “Well, there goes the neighborhood!”


(L + 33 days)


Metellus quickly ran into the Squad’s tent. “Everyone listen up! Grab up anything that shoots and get onboard the legati, NOW!” There was a frantic scrambling of movement as the men of the Squad pulled on their boots and web gear while they picked up their weapons. Metellus snarled at his two newest troopers, they were moving much slower than his Marines. His glare, which could burn holes through Tri-Tanium, spurred their speed as he all but chased them onto the waiting legati.

The legati began to move even before the troop ramp had closed. At the speed they were splashing through the Headquarters area told the men that something very serious, and potentially deadly, was happening.

Optio Domitus turned towards his Squad leader with a worried look on his face. “How bad is it Met? I thought we still had one more day of stand down before we went back on the line?”

Metellus frowned back at him. “I don’t know Dom, the only scuttlebutt I heard was that the Urbanae unit holding Dogleg Pass had been overrun and wiped out to a man. We’ve gotta get on the line to push them back before they break into the valley.”

Domitus looked at the two militia Soldiers which were still trying to adjust parts of their gear as the legati lurched across the terrain. “If Dogleg Pass was so important to the defense, why did they leave the Urbanae pukes guarding it?”

Metellus jerked his thumb over his shoulder. “From the scuttlebutt I heard the troops the Tribuni put there were locals, who knew the area and had a supposed ‘intimate knowledge’ of the terrain. So now, because they fucked up, we gotta spend OUR blood to fix another mistake by the Army.

We’re gonna deploy right on the line since jamming is makin’ it impossible for us to get in contact with the units in that area. So when we get there Dom, you take Varus and Balearicus to the right and I’ll spread left with Macer and Magnus. I don’t know what they’re hittin’ them with up there, but we gotta stop them cold and then push ‘em back. If we don’t, things could get real ugly, real quick.”

The legati rolled over something large and slammed back down just as Decurio Longinus came on the comm, “THIRTY SECONDS MANIPULARII! We have to drop you and shag ass back to cover, there are pilas flying everywhere.” The ramp began to lower and the sounds of battle echoed throughout the troop compartment. A pair of explosions rocked the legati as the ramp hit the ground. The Squad moved out and took cover as the Decurio’s legati moved towards a woodline on the ridge.

The Marines took cover behind several large boulders that littered this section of the pass. Metellus motioned his men forward and they began moving up in a bounding overwatch formation. Metellus noticed several weaponless militia Soldiers moving away from the battle with a glazed look on their faces.

“Everyone mask up and be ready for a chem attack.” Metellus said as he pulled the protective membrane and hood up over his face and took his gloves out of his pocket. Once his men were covered, he began moving them forward again.

The Squad arrived at the frontlines in the pass and saw the militia troops firing fitfully back down the pass. From what Metellus saw he realized that they must have been the first reinforcements to have arrived on the battlefield. Looking around he tried to try to locate the officer in charge of this cluster fuck of a defense, but could not see any in view.

Metellus motioned for his men to begin taking cover and dig in. He grabbed up his image intensifiers and looked down the pass as the enemy moved forward, firing as they advanced. When he saw what he was fighting he slammed his i.i.’s on the ground and screamed back down the pass, “YOU VILE FUCKING BASTARDS!!!

Still wearing their school uniforms and a rocky, pulsing companion, the children of Ducorum advanced forward, firing as they came.


***


Tribuni Khitai held the crumpled message in his trembling fist. He turned towards his communications officer. “Message to all units heading towards Dogleg Pass. Message to read: “Enemy attacking through pass consists of Siliconate possessed children. These units have broken through the first line of defense and must be stopped before they enter Valerian Valley.

“Any legionarii unable to mount a defense against this attack must move to flank the follow on armored forces before they breakout into the valley.” He turned to his Executive Officer. “Tesserarius Yuan, take command of the Vellexatio, I have to get up there before this all falls apart.”

Khitai moved out of the cave into the rain with his aide and orderly behind him. He turned to them as they pulled on their gear and loaded their weapons. “I am not going to ask you to follow me into this. I have to do this to show the men I’m not going to ask them to do something that I am not willing to do myself.”

They looked at him and Principale Helveticus, his orderly, spoke up first, “Well Tribuni, it’s this or die in place. I figure if we are all going to Hades anyway, you might need an orderly to get you your iced tea down there.”

The Tribuni smiled at him and looked at his aide, Centurio Brutus. The young man just smiled grimly and nodded. The Tribuni’s Legati pulled up and they all piled in. The Tribuni motioned them forward as he spoke to the driver. “To the Gates of Hades Optio Narses, and don’t spare the horsepower.”


***


The legati halted in front of the Headquarters cave and the Tribuni stepped out. His aide and orderly grabbed their gear and followed him inside. All three men were dirty and disheveled. The Headquarters Staff fell silent when they entered.

Tesserarius Yuan moved to his Tribuni and motioned to the mapboard. “The original defensive positions have been retaken. That cut off the Loricas which were following the... ‘Lead troops’, it was pure slaughter in the narrow pass Tribuni. We really hurt them, sir.”

Tribuni Khitai looked up as his orderly brought him a cup of tea. He sipped it and looked up at his XO. “Slaughter Tesserarius? Do you realize that we have several units that are going to be combat ineffective after today’s ‘slaughter’? I saw at least a dozen men commit suicide after the attack ended.

“I figure that we will lose at least another couple of dozen over the next week or so. I don’t think that lead Urbanae unit will be good for anything except rear area duties from now on.” Khitai said as he sipped his tea. “Any more ‘victories’ like this and we are going to be finished.”

Khitai motioned for his aide and orderly to join him and the three men moved to a corner and sat down. The men sat quietly drinking tea as the Headquarters bustled around them.


***


The men of the Squad entered the tent silently and dropped their gear in their areas. Metellus looked at the numb looks on his men’s faces. He moved to where Macer was bunked and knelt down and touched him on the shoulder. “Wasn’t your fault Macer, it was you or them. If you hadn’t been there, thousands of others would be dead right now.”

Metellus saw the numbness slowly turn to anger. “Principale, I think Iuppiter will condemn me to Tartarus for what I did today. But I swear that I am going to see every one of those evil things dead before I go.”

Metellus straightened back up, “Amen Macer, Amen.” He looked at Domitus and saw the Optio nod back to him.

Metellus turned to look at the rest of his troops and froze. Varus had his gauss pistol out and was sitting on the ground staring at the muzzle. When the rest of the Squad saw what Metellus was staring at a hush fell over the tent. Metellus spoke quietly, “Varus, give me the pistol.” Varus sat unmoving, still staring at the pistol.

Metellus squatted down near the young Manipularii, “You gonna let them win Varus?”

Varus looked up at Metellus and whispered, “I don’t know Principale... I just don’t think I can live with what I did... I never knew anyone could be... I just... I...” The pistol dropped to the ground as tears formed in his eyes.

Metellus grabbed him in a bear hug as Varus began crying. He motioned for Domitus to grab the pistol. The Principale held Varus until his sobs stopped and he fell asleep. He laid Varus down on his sleeping bag and covered him up. Metellus motioned for Macer to watch over him and stood up.

He looked to his two militiamen and motioned for them to follow him outside. The pair trailed Metellus to a large boulder. He looked them both over and spit some tobacco juice on the ground. “You two doing ok?” At their silence he pressed on. “I know they were your people out there and I know that it must’ve hurt you to shoot at ‘em. But I’m gonna explain something more important to you.

"This Contubernium is a family. What happens in this family STAYS in this family. If any word gets out about what went on in that tent, Varus might get redlined by the medicus. If that happens I’m gonna be out one Manipularii to a psych downcheck. And I can guarantee you two, that within a day of that happening, I will have lost two Urbanae Legionarii to ‘sniper activity’. Do you both understand me?”

Metellus saw the shock and fear turn to smoldering anger. He poked them both in the chest. “If you both were Manipularii I wouldn’t have to explain this to you. But since you are only one step above civilians, I’ll speak slowly and use small words... YOU SAY NOTHING!” They both nodded and moved off towards the tent.

Metellus watched them enter the tent and shook his head. He then began muttering to himself. “Sorry I had to do that to you boys. The only way to make you forget how upset about this you were was to make you so mad at me that you’d forget anything but that. He looked out into the dark night.

Off in the distance a single gauss pistol shot fired. Metellus looked in that direction, “They win another one.” He said with a sad sigh.
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Re: The Tales of Roma Mater

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Chapter Nine


Roman Star System Bithynia, Planet Nova Cartago III
3248 A.U.C. (2498 A.D.)
(L + 39 days)


Legatus Classis Labienus looked up at the chrono mounted on his bulkhead. The numbers were slowly counting down to the earliest possible time that the invasion fleet could arrive in Bithynia, based on the best estimates of the Curatores Fumis. Then he looked down at the mound of data crystals on his desk and tried to figure out how to weld the largest collection of ships, in Roman history, into a cohesive fighting unit in the time left to him. He sighed as he picked up data crystal after data crystal. “They’re sending me every piece of shit that the Classis has. By the Gods, some of these ships are over ninety years old.”

He looked over another readout. Classis Command is going to lose their minds if they find out how I plan to stop them, not to mention any of the Classis Commanders who will be itching to take overall command if I stumble, even just a little. Labienus looked again at the bulkhead mounted chrono as it kept counting down, 7 days, 14 hours, 23 minutes, 36 seconds. He glanced towards the ceiling. You created it all didn't you Iuppiter, but you didn't have a dozen Praefectus Classis hanging over your shoulder criticizing your every move. He thought with a weary sigh as he looked back at his desk and grabbed another data crystal. And I bet you didn't have to fill out any paperwork either.


***


Legatus Classis Labienus glared at the Marine officer standing at parade rest in front of his desk. ”Do you understand the orders I have just given you, Tribunus? I cannot trust this operation to anyone other than the Manipularii.”

The Fleet’s grizzled Marine detachments commanding officer nodded his head in agreement. Although he hesitated a moment before speaking. “May I be so bold as to ask you a question Legatus?” At the quick nod of assent from Labienus he continued. “Legatus, as you well know, we have served together for many years now. I also realize I received my current command based upon your recommendations, but my first duty is to the Senate and People of Roma Mater. I need to know why you need this done.”

There was an uncomfortable moment of silence before the Legatus sighed in aquiesence. “I cannot fault you for your loyalty to Roma Mater, Tribunus. The problem I have is that I believe that I am the only officer in the Classis who has a plan to defeat the enemy that games out at a greater than fifty percent chance of success. The problem is that if my plan is implemented I believe that Classis Command will relieve me before it can be fully implemented. If that happens we will lose Bithynia and probably the next five systems down the line before the Classis can stop them.”

The Legatus pointed at the chrono mounted on the bulkhead, it showed 1 day, 8 hours, 11 minutes, 24 seconds. “That’s how long the Curatores Fumis think we have before the enemy Classis gets here. If we can’t stop them here, we are going to lose thirty billion Roman citizens. And If I’m right, Tribunus, we can stop them here and then move out to join up with Navarchus Helvius in re-taking Phrygia. Then we can push out to Caria and see if your Manipularii are still out there, resisting the enemy.

“Unfortunately, along with the ships that I have asked for, CLassis Command has sent me a pack of useless Classis commanders, who have nothing better to do than second guess my every move. They send a never-ending stream of messages back to Classis Command about every decision I make, along with throwing unforeseen variables into my simulations. I need to regain control and I need the time to complete my plan.

“At the end of the coming campaign, Tribunus, Classis Command may ask you to arrest me. But it will only be after I have beaten the enemy. After that, Imperial Command can hang me if they want, I won’t care. Now will you carry out my orders?”

The Tribunus Laticlavius was silent for a moment and them he came to a perfect position of attention. “Legatus, my Manipularii stand ready to serve Roma Mater and are at your command.”

The Legatus gave a brief smile and handed a data crystal to the Marine commander. “Here are your orders in detail, I need you to get it done in the next twelve hours.”

The Marine officer took the data crystal and did a perfect about face, quickly leaving the Legatus’ office. Labienus watched the Tribunus grab his aide as he entered the outer office and the two moved quickly into the corridor. “I wish I could tell you everything Marcus, but if you knew the whole plan you would probably arrest me here and now, and Roma Mater cannot afford that until after I’m done.”


***


Tribuni Angusticlavii Eborius looked at the Marine detachment ‘Caesar’ drawn up for inspection. Their Centurio was looking aghast at the contents of the data crystal as it scrolled across his reader. “Ssssir, I don’t understand... If I carry this out... Sir, with all due respect, Praefectus Classis Avidia will hit the bulkhead if she finds out I did this.”

The Tribuni looked down at the young Marine officer and pointed at the reader. “Read it again Centurio, all you are required to do is assist us, my Manipularii vexallatio will carry out the orders. What I need you and your men to do is keep those Classis nautas out of our way.”

The Centurio re-read the orders again and looked into the cold eyes of the Tribuni, and for a Marine there was only one correct answer and he gave it. “Aye aye Sir.”


***


GET YOUR GARUM SMELLING MANIPULARII AWAY FROM MY EQUIPMENT!” The Classis communications Principale screamed as the Marine crated up the last of his hyperspace communications pods. The young Centurio in charge of this section seemed in shock as the armed and power-armored Marines kept all of the men of his section against the bulkhead.

The Communications Section Principale halted his move forward when a Marine leveled his weapon at his mid-section. A toneless voice came from behind the full-face helmet. “Don’t make me have to shoot you Principale, I’m just following orders.”

The men of the comm section heard a familiar voice shouting from the corridor and smiled at each other. The Praefectus was here each thought; now these jarheads will get theirs.

Praefectus Classis Avidia looked at the Marines rolling her Comm Pods down the passageway and let loose. “Who in the name of Pluto gave you permission to take even a bolt off of my flagship without my orders!?!?” The closest Marine took a step back from the force of the Praefectus’ outburst.

Tribuni Eborius stepped forward, between his Marines and the diminutive Praefectus Classis. He handed over a crystal to her and stood quietly at attention until she had read most of the orders. He watched as her face turned redder and redder and a large vein began to bulge out from the side of her neck.

She looked up at Eborius and poked him in the center of his chest armor. “If you don’t put those pods back in the comm room right now Tribuni, I will have you shot!”

The Tribuni looked at her calmly and pointed at her reader. “If you will check paragraph twelve Praefectus, I am authorized to use deadly force if ANYONE attempts to interfere with the carrying out of Legatus Classis Labienus’ orders. Now please make way for my Manipularii Praefectus, we will be off of your ship in a few minutes.”

Praefectus Avidia watched the Marine head down the narrow passageway with the last of her comm pods in tow. Finally she turned to the comm sections chief NCO, “Principale, get me Praefectus Classis Megellus on the Ostia, we will see about this!”

The Principale made the connection and stood by as the Praefectus talked to her friend. He watched as she grew more and more animated. The whole section tried to crawl inside the walls as her voice hit what the crew liked to call the ‘paint-peeling screech’. ”You’re telling me that bastard took EVERY pod off of EVERY SHIP IN THE SYSTEM!?” She turned back to the Principale. “Call the launch bay and have my shuttle prepped, I’m going down and give that arrogant prick a piece of my mind!”


***


Labienus’ aide, Centurio Maximus leaned his head into his office. “Message from Tribunus Tacitus Sir, all message pods have been accounted for on all ships in the system. No deaths reported, just a few ‘bumps and bruises’. But sir...” He looked at his reader in resignation.

The Legatus sighed. “Let me guess, every Praefectus and Trierarchus in the Classis wants to talk to me. Well, tell the Trierarchus’ to talk to THEIR Praefectus Classis and put the Praefectus’ through to me in order of seniority. Oh and Tiberius...” He said before his aide could disappear, “Bring me a bottle of aspirin.” As his aide ducked out of the office the first comm signal chirped on his desk. He shouted out the door, “A BIG bottle of aspirin!”


(L + 40 days)


Labienus was working his way through the mountain of paperwork that awaited him on his desk, with only an occasional glance at the countdown chrono on the wall. He was reading another complaint from the Praefectus of the 11th Velites Squadron about the lack of proper missile reloads when his aide rushed in.

“Legatus, gravimetric detectors are showing a massive disturbance in the region of ring three segment fourteen, near Nova Cartago I. It looks like a large number of unknowns have jumped in system near the G28 limit. The Battle Sim is predicting enemy ships. I have alerted all Classis Commanders to go to Red Alert, and all of your staff members have been notified and are on their way to the CiC.”

The Legatus put his arm on the desk and brushed the reader and all of the data crystals into the trash can with a smile. The look of horror on his aides face made him smile even wider. “Tiberius, if we lose this fight none of this, this crap,” he said, pointing at the shit-canned paperwork, "is going to matter, and if we manage to win this by my battleplan, no one is going to care about a few late reports. Either way, it will be another Legatus’ problem.”

Centurio Maximus just shook his head as he helped the Legatus on with his formal Musculus, the one with the knotted sash. As they entered the CiC the young officer realized why the Legatus made him break it out of storage for this battle. In the massive room, crowded full of men and women in their gray ‘utility’ uniforms, he stood as an easily locatable island of shining bronze. He chuckled as he thought to himself, Labienus has always been a frustrated thespian and loves the chance to dress up and play the part of ‘The Imperator Classis’.

Labienus turned his head slightly as he studied the readout boards. “You find something funny about an invasion Centurio?”

“Umm, no sir, I just thought of something funny.”

“Well keep your mind in the game, we have important work to do here and I need you on the ball.”

A comm officer caught Labienus’ attention. “Legatus, I have Praefectus Classis Avidia on the comm channel sir, she says she needs to speak to you, ASAP. Her words sir, not mine.”

Labienus sighed a moment before he keyed his mike, “Labienus here Domitia, what do you want?”

The voice was shrill enough that Labienus had to hold his headset several inches away from his ear. “Legatus, have you completely gone around the bend? After our talk in your office we agreed that I was the best one to lead the first attack against the invaders, then I get sent... THIS?!

Labienus smiled a second as he looked at his aide and spoke calmly into the mike, “What do you mean Domitia? I have given you nearly half of the ships that Classis Command sent me, and you have been sent the Battleplan from my vexillatio, so what’s your problem?” He quickly held the headset at arms length once again, before the explosion could happen.

Her voice thundered out from the comm systems speaker. “YOU ASSIGNED ME EVERY OBSOLETE RELIC THAT CLASSIS COMMAND HAS SENT YOU! Not one of these Squadrons has a ship in it younger than thirty years of age. In the name of Pluto you even assigned me a Squadron of Diana Class Pila Quadremes! Legatus, I checked their registry numbers and ten of them were due to be used as gunnery targets at the Roma Mater IV test range, and the others were pulled from various museums and memorials where they were HISTORICAL DISPLAYS!

"Legatus, with all due respect, if the simulations are accurate the enemy is going to turn this fleet into scrap metal in a fairly short order. I respectfully request that you release to me some of the more modern Squadrons from wherever you have hidden them to bolster my command.”

Labienus walked over to a convienent ready room connected to the CiC and shooed the occupants out. He closed the door behind him and sat on top of a desk. “Domitia, get to your ready room alone and switch to Cipher 43-Alpha right now.” There was a long pause and several clicks came from the comm speaker as they were reconnected using the special Command channel reserved for Praefectus Classis’ and up.

There was a mild distortion as she spoke again. “All right Legatus, NOW will you be so kind as to tell me what is really going on? And why I am required to carry out this Battleplan that was obviously designed by some dangerous mental defective?”

Labienus took a long, deep breath before continuing. “Domitia, we ran the simulations at least one hundred times with all of the data recovered from Phrygia, along with Helvius’ experience, add to that the input from the best tacticians on my staff. The results always came out with the same. Based on those predictions if we meet the enemy with our best ships first and try to slug it out with them in open space we have only a twenty percent chance of victory.

“All possible permutations were gamed and all of them showed the same thing, our best Squadrons would be shattered, the enemy would have taken between thirty and fifty percent losses, including all of his transports, while the remainder of his Classis would have had more than enough firepower to destroy the relics that would have remained to defend the system. Both planets would be glassed by the enemy shortly there after, and then they would jump through the next five systems destroying everything in them until they got to the next Classis Command Mobilization Vellixatio.”

Avidia’s voice cut into his explanation. “Twenty percent? Are you telling me that I am going to be fighting my Squadrons on a Battleplan with only a twenty percent chance of success?!”

Labienus’ voice cut her off. “No Domitia, if you will let me finish I will tell you the rest. A bright young Tribuni on my staff came to me with a plan that he had been running on his Battle Sim computer, and it showed a number that seemed unreal at the time, we were fighting to get a better than eighteen percent solution. His superior would not pass it up to me because of what it required from us. But the Tribuni bucked the Chain of Command and walked into my office with the outline of what we are now calling Operation Brutus.”

Avidia hesitated a moment and then asked, “If I may ask, Legatus, how does my sacrificing my entire Classis by concentrating fire on the enemies Pila and Carrier Squadrons and ignoring his transports, as is called for in the Battleplan you sent me, accomplish anything?”

Labienus closed his eyes and pinched the bridge of his nose to forestall the migraine headache he knew was coming. “Domitia, the plan requires you to wait around Nova Cartago II until the enemy comes to you and then knock back those ship types by, at the minimum, thirty percent before you retreat out of the system and regroup. If you can do that, the Battle Sim predicts a ninety percent chance of the enemy landing his transports on Nova Cartago II.

“It’s only THEN that I am going to attack them with the nine first rank Squadrons that I have waiting in the asteroid belt. The simulations show that if we can catch them in a defensive situation with their pila and fighter complements down by thirty percent, we show a fifty-seven percent chance of defeating the remaining enemy Squadrons. Each percentage point of those ship types we destroy above thirty percent raises our odds by two percent."

Her voice interrupted him. Labienus knew the chill in it was not a factor of the scrambler this time. “Am I to understand the Legatus intends to just allow the enemy to invade a planet with a population of two billion Roman citizens?” There was a moment’s pause before she continued. “Now I see why you stole all of our comm pods Legatus. If Classis Command knew you planned that they would have relieved you of your command immediately.”

Labienus felt the throb behind his eyes growing. “Domitia, if you could show me a battle sim that had a better than fifty percent chance of success that did not involve this, I would jump on it immediately. I made the command decision to put those two billion lives at risk rather than sacrifice the tens of billions in the systems behind us. I will stand before a Courts Martial board when this is over, but I’m not going to allow ANYONE to interfere with my Battleplan until it’s over! Then you can testify against me at the hearing and throw the entire thing on me. But I have to know if you will carry out my orders or do I have to put someone less qualified in command of your Classis?”

There was another long pause. “How can your staff predict that they will hit me here at Nova Cartago II instead of smashing you there at III?”

Labienus sighed. “We predict that with a full complement of defending ships they will have a seventy-five percent chance of hitting the planet with the fewest orbital defenses.”

He heard her punching some data into her comp. ”Legatus, with all due respect, but Nova Cartago II shows nine orbital defense castras and III only shows eight so how... by the Gods, you aren’t going to...”

“The charges are already placed Domitia, they should detonate in about an hour.”

“You aren’t going to warn them or try to evacuate them before hand? No, you can’t can you? Word might get out if you do and the enemy just might get wind of it and smell a trap. By the Gods Legatus, you are so cold it’s frightening. All right, we will take as many of them as we can with us before we jump out, just remember that I am going to be the primary witness against you when this is over. Avidia out.”

The Legatus looked at the ceiling for a moment and whispered to himself with a pained strain in his voice, “I wish you could be Domitia, in the name of Iuppiter I wish you could be.”
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Re: The Tales of Roma Mater

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Chapter Ten


Roman Star System Bithynia, Planet Nova Cartago III
3248 A.U.C. (2498 A.D.)
(L + 40 days)

Centurio Maximus had been leaning over the shoulder of the Senior Sensor Principale for the past two hours. Principale Maecius sighed as the young Centurio nearly spilled his mug of coffee. “Sir, why don’t you take a seat, nothing should happen for the next couple of hours.” The Principale lowered his voice and whispered to the nervous officer. “With all due respect, sir, you are making the nautas a wee bit nervous. The next few hours are going to be hard enough on everyone without them having an officer hanging over their shoulders.”

Maximus looked into the old Principale’s eyes and nodded. He stood up straight and looked over at his Legatus. He saw Labienus casually sitting on the edge of a desk reading and signing messages on his comm pad. The Centurio noticed that even though there was a frantic bustle on the comm channels, there seemed to be an island of calm around the relaxed looking Classis Commander. As each person came up to the Legatus with a question or bearing something for his signature, they also carried away with them a little bit of the tranquility that Labienus radiated.

Maximus looked down and met the Principale’s eyes. Principale Maecius glanced over at the Legatus and then grinned up at him. The Centurio gave him a wry smile. “Lesson received and understood Principale.”

The two men looked quickly at the sensor holo as a warning alarm suddenly flashed over the sensor net. They saw the green and blue ball that was Nova Cartago II and the icons that were the Squadrons of Praefectus Avidia deployed around it. The red flashing was coming from the geostationary orbital region surrounding the planet. The Principale highlighted the region and zoomed in. The two men watched in horror as two of the orbital defense bases exploded in a sudden flash of fire and venting atmosphere. A moment later three more went up in quick succession.

Centurio Maximus turned towards Labienus as the Principale fed his data to the main holo display. “Legatus, seven of Nova Cartago II’s nine orbital castras have been destroyed! Correction, eight... now nine, by the Gods! Sir, all of Nova C II’s orbital castras have been destroyed!” He looked over at the Principale and got a shake of negation. “No sign of weapons fire. It must have been sabotage.”

Labienus got up from the desk and walked to a nearby comm console. “Get me Praefectus Avidia on the Caesar.” There was a moment of static on the holo projector before Praefectus Avidia’s face appeared. Labienus nodded to her. “Praefectus, it appears that the orbital castras supporting you have been destroyed by some unidentified force, or forces. We are checking all of Nova Cartago III’s castras for concealed explosives as we speak. Please update your Battleplan, taking into account the loss of those orbital defenses.”

The stern-faced Praefectus simply nodded. “Understood sir, my staff just happens to have a plan in their files for the Classis fighting without any planetary support. We will implement plan Thermopylae 214.”

Labienus nodded in agreement. “My compliments to your staff on having a plan for an occurrence like this. They are a credit to you.” He glanced at the countdown chrono. “We show thirty minutes before enemy arrival.” He looked around the CiC before looking back at her. “May Fortuna smile on you and your crew Praefectus.”

Avidia gave a wry smirk and was reaching for the cut off switch when Labienus stopped her. “Thirty percent Domitia, if you can’t do that much damage to their Carriers and Velites, it’s all going to be meaningless.”

She looked him in the eye and nodded almost imperceptibly. “We will do our best sir, Avidia out.”


Roman Star System Bithynia, C.A.R. Caesar
3248 A.U.C. (2498 A.D.)


Praefectus Avidia stared a moment at the fading holo projection of Labienus. Thirty percent? She thought with irritation. His mind must be slipping. She looked again at the projections from the new Battleplan while her staff looked on. “Are these numbers accurate?”

Navarchus Salvius’ mouth was in a grim line. “Yes Praefectus, if Classis Command’s estimation of the enemies strength is even close to being correct, those are the numbers we have been getting out of the Battle Sims.” He paused for a moment and pointed at her comm pad, “Ma’am, I think the Legatus is being unrealistic in his estimations of our ability to inflict the required casualties upon the enemy.” He appeared to want to say more, but after a moment he fell silent. Realizing there was nothing he could say that would matter.

Avidia rubbed her eyes and snorted. “Never underestimate the ability of higher officers to ignore the facts that don’t agree with their view of reality.” She paused for a moment and looked down at her comm pad again. “He will just have to accept the casualties we can realistically inflict with the relics that he has given us. Well, lets get the plan transmitted to of all our subordinate commands.” She tossed her comm pad onto a nearby desk and headed through the hatch onto the flag bridge.

Her aide picked up her comm pad and followed the other staff officers out of the hatchway. In spite of himself, his eyes were drawn to the viewscreen. An icy chill ran down his back as he read the figures. He stepped through the hatch and pressed the sleep button on the comm pad. The glowing data on the pad flashed:

Battle Plan: Thermopylae 214

Section 25.4.6 E

Casualty Estimates

Estimated ...................Enemy
Classis........................Veles/Carrier
Losses:.......................Losses:
47 %..........................17 % [scroll up]
51 %..........................18 %
55 %..........................19 %
59 %..........................20 % << Planned
63 %..........................21 % << Classis
67 %..........................22 % << Retreat
71 %..........................23 % << Points
75 %..........................24 %
80 %..........................25 %
85 %..........................26 %
90 %..........................27 %
95 %..........................28 %
99 %..........................29 % [scroll down]

The numbers flashed on the screen once more before going black.


Roman Star System Bithynia, C.A.R. Regulus
3248 A.U.C. (2498 A.D.)


There was a loud pop and then the smell of ozone and burning plastic filled the bridge of the Guided Missile Cruiser ‘Regulus’. Trierarchus Diashi looked over his shoulder in time to see his Chief Engineer slapping out a small fire on his console. The cursing that filled the air seemed incongruous coming from a small wrinkled man who looked more like someone’s grandfather than the Chief Engineer of a starship.

Not that I’m any kind of spring chicken myself. The Trierarchus thought with a mental chuckle. He watched as three of his crew tore open several panels to pull the melted and fused components out. Another sailor was passing out circuit boards to them from a box marked ‘Historical Displays of Electronics from the Past.’

Diashi remembered when his preservation group had purchased the ship to turn it into a museum. Most of them had served on the Diana Class ships in their youth and when they heard that the Navy was going to send the last of them to the ‘breakers’ a large pool of ex-sailors and marines had pooled their money and bought the Regulus. He smiled as he thought of how many strings had been pulled to allow the group of sailors, not one of who were under eighty-five, to sail her from the Sol IV Test Range to Bithynia III. The hull was so riddled with air leaks that the group of volunteers had spent nearly the entire three week voyage in their e-suits.

They had been fourteen months into their eighteen month overhaul and outfitting when word of the war had reached them. The hasty mobilization of every ship that was spaceworthy to intercept the incoming invasion came as a surprise to the retired sailors. That surprise was eclipsed by the paperwork that the Regulus Restoration Committee received, informing them that their ship was being remobilized for the war and would be manned by a ‘scratch’ group of fleet reservists.

The anger of the men and women of the Regulus Restoration Committee had been immense, until a ‘youngster’ of seventy-five, spoke up with an idea. Trierarchus Diashi had no idea of what kind of strings, bribery, threats, or downright blackmail had been made to the officers of Fleet Command, and frankly, he did not want to know. The results were the assigning of the entire R.R.C. to crew the Regulus in the coming conflict.

The elation had been immense, until the realities of the coming conflict had finally set in. Diashi did not believe in keeping secrets from his crew. We’re all just too old to play these silly ‘I know something you don’t know’ games. He thought with a sigh. So the crew, from his Executive Officer to the most junior cook, a seventy-eight year-old grandmother of eight, was as well-informed as any Praefectus Classis in the system.

The looks he had been getting from his crew over the last few days had confirmed his gut feeling about the whole situation. Each man and woman realized that this was going to be the last voyage for him or her. The sixth sense of all veterans was screaming at them to get out and get away.

Well, He thought with a grunt, Just one more run, just one last battle, better to go this way than to die hooked up to life support machines and pissing all over yourself as you pray to die. A muffled squawk came from the sensor holo and all eyes went to the main display. Ships were coming into sensor range, and kept coming. Their size and numbers took his breath away. He turned towards his XO and Praefectus Fabrum and smiled, and they looked back at him with grins as tight as death.

The Chief Engineer chuckled. “One last day in the sun, ‘eh Trierarchus?”


Roman Star System Bithynia, C.A.R. Caesar
3248 A.U.C. (2498 A.D.)


Praefectus Classis Avidia saw the massive enemy fleet begin to turn towards Nova Cartago II, and her. She saw the icons marking her Squadrons move to meet the enemy. There seemed to be strong ECM coming from the enemy fleet, jamming that caused the numerous contacts to fade in and out.

Her Sensor Principale screamed out with a cheer. “BURN THROUGH! I've got your frequencies you bastards!” The holo picture suddenly cleared from all interference as the full immensity of the enemy fleet was finally revealed.

“Mars protect us!” Avidia heard someone mutter. A beep called her attention to a display on the bulkhead. Letters began scrolling across it as the large numbers appeared.

All Enemy Carrier/Velites ships identified.

Current Enemy Carrier/Velites Ships remaining:
100%

Enemy Carrier/Velites Ships destroyed:
0%

Avidia picked up her mike and keyed the all Squadrons channel. “All Squadron Commanders, you have your targets, fire at your assigned ships until all of your ordinance has been expended, or until I give the order to retire. The Senate and People of Rome expect you to do your duty today. May the Gods be with you all.” She turned to her weapons officer, “Fire as targets bear!”


Roman Star System Bithynia, Planet Nova Cartago III
3248 A.U.C. (2498 A.D.)


Legatus Labienus and his aide watched the first missiles and strike fighters from Praefectus Avidia’s task group head towards the enemy. Centurio Maximus looked at Labienus’ face and was shocked to see how pale the Legatus was. He saw Labienus’ eyes close and could barely hear the whisper repeating over and over, “May the Gods forgive me.”


Roman Star System Bithynia, C.A.R. Caesar
3248 A.U.C. (2498 A.D.)


Praefectus Avidia’s mouth took on a grim line as she watched her first waves of missiles and strike fighters close with the enemy ships. The largest waves were obsolete missiles armed with fusion warheads, coming from her oldest ships. Mixed in amongst them was a scattering of missiles armed with anti-matter warheads, coming from her few modern vessels. She was hoping that the enemy would waste their point defense weapons on the older missiles and allow her more powerful warheads, along with her strike fighters, to get in amongst them.

She watched as the first waves of missiles reached the lead enemy Veles Squadron. The screen seemed to glow as a massive battery of point defense weapons laced out from the target Squadron and her nearby escorts, which destroyed missile after missile. Avidia swore to herself as the few fusion warheads that made it through the dense point defense fire and impacted among the enemy ships seemed to have little effect. Immediately behind them were the lead strike fighterr Squadrons and her small wave of modern missiles. She looked over at the bulkhead:

All Enemy Carrier/Veles ships identified.

Current Enemy Carrier/Veles Ships remaining:

100%

Enemy Carrier/Veles Ships destroyed:

0%


Roman Star System Bithynia, Strike Fighter Group Wolf
3248 A.U.C. (2498 A.D.)


The three Squadrons of Falcon strike fighters cut through the dark of space. Tribuni Trebius’ Falcon strike group had been assigned to the most boring duty in the Republic, ‘guarding’ a friendly border that was shared with their good friends, the Iskarendi.

When the word came down from Classis Command the Light Carrier Billenius had been pulled off the border along with the rest of her sisters. Only a small handful of customs Frigates were left to slow the pirates that had plagued the border systems for years.

His carrier and her escorts had been mothballed for years until the pirates had begun their raiding and the Republic was forced to re-activate them. Ever since the fleet run but Marine starfighter groups had been used to give ‘live fire’ training to green Merine pilots fresh out of flight school, along with providing a comfortable last post to pilots just waiting to retire.

The Tribuni looked at his wrist chrono. He had it programmed to record his elapsed time in service with the Marines. He watched it roll: 24 years 11 months 30 days 23:50 hours. Just short you bastards. He thought with irritation. You couldn’t have waited a little longer to do this so I could have retired with my twenty-five and gotten out of this garum smelling assignment?

A threat warning beep called his attention back to the here and now, and he hammered his port thrusters to avoid an enemy missile and checked the readout on his LIDAR. His strike fighter group had just avoided a huge wave of missiles, and it appeared that they were ignoring his fighters on their paths to the capital ships behind him. He saw a small group of ships to his port side. His IFF computer identified them with a ninety-five percenet probability as troop transports. He yearned to lead his Squadron on a quick strafing run on that enemy Squadron, but the words of the Tribunus rang in his ears. “You will attack only the designated ships or I will stuff you and your whole Squadron into a recycler!”

The Tribuni saw a glow on his LIDAR marking his designated target Squadron just ahead. “Wolf Strike Group, targets at twelve degrees, zero minus twenty-five. Mark your targets and take them out. Timberwolf Squadron follow me in, Gray Wolf and Coyote Squadrons take up flanking positions.” He saw Gray Wolf and Coyote Squadrons spreading out on his flanks.

Trebius had watched the older missiles get blown out of space and was hoping to close with the enemy ships before their point defense weapons recycled and did the same to his strike fighters.

The Timberwolves entered into the Squadron formation. Huge ships loomed all around them. The beams lanced out from the fighters. The thick armor of the heavy vessels shrugged off most of the fire, yet here and there, hull plates began to glow and peel back. A few small hull breaches began to appear among the enemy ships. The Tribuni heard a cheer over his comm, and looked to port in time to watch one of the picket ships detonate.

Anger immediately filled him, “I told you to fire only on your ASSIGNED SHIPS! Don’t waste your ammunition on those worthless...”

White fire burst from the weapon mounts of the Veles and her escorts, straight into the fighters. Wreckage from the Falcons crashed into, and bounced away from, the armored hulls.

The Siliconate 2nd Veles Squadron advanced on, belching a new wave of missiles towards Praefectus Avidia’s fleet. A moment after they fired, the first wave of anti-matter pilas struck. Four of the Battleship-sized missile throwers exploded in quick succession. When the glow faded, four ships were gone and one tumbled gutted and out of control while the rest of the Squadron advanced on.

Small pieces of wreckage were nudged aside by the massive Siliconate ships. A tiny piece of wreckage was struck and tumbled off into the dark. The glowing face read: 25 years 00 months 00 days 0010 hours *Welcome to retirement Tribuni Trebius*

There were no survivors from the three Marine strike fighter squadrons.


Roman Star System Bithynia, C.A.R. Caesar
3248 A.U.C. (2498 A.D.)


Avidia gave an audible growl as she watched her pilots die with so little effect. An icon rose from Nova Cartago II and headed towards the enemy. Her fist slammed into her holo projector as the planetary defense centers of the planet FINALLY launched their strike fighter Squadrons.

Another flashing icon caught her eye. She zoomed in to the icon just in time to see her lead Principe Squadron vaporize under a wave of enemy missiles and strike fighters. The fighters did not pause for a moment before heading to the next Squadron in the Task Force.

She turned to her aide and snapped out, “Casualty report!”

He tapped his keyboard quickly before replying, “Twenty-Third Principe Squadron totally destroyed Praefectus, Fifteenth Principe Squadron taking heavy losses from enemy strike fighter Squadrons. Total Classis losses are sixteen percent.”

Avidia glanced at the bulkhead-mounted holo projector and pointed to her Comm Officer. “We have to get closer for our weapons to have any effect, order all Squadrons to close formation, to cover each other and follow us in!” The rumble of the Caesar’s engines increased as the Praefectus’ Command Squadron lead her fleet into the jaws of the enemy. She glanced again quickly at the bulkhead holo and growled again.

All Enemy Carrier/Veles ships identified.

Current Enemy Carrier/Veles Ships remaining:

93%

Enemy Carrier/Veles Ships destroyed:

07%


Roman Star System Bithynia, C.A.R. Vesuvius Mons
3248 A.U.C. (2498 A.D.)


Praefectus Classis Ravilla watched as two more of his Battleships exploded. He screamed at his helmsmen, “More speed Centurio Renatus, we have to get into beam range before they kill the whole Classis.”

Ravilla was livid with rage. His 8th Triari Squadron was being shot to pieces before his longest-ranged weapons were even able to engage his targets. He hurried over to the weapons control station and checked the range to the enemy carriers. He ground his teeth in frustration. His weapons were in range of two enemy formations on his port and starboard flanks, but they were tagged in red as Principe formations.

Labienus is an idiot! Ravilla thought bitterly to himself. Here we are in range of the enemy and we are forbidden to fire because of ‘The Plan’. I’m going to have half my ships blown out from under me before I can get a shot at those carriers. He saw Navarchus Sulla’s 5th Triari Squadron, on his starboard flank lose three ships in quick succession.

His Weapons Officer’s voice cut through his anger, “Sir, we’re in range of the enemy carriers.”

Ravilla’s face lit up with a feral grin. “Lock all weapons on target Centurio Zeno, coordinate fire with 5th Squadron and fire when ready.”

Long range spinal laser fire reached out from the two Triari Squadrons and began cutting into the targeted Siliconate Carrier Squadron. The combined fire from two-dozen Battleships chewed up a pair of fat-bellied carriers in a few moments. The surviving enemy carriers began a lumbering turn to port as another three ships were cut open and began to stream atmosphere.

The Praefectus’ elation was cut short when he saw a crisscross of beams on his holo, where six of his Battleships were cut to pieces in mere seconds. He expanded his scan and saw the two enemy Principe Squadrons that had been on his flanks closing in from either side. “Centurio Zeno, lock on to that portside Principe Squadron and fire all weapons. He saw his beams strike the onrushing ships with very little effect.

“Sir, their armor is soaking up most of our fire.”

He saw Navarchus Sulla’s ships still firing at the fleeing enemy carriers. “Comm, contact 5th Squadron and ask them to support our fire against that Squadron to p...” A huge hammer blow struck the Vesuvius Mons, throwing Ravilla to the deck. “Keep firing Centurio, don’t stop as long as we have...” Another explosion ripped the Vesuvius Mons in two.

Navarchus Sulla’s 5th Squadron destroyed two more carriers before beams from the two Principe Squadrons speared into the Squadron and reduced all of its ships to balls of expanding gas and scrap metal.

The two Siliconate Principe Squadrons banked hard and steadied on a parallel course towards the remainder of Praefectus Avidia’s fleet. Their point defense weapons targeted and destroyed the few escape pods that had ejected from the ships.

Of the nearly 40,000 officers and sailors of the 5th and 8th Triari Squadrons, there would be no survivors.


Roman Star System Bithynia, C.A.R. Caesar
3248 A.U.C. (2498 A.D.)


Blood flowed freely from Avidia’s right hand. The bridge crew studiously ignored the fist-sized hole in a nearby readout screen. She saw the enemy Principe and Triari Squadrons interposing themselves between the main body of her Classis and the Veles and Carrier Squadrons that were her assigned targets. She looked again at her aide. Without looking at his screen he quickly said, “Current Classis losses forty-five percent, Praefectus.”

She glanced again at the holo readout. The planetary strike fighters had slipped behind the main enemy Squadrons and were heading for the damaged carrier Squadron.

She noticed an icon where there shouldn’t have been one. A marker reading:

^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
999th Veles Squadron (obs.)
Diana Class Veles
Lotus Class Bireme Escort
Fusion Pila Armed
Pila Waves Fired: (3)
Pila Waves Left: (1)
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

She snorted for a moment. Her relics were still alive and hiding behind Nova Cartago II’s outer moon. I bet the Rockheads can’t see you back there. She thought with a smile. She noticed the enemy’s advance was taking them past the moon. She nodded her head in satisfaction. Well played Navarchus, maybe you can get a few of them before you have to jump out of the system.

She looked again at her aide. He simply mouthed the words ‘forty-eight percent’. She looked again at the wall screen.

All Enemy Carrier/Veles ships identified.

Current Enemy Carrier/Veles Ships remaining:

82%

Enemy Carrier/Veles Ships destroyed:

18%


Roman Star System Bithynia, C.A.R. Zoroaster
3248 A.U.C. (2498 A.D.)


Trierarchus Herenus of the Battleship (P) Zoroaster watched as the Battleships Pontifex and Maximus were gutted. The two Principe Squadrons were doing their utmost to hold the enemy Principe and Triari Squadrons back, but for every enemy ship they destroyed, they lost five.

He turned towards his executive officer, “There is just no way to break through. And if we stand toe to toe with them we are going to have no one left very soon.” The Trierarchus watched in horror as the Battlecruisers Augur, Pulli, Flamines, and Vestales were destroyed within moments of each other. The Zoroaster staggered under the onslaught and tumbled off into space, out of control.


Roman Star System Bithynia, C.A.R. Caesar
3248 A.U.C. (2498 A.D.)


Avidia watched as her melee line Squadrons slugged it out with the advancing enemy ships. They were losing ships far too fast.

Her aide looked stricken as he croaked out, “Classis casualties sixty-seven percent and rising fast, Praefectus.” Avidia looked again at the bulkhead:

All Enemy Carrier/Veles ships identified.

Current Enemy Carrier/Veles Ships remaining:

82%

Enemy Carrier/Veles Ships destroyed:

18%

Avidia took in a deep breath. “There’s nothing more we can do here, we can’t break through to the targets. Order all remaining ships to retreat. Helmsman, activate the jump engines and in the names of Apollo and Iuppiter get us out of here when we reach the G28 Limit.


Roman Star System Bithynia, Planet Nova Cartago III
3248 A.U.C. (2498 A.D.)


Labienus heard the retreat command on his comm channel, he looked at the casualty projections. “Too soon Domitia, too damned soon.” He glanced over at his Marine Special Ops Commander. “You got to all of them Tribuni?” At the black-clad officer’s nod, Labienus muttered, “May the Gods forgive me!”

The Tribuni nodded again in agreement. “May the Gods forgive the both of us Legatus.”


Roman Star System Bithynia, C.A.R. Caesar
3248 A.U.C. (2498 A.D.)


The Centurio at the helm was trying evasive maneuvers to avoid enemy fire until the ship reached the G28 limit and the jump engines activated. The Caesar rocked from nearby fire. The Centurio looked again at his panel. “The ships will begin jumping out in 5...4...3...2...1... No jump engine activation Praefectus, no ships have jumped!”

There was a pause and the Comm Officer started speaking as fast as he could gather the messages. “Praefectus, all of ships with jump engines report malfunctions and no activations! We have been sabotaged! They want to know what they should do!”

Avidia closed her eyes in pain. Under her breath she muttered, “Damn you to the lowest pits of Tartarus Labienus!” The note of panic in her crew’s voices broke her reverie. “Since we have no way to run, we have no choice. All ships, full speed ahead! Lets take as many of these bastards with us before we die!” She was tempted to comm Labienus but she stopped herself before making the connection. What’s the use? She thought. If I’m going to die, I will do it with some dignity. Not screaming like a banshee at that bastard.

She watched as her lead Squadrons were destroyed. For nothing, She thought, with bile and bitterness rising in her mouth. We are all going to die Labienus, and it’s going to be for nothing because we are never going to make it through to the Carriers and Veles. I hope they hang you and you rot in Tartarus as a blind mane you bastard. She looked at her aide as her ship was rocked from several hits. He held up his hands. Seven then seven. The ship rocked with a series of hits and there was the sound of a collapsing bulkhead. Not long now. She glanced at the bulkhead once more. The glowing numbers seemed to mock her:

All Enemy Carrier/Veles ships identified.

Current Enemy Carrier/Veles Ships remaining:

82%

Enemy Carrier/Veles Ships destroyed:

18%


Roman Star System Bithynia, C.A.R. Regulus
3248 A.U.C. (2498 A.D.)


The Regulus and her sisters skimmed the thin atmosphere of Stygia. The dense metal core of the moon had shielded them from detection so far. They had received the retreat order, but as one, the entire Squadron chose to ignore the command. The intermittent feed they were getting from Fleet Command showed the enemy Squadrons closing in on Praefectus Avidia’s Command ships. One of the enemy Veles Squadrons would be passing close to the moon and the Navarchus in charge of the 999th intended to get to point-blank range before firing his last salvo.

The hull of the Regulus groaned in protest at the punishment. The outer skin of the fourteen Heavy Cruisers and four Destroyers glowed as they slingshot themselves around the moon. The Navarchus wanted to build up enough speed to overtake the enemy from behind. The eighteen ships came rocketing out from behind the moon and saw several ships dead ahead. The heat from the passage was still dissipating from their hulls. Eighteen glowing meteors closed on the Siliconate 2nd Veles Squadron.

Trierarchus Diashi was in awe of the sheer size of the enemy ships. Even the largest freighters and troop ships of the Republic could not come close to the massive hulls that loomed around him. The enemy point defense weapons began to tear into the ancient vessels. Even their light weapons tore great gashes in the poorly armored hulls. The Regulus rocked from several hits. Red warning lights began flashing on many of the engineering panels.

There was a squawk from the comm, “This is Navarchus Nerva, they have taken the bait. Their PD weapons are recycling. All ships LAUNCH PILAS!

In their day the Diana’s had been the pinnacle of Roman engineering. They had tipped the scales in the First Median Incursion and were responsible for the success of the Ten Systems Offensive. The Median ships had been unable to deal with the large waves of heavy missiles that the Diana’s could launch into space.

So to were the Siliconate ships in difficulty. With their point defense weapons cooling down their armor could only stop so much damage. Hulls tore open and ships were turned from mass to energy in seconds. In less than five minutes, the Siliconate 2nd Veles Squadron was completely destroyed. The sixteen remaining ships of the 999th were altering course towards a nearby carrier Squadron when the beams from the onrushing Triari Squadrons crumpled the charge and turned the ships into a small, fast moving cloud of expanding gas.

The radiation field from the Roman Squadron’s missiles had reached into the darkest corners of the remaining ship wreckage, not one Siliconate or human survived the charge.


Roman Star System Bithynia, C.A.R. Caesar
3248 A.U.C. (2498 A.D.)


Avidia lay pinned under the debris on her flag bridge. There was smoke and fires everywhere. She looked at her aide and only saw a collapsed bulkhead and his hand still holding her comm pad. Through the smoke she saw a dim glow. The furies had decided to be kind to her before the end, moments before the Caesar’s reactor went critical the smoke cleared just enough for her to see the holo screen.

All Enemy Carrier/Veles ships identified.

Current Enemy Carrier/Veles Ships remaining:

69%

Enemy Carrier/Veles Ships destroyed:

31%

She coughed up blood as she smiled. “Better make it count you prick.” A moment later her world ended.


Roman Star System Bithynia, Planet Nova Cartago III
3248 A.U.C. (2498 A.D.)


Legatus Classis Labienus looked at the readout and turned to his aide, “Have my shuttle readied, I am joining the Classis. Have Navarchus Strabo keep running the simulations with all the newest data. I want constant updates to the Battleplan based on the Battle Sim results.” He turned to his staff, “This is just the beginning! Now what we have to do is make sure what they did for us matters!” The Legatus walked out of the CiC and headed for his shuttle.

His staff watched the holo display as the first enemy troop transports began landing amongst the two billion citizens of Nova Cartago II.
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Hmmm.

I usually shy away from commenting when I have nothing good to say, but I have been asked by several board members to take a look at this, so here goes....

Disregarding writing style, here are my main criticisms of this work:

There is nothing "Roman" about this scenario. There is a mash of vague Roman sounding names or titles but the core of this story would be better served with just an original faction, one that does not need to make an effort to sound Roman. In fact, the Roman element to this story is wholly unnecessary as it does not add one thing. Also, the sillicoids are pretty unconvincing as enemies, but that may just be me.

Volusus' death scene in Chapter 3 nearly turned me off reading the rest. You can't slather on faux pathos any thicker. MANLY ROMANS.....IN SPACE. FUCK YEAH.

Now on to the Roman element. It is not only unnecessary, it is by far the shoddiest element in this story. First off, the Latin is atrocious. Same for the name and rank combinations, they just sound smashed together after consulting google. The ranks contradict what terms the Romans would have used, the names butcher the trinomina. The inscription of the dead guy pretty much defies all examples of Roman funerary inscriptions.

And somehow, you managed to get the unit names wrong. You use elements without regard for grammar or their meaning. The equivalent would be the US Navy naming their newest carrier "Battleship HMS Carrier FS Adolf Hitler".

Line by line description of everything you messed up:
The Siliconate War: Damnatio et Memoriae - Damnatio memoriae has a specific meaning - to destroy/eradicate the memory. You try and put an et in there, which makes about as much sense as writing "deleting and file" in English, that is none.
Star System Caria, Nova Tarentum I I see you are going about this the very creative way of taking Roman province and city names and then throwing a Nova in front of them. Many of these names are just Roman adaptions of foreign terms (like Caria) so why would Rome use them? When Rome actually formed new provinces by choice, they named them after Roman terms.
Technician Principale Iulius Vilanus - First of all, Iulius is a gentilicium and Vilanus is a cognomen. Where is the Praenomen? Did you think Iulius was a first name? Second, why Principale? Where did you take that from?
Demanus - an original invention by yours I think. Would have to be a cognomen as well.
Nabataea Inferior Why use lower and upper when describing a star system?
Legatus Classis No. just no. The Roman term for admiral is praefectus classis. BTW, the title of legate was abolished in favor of praefectus in the 3rd century. A legate is always associated with a legion or provincial command with legions.
Lucius Suetonius Scaevola
Orders received and understood Legatus Either use the correct Latin vocative or use the English legate.
I'll stop here for the moment as it only gets worse from here. Don't even get me started on unit names or organization. But really, if you try and write a story about Rome and your prologue and a third of the first chapter contain that many questionable choices....at least try and get the ranks/organizations right, please.
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Re: The Tales of Roma Mater

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This is why I was going to post some background material before I began posting this story. :D

Now to answer your replies, point for point.

1. If you can point out a historical scenario where our Roma survived into the space age, I will agree whole-heartedly. But I do not think you can. So most things are extrapolations on the possible evolution of the Republic.

2. So, there has never been a historical version of a splinter culture differing from the main culture? Or a section of that culture believing in all things military first and foremost?

3. As for the siliconates being a credible threat, you are entilted to your opinion. But I do believe I have proven that the Siliconates are a deadly threat to the Humans.

4. As for your critique of the naming schema, below is the rank structure developed for this universe. Keep in mind that the historical Roma did not have the requisite officer classes to fill out any sort of TO&E that would be required by future technological changes. And no, it was not just 'smashed together'. A lot of thought went into the choices. If you can think of better ranks, by all means, suggest them. :)

GROUND

Ranks

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      Legionarii            Equites                 American
____________________________________________________________
O10 PRO-CONSUL             PRO-CONSUL                 GENERAL
O9 CONSUL                  CONSUL                     LT GENERAL
O8 LEGATI LEGIONIS         PRAEFECTUS EQUITUM         MAJ GENERAL
O7         -                      -                   BRIG GENERAL
O6 TRIBUNUS LATICLAVIUS    TRIBUNUS LATICLAVIUS       COLONEL
O5 TRIBUNI ANGUSTICLAVII   TRIBUNI ANGUSTICLAVII      LT COLONEL
O4 TESSERARIUS             TESSERARIUS                MAJOR
O3 DECURIO                 DECURIO                    CAPTAIN
O2 CENTURIO                CENTURIO                   1ST LIEUTENANT
O1    -                       -                       2ND LIEUTENANT

E9 PRIMUS PILUS            PRIMUS PILUS               SGT MAJ
E8 PRINCIPALE              PRINCIPALE                 1ST SGT
E7    -                       -                       SGT 1ST CLASS
E6    -                       -                       STAFF SGT
E5 OPTIO                   OPTIO                      SGT
E4    -                       -                       CORPORAL
E3 LEGIONARII              EQUES LEGIONARIUS          PRIVATE 1ST CLASS
E2    -                       -                       PRIVATE (stripe)
E1    -                       -                       PRIVATE (no stripe)
NOTE: Consul and Pro-Consul were turned into purely military ranks by me to help fill out the needed ranks in the Roman upper echelon for officers.


Centurio - Commander of a Hundred - Commander of a Century originally. Over time the rank has come to be more in line with the American rank of Lieutenant.

Consul - At one time the highest Magistracy posting available - Consular Commander. Equivalent American rank is Lt. General.

Decurio - Cavalry Officer - Roman equivalent of an American Captain

Eques Legionarius - Legionary Horseman - Tank crewmen. Also known by just Eques.

Legati Legionis - Legate of the Legion - Legio Commander. Equivalent American rank is Major General.

Legionarii - Legionary Soldier - Roman non-rate ground ranks, the E-1, E-2 and E-3 ranks all rolled into one.

Magister Militum - Master of the Soldiers - The Roman equivalent to the Chairman of the Army. The only person above him is the Imperator.

Optio - Chosen One - Roman NCO rank, equivalent the to E-4 and E-5 ranks all rolled into one.

Praefectus Equitum - Cavalry Commander - Ala Commander. Equivalent American rank is Major General.

Primus Pilus - First Spearman - Originally was the term for the commander of the first Century of the First Cohort. Over time evolved into the Top Roman Staff NCO, the American equivalent is an E-9.

Principalis - Literally meaning NCO - The Roman Staff NCO. A Principale would be the equivalent of the American Staff NCO such as the E-6, E-7 and E-8 ranks all rolled into one.

Pro-Consul - Former Consul - Consular Group Commander. equivalent American rank is General.

Tesserarius - Originally the NCO in Charge of the Watchword - Roman equivalent to Major.

Tribuni Angusticlavii - Narrow Striped Officer Equestrian Rank - Roman equivalent of an American Light Colonel. All Auxilia's are commanded by Tribuni's.

Tribunus Laticlavius - Broadstriped Officer Senatorial Rank - Roman equivalent to full bird Colonel. All Cohorts are commanded by a Tribunus.


Organization

Ala - Originally a term used for a wing of cavalry. Over time the word has evolved into usage as the term for an Armored Unit.

Auxilia - Originally they were supporting units made up of foriegn citizens. Over time the supporting portion of the term was removed and now foreign troops serve in regular units, but commanded by Romans. These units are denoted by the descriptor (A) after the unit type and name.

Example: III Ala Cohors (A). This would denote a cohort of armor that was raised with foreign citizens. They would be the equivalent of an American Brigade.

Century - Roman equivalent of a company. Each Century has 100 Legionarii.

Cohors - Roman equivalent to a Brigade. Each Cohort has either 5 Turmae, Armored, or 5 Maniples, Infantry.

Contubernium - Roman army Squad. A Roman squad consists of 10 Legionarii.

Equites - Originally denoting the combat branch of cavalry, but now denotes the combat branch of armor.

Legio - Roman equivalent to a Division. Each Legio has 5 Cohorts.

Maniple - Roman equivalent to an American Infantry Battalion.

Turmae - Roman equivalent to an American Cavalry Squadron.




NAVAL

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      Roman                               American
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O10 LEGATUS AUGUSTI CLASSIS               ADMIRAL
O9 LEGATUS CLASSIS                        VICE ADMIRAL
O8 PRAEFECTUS CLASSIS                     REAR ADMIRAL
O7 NAVARCHUS                              COMMODORE
O6 TRIERARCHUS                            CAPTAIN
O5    -                                   COMMANDER
O4 TESSERARIUS                            LT COMMANDER
O3 DECURIO                                LIEUTENANT
O2 CENTURIO                               LIEUTENANT JG
O1    -                       -           ENSIGN

E9 PRIMUS PILUS                           MASTER CHIEF PO
E8 PRINCIPALE                             SENIOR CHIEF PO
E7    -                                   CHIEF PETTY OFFICER
E6    -                                   PETTY OFFICER 1ST CLASS
E5 OPTIO                                  PETTY OFFICER 2ND CLASS
E4    -                                   PETTY OFFICER 3RD CLASS
E3 NAUTA                                  SEAMAN
E2    -                                   SEAMAN APPRENTICE
E1    -                                   SEAMAN RECRUIT
NOTE: The Roman Marines (Manipularii) use the exact same rank structure as the Roman Infantry.

NOTE 1: * These ranks were created to fill out the upper echelons that were required, due to the fact that the historical Roman Navy never had a commander above Fleet Commander. Although, the latin is correct for the rank, as is the translation.

Nauta - Sailor - There are many differing classifications for each type of Nauta. Below the rank of Trierarchus the army ranks are used.

*Legatus Augusti Classis - Imperial Legate of the Fleet - Roman naval commander. Equivalent to the American Fleet Admiral. Senatorial Rank Only.

*Legatus Classis - Legate of the Fleet - Roman naval commander. Equivalent to the American Vice Admiral. Equestrian Rank or Higher.

Praefectus Classis - Fleet Commander - Roman Task Group Commander. Equivalent to the American Rear Admiral. Equestrian Rank or Higher.

*Magister Classis - Master of the Fleet - Equivalent to the CNO and top honcho in the Roman Navy. The only person above him is the Imperator.

Navarchus - Roman Naval Squadron Commander. Equivalent to the American Commodore.

Trierarchus - Roman term for Ship's Captain. Equivalent to the American naval Rank of Captain.

5. I do not believe my ranks contradict what the Romans would have used. But, if this was a historical Roman culture, in say, 100 AD, then your point would be valid. But you seem to be forgetting the salient point, things evolve in their usage. But once again, if you can point out even a modern day Roman funerary inscription. Or if, in your opinion, you can provide a better one, please do so. so I can correct it ASAP.

6. Again, you are incorrect. How is Classis (Fleet) Astra (Star) Romanus (Roman) Vesuvius Mons in any way reflect the incorrect inperpretation you give as an example? It does not. But please, explain how, in your opinion, how you came up with that extrapolation of what I have written.

A. Damnatio Memoriae, which is Latin for Condemnation of Memory, but I think a more proper translation is Removed from Memory since the punishment was used to remove any and all traces of a person or organization from Roman Society. By the end of the story the readers sees why it is named as it is. And yes I goofed on that one, it should not have the et, thanks for pointing that out. :)

7. Because the Romans DID adopt and use foreign terms all of the time. So why would they suddenly not continue to do so?

8. If you mean Iulius is a Nomina, then I agree. On that name I just forgot to use the Praenomina assigned to him, Giaus. Thanks for the pointing out of it. As for Principale, I mispelled it, it should be Principalis. From the Dictionary of Roman Military terms: Principalis (LA): NCO. This is where I got that rank from. But thanks for catching the mispelling though. :D

9. Demanus is an adaption of the Cognomina Decianus. It was one of my early attempts to introduce new Cognomina. I thought I had removed all of them. Thanks for pointing that out. :)

10. Because Nabatea Superior, in galactic geography, is south of Nabatea Inferior.

11. Again, if this was the Roman culture in 1 AD, then you would be correct. I needed two version of Legatus, so Legati, as in Legati Legionis was associated with the Legio's. And I used Legatus for the Fleet.

12. You would be correct in the usage of Legatus, if, once again, we were speaking of the 1st century AD. :)

I look forward to continuing our dialogue. It has been most informative, and you did help me with a few corrections needed. :D



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Re: The Tales of Roma Mater

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Thorgrimm wrote:This is why I was going to post some background material before I began posting this story. :D

Now to answer your replies, point for point.

1. If you can point out a historical scenario where our Roma survived into the space age, I will agree whole-heartedly. But I do not think you can. So most things are extrapolations on the possible evolution of the Republic.
Now you are just being a pedantic nitwit.
2. So, there has never been a historical version of a splinter culture differing from the main culture? Or a section of that culture believing in all things military first and foremost?
Splinter cultures are one thing. Completely shitting over grammar and vocabulary is another. Just because the USA is a splinter culture of the British Empire does not mean that the rules of English magically change. For example, a nominative does not suddenly become a genitive. Like your asinine insistence of using Legati legionis in your table, when the rest is written in the nominative.
4. As for your critique of the naming schema, below is the rank structure developed for this universe. Keep in mind that the historical Roma did not have the requisite officer classes to fill out any sort of TO&E that would be required by future technological changes.
Sure it did. Just look at the late Roman Army.
And no, it was not just 'smashed together'. A lot of thought went into the choices.
Apparently not enough to make sure the case is correct.

But hey, let's take a look:
Consul and Pro-Consul were turned into purely military ranks by me to help fill out the needed ranks in the Roman upper echelon for officers.
Never, never were they purely military ranks. When need be the Romans used other terms, like Dux or strategos.
Decurio - Cavalry Officer - Roman equivalent of an American Captain
No. just no. Never was the Decurio above a centurio.
Eques Legionarius
this does not make sense, neither grammatically nor vocabulary allow for such a combination. Just use eques. Or eques legionis. But never ever use eques legionarius.
Legati Legionis - Legate of the Legion - Legio Commander. Equivalent American rank is Major General.
Bad case of not knowing latin results in wrong grammar.
Legionarii - Legionary Soldier - Roman non-rate ground ranks, the E-1, E-2 and E-3 ranks all rolled into one
There never was such a term in latin. It is either miles legionis or just plain miles.

Praefectus Equitum - Cavalry Commander - Ala Commander. Equivalent American rank is Major General.
No. The commander of an Alae is the Praefectus Alae. The Praefectus Equitum would be the commander of all cavalry.
Tesserarius - Originally the NCO in Charge of the Watchword - Roman equivalent to Major.
Why elevate this rank so high?
Example: III Ala Cohors (A). This would denote a cohort of armor that was raised with foreign citizens. They would be the equivalent of an American Brigade.
An ala can never be a cohors, you blithering ignoramus. The two terms are mutually exclusive in Latin.

[quote9Legio - Roman equivalent to a Division. Each Legio has 5 Cohorts.[/quote]

Why 5 instead of ten if you are going to steal everything else from the high Roman Army?

I am not even going to discuss the Naval ranks except for saying that a Legatus classis is mutually exclusive as well.


This is the main problem. You copy everything from the Roman Army of the Principate, without acknowledging the changes of the third century. You cling to categories (equestrian and senatorial rank) that the Romans themselves abolished in their army. You put together nonsencial terms that are often mutually exclusive in themselves and display a poor understanding of the very rank structure you are cribbing from. Your response to criticism of these terms is: "Well, they changed". They did not magically change the entire vocabulary or grammar. My response is: Will a mountain Navy ever make sense? Or a submarine air force? Because that is the caliber I am talking about here.


But you seem to be forgetting the salient point, things evolve in their usage. But once again, if you can point out even a modern day Roman funerary inscription. Or if, in your opinion, you can provide a better one, please do so. so I can correct it ASAP.
Get lost, idiot. Here is an example of the basic Roman formula. Link. Trust me, you do not want to get into late antiquity formula.

Your formula makes no sense whatsoever.

Manipularii Gaius Iulius Matius
6245-5312-1787
Per Mare, Per Terram, Per Astra
II Cont. I Cent. V Maniple III Cohors
Best Contubernium in the IV Gothica Manipularii Legio


- the name starts first
- then rank and unit, starting with the highest unit structure
- then age and years of service
That is it.

But your latin is so bad that you could not even translate it properly.



6. Again, you are incorrect. How is Classis (Fleet) Astra (Star) Romanus (Roman) Vesuvius Mons in any way reflect the incorrect inperpretation you give as an example? It does not. But please, explain how, in your opinion, how you came up with that extrapolation of what I have written.
What now? I don't even know what this is supposed to answer due to your inability to use the quote function.
7. Because the Romans DID adopt and use foreign terms all of the time. So why would they suddenly not continue to do so?
You mean the stars were suddenly settled by others?
8. If you mean Iulius is a Nomina, then I agree.
Gentilicium is the precise term to be used here. Nomina is imprecise and covers praenomina, gentilicium and cognomina.

10. Because Nabatea Superior, in galactic geography, is south of Nabatea Inferior.
Spacefaring cultures would probably not think in terms of north and south.

11. Again, if this was the Roman culture in 1 AD, then you would be correct. And Legati, as in Legati Legionis was associated with the Legio's. Hence my usage of Legatus for the Fleet, which is correct for what it is used for. See rank structure above.
It is legatus. And no, using it for a fleet can never be correct.



BTW, if you answer this once more with "but the culture magically changed", then I am not going to react very politely to it. Inventing things and then defending them with author's fiat makes you a hack.
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Hmm, I see that the term 'constructive criticism' has not been processed by your limited vocabulary. Ok, well I can understand your inability to hold a civilized conversation, and will try to keep my amusement at your inability to converse like a civilized person to the minimum. :D

1. Insult right off the bat, good reply to highlight your inability to converse in a civilized manner. But not very informative, or correct.

2. Fair point, but since the Romans never had any officer above the Rank of Praefectus Classis, I needed one that would convey a higher level of authority. And since you could not come up with a, in your opinion, proper rank as a suggestion, my extrapolation is fitting.

3. If so, please point out a rank structure for the late Roman Classis that includes ranks above Praefectus Classis. As far as I can tell from my research the Ranks went as such: Trierarchus: Ship's Captain, Navarchus: Squadron Commander, and Praefectus Classis: Fleet Commander. So unless you can provide some data on other senior Naval ranks, you are still incorrect in your assumptions about Roman Naval Ranks.

4. Let's see what the Roman Military Dictionary has to say on your suggestions. Dux: Dux (LA): commander. A good replacement for Tesserarius in the Ranks, thanks for the suggestion. Now for Strategos: Stratègos (GR): commander; general. And the entry right after it: Stratègos hypatos (GR): 'supreme commander'; Greek term for consul (LA). So why did you not suggest Stratègos hypatos instead of just Stratègos?

As for including them in the ranking I felt they were not appropriate, being Greek Ranks, and not Latin ones. But please, keep the suggestions coming. Dux was a good suggestion, and my sincerest thanks to you for providing it.

5. Fair point, but since a Decurio was a cavalry rank and the cavalry was never organized into Centuries, only in Turmaes, the assertion could be made that a Turmae is the equivalent to a Maniple, which was a higher formation in the infantry. And as such, could be used as a rank superior to Centurio.

Now to address your assumption that a Decurio was never superior in rank to a Centurio I present some more entries from the Roman Military Dictionary. Decurio Praepositus (LA): decurio placed in command. Decurio Princeps (LA): officer in charge of unit's administration. Administrative or not, this rank is above a Centurio.

6. Point, And the change made. Thanks for suggestion.

7. Point. Change made. Once again, thanks for the suggestion.

8. Incorrect. Entry from the Roman Military Dictionary: Legionarius (LA): legionary soldier.

9. Incorrect. Some more entries. As far as I can tell a Praefectus Equitum outranks a Praefectus Alae.
Praefectus (LA): 'someone put at the front'; senior officer.
Praefectus alae (LA): commander of a cavalry regiment.
Praefectus equitatus (LA): cavalry commander.
Praefectus equitum (LA): cavalry commander.

10. Point. That is why I will gladly use Dux instead.

11. Incorrect. Another entry: Cohors Equitata (LA): unit of infantry with attached mounted squadrons. So it is quite feasible for that designation to have evolved into usage, since the precedent was, no matter your opinion, there.

11. The reason is the same as why the modern day armies do not use 3 Battalion Regiments and 4 Regiment Brigades in their divisions anymore. Technology.

12. It is quite possible. A few more entries: Legatus (LA): subordinate commander. Nothing there would prevent it. Legatus Augusti pro praetore (LA): imperial legate with authority of praetor. And since the Emperor would wish to extend his authority over a greatly expanded fleet, it can be maintained that a similar rank would have been created for the navy. As for the rest, see response above.

13. As for the Mountain Navy comment, Vesuvius Mons is the name of the ship, maybe you did not catch that. So I am glad to point out your error for your benefit.

14. More proof of the level of your intellect. :D Thanks for the formula, Changes made. Considering I have never studied Latin, or ever claimed to, I think I came pretty close for a layman. 8) How is your Old Norse by the way?

15. Then maybe you had better brush up on your reading comprehension skills. :wink: But to answer your question, it was in response to your nonsensical naval naming reply.

16. Sure, plenty of alien species out there? Didn't you ever watch Star Trek? :wink:

17. Actually the name for a male citizen consisted of three parts, known as the Tria Nomina. Consisting of the Praenomen, the given name, the Nomen, also known as Nomen Gentile, or simplified as Gentilicium, which is the name of the gens or clan. And the Cognomen, the name for the family line within the gens. Also, at times, Agnomens such as Germanicus were added. Since most historians usually call it the Nomen, I think that is the best way to say it.

18. Fair Point, but even in modern day texts they still use a version of North, towards the galactic core, South, towards the Galactic Rim. So it is quite possible space-faring Romans would still use Inferior and Superior.

19. See above as to why is is quite possible.

20. You have been polite? I do not think that term applies to your responses. :D But please, keep posting your criticisms, bile covered or civilized. All they can do is help make the story better. And for that I thank you.

As for your threat to reply in a nastier tone, fling away. This is the net and all your bile does is amuse me. But in those bile covered responses are glittering gems of suggestions. Which is why I love the net, even the most foul-mouthed posters can provide humor, and good data, if you dig deeply enough. :D



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Dude, by the (incredibly low) standards of this board, Thanas IS being polite, only putting down a few mild insults before tearing your story apart piece by piece. Trying to take the high ground will only make him angrier.

This being said, your guys sound like a bunch of poseurs. That's fine in a story sense because it'd hardly be the first time some group attempted to copy a bunch of stuff from the past despite having only the vaguest grasp of what any of it meant. In-universe of course they'd think they were doing it right.
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Thorgrimm, with respect to the story, if your Latin is bad, then trying to defend it as "they changed!"when someone points out that your Latin is bad is not going to work. It's a weak excuse. If I write a decurio outranking a centurio when this never happened in the many centuries of Roman military history, saying "the tradition changed over time and the ranks shifted!" makes no sense. It would be like writing a future military where lieutenants outrank generals- the obvious out-of-character explanation is that I as the writer messed up, because the social change it would take to make me right is far more improbable than my simply making a mistake.

Then again, the bulk of your audience is likely to forgive you, since by and large we don't know Latin either. Bad Latin grammar gives Thanas a headache because he can read Latin, and so when you accidentally write something that (in Latin) is gibberish, he sees it and it gives him that headache. Your English is fine; the problem is all in the Latin.

If I were in your shoes, I'd be trying to fix the grammar without making excuses. I don't speak Latin, and I know I don't, and if I'm telling a story about modernized Romans, I will use as few Latin terms as possible (to avoid screwing up) and not try to defend my usages. If I mess up, let me fail gracefully.

But I would think I have a right to do that. I would argue that it is permitted to talk and think about Roman history and culture without first studying Latin, much as this will make the real scholars who speak Latin and have spent year after year studying the field wince. Otherwise, Roman history becomes a matter of little real, living interest. Which is bad for both the community of Latin scholars, and the general community of people who are better off with more historical literacy.
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Thorgrimm wrote:Hmm, I see that the term 'constructive criticism' has not been processed by your limited vocabulary. Ok, well I can understand your inability to hold a civilized conversation, and will try to keep my amusement at your inability to converse like a civilized person to the minimum. :D

1. Insult right off the bat, good reply to highlight your inability to converse in a civilized manner. But not very informative, or correct.
Ah, the old arrogant "I'm going to pretend I'm being civilized while I act like a dick" response. I bet you will follow that with "haha, enjoy a joke, dude".
2. Fair point, but since the Romans never had any officer above the Rank of Praefectus Classis, I needed one that would convey a higher level of authority. And since you could not come up with a, in your opinion, proper rank as a suggestion, my extrapolation is fitting.
There is no higher rank than praefectus classis. It means commander of the fleet. Which also means you cannot have several praefecti operating in one fleet with that rank, nor have one commander of the fleet above the commander of the fleet. But you do have both, thus butchering latin.

3. If so, please point out a rank structure for the late Roman Classis that includes ranks above Praefectus Classis. As far as I can tell from my research the Ranks went as such: Trierarchus: Ship's Captain, Navarchus: Squadron Commander, and Praefectus Classis: Fleet Commander. So unless you can provide some data on other senior Naval ranks, you are still incorrect in your assumptions about Roman Naval Ranks.
I know pretty much all there is to know about Roman rank structure. I also know, that per definition, there cannot be more than 1 praefectus classis in a fleet. Unless you have several fleets working together, in which case the command would go to the one with the highest imperium (based upon a lot of things, including appointment, age, support and social status).

I made no assumptions, so I cannot be incorrect.
4. Let's see what the Roman Military Dictionary has to say on your suggestions. Dux: Dux (LA): commander. A good replacement for Tesserarius in the Ranks, thanks for the suggestion. Now for Strategos: Stratègos (GR): commander; general. And the entry right after it: Stratègos hypatos (GR): 'supreme commander'; Greek term for consul (LA). So why did you not suggest Stratègos hypatos instead of just Stratègos?

As for including them in the ranking I felt they were not appropriate, being Greek Ranks, and not Latin ones. But please, keep the suggestions coming. Dux was a good suggestion, and my sincerest thanks to you for providing it.
- the term of strategos hypatos was never used by the Romans.
- strategos is very much a term used by Romans. We have several papyri pointing to use of the term.
- Dux is a much higher rank than legate, you imbecile. Stop using that crappy dictionary (who wrote that one, btw? I hope to god it is not some crummy website). A dux is - in roman times - the commander of all forces in a province, commanding whole army groups, including up to 20 different legionary units. This is just another example of your inability to grasp even the fundamentals of Roman life.
5. Fair point, but since a Decurio was a cavalry rank and the cavalry was never organized into Centuries, only in Turmaes, the assertion could be made that a Turmae is the equivalent to a Maniple, which was a higher formation in the infantry. And as such, could be used as a rank superior to Centurio.
Translate the two ranks and you will know why this can never work for the infantry. Again, massive fail on your part. :lol:

Now to address your assumption that a Decurio was never superior in rank to a Centurio I present some more entries from the Roman Military Dictionary. Decurio Praepositus (LA): decurio placed in command. Decurio Princeps (LA): officer in charge of unit's administration. Administrative or not, this rank is above a Centurio.
No, it is not. Show evidence either of those ever commanding centurions in the Roman Army. (To explain it to you, idiot, the mere existence of the title decurio princeps does not mean said guys ever took control of administrative purposes of the whole legion, or of anything above his own cavalry unit.)

8. Incorrect. Entry from the Roman Military Dictionary: Legionarius (LA): legionary soldier.
A) Source?
B) Look at a database. There are only 3 results for legionarius. Two of those involve "centurio legionarius", the third one is designating an eques legionarius (which probably is a misread based on the stone). Legionarius is never used alone as a rank. On the other hand, "miles" has 2251 hits. Which one did the Romans use, I wonder? Your dictionary sucks.

9. Incorrect. Some more entries. As far as I can tell a Praefectus Equitum outranks a Praefectus Alae.
Praefectus (LA): 'someone put at the front'; senior officer.
Praefectus alae (LA): commander of a cavalry regiment.
Praefectus equitatus (LA): cavalry commander.
Praefectus equitum (LA): cavalry commander.
Of course a Praefectus Equitum outranks a Praefectus Alae, because he commanded all cavalry. AS I SAID. Yet you have him commanding only an alae in your nonsensical rank structure.
11. Incorrect. Another entry: Cohors Equitata (LA): unit of infantry with attached mounted squadrons. So it is quite feasible for that designation to have evolved into usage, since the precedent was, no matter your opinion, there.
I realize that this is hard for you to understand, what with your incomprehensible stupidity and ignorance of Roman military terms, but I will repeat my words for you once more: Ala and Cohors are both designations for seperate, independent units when talking about auxillaries. An alae can never be combined with a cohort. Yet your unit designation does so.
A Cohors equitata is, as you can easily see, not colled a cohors ala. Also, that designation is defunct after the second century.

So again, your designation is crap and your attempt to use another correct designation for it is worthy of a nimrod.
12. It is quite possible. A few more entries: Legatus (LA): subordinate commander. Nothing there would prevent it. Legatus Augusti pro praetore (LA): imperial legate with authority of praetor. And since the Emperor would wish to extend his authority over a greatly expanded fleet, it can be maintained that a similar rank would have been created for the navy. As for the rest, see response above.
No, it is not possible. And if you think it is, please cite the sources that support your argument.

13. As for the Mountain Navy comment, Vesuvius Mons is the name of the ship, maybe you did not catch that. So I am glad to point out your error for your benefit.
Quit being a little shit and answer the objection.
14. More proof of the level of your intellect. :D Thanks for the formula, Changes made. Considering I have never studied Latin, or ever claimed to, I think I came pretty close for a layman.
I don't see any changes made.

And you are writing a story about Romans without knowing Latin? Comedy post of the day, girlie.
15. Then maybe you had better brush up on your reading comprehension skills. :wink: But to answer your question, it was in response to your nonsensical naval naming reply.
Yeah, so very nonsensical.
16. Sure, plenty of alien species out there? Didn't you ever watch Star Trek? :wink:
And the alien species just happen to use the Nabatean dialect? LOLOL.


17. Actually the name for a male citizen consisted of three parts, known as the Tria Nomina. Consisting of the Praenomen, the given name, the Nomen, also known as Nomen Gentile, or simplified as Gentilicium, which is the name of the gens or clan. And the Cognomen, the name for the family line within the gens. Also, at times, Agnomens such as Germanicus were added.
Dude, I just told you that. Do you think you are correcting me with that? :lol:
Since most historians usually call it the Nomen, I think that is the best way to say it.
Who are those historians? And they are inprecise. Nomen gentile, praenomina, cognomina, agnomina. Notice they all have nomen in there? Without a qualifier it could mean everything and nothing, which is why a qualifier is necessary.

18. Fair Point, but even in modern day texts they still use a version of North, towards the galactic core, South, towards the Galactic Rim. So it is quite possible space-faring Romans would still use Inferior and Superior.
It is stupid, but I'll concede that it is hardly the most glaring problem with your "work".

As for your threat to reply in a nastier tone, fling away. This is the net and all your bile does is amuse me. But in those bile covered responses are glittering gems of suggestions. Which is why I love the net, even the most foul-mouthed posters can provide humor, and good data, if you dig deeply enough. :D
I'll be blunt: We have only covered the prologue and one third of the first chapter. Your story is filled with so many mistakes it has about as much worth as a bowel movement and I am sure that one would be more fun to experience as it would at least alleviate a burden. But this crap? Worse than stuff on fanfiction.net.

If you want to do a good "Rome in the future" story go read the works of Douglas Mitchell. That is how you do it, not like your idiotic crap.


Simon_Jester wrote: But I would think I have a right to do that. I would argue that it is permitted to talk and think about Roman history and culture without first studying Latin, much as this will make the real scholars who speak Latin and have spent year after year studying the field wince.
Simon, you are absolutely correct. However, this does require you at least putting in an effort. Reading about the Roman Army is easy, all you need are two books and you are covered. But it looks as if Thorgrimm did no research whatsoever.
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Re: The Tales of Roma Mater

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Hmmm. Key conclusion: Thorgrimm's dictionary stinks, and he needs a better one. Is there anything you'd care to nominate as a replacement, Thanas?
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Thorgrimm wrote:13. As for the Mountain Navy comment, Vesuvius Mons is the name of the ship, maybe you did not catch that. So I am glad to point out your error for your benefit.
Quit being a little shit and answer the objection.
I think he misunderstood.

Point being, Thorgrimm, that when you name things that are self-contradictory, it makes you look dumb. Naming a ship "Mount Vesuvius" is not unreasonable. Creating a military unit called the "Montana Coast Defense Command" makes you look foolish, since Montana has no coastline to defend. Thanas's point is that you are using Latin words in ways that contradict each other. That, for example, a cohort is not an ala and slapping the two words together willy-nilly doesn't work, any more than it makes sense to talk about a burning ice cube or a circular square.
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2. Fair point, but since the Romans never had any officer above the Rank of Praefectus Classis, I needed one that would convey a higher level of authority. And since you could not come up with a, in your opinion, proper rank as a suggestion, my extrapolation is fitting.
There is no higher rank than praefectus classis. It means commander of the fleet. Which also means you cannot have several praefecti operating in one fleet with that rank, nor have one commander of the fleet above the commander of the fleet. But you do have both, thus butchering latin...

I know pretty much all there is to know about Roman rank structure. I also know, that per definition, there cannot be more than 1 praefectus classis in a fleet. Unless you have several fleets working together, in which case the command would go to the one with the highest imperium (based upon a lot of things, including appointment, age, support and social status).

I made no assumptions, so I cannot be incorrect.
I assume that this comes down to the definition of the words in the title, so that there should be a 'supreme' in an English translation of the rank? If I understand you correctly, the reason there cannot be more than one praefectus classis per fleet is about the same as the reason there cannot be more than one "supreme commander" in an army: if there are two commanders of the same rank, one or the other is not supreme.

Correct me if I am mistaken, but...

One, a Roman-derived culture that modernized, going through the gunpowder era and the Industrial Revolution, would probably come up with a more formal seniority system than "who has the most imperium, commands." Divisions of ranks within the title of a fleet-commander would evolve naturally, just as in real life the rank of "admiral" divided during the Age of Sail into 'rear,' 'vice,' and 'full' admirals.

Two, a Roman-derived society that had to create a staff system and other characteristically modern institutions might be forced to invent the equivalent of a Chief of Naval Operations: someone who is responsible for coordination of all the fleets wherever they may be, who would outrank the commander of any single fleet. The historical Romans had no name for this position, but that doesn't mean they wouldn't invent one. Granted, the invented name would no doubt flow from their own traditions and be grammatical in Latin, as many of Thorgrimm's inventions are (I am assured) not.
14. More proof of the level of your intellect. :D Thanks for the formula, Changes made. Considering I have never studied Latin, or ever claimed to, I think I came pretty close for a layman.
I don't see any changes made.

And you are writing a story about Romans without knowing Latin? Comedy post of the day, girlie.
I wouldn't complain about that in itself- but his attempts to inject Latin into the narrative without speaking it make for trouble. If I write a story set in France, I don't start making up names for French things when I don't speak the language. Likewise for Russia, China, or any other country in the modern world.

I certainly wouldn't do it if I were writing about Rome. I'd put the whole story in English, without using gratuitous fake-Latin that may not mean what I think it means. Not when words like "admiral" would suffice to convey the concept
Simon_Jester wrote:But I would think I have a right to do that. I would argue that it is permitted to talk and think about Roman history and culture without first studying Latin, much as this will make the real scholars who speak Latin and have spent year after year studying the field wince.
Simon, you are absolutely correct. However, this does require you at least putting in an effort. Reading about the Roman Army is easy, all you need are two books and you are covered. But it looks as if Thorgrimm did no research whatsoever.
Which two?
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Simon_Jester wrote:HI assume that this comes down to the definition of the words in the title, so that there should be a 'supreme' in an English translation of the rank? If I understand you correctly, the reason there cannot be more than one praefectus classis per fleet is about the same as the reason there cannot be more than one "supreme commander" in an army: if there are two commanders of the same rank, one or the other is not supreme.
Yes. But it does not mean supreme commander, it just means he is the commander of the fleet. If it was a prefect rank a praefectus classis at the Rhine for example might command about 200 ships, whereas a praefectus classis of Egypt might command several times that much. The praefectus classis is the highest fleet commander there is, but he is not the supreme commander, that would be the magister militum of the area or the Emperor.
One, a Roman-derived culture that modernized, going through the gunpowder era and the Industrial Revolution, would probably come up with a more formal seniority system than "who has the most imperium, commands." Divisions of ranks within the title of a fleet-commander would evolve naturally, just as in real life the rank of "admiral" divided during the Age of Sail into 'rear,' 'vice,' and 'full' admirals.
That depends. They never did so until the very end of 1453 for the simple reason that the army and Navy were organized alongside regions.
Two, a Roman-derived society that had to create a staff system and other characteristically modern institutions might be forced to invent the equivalent of a Chief of Naval Operations: someone who is responsible for coordination of all the fleets wherever they may be, who would outrank the commander of any single fleet. The historical Romans had no name for this position, but that doesn't mean they wouldn't invent one. Granted, the invented name would no doubt flow from their own traditions and be grammatical in Latin, as many of Thorgrimm's inventions are (I am assured) not.
The Romans already had such overall commanders, for example the Magister Militum who commanded all Navy and Army operations. The Byzantines had a seperate Naval command during their existence, commanded by the (Greek) droungarios tou ploïmou and later on by the megas droungarios.

Which two?

- Yann Le Bohec, The Imperial Roman Army
- Hugh Elton, Warfare in Roman Europe 350-425.

Read the two and you got a good, basic overview.
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