Before the Storm- my own lil fanfic, chapter 1

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Before the Storm- my own lil fanfic, chapter 1

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I was going to post it, but it's too big, so here's the link.

http://www.geocities.com/sothis5/BTS1.html

Yahoo might spring a few popups, so be prepared.
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Nice. I don't like the page layout, but the story was nice and pretty atmospheric.
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I agree about the page layout, but I only have Netscape composer to work with, and don't understand enough about HTML.
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"I agree about the page layout, but I only have Netscape composer to work with, and don't understand enough about HTML."

If you want, I could slap together something for you. Interested?
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Nice :)

Gimme the next chapter !
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Nice story, a good read.

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Eleas wrote:"I agree about the page layout, but I only have Netscape composer to work with, and don't understand enough about HTML."

If you want, I could slap together something for you. Interested?
Any help you have to offer will be very much appreciated :)
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(Sothis)
"Any help you have to offer will be very much appreciated :)"


My pleasure. It'll have to be tomorrow - I've gotta sleep now. :)
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Intresting story, I've liked most of them I've read so far here but I feel this one in Particular has gotten that Tarkin/Vadar Relationship, Work on that one, Don't forget it as its somthing never explored in the Movies or the EU.

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Before the Storm is the title of the first book in the Blackfleet Crisis Trilogy.
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Great fic. Work on the layout of yer page though. I recommend white or yellow text on black background. Black text on gray BG also works too.
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As way of a small update, I'm about 4 pages from completing chapter 2, and will change the layout of both chapter 1 and chapter 2 when chapter 2 is posted.
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cool
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Post #114 @ Fri Oct 18, 2002 4:44 pm

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If you'd like it on the Archive, I'd be happy to oblige.
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yo, dalton-- you should put it to a vote as to whether you should add a SD.net Fanfics section to the archive.
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Dalton wrote:If you'd like it on the Archive, I'd be happy to oblige.
That would be very much appreciated, thanks :)
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Sothis wrote:
Dalton wrote:If you'd like it on the Archive, I'd be happy to oblige.
That would be very much appreciated, thanks :)
Cool. Email the original text files to me at rob at daltonator dot net.
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Re: Before the Storm- my own lil fanfic, chapter 1

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This is excellent, Sothis. A great escape from TPS reports. Look forward to reading part II.
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