Arthur_Tuxedo wrote:I don't see any mistakes. You did a good job. I only have two questions and one remark:
1. What's an RB .454?
Raging Bull .454 Revolver. Huge freaking pistol.
2. Why did you take a Smartgun processor and then not pick a Smartgun equipped weapon?
Come to think of it, I don't see any rules for smartguns, options or pre-existing. Just the processor.
3. I hope you're not planning on being able to carry around all that weaponry. A person as strong as this guy could manage the weight, but finding space for an MP7, .454 Win revolver (I'm guessing that's at least a 6" barrel), and two different types of grenades on one's person is already a stretch, when you add a .50 AMR rifle to the mix it becomes almost comical to imagine.
An MP7 is not very big, actually, it's almost a pistol. They have holsters for it. As it is, I know for a fact he's not planning on carrying all of this on his back (well, at least not unless there's some serious killing that needs doing).
Anyway, you can send the sheet as is to Gerard_Paloma as far as I'm concerned for putting up on the site, or change stuff first. Your call. Thanks for taking interest
One question I would like to raise, now that I think about it. Is it intentional that the Audio Processor bonus and the Supersoldier ear bonuses stack? Can the same thing be done with visual processors and supersoldier eyes?
Also, I'm going to have to mention the inherant flaw in the Lie Detector package. It costs $7,000 to get it (SS Ears + Lie Detector) but is then useless against anyone with a simple $1,000 Circulatory Regulator. You need at least the Tier 2 trait to get a package which is easily defeated by someone with the Tier 1 trait.
Just some notes I made from when I was helping him make his character.
Also, you will now see why I consider Mikal somewhat higher than a -10 when you see what Ernesto is like.