I almost pity myself for not having discovered this story earlier!!
My only complaint, aside from the occassional grammar glitch, is that I'd like to see a little more character development.
BTW - I know I sound silly but the concept of mythical creatures turning out to be very real and dangerous and special forces being sent to hunt them down almost makes me want to call this "H.P. Lovecraft meets Tom Clancy".
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Same here, actually.Simon H.Johansen wrote:I almost pity myself for not having discovered this story earlier!!
That, and it seems to jump around quite a bit. I know this seems like it's trying to keep a fast pace, but try and slow it down a wee bit.My only complaint, aside from the occassional grammar glitch, is that I'd like to see a little more character development.
Nah. Lovecraft didn't have trolls.BTW - I know I sound silly but the concept of mythical creatures turning out to be very real and dangerous and special forces being sent to hunt them down almost makes me want to call this "H.P. Lovecraft meets Tom Clancy".