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Durandal wrote:
Crown wrote:How do you guys share the workload by the way? Is there a rought story plan, and you both fill in details, or do you back and forth individually?
We decide the overall plot for the episode, then we divide the episode up into scenes. We each pick the scenes we want to write, and then we write them. Then we critique each other's works, do some editing and stuff, then we mash it all together.
Well for what it's worth the end result is seamless guys. Good work!
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BWHAHAHA!!! :lol:

As already said, you guys make a GREAT team. SEAMLESS writing. :D

Loved the parts with Marina. Would like in, if possible. Just because it'd be funny to have a fangboy insomniac in the mix. ;D
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Also I like the way you changed the thread title, so that people can't complain that everytime sombody posts that they thought it was an update ...

That was a hint to the +1ers out there.
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Can I get a camo :P? actully, more then a camo?


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Crown wrote:Also I like the way you changed the thread title, so that people can't complain that everytime sombody posts that they thought it was an update ...

That was a hint to the +1ers out there.
Except those of us with Topic Reply Notification turned on for our favourite fanfics still get the emails whenever someone posts.
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InnerBrat wrote:
Crown wrote:Also I like the way you changed the thread title, so that people can't complain that everytime sombody posts that they thought it was an update ...

That was a hint to the +1ers out there.
Except those of us with Topic Reply Notification turned on for our favourite fanfics still get the emails whenever someone posts.
Well, that's your problem. It's an excellent idea guys.
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InnerBrat wrote:Except those of us with Topic Reply Notification turned on for our favourite fanfics still get the emails whenever someone posts.
Well, that's your problem. It's an excellent idea guys.
Ddin't say it wasn't my problem :P I never complain about it anyway, because I'm not daft.

So there.
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That was great guys, I absolutly loved all the descriptions of the El Tee and Ein, they were PERFECT. A really nice story and I can't wait to read more of the hilarity. Especially loved this part.

The Kernel had basically concluded that, if the movie Predator was based on actual events, Arnold Schwarzenegger's character was based off of a very tame, pussified version of the El Tee.
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Nobody hate me for this, but who is the character El Tee based on (from the board)?
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Crown wrote:Nobody hate me for this, but who is the character El Tee based on (from the board)?
You've never seen Army of Darkness... You don't know who the El Tee is...

And you're a MOD?! How did this error occur?!
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Crown wrote:Nobody hate me for this, but who is the character El Tee based on (from the board)?
LT Hitman, if I had to guess.
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Captain_Cyran wrote:
Crown wrote:Nobody hate me for this, but who is the character El Tee based on (from the board)?
You've never seen Army of Darkness... You don't know who the El Tee is...

And you're a MOD?! How did this error occur?!
I know, I know, Vympel is already riding my case on this.
RogueIce wrote:LT Hitman, if I had to guess.
Hmm, that works.
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RogueIce wrote:
Crown wrote:Nobody hate me for this, but who is the character El Tee based on (from the board)?
LT Hitman, if I had to guess.
Spot on.

*tries to suppress a grin about the whole "FROM SHEP" part*
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Am i in the story...?

I havent had a lot of time to read it, but it would be cool if i could have like a supporting role or something :)
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Even though I am not the story I like it.
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Crown wrote:Nobody hate me for this, but who is the character El Tee based on (from the board)?
Lt. Hitman, otherwise known as the "El Tee." You'll find some of his violent rhetoric in the FUQ. Who could forget, "I hope you've got your tombstone picked out, coffin-breath"? Hell, the first ASVS fanfic I read (can't remember which one it was) had me rolling on the floor laughing because the El Tee made Neelix literally piss himself.
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Crown wrote:Nobody hate me for this, but who is the character El Tee based on (from the board)?
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Episode 3 is in pre-production right now. Expect it sometime this week.
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I just thought of something, you should include the various groups of SDNet in a brief thing, something along the lines of "You have Gym next period?" "Yeah, why?" "You might wanna get it changed, Mech Maniacs and HAB got put together in gym, and they're playing dodgeball." or "Yeah, you're gonna want to stay away from them?" "Who?" "Them, the Black Mages... fucked up kids, real fucked up. If one ever talks to ya, run.", stuff like that.

And I can't wait for the next chapter. Hurry up.
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Captain_Cyran wrote:I just thought of something, you should include the various groups of SDNet in a brief thing, something along the lines of "You have Gym next period?" "Yeah, why?" "You might wanna get it changed, Mech Maniacs and HAB got put together in gym, and they're playing dodgeball." or "Yeah, you're gonna want to stay away from them?" "Who?" "Them, the Black Mages... fucked up kids, real fucked up. If one ever talks to ya, run.", stuff like that.
Yeah, that'd be fun.. as long as there's no poo flinging, that is. >_>
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Again, i curse myself for not checking the fanfics forum. That was fucking funny!

Kudos to all involved, though it needs a ladyboy that makes people doubt their sexuality, i say!
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Rye wrote:Again, i curse myself for not checking the fanfics forum. That was fucking funny!

Kudos to all involved, though it needs a ladyboy that makes people doubt their sexuality, i say!
InnerBrat already does that (but she doesn't have to be a ladyboy to do it). :P
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You realize that The Kernal has to meet the Geeks eventually right? I mean... seriously, at one point he has to go by that alcove of the school with the STGODers and D&D players and science freaks... (Stormy, Myself, SirNitram, Lady Tevar, Rogue 9 etc)

*yes this is a shameless attempt at getting myself in this fic*
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Alyrium Denryle wrote:You realize that The Kernal has to meet the Geeks eventually right? I mean... seriously, at one point he has to go by that alcove of the school with the STGODers and D&D players and science freaks... (Stormy, Myself, SirNitram, Lady Tevar, Rogue 9 etc)
He hangs out with me, ya know.... :P

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Nice! Well I'm impressed not just with the writing but with the fact that you two are putting in your free time into entertaining the board. That's appreciated, and goes to all the authors here. Thanks :)
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