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Re: Machinegun guy

Posted: 2010-01-06 12:47pm
by Rye
Hmm, his trigger-hand is really quite off, at a peculiar angle.

His boots/feet aren't too convincing for his position too.

Linework and colouring = fabtacular, though.

Re: Machinegun guy

Posted: 2010-01-09 12:30pm
by Feil
I agree completely with Rye, here. Quick overpaint with suggestions.

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Re: Machinegun guy

Posted: 2010-01-09 10:06pm
by TheMuffinKing
Thanks Feil, that will help immensely!

Re: Machinegun guy

Posted: 2010-01-10 09:22pm
by Rye
I wouldn't base your re-draw on his lines, personally. His feet should roughly be pointing in the same direction as his torso and face. I would probably erase his legs completely and work out where they should go by checking where his spine is.