That, and I wanted to see if people would react to the character's personal thoughts as well as his actions and words. You're right though, the writing fits better with everyone in third person.Stormcrow Comments
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No. That's another reason why I didn't do it this time. Last time I just wanted to try it on for size (I don't write like that much) and stand out a little. That, and I wanted to see if people would react to the character's personal thoughts as well as his actions and words. You're right though, the writing fits better with everyone in third person.
That, and I wanted to see if people would react to the character's personal thoughts as well as his actions and words. You're right though, the writing fits better with everyone in third person.Writer's Guild 'Ghost in the Machine'/Decepticon 'Devastator'/BOTM 'Space Ape'/Justice League 'The Tick'
"The best part of 'believe' is the lie."
It's always the quiet ones.
"The best part of 'believe' is the lie."
It's always the quiet ones.