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*Edit beware the pop-ups there and as for the Fanfic, I rate it fair to midden not that great and several HUGE plot gaps I won't go into now but the main problem is its confusing and lacks any cohesive flow
*Edit beware the pop-ups there and as for the Fanfic, I rate it fair to midden not that great and several HUGE plot gaps I won't go into now but the main problem is its confusing and lacks any cohesive flow
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I have to agree with Bean, it would benefit greatly from an extensive rewrite
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You tempt me, StravoStravo wrote:What Dalton? You're leery of fanfics??
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I tend to agree, Jack...and I'm getting suspicious since it's been almost a full day with no other peep out of him. Hmm...
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Damn, I wish I had thought of this whole advertising thing for my fanfic. Lord knows, I can use the extra traffic. Its hard getting people to read your work and like it. I can't remeber the last time someone posted a positive comment....
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Is that a plea for attention I haven't seen a work get praised as much since Shadows of the Night.Stravo wrote:Damn, I wish I had thought of this whole advertising thing for my fanfic. Lord knows, I can use the extra traffic. Its hard getting people to read your work and like it. I can't remeber the last time someone posted a positive comment....
To Absent Friends
"y = mx + bro" - Surlethe
"You try THAT shit again, kid, and I will mod you. I will
mod you so hard, you'll wish I were Dalton." - Lagmonster
May the way of the Hero lead to the Triforce.
Soo the ten people wandering behind you saying please give us more Stravo is not enough?can't remeber the last time someone posted a positive comment....
Nor the barrels of cash, The choice of any women on the board you want on the board and the fact you'll go down is history is not ENOUGH FOR YOU?
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I REALLY LIKE YOU FANFIC.Stravo wrote:Damn, I wish I had thought of this whole advertising thing for my fanfic. Lord knows, I can use the extra traffic. Its hard getting people to read your work and like it. I can't remeber the last time someone posted a positive comment....
KEEP ON WRITING, PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE
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We have women on the board?The choice of any women on the board you want on the board and the fact you'll go down is history is not ENOUGH FOR YOU
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Considering my volumonous posts in Lord Wong's anal thread....I think that the ladies may be just a tad shy about submitting to my charmsCyril wrote:We have women on the board?The choice of any women on the board you want on the board and the fact you'll go down is history is not ENOUGH FOR YOU
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