Star Crossed Fanfic

Frank Hipper · Post by **Frank Hipper** » 2003-03-17 02:35am

Poor Shadow Fleet....

JodoForce · Post by **JodoForce** » 2003-03-17 05:06am

Bravo-marvellous chapter, but I have to wonder if he can make good on his promises for Thrawn--the mysterious plotline is getting incredibly thick and I can't believe that he has it all figured out already

If you know what I mean

I mean I'm afraid he can't finish what he started here

I REALLY REALLY hope Stravo can really finish this fic. I've seen too many uncompleted fanfics and if this one is left hanging over forever it'll be the most painful yet

Once he has finished it he should take it to the press for publishing or something

Absolutely brillaint

He'll need to edit it some first though

Post by **Kuja** » 2003-03-17 12:55pm

Nice to see that the Horan Corr didn't go quietly and is still giving the Shadowfleet headaches.

And it's about time the Shadowfleet got skittish. They've been too calm this whole time.

Captain Cyran · Post by **Captain Cyran** » 2003-03-17 08:36pm

JodoForce wrote:Bravo-marvellous chapter, but I have to wonder if he can make good on his promises for Thrawn--the mysterious plotline is getting incredibly thick and I can't believe that he has it all figured out already

If you know what I mean I mean I'm afraid he can't finish what he started here

I REALLY REALLY hope Stravo can really finish this fic. I've seen too many uncompleted fanfics and if this one is left hanging over forever it'll be the most painful yet

Once he has finished it he should take it to the press for publishing or something Absolutely brillaint

He'll need to edit it some first though

It would not be published...unless that is, if you published it as a series of about 5 books at approximatly 200 pages each, and by the time this is done it will probably be able to get to 6 maybe 7 books at around 200 pages each.

In case you didn't know...StarCrossed is HUGE and as such I believe it is our duty to thank Stravo from the bottom of our hearts for all he has done to us.

THANK YOU STRAVO!!!

Captain Cyran · Post by **Captain Cyran** » 2003-03-17 08:39pm

By the way, EXCELLENT chapter Stravo, as usual, loved the whole conversation between Ochoa and Nemesis, Ben has returned!

I can't wait to see what happens to the poor poor Shadowfleet when Thrawn gets there(Even though it is probably not coming until at least chapter 45 ).

Darth Yoshi · Post by **Darth Yoshi** » 2003-03-17 11:53pm

Wow. Excellent chapter as always, man. And Mara Jade has to figure out how to reconcile her own feelings with the wishes of the Emperor. Sweet.

Raptor 597 · Post by **Raptor 597** » 2003-03-18 06:59pm

Great, Stravo. But I could beat Thrawn at Chess.

Bartman · Post by **Bartman** » 2003-03-18 07:30pm

Stravo, normally I avoid the various fanfics. But this one came so highly recommended I read it. Simply put I am enthralled. And this latest chapter has me anxiously waiting the next. Kudos on such an excellent piece of work.

Stravo · Post by **Stravo** » 2003-03-18 09:10pm

Bartman wrote:Stravo, normally I avoid the various fanfics. But this one came so highly recommended I read it. Simply put I am enthralled. And this latest chapter has me anxiously waiting the next. Kudos on such an excellent piece of work.

Thanks Bartman, good to have another fan join the flock.

Captain Cyran · Post by **Captain Cyran** » 2003-03-18 09:17pm

Stravo wrote:
Bartman wrote:Stravo, normally I avoid the various fanfics. But this one came so highly recommended I read it. Simply put I am enthralled. And this latest chapter has me anxiously waiting the next. Kudos on such an excellent piece of work.
Thanks Bartman, good to have another fan join the flock.

You mean the cult...right?

Stravo · Post by **Stravo** » 2003-03-18 09:54pm

Captain_Cyran wrote:
Stravo wrote:
Bartman wrote:Stravo, normally I avoid the various fanfics. But this one came so highly recommended I read it. Simply put I am enthralled. And this latest chapter has me anxiously waiting the next. Kudos on such an excellent piece of work.
Thanks Bartman, good to have another fan join the flock.
You mean the cult...right?

Shhhhhh......

Trytostaydead · Post by **Trytostaydead** » 2003-03-18 10:54pm

Hmmm, interesting.. the Emperor has a chessboard as well? What can this imply? That he's in on the Gary-kills-Kirk (Kirk better die!!) scheme? Makes sense, though not for the reason of kirk-killing, more territory that he can rule.

What I don't understand is, why would he have a chess set? To play against Gary? Or are the chess pieces representing what's happening like the great cosmic one those dieties are playing? If the latter, then what does that make Palpatine? But it can't be, since he's mortal. No, wait.. according to Dark Empire he's free-floating energy that can occupy bodies. So does that make Palpatine maybe half-diety status? His master of the Dark Side has given him quasi-ascension level and allows him to play chess with the big ones?

Hmmmmm.. intriguing <steeples fingers together and narrows glowing red eyes to a slit>

Pcm979 · Post by **Pcm979** » 2003-03-20 03:51am

Trytostaydead wrote:Hmmm, interesting.. the Emperor has a chessboard as well? What can this imply? That he's in on the Gary-kills-Kirk (Kirk better die!!) scheme? Makes sense, though not for the reason of kirk-killing, more territory that he can rule.

Stravo said that Gary & Palpatine are in it together.

Trytostaydead wrote:What I don't understand is, why would he have a chess set? To play against Gary? Or are the chess pieces representing what's happening like the great cosmic one those dieties are playing? If the latter, then what does that make Palpatine? But it can't be, since he's mortal. No, wait.. according to Dark Empire he's free-floating energy that can occupy bodies. So does that make Palpatine maybe half-diety status? His master of the Dark Side has given him quasi-ascension level and allows him to play chess with the big ones?

He (Stravo) also said that he hates the DE storyline.

Trytostaydead wrote:Hmmmmm.. intriguing <steeples fingers together and narrows glowing red eyes to a slit>

I hope I enlightened you.

*Shimmers and dissapears, leaving behind a curiously stained knife*

Post by **NecronLord** » 2003-03-20 04:17am

Kahn must kill Kirk...(or think he has)

Just to see him dance about in joy...

Trytostaydead · Post by **Trytostaydead** » 2003-03-21 12:12am

NecronLord wrote:Kahn must kill Kirk...(or think he has)

Just to see him dance about in joy...

Thrawn MUST dominate, and whereas our complimentary Slave-Leia or Mara scene?

Admiral Drason · Post by **Admiral Drason** » 2003-03-21 06:21pm

Thrawn MUST dominate, and whereas our complimentary Slave-Leia or Mara scene?[/quote]

What about Leia and Mara scene?

Mitth`raw`nuruodo · Post by **Mitth`raw`nuruodo** » 2003-03-23 07:59pm

Hello everyone. I have observed this site and forums for awhile, but Stravo's fanfic got me to register.

I just spent my whole weekend reading this, and I must say, HO-LY SHIT. You sir, are by far, the best writer who's works I have ever read (really, this is a good story). When I first began reading this, I never thought it would draw out to where I'm in line with everyone else, waiting for the latest installment of this fantastic story, but here I am, and I eagerly the next installment of........(*dramatic music*) STRAVO'S EPIC!

Grand Admiral Thrawn · Post by **Grand Admiral Thrawn** » 2003-03-23 08:31pm

You sir have stolen my name.

Mitth`raw`nuruodo · Post by **Mitth`raw`nuruodo** » 2003-03-23 08:56pm

I guess GAT gets the cookie. For anyone who didn't read the Hand of Thrawn series by Tomothy Zahn (shame on you), Thrawn was his "core name", and Mitth'raw'nuruodo was his full name. I think Thrawn is a little easier to say/type, don't you? This test didn't last half as long as I expected it to, you guys/girls/aliens (or at least just GAT) know your SW stuff. Welp, too late for me to change my name, lets just say... I dunno, but we'll figure out something.

Post by **Sea Skimmer** » 2003-03-23 09:00pm

Captain_Cyran wrote:
It would not be published...unless that is, if you published it as a series of about 5 books at approximatly 200 pages each, and by the time this is done it will probably be able to get to 6 maybe 7 books at around 200 pages each.

In case you didn't know...StarCrossed is HUGE and as such I believe it is our duty to thank Stravo from the bottom of our hearts for all he has done to us.

THANK YOU STRAVO!!!

Stories previously posted online have little to no value and thus basically no hope of being published. I know a few people who have looked into it on other boards.

Post by **Kuja** » 2003-03-23 09:00pm

I dunno, but we'll figure out something.

Simple solution: we call you Mitt.

Mitth`raw`nuruodo · Post by **Mitth`raw`nuruodo** » 2003-03-23 09:13pm

erm, I prefer MITTH`RAW`NURUODO, CHISS MILITARY GENIUS, but Mitt works ok.

Stravo · Post by **Stravo** » 2003-03-23 09:54pm

You know, it really touches an author's heart when people say that the story should be published. However there is 0% chance of that here for the simple reason of the subject matter. And Mitt welcome to the cult--uh---I mean fanfic community.

Oh and for all those that are going to click frantically thinking this is an update....sorry.

Darth Garden Gnome · Post by **Darth Garden Gnome** » 2003-03-23 09:55pm

Stravo wrote:Oh and for all those that are going to click frantically thinking this is an update....sorry.

Indeed...

Xon · Post by **Xon** » 2003-03-24 04:42am

Stravo wrote:You know, it really touches an author's heart when people say that the story should be published. However there is 0% chance of that here for the simple reason of the subject matter. And Mitt welcome to the cult--uh---I mean fanfic community.

Oh and for all those that are going to click frantically thinking this is an update....sorry.

Thats why I put email notification on the cleanup version