Star Crossed Fanfic

Soontir C'boath · Post by **Soontir C'boath** » 2003-12-30 08:19pm

If I got this right, Ana somehow deactivated the necklace right?

This is getting very very cool, but if Luke is not a Dark Jedi anymore, why did he reply in a cold voice? Unless in meaning that he's a uber Jedi...~Jason

Post by **Ghost Rider** » 2003-12-30 08:20pm

As for ChaosMarine comments...literally rabid trekkie.

The Chapter...sweet intro to something that will turn very ugly undoubtably.

Poor Darkstar.

Stravo · Post by **Stravo** » 2003-12-30 08:20pm

Soontir C'boath wrote:If I got this right, Ana somehow deactivated the necklace right?

This is getting very very cool, but if Luke is not a Dark Jedi anymore, why did he reply in a cold voice? Unless in meaning that he's a uber Jedi...~Jason

I would go with the uber Jedi option.

The Aliens · Post by **The Aliens** » 2003-12-30 08:38pm

Looking forwards to the watching the smitage of Darkstar. Deja vu, in a sense...

Darth Yoshi · Post by **Darth Yoshi** » 2003-12-30 10:49pm

Sweet. Blood bath ahead! Keep it coming, Stravo.

Captain Cyran · Post by **Captain Cyran** » 2003-12-30 11:23pm

Time to see Dee and Dum get the snot beaten out of them.

About friggin time too...

Oh, and Chewie is gonna tear into people something horrible...

HRogge · Post by **HRogge** » 2003-12-31 08:01am

GREAT....

Just one question, could it be that we have the first Jedi that draws his power from both sides of the force ?

Crazedwraith · Post by **Crazedwraith** » 2003-12-31 08:11am

Kewl!!
Excellant Stravo and we're told you before the longer the better. Just as long as its not a long wait between chapters

Dartzap · Post by **Dartzap** » 2003-12-31 08:53am

Wow, oh wow!

this, Stravo has been the highlight of my visits to the board for the last year or so

please keep up the good work!

Comosicus · Post by **Comosicus** » 2003-12-31 10:38am

HRogge wrote:GREAT....

Just one question, could it be that we have the first Jedi that draws his power from both sides of the force ?

This remembers me of a previous post of myself about Luke being the real One that trully brings balance to the Force..., not his Father ... could that be true?:mrgreen:

now about this chapter ... I can say it a wonderful Holiday gift ... Thank you, Stravo! .... A Happy New Year to you and to all the others on this forum.

Trogdor · Post by **Trogdor** » 2003-12-31 08:30pm

Excellent chapter, Stravo. Finally, Luke gets to kick some ass.

Agent Fisher · Post by **Agent Fisher** » 2004-01-01 02:45pm

If i was a guard in darkstars court i would chose one of these three courses of action:

A)stand there and shit myself.

B)run.

C)try to fight and get killed.

hmm hard choice.

HRogge · Post by **HRogge** » 2004-01-01 02:51pm

Agent Fisher wrote:If i was a guard in darkstars court i would chose one of these three courses of action:
A)stand there and shit myself.
B)run.
C)try to fight and get killed.

D) Close your eyes and cry "NOOOOOO" for some time until someone of the good guys tells you to shut up. Your boss should be dead at this time.

Crayz9000 · Post by **Crayz9000** » 2004-01-01 03:33pm

If I were a guard, I would just run for it. Since I'd know the security codes, I could basically let myself out of the complex and get the hell away from there.

Anarchist Bunny · Post by **Anarchist Bunny** » 2004-01-01 10:24pm

Damnit Stravo, Long = better.

Stofsk · Post by **Stofsk** » 2004-01-01 10:53pm

McCoy's earlobe was ripped off.

Soontir C'boath · Post by **Soontir C'boath** » 2004-01-01 10:57pm

Stofsk wrote:McCoy's earlobe was ripped off.

Well then there must be something special that McCoy will be preparing for Harry Mudd. I hope I am right.

~Jason

consequences · Post by **consequences** » 2004-01-01 10:59pm

It would be funny if that transmitter was also an explosive, wouldn't it?

Comosicus · Post by **Comosicus** » 2004-01-02 08:06pm

Stravo wrote:“There will be a reckoning.” he announced coldly as the ceiling began collapsing on the guards.

This looks like the scene from AOTC with the duel between Yoda and Count Dooku ... But this time no one will stop the falling ceiling above their head as Yoda did

Can hardly wait the next chapter

It's getting better and better.

thecreech · Post by **thecreech** » 2004-01-02 09:55pm

Ok Stravo i expect the next chapter to be written by tonight [Pulls out bull whip and snaps it]

Spartan · Post by **Spartan** » 2004-01-05 03:08pm

Starvo,

Your work continues to amaze my friend. Where do you find the time to write, such quality work and have a day job and a normal life? Someone should bottle your Mojo

This should be really good. But hey wasn't Darkstar some kind of martial arts master or something? He's not stupid, as a uber-villian he must have at 2-3 backup plans.

* Personally I can't wait for the reunion between Luke and Leia...someone is definitly not going to approve of a certain red head.

Keep up the good work!

Shroom Man 777 · Post by **Shroom Man 777** » 2004-01-10 11:57am

Stravo after finishing your fic, I started last week, I demand that you have a new chapter by tomorrow and you will continue posting chapters, one per day.

Do you know you could end up extremely wealthy if you ever chose to sell your work or publish it or something?

Agent Fisher · Post by **Agent Fisher** » 2004-01-10 04:00pm

Just read the first Chapter again. I had almost forgotten that this was part of a game of chess.

Crazedwraith · Post by **Crazedwraith** » 2004-01-10 04:02pm

Agent Fisher wrote:Just read the first Chapter again. I had almost forgotten that this was part of a game of chess.

funny you should say that i'm re-reading it again myself. What happened to the Chees game stravo? run out of Q/Mitchell dialogue?

Stravo · Post by **Stravo** » 2004-01-10 07:01pm

Crazedwraith wrote:
Agent Fisher wrote:Just read the first Chapter again. I had almost forgotten that this was part of a game of chess.
funny you should say that i'm re-reading it again myself. What happened to the Chees game stravo? run out of Q/Mitchell dialogue?

Not at all. Its just that there is so much going on and frankly the game only becomes vitally important as we get to the end. I'm sure you guys would rather see Luke lay a smackdown in the next chapter than read two gods quipping at each other.