Hoth:
Darth Hoth wrote:Illuminatus Primus wrote:Thank you. However, I don't want to domineer this. It seems the handling of the Thrawn Campaign is an issue of contention and concern. Let's make this our first focus. What do you think of it Hoth? Anyone else?
As for actual suggestions from me, I think we should emphasise the political side of the war, pointing to how tentative the New Republic's hold over many worlds would be, perhaps even them having to hold down planets by force or else they would defect to the Empire. The NR from Zahn's books is just one big happy fairytale with evil Imperials having to oppress their way through prosperous and content little worlds, and really, that is completely unrealistic, given the timeframe and the extent of local and popular support for Palpatine and the Imperial state (if not always its functionaries). (I suppose one could partly blame this on warlords and rogue successor states giving the Empire a bad name, but that cannot be all of it.) This also ties in with the idea that Thrawn's war hardly appears to be a total one, with planetary bombardments almost unheard of and the laws of war by and large being followed; both sides attempt to appear to be fighting "honourably" in order to score political points.
This is a great idea. I think that this kind of thing is definitely deemphasized. Of course I would like to stress that along the way we strive uphold the fairy tale/high fantasy flavor and tone of the series. That IS Star Wars, after all. But yes, definitely some Imperially-leaning worlds might be convinced after poor field showing by the New Republic and the seeming sidelining of the selfish and petty court rule by the Emperor's Ruling Circle in favor of a brilliant, decisive, dashing, fighting-from-the-front shogun.
Darth Hoth wrote:The galaxy does have some pretty ossified cultural structures (e.g., privileged nobility, enslavement of stupid species), so social progress is not necessarily beyond ours by orders of magnitude. I imagine that with technology being more or less stagnant and the economy being one of quasi-equilibrium (Some weird form of mercantilism? The various "guilds" that pop up every once in a while spring to mind), social mobility is drastically reduced as well. However, that is no excuse for being openly racist towards women, as though they were not human.
This is one of the things I'm going to address in my post in the Fanfics thread. But basically I'm keeping with several fundamental assertions, that the Republic is the state manifestation of the "long-term stable" state of the galactic civilization. The civilization has ceased with the broad, geometric growth/expansion/development that it previously had (and that our society still endures). Its institutions in one form or another have persisted for unbelievably long periods of time. Pressures and trends in the short term (hundreds of years) may swing back and forth but I think of society as the further it deviates from the median line, the harder pressures of equilibrium push it back. Much of the society seems to live in very Brave New World lite esque societies, where social democratic institutions provide most of what the citizenry requires, and most live a life of what is provided for them and available. Consequently, the ruling or ambitious class is mostly made of those who simply weren't content with what was provided and wanted more and to transcend common society. I think on the everyday level there's probably a decent helping of Tall Poppy Syndrome. As a result, the ruling class has a pretty cut-throat culture of whether newcomers can really take it and basically determined by the question "how badly do you want it?" To say nothing of the fact that in a long-term equilibrium society, all gains, relationships, and transactions are essentially zero-sum games (if everyone got richer, GDP would grow geometrically over time). So it becomes very dog-eat-dog. Successful individuals might found self-motivating and selecting families akin to traditional aristocracy, where they immense their children in training and education and grooming for future talent in this culture. Rinse wash and repeat over a hundred thousand years, and you have something very much like ancient aristocracy or absurdly self-motivated and capable meritocrats.
Darth Hoth wrote:Given High Human Culture, I think there should be a noticeable institutional bias, even if it is only fuelled by COMPNOR activists and their highly placed friends. This is not saying that aliens should not serve or be accepted as equals in some locales (perhaps a Sector with a particularly liberal governor/local administration?), but that they would overall find their service more difficult, promotion slower, &c. Conversely, in some heavily COMPNOR-influenced Sectors, aliens might be second-class citizens who individually aspire to reach the rank of "Honorary Human". On a galactic scale, uniform policies on this topic would appear difficult to enforce in every locale.
But aliens also serve as Senators and members of Palpatine's greater inner circle (most notably Thrawn, but others as well). Clearly being nonhuman is an institutionalized impediment the way that overt opposition to Palpatine is.
Darth Hoth wrote:Yes, and to me it fits better with their canon portrayal; they are very insular, and a physical measure setting them apart does make sense, even if it is easily defeated by "modern" technology. Still, the main point would be that the areas that are isolated are so because they themselves want it, not because they are arbitrarily off-limits.
I think the only way to have them cut-off for such a long period (70,000 years or whatever) is to have them be in dim stars in the depths of the galactic halo. Their knowledge of and isolationist avoidance of the main society would be substantiated by their cultural xenophobia and prohibition against foreign policy interventionism.
Darth Hoth wrote:Illuminatus has some ideas, and personally I think there can be plenty of drama in simply having the New Republic collapse spectacularly under its own incompetence (aided perhaps by lesser foreign invasions).
The concept I basically have (developed with considerable influence from and in discussions with, Publius) is a character who tries to duplicate Palpatine's rise to power from behind the curtain through proxies and pasties and figureheads, while attempting to seduce one of Skywalker's most gifted students, and perhaps using limited alien invaders (Vong analogues) and/or internal opposition movements as a spark for a war (similar to how the somewhat covert droid army build-up is used as a flashpoint in Lucas' Clone War by the Sith) that would precipitate the conflict. The attempt would be foiled by new heroes and the political and social maturation of the New Republic in general and the Heroes of the Saga in particular (basically, they accept the fact that Palpatine was a bastard, and maybe he would've done what they know needs to be done, but just because he would've done it doesn't make it wrong - basically they get over Palpatine and prevent a relapse).
Darth Hoth wrote:Here, I am using history as a model, specifically das Reich for the OR/Empire and the Soviet Union for the NR. The first government takes over an existing apparatus in peacetime (more or less, in the Empire's case) and gradually subverts it to its own ends, while the RA/NR is a violent revolutionary movement by an armed minority which attempts to produce a "clean slate" to build its utopia on. However, it quickly finds this unfeasible, and promptly turns to various hypocritical justifications for incorporating elements of the old government, only to purge them again when it has the power to do so.
Fair enough, but I think we're starting to edge into "willful subversion" of the original version as opposed to reinterpreting it and making it intelligent. Alliance to Restore the Republic is demonstrably a self-appointed, minority-backed, violent and subversive revolutionary political movement. However, they really do mean well, and they avoid abuse. I think their implemented policies should be an eclectic mess of dull restorationism of the pre-Palpatine Republic institutions (fundamentally the Neo-Republicans are counterrevolutionary reactionaries) and complete elimination and restructuring in some areas where Palpatine's influence or reform was dubbed too extensive or where he created new apparatuses from whole cloth - this I imagine they'd treat like your model and try, at least, to throw the baby out with the bath water. I do expect they will inevitably be forced to stick with extant institutions probably quite grudgingly and after embarrassing mishaps. Like I said, their ability to arrive at a synthesis of Palpatine's reforms and the pre-Palpatinic Republic would be the major political theme of the NJO replacement in my concept. The Imperials are actually the revolutionaries.
Darth Hoth wrote:More or less everyone on the board does, I think, with ample justification. . . One could almost take the message of SW to be that democracy does not work, at times.
Unfortunately. As we get really into the technical and realism issues, we shouldn't forget style and tone; the "feel" of the series and meta-themes that permeate the entire saga. These philosophical concepts should be defined, explored, and the plot and conflicts should be evocative of them.
Darth Hoth wrote:You mean instead of jumping right onto the Thrawn Campaign? I might perhaps agree with that. What do you think, Illuminatus? Should we put Thrawn on hold till we have fleshed out the background?
I was just going to use him as the source of my first fluff attempt, I am certainly not trying to carve in stone yet, just get the juices flowing and give us some actual material to start working with.
Darth Hoth wrote:Certainly. The same might be true for the Nagai, e.g. the New Republic considers them primitive barbarians and uses them as mercenaries for particularly hard or dirty jobs, like the Bolsheviks did with Chinese or the Latvian Riflemen in the Russian Civil War. Alternatively, they are just privateers and yet another minor headache to some Sector or sub-Sector official.
This is fair enough. I do think the brief campaigning by the Alliance of Free Planets in the Marvel arc and in their relief mission to Bakura and against the Ssi-ruuk is actually good. It gives them a break from the Empire while their developing a post-Palpatine policy and while the Empire is preoccupied with near collapse, and definitely locally and to a much lesser extent pan-galactically, bolsters their credibility for fighting off the opportunistic barbarian attacks while the Empire was impotent to respond.
Darth Hoth wrote:What do you think of my take on the Chiss, by the way?
Great, except for it being ensconced in a satellite galaxy. For the most part I think they should be considered part of Outer Rim jurisdiction (which I envision as "everything not in/beyond the other regions belongs to you" for the most part). The Outer Rim is clearly lawless and huge, given the relative independence and leeway granted the governors assigned to it at every level.
Darth Hoth wrote:Illuminatus Primus wrote:I personally, would take the idea of "heroes on both sides" and "gray as opposed to black and white" that Lucas promised and actually do it, instead of simplicity he gave us. My Empire would be significantly older, and the PT heroes collaborate with Palpatine and his program (some more enthusiastically than others - cough - Anakin - cough -). The Jedi Purge and Palpatine's openly despotic Throne would come in Episode III when they realized they'd screwed up and had buyers' remorse. I take the fact of the OT's treatment as a combination of the utter information and cultural domination by Palpatine's revivalist movement. In the eyes of almost all, it literally swept everything aside and Old Republic was a quaint and ancient institution of the past. That, and the fact that the institutions of the galaxy are so old and ossified that their culture has become romanticized and quasi-traditional/aristocratic. Obi-Wan's pomp would be because the Jedi literally romanticized themselves as the knight-saviors of the galaxy and the stewards of the Republic.
So, that is your take on the PT? I find much to agree with there. So, would you put the Clone Wars back in the 40s to 50s BBY as Zahn had it, or even further?
Yeah, I would make it a combination of the pre-Lucas conception of the Clone Wars (with helpings from early scripts) and the actual conception. I would "stretch" the timeline, such that the political and social and military history would take place over a longer time and earlier (in other words, disturbances and storm clouds in the distance like the Stark War would take place before Anakin's birth and maybe even Obi-Wan's, with the Clone Wars being an actual
series of near-continuous conflicts (y'know, because they are called WAR
S) which are fought against clones (y'know, because they're called the
CLONE WARS) and which were very destructive and traumatic (more so for the most part, than the civil wars) taking place around the traditional date (not ending in 19 BBY) and not the popcorn fest without any real people's involvement that Lucas gave us. I would have Palpatine's behind the scene's manipulations last for longer, and have him in power longer before Episode III (which would contain in broad terms most of the same events). I would have the Empire significantly older, and with the main characters collaborating with and supporting Palpatine, only to realize later they screwed up (this being actual moral ambiguity, instead of where Lucas had everyone but Anakin the Idiot get it and array against him before he's actually started to do illegal things and be bereft of real moral responsibility for his rise).
Darth Hoth wrote:I would actually like to see them try abolishing the old government, only to fail spectacularly and be forced to revert to it as chaos sets in. That fits better with their idealistic image. At the same time, there could be swings in the treatment of former Imperials depending on politics (e.g., if Fey'lya's populist/alien supremacist faction gains the upper hand, their situation grows worse).
Yeah, I agree. They do seem very well behaved, and as I said, I give the benefit of a doubt to the way they are supposed to be portrayed. Which means the rebels behave themselves and conduct themselves with legal process and consistency, and the bad times really are bad apples, screw ups in management, or a loss of control like the White Terror committed at the Imperial Palace after its securing in the Battle of Coruscant (crimes of omission and error, not comission and malice).
Darth Hoth wrote:This touches on the subject of how former Imperial citizens are treated overall. Do we retain EU portrayals of plundering, wealth redistribution and vindictive show trials? I personally would like to elaborate a little on this, as it is implied rather than stated in the extant canon. e.g., have a Nuremberg-style trial for people like Bevel Lemelisk, where the Rebels get to motivate why it is criminal to build superweapons but not to use them (as Kyp Durron did).
I agree. Flesh it out and at least give them factions who debate it with real reasons, and have real opinions, and have them have a real policy against him (basically, I think Durron wasn't tried as a war criminal because he didn't commit war crimes; he only wantonly destroyed property and carried out vigilante attacks against the Empire; think about it, Carida a civilian site? the Deep Core military sites? a barren star cluster?).
Darth Hoth wrote:Right, and the immaturities and weaknesses of the Palpatinic Era galactic society in general and the New Republic in particular would be the focus of my idea of a NJO-replacement arc.
As I see it, Palpatine's centralisation, while foremost a vessel for his own ascendancy, was also in a way a last-ditch attempt to fix what was wrong with the old government. The Old Republic was clearly falling apart even before the Clone Wars, and the Empire would be the clamp-down reaction on its fracturing and non-functioning. The centralisations this imposed would, in turn, be a majorincentive for members of the old elite to support the Rebels, as they were much looser on control; thus, the New Republic would be well-intentioned but actually stripping away the last measures that might have saved the overall OR structure and speeding up its descent into anarchy.
I think this deserves by fleshing out and use, and definitely should be applied. I agree.
Darth Hoth wrote:If we are to retain the Katana Fleet plot device as anything but a propaganda show, we would probably need to scale up both she ships and the numbers included in that force.
Its difficult because as a plot device, its obviously quite contrived, militarily naive, and stupid. The best move would probably be to make the fleet and resources lost much more impressive and its psychological and propoganda value much greater (maybe up the ante surrounding Thrawn's mystique by having the fleet lost behind New Republic lines, and he successfully managed to extricate a prize armada with real - if merely tactical level - war value and with mythological status, and did so with the collaboration of Imperial sympathizers in the Republic or corrupt political appointees of say Fey'lya's faction?) while also deemphasizing its importance to the overall campaign and the plot of Thrawn's return (instead of a major advantage, just have it be a particular spectacular coup in an overall strategy of acquiring stopgap military materiel from unconventional sources).
Darth Hoth wrote:On the issue of the ersatz ISD, I can see your point. I thought it appropriate because of the name, relatively close to common design, streamlined function as a dedicated fleet warship &c; to me, it appeared a good analogue of a "Victory" ship (as per WWII, not the ISD), or a cheap, easy-to-build yet more powerful replacement for the ordinary Imperial-class, which is more suited for peacekeeping and multitasking. But if Saxton's scaling is accurate, then it is too small; I had forgotten to check it for size.
I'm glad you agree. I'm thinking that there should be something which stands in for the ISD and Tector in a true battleline, we can start by calling them impressive fast battleships or other fluff, and emphasize their superiority to old Republic models (the Victory/Venator analogues of the Clone Wars, and the even old Dreadnaught analogues). I'd also talk about brand new, even more massive battleships (evocative of the Executor-class era build-up, post-Yavin).
Darth Hoth wrote:Illuminatus Primus wrote:I'm afraid I was constrained by canon. The Imperial Sourcebook states explicitly regions contain anywhere from single digits to upwards of thousands of sectors. Some kind of "region" must have 5-10 sectors, and some other kind must have 2000+ sectors. I chose the former as "lesser regions" and the latter as "galactic regions" with "greater regions" for canonical cases which are clearly intermediate, like the Koornacht Cluster, the Hapan Cluster or the Transitory Mists it is part of, and the Bright Jewel Cluster.
The official material is problematic because it is inconsistent and notably confuse the terms on various occasions. This is why Publius had to build such an elaborate system of regional administration in TNOiP to house all the various interpretations. I would actually prefer if we could narrow down the band a bit. As I imagined the EU, Regions were the major bands of worlds, such as Core, Colonies &c. Below them were the Oversectors, segments of space within these Regions (e.g., Bright Jewel Oversector), and the bottom line would be Sectors.
Except the oversectors were established after the Empire, leaving a big hole between the galactic region and the sector in the Republic era. Not to mention the Imperial Sourcebook provides us with a strongly implied case for multi-tiered regions, given we have the "thousands" sector regions and "several" sectors regions. Furthermore, we know the oversector/priority sector is an alternative to the regions from the same source book, and one cutting across old boundries and jurisdictions - the Imperial Center Oversector (also called Sector Zero, strongly implying Priority Sectors and Oversectors are different names for the same thing, more polylingualism probably) contains worlds in the Colonies as well as Core Worlds.
Darth Hoth wrote:There were also "Priority Sectors" (Death Star Technical Manual, if I recall correctly), which could vary in size; these would be the areas delegated various plenpotentiaries by the Imperial Throne, and which could be anything from a few to vastly many Sectors.
Except the Imperial Sourcebook directly identifies Priority Sectors with Oversectors and assigns both a Grand Moff under a new scheme.
Darth Hoth wrote:The Imperial Sourcebook treats "Region" not as a measure dependent on size or a group of measures, but by some other arbitrary criteria, such as being under the control of a single political entity. This could be dismissed as a mistake by the in-universe author - it is not as though there are not plenty of those already.
Except the Imperial Sourcebook openly states that regions may contain anywhere from a handful to thousands of sectors. It seems to me the easiest way to harmonize that system (which must be capable of standing on its own at least superficially in the Old Republic because oversectors/priority sectors do not exist yet) is that there are more than one kind of region. We openly know this because of cases like Hutt Space and the Bright Jewel Cluster (which was a supra-sectorial governorate general, but located in the Outer Rim, a region in of itself).
Here's how the system works. There are
hundreds of billions of star systems, maybe near a trillion stars counting the entire galactic disk, bulge, halo, globular clusters, satellite galaxies, and over gravitationally bound entities like galactic remnants (from collision events). There are
billions of worlds. There are
around 50 million discrete political entities with a direct relationship to the Imperial State (I imagine there are probably around a hundred million give or take at this level of organization and political complexity; remember that the member worlds may have their own colonies, protectorates, trust mandates, etc.)
Around 1 million of those discrete political entities are
fully-enfranchised, federated member states. There are probably
on the order of 20 thousand sectors, based on the 50 worlds per sector estimate (the Chommell Sector, a Mid Rim and sparsely populated one, has fewer members than 50 in it, which would push the estimate up, but I'm using simple division as a benchmark here). There are probably
around a thousand or so of the lowest class of region (we can name it what you want, my suggestion and the one in
The New Order in Power is the Lesser Region). There are probably
a hundred or so mid-level regions (
The New Order in Power calls these the Greater Regions). The highest level of region, basically indisputed are the
seven confimed ones, the Deep Core, the Core Worlds, the Colonies, the Inner Rim, the Expansion Region, the Mid Rim, and the Outer Rim (
The New Order in Power calls these the Galactic Regions). We know there are supra-sectorial units below the "galactic region" threshold in the case of the Governorate General of the Bright Jewel Cluster. That's not in dispute. Nor is the fact there are some regions with only a few sectors. The multi-classed region scheme I support as the best way to organize this.
Anyway, the Empire reorganizes the sectors into oversectors and priority sectors, which appear to be different names for the same things and sometimes used interchangably. I suspect they also come in varying classes and may be layered atop one another themselves (for monstrosities like the Oversector Outer to things like the Bright Jewel Oversector; presumably the latter was a subset of the former). We can add and modify terminology, but I'd prefer to keep
The New Order in Power as our canon where not impossible and I'd prefer to keep terminology consistent with canonical use where possible.
There also the proconsulates of the Privy Councillors, which
The New Order in Power terms "Special Areas" and their administrators "Rectors" (although this seems to be more of a supervisory role that piggy-backs off of and is layered atop of existing administrations like a particular grouping of sectors; the Moffs there may be expected to furnish reports too and respond to coordination by the Rector; a kind of 'governing czar' for a particular locality).
Darth Hoth wrote:The Hapes Cluster or the Koornacht Cluster are described as having double-digit numbers of major worlds in all canon; they would qualify for Sectors at best if size was the sole criterion. I presume we are going to upgrade them if they are supposed to be credible, but the existant EU calling them "Regions" clearly does not intend this to mean that they have many Sectors within them.
The Koornacht Cluster is clearly supposed to be its own locale, I'd make it a minor region is only so the New Republic's fixation with it and the crisis is not totally stupid (governments losing confidence over military action in a single sector or less? this wouldn't even reach the Imperial Senate, but been decided by the local Grand Moff and just handled). The Bright Jewel Cluster is indisputable; it is accorded a governor general and later made an Oversector.
Darth Hoth wrote:For the Invids, I would say that they were trouble for some local, inadequately manned authority that called for Federal help, e.g. the Sector Rangers; I do not think the NR should expend forces on hunting them for extended periods on its own initiative.
Fair enough.
Darth Hoth wrote:Agreed. Also, stuff like rank charts for the various organisations and militaries, which is important if we do not want to fill the hierarchy with the kind of haphazard shit that the EU did. (I am not saying that we must throw out stupidities such as "Systems Admiral" or "Captain-Administrator", but they should be made to make sense - e.g., a lot of the more obscure "ranks" should really be appointments or positions.)
Right, I don't know if you kept up with
The New Order in Power, but these things were partially touched in the last three chapters, The College of Moffs, The State Services of the Imperium, and the Armed Forces of the Imperium. Some of the rank structures and names are places where I might be comfortable deviating from canon if only because their usage of real world terminology is incorrect and incoherent (for example, grand general is stupid; grand admiral has an army equivalent and it is field marshal general).
Darth Hoth wrote:Was Zahn being completely ignorant of real militaries, or did he just not give a damn? Does anyone know? Either way, I agree.
He's just ignorant. Remember in the Hand of Thrawn, Pelleaon has a MAJOR as a subordinate aboard ship.
Darth Hoth wrote:To clarify: I am not saying that the Imperial Remnant was the legitimate Imperial government, merely that they pretended to be and were recognised as such.
I agree absolutely.
Darth Hoth wrote:I did not mean to say that its implementation would be complete or uniform throughout Imperial space; of course, there will be large variations. Nevertheless, I cannot dismiss it as minor and of little consequence as you appear to do; its proponent Sate Pestage was the de facto ruler of the Empire while Palpatine was devoting his time to his magery, after all, and this would be reflected in appointments, policy and the relative importance of COMPNOR. Of which the last mentioned to the best of my knowledge was not insignificant, with it having widespread lobbying power, youth corps and its own political police. In addition, the Imperial Military appears more afflicted with political and COMPNOR interference than most, given that it has two separate corps of commissars (Political Reliability Observers and CompForce Observers, respectively) monitoring it, in addition to ISB sleepers. Many senior officers were apparently also in favour of New Order policies such as High Human Culture; perhaps this was the result of a politicised Academy, or perhaps cronyism and the rapid promotion of the ideologically correct.
I agree. Like I said, I think political and thoughtcrime gets in trouble basically everywhere and is well fully institutionalized. Nonhuman discrimination is institutionalized on a haphazard and inconsistent basis (indisputable, some areas are relatively safe from it - the Heirarchy and the Armed Forces of the Imperium, in particular, while other places are rife with it, but even there it exists in constitutionally distinct forms, from the opportunistic bondage and "domestication" of alien species, to things similar to black codes and pre-1960s Southern U.S. segregation, to South African apartheid, to Stalinistic outright careless or non-ideological speciocide, to Nazistic ideological speciocide (in the case of that Himmler-analogue grand admiral).