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A few nit-picky flavor things:

I cannot imagine someone from Civilization commenting negatively in any way on someone's tobacco use. Tobacco is so universally accepted that it is considered rude to speak against any but the stinkiest cheap cigar. Considering their rather puritanical attitudes toward other addictive substances, I can only assume that tobacco isn't addictive anymore.

Civilization is spelled with a "z," not an "s." Doc Smith would be very adamant about that.
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Currald wrote:A few nit-picky flavor things:

I cannot imagine someone from Civilization commenting negatively in any way on someone's tobacco use. Tobacco is so universally accepted that it is considered rude to speak against any but the stinkiest cheap cigar. Considering their rather puritanical attitudes toward other addictive substances, I can only assume that tobacco isn't addictive anymore.
Well this is 30 years after the last book, so I'd assume there'd be some societal change. Basically I'm assuming they've found that smoking is bad for you.
Civilization is spelled with a "z," not an "s." Doc Smith would be very adamant about that.
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FBHthelizardmage wrote:
Currald wrote:A few nit-picky flavor things:

I cannot imagine someone from Civilization commenting negatively in any way on someone's tobacco use. Tobacco is so universally accepted that it is considered rude to speak against any but the stinkiest cheap cigar. Considering their rather puritanical attitudes toward other addictive substances, I can only assume that tobacco isn't addictive anymore.
Well this is 30 years after the last book, so I'd assume there'd be some societal change. Basically I'm assuming they've found that smoking is bad for you.
Civilization is spelled with a "z," not an "s." Doc Smith would be very adamant about that.
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Quite alright. And somehow, I doubt any civilization or culture would change that much in thirty years.

Unless it was communist. Then it could be changed in thirty years, and with a deciededly sudden decrease in population. But not in a benevolent dictatership.
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Hmmm... thirty years after the last book. If things ever get bad enough for the Patrol, I imagine that the Children would get personally involved. God help the Culture then...
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Currald wrote:Hmmm... thirty years after the last book. If things ever get bad enough for the Patrol, I imagine that the Children would get personally involved. God help the Culture then...
To avoid god shock I'm going to keep the CoL and the sublime out of this.
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Currald wrote:Hmmm... thirty years after the last book. If things ever get bad enough for the Patrol, I imagine that the Children would get personally involved. God help the Culture then...
They might, actually. The "God(s)" I mean. They're called the sublimed, you see. They are, essentialy, what happens when an individual, group, or spiecies just deciedes to hit the "fuck-it-all" button. Granted, they don't, nessicarily, help out anybody, but there have been speacial cases. There was a case where a section of a spiecies sublimed to create an actual afterlife for the rest of their spiecies.
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the lensmen need no help
not even if the god like beings
are fool enough to get involved
dont believe me read the lensman books
the lensmen are not a bunch of star trek
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XANATOS wrote:the lensmen need no help
not even if the god like beings
are fool enough to get involved
dont believe me read the lensman books
the lensmen are not a bunch of star trek
pussys

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What is it with you and using line breaks? And no punctuation, capitalization, and flauting the rules of grammer. It gets rather annoying, you know?

Two, the Culture is holdings its own, and they haven't even gone to total war yet... Lensman are so dead...
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Civilization's expeditionary force is probably dead, but I seriously doubt that the Culture can mount a counterattack into another universe.
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Currald wrote:Civilization's expeditionary force is probably dead, but I seriously doubt that the Culture can mount a counterattack into another universe.
If they aquire a working "wormholegenerator" they could do it easily...
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Well, that's the real trick, isn't it?
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Time to start wirting again :D



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Currald wrote:Well, that's the real trick, isn't it?
Maybe they could build a trojan horse... EDUST is fun !
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HRogge wrote:
Currald wrote:Well, that's the real trick, isn't it?
Maybe they could build a trojan horse... EDUST is fun !
EDust ain't around for another 800 hundred years.
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Singular Quartet wrote:EDust ain't around for another 800 hundred years.
Damn... okay, then just a VERY small robot... something that can pretend to be a bug ;-)
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Singular Quartet wrote:Quite alright. And somehow, I doubt any civilization or culture would change that much in thirty years.

Unless it was communist. Then it could be changed in thirty years, and with a deciededly sudden decrease in population. But not in a benevolent dictatership.
Civilization is not a dictatorship. Its Galactic Council is elected.
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*really wishes the author would start writing again*
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Has this fan fic died :cry: :cry:
I hope not but a new installment of the epic story of the death of the
culture is long over due



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please write another chapter
leaving your fans hanging like this cruel :cry: :cry: :cry:


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*smacks XANATOS for resurrecting a dead thread.*

If the author's going to keep going, then he'll either bring the thread back to the first page, or he'll just post a new chapter in a new thread.
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