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Name: Larz
Race: Augmented Human
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Rank: Freelance Killer (extraordinarily good hitman, if not for the fact that he kills anyone that gets in his way, but hides the bodies)/Former Special Ops (Imperial)
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Description: 6'0" with a medium yet well built and define stature. He has short, blonde hair thats usually spiked and dark marroon eyes with a hint of metallic grey to them. He usually has a broad look of amusement that crosses his lips and a dirty blond/brown goatie. He usually wears a long, black opera trench that covers a military white longsleve and black pants. A black vest with sewn in armor covers his chest and a dual sholder holster . His past is a mystery, but he is, in underworld rings, a well renown assasine. He is very stealthy, and very popular for assinations if not for the fact that he really likes to kill. He kills everyone that gets in his way, and anyone that may remember him vaguely, though he is very good at hiding them. Very cynical, he holds little regard for anything except his incredible combat skills hand-to-hand and with small to medium arms.

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Here's mine, a warped idea but a willing sacrifice for comedy relief

Name: Rhoa'des

Galaxy of origin: Trek

Planet of origin: Something Planet

Species: Hybird Being (Mixture of Klingon / Ferengi / Vulcan / Gorn / Tribble)

Rank: Crook

Organzition: "Jack-Ass of all Trades"


Description: Rhoa'des would never actually tell which side is from where, but his genetic roots actually traces back to the first four species mentioned. The fifth, was a result of a nasty transporter accident which merged his DNA with a tribble; and now everything he intakes too much bran he'll shit one of these little critters. This unique mixture has given him quite a large and stout green-hued goblin-esque appearance. He does sport some cybernetic implants that would gaft an intimidating stare if the laser-eye weren't in the hot pink spectrum.

Unlike the standard fair of mixture races, Rhoa'des never felt torn between any world. He is himself, not matter what his 'genes' will say and his small circle will except him for what he is. However he never really been on legal side of the galaxy, and he leads a nasty band of rogues onboard his starship 'The Lovechild' and commits many shady deals such as: Starship Theif, 'Particuler of the Week' smuggler, pirate broadcasts of vulgur crap over Federation Subspace Relays, and selling technology to primative worlds for resources or other specimens. He's fond of female intelligent species for pre-warp undeveloped worlds for some reason (and believes they are actually smarter and more interesting that the standard fare).
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I have need of Beta readers as well. if any are interested a PM will suffice (an included E-mail would be nice to)
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A P.M. ? what's that :?: But id love to try Beta reading a story
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PM personal messahe, accessed through button marked as same at bottom of every post
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Re: Starting a new fanfic, anyone want in?

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Name: Ancaris
Galaxy of origin(sw/st): Star Wars
Planet of origin: Unknown
Species: Unknown (appears human)
Rank: Grand Admiral (yeah I know, it's above captain, if it dun work, change it)
Organzition: Imperial Navy of the Galactic Empire
Height: 2.05 meters (about 6' 8.5" I think)
Hair: Silver
Eyes Deep Cobalt blue
Appearance: Wears the standard white uniform of a Grand Admiral. Has a large scar on the left side of his face running from above his left ear his chin. Walks with a mild limp.

Description: Ancaris' character is one of unflinching loyalty to the Emperor and Empire. He has on more than one occasion come very close to losing his life in defending it, and bears several scars and injuries from his efforts, though he wears these injuries as marks of honor. The repeated headblows over his years of service have also left him prone to fits of insanity (Think something along the lines of Kefka) for brief periods of time. Ancaris' manner (when not in a fit of insanity) is one of "cool-headedness" - rarely letting the heat of a situation get to him, and he for the most part speaks in cool, even tones.
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Due to the massive overkill rates I've had to reset the Empire to post Thrawn era. It was that or lower the Imperial IQ to 4 :lol:
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Setesh wrote:At long last I have started a fanfic I had in mind since last year. The Empire vs. GK's Star Trek. Basic premis, Throw the Empire with the 'lower-limit' and ICS based calcs, against Star Trek with Graham Kennedy's over-inflated trek numbers.

Pssh, it's still a slaughter. GKs Sovereign, even with the extra 2 quantum tubes in the saucer, is barely more powerful then a non-ICS midrange CRC Corvette. ( 660vs 600 mt/sec)
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Name: Maximus Lennox
Galaxy of origin: Star Wars Galaxy
Planet of Origin: Yaga Minor
Species: Human
Rank: Line Captain awaiting promotion too Death Squadron Sub-Commander(Rear Admiral) During Shadows of the Empire
Organsition: Imperial Navy: Lord Vader's Death Squadron
Ship Command: ISD II Tyrant
History: Coming from a proud military line including ancestor's battle commands from Empress Teta's war and the Great Hyperspace War. He easily got into the Imperial Academy and once he took a ship command he actally cared about his crew. Though he overly uses superior technology in battle tactics and strategies.
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Weight 175 pounds
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Captain Lennox wrote:Name: Maximus Lennox

Height: 6'11
Weight 175 pounds
Skinny aintcha?
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Setesh wrote:Due to the massive overkill rates I've had to reset the Empire to post Thrawn era. It was that or lower the Imperial IQ to 4 :lol:
In that case change my noghri guy to a rebel/NR person desperate for revenge against the empire.
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Name: Chris Draco
Galaxy of origin(sw/st): SW
Planet of origin: Corellia
Species: Human
Rank: Lt. Colonel
Organzition: Imperial Navy
Description: Height: 6 foot 3.

His parents were killed during a Rebel attack and he vowed revenge. He joined the Imperial Navy as a Starfighter pilot. He gradauted 1st in his class and was given a Tie Fighter. He rose to Captain and was given a Tie Inteceptor squadron. He served at the battle of Endor, and stopped a B-Wing attack on a crippled ISD. He rose then quickly to Colonel, commanding a wing of fighters on the Furious. He personally commands an rare Tie Avenger squadron.


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Name: Micheal Ryans
Galaxy of origin: SW
Planet of origin: Kiffu
Species: Kiffar (near-human, distinctuishged by facial markings and pyschometric (reading images from objects and people) abilities)
Rank: Former Guardian, now freelance pilot
Organisation: Self-employed
Ship command: Avenging Angel; KDY Delta-7 Aetherspirite starfighter with hyperdrive. Lady Lucy; Modified freighter fitted with ISD-grade shields and twin pulse cannons taken from an old Coruscant-class heavy cruiser capable of tearing practically anything dumb enough to attack it to pieces.
History: Ryans has a strong sense of discipline and honour, and as such is willing to give his life freely, without reservation, if it is for the common good. He has a knack for outwitting his opponents, and some have said he could outmatch Thrawn at strategy (although not when he is within hearing as he respects GA Thrawn). I pity the Feddie scum tht get in his way.
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Micheal Ryans, Beta pilot wrote:Name: Micheal Ryans
Galaxy of origin: SW
Planet of origin: Kiffu
Species: Kiffar (near-human, distinctuishged by facial markings and pyschometric (reading images from objects and people) abilities)
Rank: Former Guardian, now freelance pilot
Organisation: Self-employed
Ship command: Avenging Angel; KDY Delta-7 Aetherspirite starfighter with hyperdrive. Lady Lucy; Modified freighter fitted with ISD-grade shields

Bullshit.
and twin pulse cannons taken from an old Coruscant-class heavy cruiser capable of tearing practically anything dumb enough to attack it to pieces.
History: Ryans has a strong sense of discipline and honour, and as such is willing to give his life freely, without reservation, if it is for the common good. He has a knack for outwitting his opponents, and some have said he could outmatch Thrawn at strategy (although not when he is within hearing as he respects GA Thrawn).[/quoyr]


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Post by Micheal Ryans, Beta pilot »

Actually, GAT, I've been pilfering some extra-galactic power sources (to whit, whatever the SB (super-battleship) Dante uses for a power core (it's over 200km long, and practically all weapons, so it must have a damn powerful and compact reactor)). I've been upgrading the pulse cannons as well.

I would have brought the Dante with me, but some self-righteous commando blew it. Too bad too, I was looking forward to letting fly with the Fermion cannon at the Enterprise.

Not to mention that Guardians have a tendency to sacrifice themselves for the common good (not to mention I am not better with strategy than Thrawn (I guess I should have mentioned that some people would be wrong in this case. Uhm, is sorry good enough, or do you want my soul?)
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You posted in this thread, Your soul is mine :evil:

:twisted: BWAH :twisted: HA :twisted: HA :twisted: HA :twisted: HA :twisted:
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Well, Ryans, considering that this is a fanfic you're entering your character in and not a RPG, Setesh can tweak your character any way he likes ;)
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Post by Micheal Ryans, Beta pilot »

Setesh, can I sell my soul to you in exchange for the Dante back?

If so, then heres it's stats:

SB Dante
1 Fermion cannon, range three million KM, anything in that range dies :twisted: :twisted: .
Unknown number of heavy dual cannon turrets, range may be 2-3 light seconds, but most likely less.
Unknown number of missile launchers, same as cannon turrets.
Millions of armed crewers, including one thousand HardShells (badass mecha troops).
Extensive fighter and bomber complement.
Twelve Blue Mist commandos.
THE COLONEL, the leader of Blue Mist, and pilots a mech suit that would scare Wing-Zero.
BioWeapons capable of slaughtering everything onboard, and then some.
Armoured vehicles and drone units.
One psychotic commando, Benoit Manderubrot, with an E-unit on his left arm and a personality you wouldn't believe.
Length: usable 100 km, actual 200 km (Fermion takes up half the ship).
Displacement: Unknown, but presumably massive.
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Micheal Ryans, Beta pilot wrote:Setesh, can I sell my soul to you in exchange for the Dante back?

If so, then heres it's stats:

SB Dante
1 Fermion cannon, range three million KM, anything in that range dies :twisted: :twisted: .
Unknown number of heavy dual cannon turrets, range may be 2-3 light seconds, but most likely less.
Unknown number of missile launchers, same as cannon turrets.
Millions of armed crewers, including one thousand HardShells (badass mecha troops).
Extensive fighter and bomber complement.
Twelve Blue Mist commandos.
THE COLONEL, the leader of Blue Mist, and pilots a mech suit that would scare Wing-Zero.
BioWeapons capable of slaughtering everything onboard, and then some.
Armoured vehicles and drone units.
One psychotic commando, Benoit Manderubrot, with an E-unit on his left arm and a personality you wouldn't believe.
Length: usable 100 km, actual 200 km (Fermion takes up half the ship).
Displacement: Unknown, but presumably massive.
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Hey, a boy can dream can't he?
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Name: Jothien Setzer
Galaxy of origin(sw/st): SW
Planet of origin: Ardev
Species: Human
Rank(if any): Commander
Organzition: Imperial Navy
Description:

Brown hair, Brown eyes, 5'8, 140lbs. Build is a bit on the scrawny side.
Wears glasses that tilt to the right, giving him a cockeyed look.

Jothien Setzer was born on planet Ardev in the Etno system. Setzer had a normal childhood, and read a lot of military and historical literature. He came to favor the Empire's unofficial human supremacist policies because of his belief that strong species deserve to rule weak ones. In high school he joined a COMPNOR youth organization. A few months into school he took the Imperial Military Skills Analysis (IMSA)* test. Having scored well he was offered an appointment to the Imperial Navy academy, and he accepted. He worked in the navy for 15 years, and is currently the XO on the ISD Revelation.
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Name: Stuart Mackey

Galaxy of origin(sw/st): ST

Planet of origin: Earth

Species: Human

Rank(if any): Research assistant, general gofer, and the boss's organiser if previously fucked up things.

Organzition(SF, S31, ImpNav, ImpInt, STrooper, Rebel, ect.): Heratage Museum, Christchurch, NZ.

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Stuart dislikes direct confrontatio but will happily dislocate the kness of thugs if provoked enough. He hates bullys and the abusers of animals.
Passionate about freedom of speech, human rights and cannot tolerate moral retards and those who prefer political expediancy to helping those who cannot help themselves.
Would have joined Starfleet, but the rampant stupidity and unsafe ships put him off the idea.
Is competent in close quarter, unarmed, combat.
Likes history and old weapons from earths history.
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Billy Bugas

Galaxy of Origin: ST

Planet of Origin: Turkana IV

Rank: Former Maquis Cell Leader, now a free agent

Organization: None

Description: 5'7", Reddish-blond hair, brown eyes.

Billy is a former leader of a Maquis cell wiped out by the Dominion. He was born on Turkana IV, and escaped by pure luck, when a Zakdorn vessel stopped for repairs. He joined the Maquis, the only group to accept his brutal philosophies, and quickly established himself as a cunning and insightful fighter. After the Maquis were all but destroyed, he went rogue. A relentless killer, he accepts bounties by anyone willing to pay the price.

Billy is well-versed in many forms of unarmed combat, as well as weaponry. He learned kendo from an expert in the Maquis. As such, he carries an old-style katana made of folded tritanium. For long-range work, he uses a Cardassian phaser pistol and a Turkanan .223 carbine. He has modified a replicator to produce ammunition.

His ship, the Scarmiglione, a Peregrine-class courier, is armed with 4 independently-rotatable phaser cannons, one forward-firing photon torpedo tube, and a klingon class-4 cloaking device. It carries eight medium-yeild torpedoes and has a top cruising speed of warp 6.5. A shield generator from a D-12 class Bird of Prey provides protection.
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Name: Mike Nugent
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Planet of origin: Earth
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Organzition(SF, S31, ImpNav, ImpInt, STrooper, Rebel, ect.): SF
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