Star Crossed Fanfic

Post by **Ghost Rider** » 2003-06-16 05:56pm

Cool...nice set-up for the next chapter.

I especially liked the fleshing out more of Kittaine and the differrence between him and Thrawn.

Darth Yoshi · Post by **Darth Yoshi** » 2003-06-16 07:00pm

Whoa. And the Imperium has splintered. Great chapter, man.

Jaded Masses · Post by **Jaded Masses** » 2003-06-16 07:04pm

I enjoyed that chapter. I especially liked the interplay between the grand admrials. I thought that Kittaines letting Special Agent Troi comfort him was odd. I'll bet she ends up betraying him later on.

Soontir C'boath · Post by **Soontir C'boath** » 2003-06-16 07:25pm

Ender wrote:Goood

It was VERY Good..~Jason

Stravo · Post by **Stravo** » 2003-06-16 07:32pm

Jaded Masses wrote:I enjoyed that chapter. I especially liked the interplay between the grand admrials. I thought that Kittaines letting Special Agent Troi comfort him was odd. I'll bet she ends up betraying him later on.

You DO know who she is right?

thecreech · Post by **thecreech** » 2003-06-16 08:23pm

Stravo wrote:
Jaded Masses wrote:I enjoyed that chapter. I especially liked the interplay between the grand admrials. I thought that Kittaines letting Special Agent Troi comfort him was odd. I'll bet she ends up betraying him later on.
You DO know who she is right?

Im not sure. who is she

Captain Cyran · Post by **Captain Cyran** » 2003-06-16 08:30pm

That kicked ass, the Kittaine scene was great, though some of the Vader lines seemed...I dunno, odd.

Great foreshadowing in the Q Ayelborne scene with the Storm coming up on the horizon, that was a WONDERFUL scene.

I MUST figure out what the hell the Emperor and Mitchell are up to. Grrr...

All in all another great chapter Stravo.

Darth Yoshi · Post by **Darth Yoshi** » 2003-06-16 08:32pm

theheap wrote:Im not sure. who is she

She's Counselor Troi, of TNG fame. Unless there's another prominent Troi out there that I'm unaware of.

Captain Cyran · Post by **Captain Cyran** » 2003-06-16 08:33pm

Darth Yoshi wrote:
theheap wrote:Im not sure. who is she
She's Counselor Troi, of TNG fame. Unless there's another prominent Troi out there that I'm unaware of.

What was Troi's mothers name?

Mark S · Post by **Mark S** » 2003-06-16 08:33pm

Darth Yoshi wrote:
theheap wrote:Im not sure. who is she
She's Counselor Troi, of TNG fame. Unless there's another prominent Troi out there that I'm unaware of.

No, she's Troi's mother.

Captain Cyran · Post by **Captain Cyran** » 2003-06-16 08:33pm

Mark S wrote:
Darth Yoshi wrote:
theheap wrote:Im not sure. who is she
She's Counselor Troi, of TNG fame. Unless there's another prominent Troi out there that I'm unaware of.
No, she's Troi's mother.

Mark! You're supposed to make them THINK about the answer, sheesh...

Mitth`raw`nuruodo · Post by **Mitth`raw`nuruodo** » 2003-06-16 11:12pm

THat was pretty good. It sets stuff up for the future...

Anarchist Bunny · Post by **Anarchist Bunny** » 2003-06-17 01:06am

Well, I'm halfway through whats been posted, just finished the first page, I can't wait to see how Nemesis reacts to what Kirk did.

Alan Bolte · Post by **Alan Bolte** » 2003-06-17 02:51am

I can see how that wouldn't make much sense without having seen the various episodes with Troi's mother. But trust me - that is Troi's mother. In perfect character. Great chapter Stravo.

Jaded Masses · Post by **Jaded Masses** » 2003-06-17 03:29am

Stravo wrote:
Jaded Masses wrote: I enjoyed that chapter. I especially liked the interplay between the grand admrials. I thought that Kittaines letting Special Agent Troi comfort him was odd. I'll bet she ends up betraying him later on.
You DO know who she is right?

I know of her but I remember nothing about her personality. Its been ages since I saw Star Trek. However she was the ships counselor/head docter for the enterprise of Picard. Would it somehow be against her morals to betray the man who is, in part, responsible for killing countless numbers of her comrades?

His Divine Shadow · Post by **His Divine Shadow** » 2003-06-17 03:47am

Her name is spelled wrong though, it's Lwaxana.

FaxModem1 · Post by **FaxModem1** » 2003-06-17 05:13am

Very good Stravo, why is it that whenever Lwxana is with a man in power, she gives him a massage(that Ferengi and his oo-mox)

Liked the fleshing out of Kittaine.

Now were getting a check up on all the Imperial stories, I really wonder how Stravo is going to wind this up, it seems a little too epic for anyone to finish

What exactly is Lwxana's job anyway, was she meant to scan Thrawn's mind or something?

We haven't seen Khan in a hile, may I ask why?

Send the next one whenever your ready Stravo.

Col. Crackpot · Post by **Col. Crackpot** » 2003-06-17 07:12am

ladies and gentlemen of the alpha quadrant! Stravo productions is proud to present: Palpy and his Fabulous FUNBALL!

El Moose Monstero · Post by **El Moose Monstero** » 2003-06-17 07:14am

I knew it, Gary and Palpatine are going to turn the Death Star into a Disco Ball, if the universe is going to go, its going Disco style...

dun-dun-dun-dun-DUN, everybody dance now...

Stravo · Post by **Stravo** » 2003-06-17 10:41am

Meanwhile Kirk and Co. are just "Stayin' alive stayin' alive...ha ha ha ha Stayin Allliiivvvvveee." Sorry HAD to do it.

BTW on her name mispelling I went to some random Trekkie's website on google looking for her name spelling and just lifted it without confirming....fucking Trekkies.....

Post by **NecronLord** » 2003-06-17 11:29am

Well, Vader probably would be able to get out. The stormtroopers wouldn't be a problem, and once he had sorted them out he could use the Emperor's back door (Dark Force Rising Trilogy) to disable all sheilds weapons communications and seal the route between himself and the shuttle...

Xon · Post by **Xon** » 2003-06-17 11:38am

NecronLord wrote:Well, Vader probably would be able to get out. The stormtroopers wouldn't be a problem, and once he had sorted them out he could use the Emperor's back door (Dark Force Rising Trilogy) to disable all sheilds weapons communications and seal the route between himself and the shuttle...

Personally, I wouldnt have put it past Lord Nemesis to have found away around that. If he knew of it.

Post by **NecronLord** » 2003-06-17 11:41am

ggs wrote:
NecronLord wrote:Well, Vader probably would be able to get out. The stormtroopers wouldn't be a problem, and once he had sorted them out he could use the Emperor's back door (Dark Force Rising Trilogy) to disable all sheilds weapons communications and seal the route between himself and the shuttle...
Personally, I wouldnt have put it past Lord Nemesis to have found away around that. If he knew of it.

It's stated that there is no way around it. They'd need to lay up the ship while they replaced the main computer with a new re-designed one, as it's firmware.

Anarchist Bunny · Post by **Anarchist Bunny** » 2003-06-17 02:45pm

I was right, I never thought Han = Han Solo but instead = Nemesis(just read chapter 27)

Dark Primus · Post by **Dark Primus** » 2003-06-17 05:38pm

This is becoming even more epic and I love it. No fanfic ever is going to beat this.