Good Read!!

FU PICARD · Post by **FU PICARD** » 2003-07-02 08:39am

Anyone think this is going to be close to the real script?

http://cgi.theforce.net/theforce/tfn.cgi?storyID=21237

Hethrir · Post by **Hethrir** » 2003-07-02 10:42am

Very interesting, but no. It is a little too fast, and lacks the big boring bit in the middle

I quite enjoyed reading it though

vakundok · Post by **vakundok** » 2003-07-02 10:44am

I hope not. I have not read the whole, I gave up when a jedi council member labelled the bodyguard as "royal guard". To me, it is unrealistic.
1.: The neimodians fought throughout the three years. They seemed to be quite valiant.
2.: No capital ships. Only fighters and a single battlestation. (It is personal, but I am quite fed up with fighters. It seems that there is actually no reason to build capital scale warships.)
3.: How the stolen cruiser was able even to approach the vent? How it was able to approach the station at all when every vessel was needed to fight off the fighters?
"Approaching crafts ... Identification ... D7 figthers that are used by the Jedi Order! They are attacking! ... Incoming cruiser. It would like to pass our shield. - OK, let her through! Ohh, and open up the shields and release droid fighters! - But sir! The jedis will use the holes in our shield to their advance. - No, they will not. Ahh, shut up and do as I ordered! - Yes, sir! ... Sir, the cruiser changes its heading! It no more approaches the landing bay. - Forget it! - Umm, yes, sir!"
4.: Jar Jar was quite normal. Unlikely at best.
5.: Dooku's death was awfull. He was unable to break Anakin's concentration he only died slowly (still holding his lightsabre no Force chokes, nothing).
6.: A GENERAL flying alone in a craft without escort but having a fighter onboard. (Maybe Thrawn watched it from a spy satellit.)

Spanky The Dolphin · Post by **Spanky The Dolphin** » 2003-07-02 12:01pm

Next time give the thread a title with more clarity so that we know what it's about.