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Re: The Tales of Roma Mater

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Thanas wrote:
Simon_Jester wrote:HI assume that this comes down to the definition of the words in the title, so that there should be a 'supreme' in an English translation of the rank? If I understand you correctly, the reason there cannot be more than one praefectus classis per fleet is about the same as the reason there cannot be more than one "supreme commander" in an army: if there are two commanders of the same rank, one or the other is not supreme.
Yes. But it does not mean supreme commander, it just means he is the commander of the fleet. If it was a prefect rank a praefectus classis at the Rhine for example might command about 200 ships, whereas a praefectus classis of Egypt might command several times that much. The praefectus classis is the highest fleet commander there is, but he is not the supreme commander, that would be the magister militum of the area or the Emperor.
References to "supreme commander" in my post were purely an example.

What I'm getting at is that... well. Consider the Age of Sail- the oared galley gave way to the seagoing 'ship of the line,' and major fleet battles were decided by large fleets of sailing vessels in long parallel lines, pounding at each other with broadsides of naval gunfire. The British soon learned that this kind of naval formation was extremely unwieldy for a singly admiral to command, because a fleet deployed in line of battle could easily stretch for kilometers, given reasonable spacing between the ships. Moreover, each ship masked the view of others in the line, making communication difficult since any signal would have to be passed up or down the line in a game of 'telephone.'

So the British broke up the command of the battle-line into three squadrons, put the 'admiral' in the center squadron, a 'vice-admiral' who worked closely with the admiral in the lead squadron (which took the worst of the fighting), and a 'rear admiral' in the junior, trainee position of commanding the back third of the line (the position of least danger and responsibility). Other navies of the era did much the same, to solve the same problems.

Now, the Romans would no doubt respond in different ways, but if the Roman Empire found itself commanding a great many sailing ships in the gunpowder era they would be forced to deal with the practical problems. The idea that the supreme admiral of this fleet might subdivide his command among a small number of responsible, level-headed senior officers junior to himself would still hold.

You would expect to find some officer rank between that of the individual ship captains and the admiral commanding the whole fleet- and not just officers responsible for some ad hoc territorial station like "commander of the six ships anchored at this port." The need to fight efficiently in dispersed formations would make them change the process, even if the command structure stayed territorial.


And as in real history, this would also help the navy to formalize a rank structure more precise than "who has the most imperium, commands," which is an added advantage and reduces the risk of military blunders.
One, a Roman-derived culture that modernized, going through the gunpowder era and the Industrial Revolution, would probably come up with a more formal seniority system than "who has the most imperium, commands." Divisions of ranks within the title of a fleet-commander would evolve naturally, just as in real life the rank of "admiral" divided during the Age of Sail into 'rear,' 'vice,' and 'full' admirals.
That depends. They never did so until the very end of 1453 for the simple reason that the army and Navy were organized alongside regions.
Yes, they never did so, and never needed to- because there never was such a thing as a 'modern' Rome; Rome always operated under the constraints of ancient and medieval technology and social organization.

I think it's legitimate, if we posit a modern Rome, to posit that Rome would be forced to adapt to the pressures of modern technology. That's what happened to real societies, after all. Putting "SPQR" on the banners will not change the reality that a navy with radio communication between the ships is going to need a shoreside staff and bureaucracy to coordinate things. So some titles, offices, and practices would need to be invented, although they would co-exist with other offices and practices we today would find strange.
The Romans already had such overall commanders, for example the Magister Militum who commanded all Navy and Army operations. The Byzantines had a seperate Naval command during their existence.
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Simon_Jester wrote:What I'm getting at is that... well. Consider the Age of Sail- the oared galley gave way to the seagoing 'ship of the line,' and major fleet battles were decided by large fleets of sailing vessels in long parallel lines, pounding at each other with broadsides of naval gunfire. The British soon learned that this kind of naval formation was extremely unwieldy for a singly admiral to command, because a fleet deployed in line of battle could easily stretch for kilometers, given reasonable spacing between the ships. Moreover, each ship masked the view of others in the line, making communication difficult since any signal would have to be passed up or down the line in a game of 'telephone.'

So the British broke up the command of the battle-line into three squadrons, put the 'admiral' in the center squadron, a 'vice-admiral' who worked closely with the admiral in the lead squadron (which took the worst of the fighting), and a 'rear admiral' in the junior, trainee position of commanding the back third of the line (the position of least danger and responsibility). Other navies of the era did much the same, to solve the same problems.

Now, the Romans would no doubt respond in different ways, but if the Roman Empire found itself commanding a great many sailing ships in the gunpowder era they would be forced to deal with the practical problems. The idea that the supreme admiral of this fleet might subdivide his command among a small number of responsible, level-headed senior officers junior to himself would still hold.

You would expect to find some officer rank between that of the individual ship captains and the admiral commanding the whole fleet- and not just officers responsible for some ad hoc territorial station like "commander of the six ships anchored at this port." The need to fight efficiently in dispersed formations would make them change the process, even if the command structure stayed territorial.


And as in real history, this would also help the navy to formalize a rank structure more precise than "who has the most imperium, commands," which is an added advantage and reduces the risk of military blunders.
I am very well aware of how the modern rank structure evolved. What I am sure however you are not getting is that it would be very unusual for classes to operate together like Thorgrimm has. The Romans already had squadron commanders, who would command according to a rank structure set by their experience and the prefect. The term for such a commander would be navarchus.


Also, I fail to see what nation could be a credible naval threat to the Romans too develop gunpowder battlelines.


Yes, they never did so, and never needed to- because there never was such a thing as a 'modern' Rome; Rome always operated under the constraints of ancient and medieval technology and social organization.

I think it's legitimate, if we posit a modern Rome, to posit that Rome would be forced to adapt to the pressures of modern technology. That's what happened to real societies, after all. Putting "SPQR" on the banners will not change the reality that a navy with radio communication between the ships is going to need a shoreside staff and bureaucracy to coordinate things. So some titles, offices, and practices would need to be invented, although they would co-exist with other offices and practices we today would find strange.
The romans already had a very advanced structure for supporting their navy, including naval bases, designated supply producers, arsenals etc during the Byzantine Empire. I fail to see why those terms (or their latin equivalent) cannot be adapted for modern usage, after all, a sargeant from today is unlike a sargeant from the Line infantry.
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This discussion on linguistics is getting annoying. If it continues I will HOS all of it.
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This is hardly HOSworthy. Maybe splittable into its own thread in OT or even History if Thanas isn't too mad.
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LadyTevar wrote:This discussion on linguistics is getting annoying. If it continues I will HOS all of it.
Why? He asked for critique and got it.
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Thanas wrote:
LadyTevar wrote:This discussion on linguistics is getting annoying. If it continues I will HOS all of it.
Why? He asked for critique and got it.
Actually, what I asked for was constructive criticism and other posters have provided it. While you have provided good data, it has been submitted in an arrogant tone.

Most boards I frequent bile and vitriol is reserved for the authors who refuse to make changes. I believe I have demonstrated that I am more than willing to change things when presented with options.

If you dislike the story, so be it. But why not try to be helpful and provide suggestions that will improve the story. Maybe you can try to provide suggestions for things you do not like such as the naval ranking system.

Such as provide the data for a possible Roman naval structuring for a modern fleet that consisted of multiple task groups. Not a coastal defensive fleet, but a true deep water fleet with worldwide power projection capabilities. As for a power who could have sparred with the Romans in fleet warfare, the Chinese could have.

As for where I got the term Legionarius from, here is the link: http://www.archives.nd.edu/cgi-bin/look ... egionarius I figured a university like Notre Dame would know what they are talking about.

From looking at your dbase link the number of inscriptions found is not the point. The point is that the term was used when referring to Roman infantry.

This one in particular makes your assumption that it never was used incorrect: Saturninus centurio legionarius ex voto. According to the translation from the ND website: http://www.archives.nd.edu/cgi-bin/look ... s+ex+voto+ seems to say: Saturninus, Centurio of the Legion, will be prayed for.

So I think it indicates Legionarius is the descriptive term for all of the the Legionary Soldiers, and not just the Privates. I believe Miles is a term used for a private, and not the term for every Soldier serving in the Legion. So you are going to have quite a few more inscriptions with Miles, since there were far more privates than other ranks.

So maybe the term was not the most common, but the fact it was used the way it was is relevant.

Now, how about we drop the sparring contest and you use your excellent knowledge base to help me construct a worthy ranking system and make other changes that can cover worldwide and interstellar requirements?

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Thorgrimm wrote:Actually, what I asked for was constructive criticism and other posters have provided it. While you have provided good data, it has been submitted in an arrogant tone.
Coming from you I find that quite ironic.
Most boards I frequent bile and vitriol is reserved for the authors who refuse to make changes. I believe I have demonstrated that I am more than willing to change things when presented with options.
I see no real changes being made.
If you dislike the story, so be it. But why not try to be helpful and provide suggestions that will improve the story. Maybe you can try to provide suggestions for things you do not like such as the naval ranking system.
I already provided several suggestions. Your response has been to ignore it or to argue. For example, you are still keeping legatus classis, instead of the suggestions I provided you with.
Such as provide the data for a possible Roman naval structuring for a modern fleet that consisted of multiple task groups. Not a coastal defensive fleet, but a true deep water fleet with worldwide power projection capabilities. As for a power who could have sparred with the Romans in fleet warfare, the Chinese could have.
No, they couldn't. The chinese never had the resources to build a truly combat-capable fleet and were a much poorer country, only mining a fraction of what the Roman Empire mined. Moreover, why would the Chinese even fight the Romans?
As for where I got the term Legionarius from, here is the link: http://www.archives.nd.edu/cgi-bin/look ... egionarius I figured a university like Notre Dame would know what they are talking about.
That does not actually say what you think it does.
From looking at your dbase link the number of inscriptions found is not the point. The point is that the term was used when referring to Roman infantry.

This one in particular makes your assumption that it never was used incorrect: Saturninus centurio legionarius ex voto. According to the translation from the ND website: http://www.archives.nd.edu/cgi-bin/look ... s+ex+voto+ seems to say: Saturninus, Centurio of the Legion, will be prayed for.
Bwahahahahaaaaaaa. It means of the legion. Not legionnaire as you try it to be. Miles is the term for soldier and a rank, as you have it. It never was used as a rank, as I have been saying all along. You ask for advice but do not accept it in any way. Also, your translation sucks. It should be Saturninus, centurio of the legion, (did this) according to the vow, as ex voto is short for ex voto suspecto.
So I think it indicates Legionarius is the descriptive term for all of the the Legionary Soldiers, and not just the Privates. I believe Miles is a term used for a private, and not the term for every Soldier serving in the Legion. So you are going to have quite a few more inscriptions with Miles, since there were far more privates than other ranks.
It still is not used as a rank like you have it in your scheme. It is used as an adjective.
So maybe the term was not the most common, but the fact it was used the way it was is relevant.
Not the way you want it to be.
Now, how about we drop the sparring contest and you use your excellent knowledge base to help me construct a worthy ranking system and make other changes that can cover worldwide and interstellar requirements?
Why bother, when you will not even accept that legionarius was not used as a rank and was, at best, a very sparingly word used?
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