Perhaps...
But the meaning of your sentence is lost on me...
And me Very short fan fic needs, a lot of work..
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Whats that sound, Timmy?
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To kill one, it is a great tragedy,
To kill one million, it is a statisic" -Stalin
“Mission? What mission, you never said anything about a mission.”- Sarah Grimshaw
“Ohhh my god, The Admiral’s gone mad.” –Admiral Halsey
I do what I damn well want to, it’s my ship –Admiral Halsey
Because you, my dear are not suppose to be here. –Hanna Logan
“Huh, I suppose you felt that thought the force” – Sarah Grimshaw
“No I felt it though my foot, let’s go.” – Mara Jade
To kill one million, it is a statisic" -Stalin
“Mission? What mission, you never said anything about a mission.”- Sarah Grimshaw
“Ohhh my god, The Admiral’s gone mad.” –Admiral Halsey
I do what I damn well want to, it’s my ship –Admiral Halsey
Because you, my dear are not suppose to be here. –Hanna Logan
“Huh, I suppose you felt that thought the force” – Sarah Grimshaw
“No I felt it though my foot, let’s go.” – Mara Jade
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The rewriting of fics is a troolish thing, done only by absolute scum.The Admiral wrote:lol, Perhaps I should re-write than fic...
The USS Statesman came out of high warp, straight into range of the powerful ISD. "Red alert!" The captain yelled as the ship began to dodge incoming fire, within seconds the schilds had failed and the ship span out of control, fire burning from holds in the deck. The last thing her cpatin saw, was the blue streck of a photon torp heading towards the bridge.
Meanwhile On board the ISD, the captain was haveing breckfast, unawere of his ship even entreing conbate, due to the fact, it wasn't belived nessasary to rase schilds when dealing with these rather primative ships...
Much better...
Sorry about the spelling.
Admiral
بيرني كان سيفوز
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in omnibus requiem quaesivi, et nusquam inveni nisi in angulo cum libro
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ipsa scientia potestas est
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in omnibus requiem quaesivi, et nusquam inveni nisi in angulo cum libro
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ipsa scientia potestas est
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Oh dear.
In that case I have become a troll,
Admiral
In that case I have become a troll,
Admiral
To kill one, it is a great tragedy,
To kill one million, it is a statisic" -Stalin
“Mission? What mission, you never said anything about a mission.”- Sarah Grimshaw
“Ohhh my god, The Admiral’s gone mad.” –Admiral Halsey
I do what I damn well want to, it’s my ship –Admiral Halsey
Because you, my dear are not suppose to be here. –Hanna Logan
“Huh, I suppose you felt that thought the force” – Sarah Grimshaw
“No I felt it though my foot, let’s go.” – Mara Jade
To kill one million, it is a statisic" -Stalin
“Mission? What mission, you never said anything about a mission.”- Sarah Grimshaw
“Ohhh my god, The Admiral’s gone mad.” –Admiral Halsey
I do what I damn well want to, it’s my ship –Admiral Halsey
Because you, my dear are not suppose to be here. –Hanna Logan
“Huh, I suppose you felt that thought the force” – Sarah Grimshaw
“No I felt it though my foot, let’s go.” – Mara Jade
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Now I will depart and write more trollish fan-fic, and contempate the meaning of trollhood,
Admiral
Admiral
To kill one, it is a great tragedy,
To kill one million, it is a statisic" -Stalin
“Mission? What mission, you never said anything about a mission.”- Sarah Grimshaw
“Ohhh my god, The Admiral’s gone mad.” –Admiral Halsey
I do what I damn well want to, it’s my ship –Admiral Halsey
Because you, my dear are not suppose to be here. –Hanna Logan
“Huh, I suppose you felt that thought the force” – Sarah Grimshaw
“No I felt it though my foot, let’s go.” – Mara Jade
To kill one million, it is a statisic" -Stalin
“Mission? What mission, you never said anything about a mission.”- Sarah Grimshaw
“Ohhh my god, The Admiral’s gone mad.” –Admiral Halsey
I do what I damn well want to, it’s my ship –Admiral Halsey
Because you, my dear are not suppose to be here. –Hanna Logan
“Huh, I suppose you felt that thought the force” – Sarah Grimshaw
“No I felt it though my foot, let’s go.” – Mara Jade
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That would be a bad idea.The Admiral wrote:Now I will depart and write more trollish fan-fic, and contempate the meaning of trollhood,
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How come?
And will people ever tell me what they think of thw quote in my sig...
I might have to go re-write them.
Admirak
And will people ever tell me what they think of thw quote in my sig...
I might have to go re-write them.
Admirak
To kill one, it is a great tragedy,
To kill one million, it is a statisic" -Stalin
“Mission? What mission, you never said anything about a mission.”- Sarah Grimshaw
“Ohhh my god, The Admiral’s gone mad.” –Admiral Halsey
I do what I damn well want to, it’s my ship –Admiral Halsey
Because you, my dear are not suppose to be here. –Hanna Logan
“Huh, I suppose you felt that thought the force” – Sarah Grimshaw
“No I felt it though my foot, let’s go.” – Mara Jade
To kill one million, it is a statisic" -Stalin
“Mission? What mission, you never said anything about a mission.”- Sarah Grimshaw
“Ohhh my god, The Admiral’s gone mad.” –Admiral Halsey
I do what I damn well want to, it’s my ship –Admiral Halsey
Because you, my dear are not suppose to be here. –Hanna Logan
“Huh, I suppose you felt that thought the force” – Sarah Grimshaw
“No I felt it though my foot, let’s go.” – Mara Jade
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BED?
Its 8 o'clcok in the morning...
Sleep is not an option...
On the other hand my novel does need finsihing...
Admiral
Its 8 o'clcok in the morning...
Sleep is not an option...
On the other hand my novel does need finsihing...
Admiral
To kill one, it is a great tragedy,
To kill one million, it is a statisic" -Stalin
“Mission? What mission, you never said anything about a mission.”- Sarah Grimshaw
“Ohhh my god, The Admiral’s gone mad.” –Admiral Halsey
I do what I damn well want to, it’s my ship –Admiral Halsey
Because you, my dear are not suppose to be here. –Hanna Logan
“Huh, I suppose you felt that thought the force” – Sarah Grimshaw
“No I felt it though my foot, let’s go.” – Mara Jade
To kill one million, it is a statisic" -Stalin
“Mission? What mission, you never said anything about a mission.”- Sarah Grimshaw
“Ohhh my god, The Admiral’s gone mad.” –Admiral Halsey
I do what I damn well want to, it’s my ship –Admiral Halsey
Because you, my dear are not suppose to be here. –Hanna Logan
“Huh, I suppose you felt that thought the force” – Sarah Grimshaw
“No I felt it though my foot, let’s go.” – Mara Jade
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Every time I read any part of that thing he calls his work, a part of me wonders...what is the color of the sky in his world?Eleas wrote:And the Beast came forth surrounded by a roiling cloud of vengeance, and lo, he wrote:The Imperial Star Destroyer swung about, every weapon blazing as it lumbered in towards its target. The Miranda class USS Memphis dodged to one side and down, slipping under most of the barrage as her own phasers returned the fire, slicing through the armour of her attacker.
On the bridge of the Federation ship the Executive officer checked his console for the tenth time in as many minutes, still hardly able to believe what he was seeing. The deck was shuddering occasionally as a turbolaser bolt slammed home on the shields. "These guys can't shoot to save their lives," he said wonderingly. "Haven't they heard of computer targeting?"
"Aft torpedoes fire," Captain Pellman said. "Full phasers too." She watched the viewscreen tactical display as the two glowing flecks of light closed on the Star Destroyer, slamming into an already damaged section. "Apparently not," she said in response as the colossus began to spin out of control, still spraying turbolaser fire in their general direction. "Helm, evasive pattern alpha five three. Tactical, another full load on the same area."
The Memphis dodged and weaved as it arced around and raced inward again. Phasers and photon torpedoes leapt out and ploughed into the gaping hole in the Star Destroyer's port side; the whole forward section began to shear away from the rest of the ship. Both sections continued to fire.
And believe me...there is stuff published that's worse(how it got published is easy...self publishing...why, the world may never know)
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Sometimes we can choose the path we follow. Sometimes our choices are made for us. And sometimes we have no choice at all
Saying and doing are chocolate and concrete
Oh, Star Trek: The Next Generation meets X-Men - Planet X wasn't self published. And it was bad on the level of Portal. Trust me on this; in a weak moment, I bought it. I still keep it around as an insect repellant.Ghost Rider wrote:Every time I read any part of that thing he calls his work, a part of me wonders...what is the color of the sky in his world?
And believe me...there is stuff published that's worse(how it got published is easy...self publishing...why, the world may never know)
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*shudder*....so have I...and this was because some insane....obssesion to get a complete collection of stuff.Eleas wrote:Oh, Star Trek: The Next Generation meets X-Men - Planet X wasn't self published. And it was bad on the level of Portal. Trust me on this; in a weak moment, I bought it. I still keep it around as an insect repellant.Ghost Rider wrote:Every time I read any part of that thing he calls his work, a part of me wonders...what is the color of the sky in his world?
And believe me...there is stuff published that's worse(how it got published is easy...self publishing...why, the world may never know)
And yeah it's amazing what gets published(Ah Rob Liefeld showing me if you can draw pretty some company will pay you big bucks)
Currently it's locked away...along with Youngblood Strikefile #1...under thing what not to do when being published.
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Sometimes we can choose the path we follow. Sometimes our choices are made for us. And sometimes we have no choice at all
Saying and doing are chocolate and concrete
Sometimes we can choose the path we follow. Sometimes our choices are made for us. And sometimes we have no choice at all
Saying and doing are chocolate and concrete
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As Tom Paris unfortunately proves.hvb wrote:Helm probably also has a joystick.
But as Fed helmsmen are not usually skilled in their use...
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yes the Federation is more advanced because they force thier people to learn how to type real fast in order to survive!
The ship is flown by typing is a Brain Bug from the TOS movies control consols. They have a bunch of buttons but still have levers and knobs. TNG comes along and the "Advancement" is that know there are no knobs any more. If you want to do anything you have to type real fast.
The ship is flown by typing is a Brain Bug from the TOS movies control consols. They have a bunch of buttons but still have levers and knobs. TNG comes along and the "Advancement" is that know there are no knobs any more. If you want to do anything you have to type real fast.
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That was disapointing ..Should we show this Federation how to build a ship so we may have worthy foes? Typhonis 1
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When you want peace prepare for war! --Confusious
That was disapointing ..Should we show this Federation how to build a ship so we may have worthy foes? Typhonis 1
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I like him, he's funny.Now I will depart and write more trollish fan-fic, and contempate the meaning of trollhood.
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Thanks.
I think...
The Admiral.
I think...
The Admiral.
To kill one, it is a great tragedy,
To kill one million, it is a statisic" -Stalin
“Mission? What mission, you never said anything about a mission.”- Sarah Grimshaw
“Ohhh my god, The Admiral’s gone mad.” –Admiral Halsey
I do what I damn well want to, it’s my ship –Admiral Halsey
Because you, my dear are not suppose to be here. –Hanna Logan
“Huh, I suppose you felt that thought the force” – Sarah Grimshaw
“No I felt it though my foot, let’s go.” – Mara Jade
To kill one million, it is a statisic" -Stalin
“Mission? What mission, you never said anything about a mission.”- Sarah Grimshaw
“Ohhh my god, The Admiral’s gone mad.” –Admiral Halsey
I do what I damn well want to, it’s my ship –Admiral Halsey
Because you, my dear are not suppose to be here. –Hanna Logan
“Huh, I suppose you felt that thought the force” – Sarah Grimshaw
“No I felt it though my foot, let’s go.” – Mara Jade
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Ok, now I know that ships have targeting computers, but wasn't the one Luke was using in ANH only for the proton torpedoes? And it could stand to reason that it would only be effective against stationary/slow moving targets as the computer had to take a long time to line up the shot.Slartibartfast wrote:Unless Trektards want to argue that it was a computer specifically designed to hit vent shafts of moon-sized space stations.
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Dodonna's statements would suggest that, had the DS shaft not been ray shielded, they could ahve used laser cannons.Death from the Sea wrote:Ok, now I know that ships have targeting computers, but wasn't the one Luke was using in ANH only for the proton torpedoes? And it could stand to reason that it would only be effective against stationary/slow moving targets as the computer had to take a long time to line up the shot.Slartibartfast wrote:Unless Trektards want to argue that it was a computer specifically designed to hit vent shafts of moon-sized space stations.