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I see Kelly's getting another 15 seconds of fame...LOL.

Good opening!
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Post by Kelly Antilles »

Well... how interesting. :) How did you know I was in medical?

Your writing style is very nice, Shep. I like it alot.
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Kelly Antilles wrote:Well... how interesting. :) How did you know I was in medical?
Well, with a title like "Official SD Net Mom"........you know.....
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Post by Mr Bean »

Heh I think Kelly is going for *Most likey to be seen in a fanfic

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Post by Mr Bean »

As for the acutal story I say

Entaur Adiun!

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CTHULHU!
The relevant intresting part of the story

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Antorbok, magormer, Ulyaoth!

Tier, pargon, redgormer, Xel'otath!

Aretek, nethlek, Chat'urga!

Zantak, tier, pargon, Mantorok!

there's some funky yelling for you....
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So far I like.
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Sicking an Elder God on the Enterprise? I am suprised daily by the amount of evil in the world. Keep it up :twisted:
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I like this fic.... :twisted: :twisted: :twisted: :twisted: :twisted: :twisted: :twisted: :twisted: :twisted:

Will Kelly escape?
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At least there are no Zombies Groaning stumbling around yelling Huunger! braiiins! Mmmm Braiiins yet :D

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[CH 2 Removed]
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Interesting second chapter.
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Whoa. Damn.
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oh com on now! Starfleet putting on bio-suits before they beam down? Everyone knows they just go down in normal clothing and hope their transporter's bio-foilter will get rid of anything they pick up.
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2000AD wrote:oh com on now! Starfleet putting on bio-suits before they beam down? Everyone knows they just go down in normal clothing and hope their transporter's bio-foilter will get rid of anything they pick up.
Cut him some slack for that. They were beaming down into a know biohazard zone.
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Hmm so wreak of an ISD, An Elder God

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Anyone else notice that Ray Cav guy in the story is one of SD.net's?

Or am I wrong?
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You are right.

This kind of reminds me of my equally cruel C'tan vs Feds thread.
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Sounds like a Hive Virus..
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2000AD wrote:oh com on now! Starfleet putting on bio-suits before they beam down? Everyone knows they just go down in normal clothing and hope their transporter's bio-foilter will get rid of anything they pick up.
I recall seeing them in Bio-suits during a TNG episode, so a pox on you!
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MKSheppard wrote:
2000AD wrote:oh com on now! Starfleet putting on bio-suits before they beam down? Everyone knows they just go down in normal clothing and hope their transporter's bio-foilter will get rid of anything they pick up.
I recall seeing them in Bio-suits during a TNG episode, so a pox on you!
Can't say i've seen that one but then again i don't watch as much Trekl as i used to.
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MKSheppard wrote:
2000AD wrote:oh com on now! Starfleet putting on bio-suits before they beam down? Everyone knows they just go down in normal clothing and hope their transporter's bio-foilter will get rid of anything they pick up.
I recall seeing them in Bio-suits during a TNG episode, so a pox on you!
They do. They were shown in First Contact, when they go out onto the hull to kill the Borg playing with the primary deflector.
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*snort* Uh, you don't think they put those on to deal with the lack of oxygen, did you? Nawwww...... :roll:
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